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Letter to a Girl I Threw up on

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  • Tyler

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Posted 12 May 2013 - 09:11 PM

Muscle flex
neon text
loud sounds

enter deep
sluggish keep
pay it forward
sin to seep.

Mistreat common lives
jaded secrets, realize
spoon fed, idealize
love your folks,
love why.

Hand smack pill track hold back: shake
still back told that grand knack: snakes

vision blur, feel the burn
feel the burn?

Forget it.

Switch it up: give a f*ck
learn the luck, slam a shot
shaking rot, see the star
see the bar, hold the rack
pull back, holding track
feel yourself

stars are made
spades be dug
far to move
groovy club.

punctured and-

Unwind, let go
captain, let's go
no control, move slow
slip and pull, no flow.

Miss step and fall flat
stall track, crawl on mat.
Miss, I'm sorry
sick and starry
mistook your shirt
for my mouth.

Brights go lighter
rites go righter
see your man
gone south

Lost friends
Find mends
first time
fist first.

Suck teeth
be 'neath
black out

Tracks, weary
hold it; teary
loud mouth knock.
Bruises, swearing
handled erring
made the mock?

Confused look
took a punch
munch a blow
blow, crunch.

Worth it though, you know,
never got to see that much.
Maybe it wasn't.

  • Prometheus

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Posted 13 May 2013 - 10:24 PM

Stop this nonsense at once

Halle Berry,
red cherry?
Subtly scary.

Booze cruise,
20th century hooch,
Boobs loose,
Smokin' hooch,
Book fuse?
Throw down some brown, moose.

Cottage cheese,
Fried geese,
Black person,

Mokrie Dela
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Posted 13 May 2013 - 11:04 PM

haha this all reminds me of the verse of Red Hot Chili Peppers - By The Way! biggrin.gif

  • Rudy

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Posted 14 May 2013 - 01:34 AM

Although I didn't get what you're on about here, I really enjoyed reading your piece of shizzle!

I'm glad that I stumbled upon this while checking this ection. Good work, keep it up mate!

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