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Posted 14 March 2013 - 08:04 PM Edited by MadMarshMallow, 22 December 2013 - 12:47 AM.


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"The history may not repeat itself.."



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Luke William, a member of the Black Sky Organization was transferred to San Andreas after failing in his mission in Liberty City. He was sent there to regain the trustof the main boss as he promised to not to fail again. He's given a main task, to eliminate the last member of '7 Brothers', famous

hitmen in San Andreas.


It seems impossible.. but, who knows..?



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Luke William
24 years old, has been a member of Black Sky in 2 years. After discarded by the boss, he found dissapeared. After 2 years, he came
back to return to the organization. He's given one last chance.

 

Vincent Briggs

Friends of Luke William in Black Sky Organization in San Andreas. He's known as the 'Green Mercury'. Has served the organization in 4 years.

 

Andrew Russo

Leader of Black Sky Organization in San Andreas.

 

UnderWood

A calm, genius private detective in Las Venturas. With his intelligent, he's been solved more than 50 cases in a year.

 

West Stone

He's a high rank officer of LVPD. Used to be the 'Officer of the Year' once.

 

Castro

Although he's said to be a part-time salesman, he's pretty good in handling a gun. He's a man that knows everything.

 

Hayes

Still unknown.

 

Jesse

A friend from Liberty City and always been the help of Luke. And now, he's the one who needs help.

 

Oliver

A younger brother of Jesse, he's forced by his brother to live in San Andreas due to some reason.

 

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CHAPTER 1
1. New Beginning :

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/24336
2. Clean And Jerk :

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/24510
3. In The Middle Of Nowhere :

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25470
4. Sabotage :

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25873
5. Hit Contract :

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/26403

6. Big News On Air :

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29354

 

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Posted 14 March 2013 - 08:24 PM

I didn't know you are back. Welcome back and good luck with your mission pack. icon14.gif

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Posted 15 March 2013 - 02:48 AM

QUOTE (COOLMAN12234555896 @ Friday, Mar 15 2013, 04:24)
I didn't know you are back. Welcome back and good luck with your mission pack.  icon14.gif

Yes, but I won't be active as before. There are so much things I'm working on the outside life. Btw, thanks. biggrin.gif

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Posted 15 March 2013 - 07:08 AM

I really liked the prologue.
I am waiting for your upcoming missions...
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Posted 15 March 2013 - 04:29 PM

Alright, this is propably the best intro i played, EVER!
That pit trick was awesome, changing clothes was cool (i always wanted to do that combination), and especialy the cutscenes were KILLING!
I advise everyone to play this, i'm not overeacting, it's really amazing and really worth it.
Keep up Arejai, nice way to comeback biggrin.gif

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 01:42 AM

From Zizo008's reaction I'm going to give it a shot smile.gif

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 02:35 AM

Same Reaction as ZIzo

AMAZING WORK! MAN! Loved it! cant wait for more

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 04:13 AM

Very nice work. I loved the writing just as much as the cutscenes.

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Posted 18 March 2013 - 03:54 PM

Thanks a lot, guys. And due to the school, missions will be updated weekly.. I hope. biggrin.gif

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Posted 21 March 2013 - 05:05 AM

Awesome Work I really Like your concept in starting when any one kick the person and one man
Fall in objects

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Posted 23 March 2013 - 09:01 AM

2nd mission released.

Btw, thanks DyomKing. biggrin.gif


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Posted 23 March 2013 - 10:17 AM Edited by Zohair12345, 23 March 2013 - 06:27 PM.

Played the 2nd mission .

1)I liked the shooting part , You have given the accuracies of the people very accurately tounge.gif . It was real fun killing them and Not boring.
2)The cutscenes were really awesome.
3)The runaway path was real fun.(Including the ramp)
4)Lastly , the locked cars ....

In all , It was totally superb. biggrin.gif

Story has started getting interesting....

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Posted 23 March 2013 - 05:46 PM

Wow! Epic missions, keep up the good work!

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Posted 26 March 2013 - 11:28 AM

Played the 2nd mission Arejai, it was great. icon14.gif
That fight made me feel as if we [the team] were professionals, i don't know how to explain it very well but the gunfight was nice. And that escape felt like a movie, we were getting shot and had to make quick choices. And finally, the ending was cool and mysterious. I'm pretty sure we're not dead right? sly.gif

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Posted 26 March 2013 - 09:50 PM

Good the first two missions
There is a lot of action
even if I did not understand the end of the second mission

sorry my english

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Posted 27 March 2013 - 05:45 AM

Thanks for playing guys, appreciated the feedbacks.

@Zizo Well, there's no way the protagonist would die so easily. wink.gif

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Posted 27 March 2013 - 09:30 AM

QUOTE (Arejai @ Wednesday, Mar 27 2013, 05:45)
Thanks for playing guys, appreciated the feedbacks.

@Zizo Well, there's no way the protagonist would die so easily. wink.gif

I think the leader shot someone who was gonna shoot us from the back..
Just guessing .. confused.gif

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Posted 27 March 2013 - 12:07 PM

QUOTE (Zohair12345 @ Wednesday, Mar 27 2013, 17:30)
QUOTE (Arejai @ Wednesday, Mar 27 2013, 05:45)
Thanks for playing guys, appreciated the feedbacks.

@Zizo Well, there's no way the protagonist would die so easily.  wink.gif

I think the leader shot someone who was gonna shoot us from the back..
Just guessing .. confused.gif

That's a pretty nice guessed. But, I can't say weather it's right or not.

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Posted 13 April 2013 - 09:16 AM

The two missions were awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted 13 April 2013 - 10:13 AM

Second mission is also good. I really like car finding concept and ending was awesome

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Posted 15 May 2013 - 11:31 AM

At last.. 3rd mission released. Hope to get feedbacks.

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Posted 15 May 2013 - 07:34 PM

I've played the first few missions. Man, I'm impressed smile.gif

I'll be very honest here, so far this has been the best intro I ever saw. It had great storytelling, I loved the nightmare scene and you showed us a strong protagonist. The second mission had a very good chase, enjoyed it too and I liked the twist at the end.
Keep it up, had a lot of fun playing it and have no complains so far.

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Posted 15 May 2013 - 08:30 PM

Awesome! Just like the previous two. As always with the mysterious endings which leave the player wondering and waiting for more. Are they testing him or what? I hope i'll find out in the next mission. biggrin.gif

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Posted 15 May 2013 - 09:37 PM

Uhuh, I agree with Mr. Zizo here. That endings are just so misterious. And that's the best part of the MP. And I'm wondering, is that 3rd mission was just some test for Luke? Probably, I'll discover this in mission number 4! smile.gif

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 06:36 PM

Thanks a lot guys. biggrin.gif Yeah, they're some sort of mysterious. Anyway, here's the next mission.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25873

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 07:58 PM

I played the last two missions very beautiful appearance the sixth mission
vote 9.0

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Posted 09 June 2013 - 05:15 AM

Played your fourth mission, that was utter cool !!
And now another character in the series..this is getting interesting..

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Posted 12 June 2013 - 08:53 PM

The 4th mission was great, just like the last two. You have exellent in and outros. The story is still a mystery but in the last cutscenes it feels like we're going somewhere. Though the only thing i didn't like was the difficulty of the stealth part, it was a bit exagerated and unrealistic (SPAS and M4s for casino guards?!) a 9mm 100% accuracy would've been just fine.

Rating: 9/10

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Posted 06 July 2013 - 09:36 AM

5th mission released. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/26403

Thanks for the feedbacks, guys.

@Zizo Yep, as well as I am. biggrin.gif

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Posted 22 December 2013 - 12:27 AM

Latest mission updated!

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29354

 

Damn, everything's messed up on the first page. I gotta fix them soon. T_T

 





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