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Posted 09 March 2013 - 09:30 PM Edited by basket_boy123, 12 July 2013 - 09:01 PM.

Dead World
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Description: When virus first appeard it didn't take long to change our beautiful Earth in to the Dead World. First it everyone thought that it was just a normal virus like H1N1 ( swine ) flu, until dead people came back to life and started to eat everyone that came in there way. The World Health Organization and army wasn't ready for that, they didn't have a cure and army didn't expected a '' zombie apocalypse ''. People were dying fast and there was to many of ''dead'' ones, so army couldn't hold zombies back. Just the lucky ones survive and they need to do anything to stay safe.

Characters

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Leonardo ''Leo'' Davis
The protagonist/playable character. Leo is 26 years old and he lives in Los Santos by his own. He worked as a computer expert. Before zombie apocalypse started he got hit by a truck, so he woke up in hospital and he didn't have a clue what the hack is going on.

Paul Brown
He is 26 years old and he is Leo's best friend and a co-worker. When everything started he try to get to refugee camp in San Fierro, but nobody knows what happend to him then. ( he plays a bigger role in Chapter 2 )

Mike White
He is 31 years old and he worked as bodyguard, so he have a lot of shooting skills. He safed Leo and he is the first ''alive'' person Leo found, since then they have become very good friends.

David Anderson
He is 33 years old and he worked as mechanic. He safed Leo and Mike and he is some kind of leader of a small group of survivors. He is nice, but he always listen others and he can't make his own decision, this is why he is a ''bad'' leader.

Kevin Miller
He is 37 years old and nobody really don't know much about him. He first worked as FBI agent but he got fired. Some people said that he was involved in some murders ordered by mafia.

Carlos Fernandez
He is 29 years old and he worked as contractor. He and his girlfriend tried to escape to San Fierro, but they were almost killed. Then they met David.

Sarah Garcia
She is 27 years old and she worked as waitress. She is Carlos's girlfriend.

Maya Robinson
She is 24 years old and she worked as nurse. She left the hospital in time, cause if she wouldn't she would be dead, because all infected ones become zombies and started to attack everyone in hospital.

Phil Lewis
He is 28 years old. He and his girlfriend locked them self in the house where they stayed safe. He doesn't play a big role in the story.

Caroline Jackson
She is 26 years old and she is Phil's girlfriend. She doesn't play a big role in the story.

Jimmy Nelson
He is 32 years old and he was a local sheriff in Blueberry. When everything started he and his deputies tried to hold zombies back with road blocks, but he was the only one who survived. Then he met some other survivors and together they ''made'' a small shelter at the farm next to the town.

Drake Morris
He is 27 years old and is a biker. He has a brother Blake that is 38 years old. When everything started Blake and Drake talked on the phone and Blake told him that they will met in Blueberry, but Blake never came, so Drake want to find him.

Robert ''Leader'' Willson
Like Kevin nobody doesn't really know much about him, he is around 40 and he said that he worked in the government. He started the group of survivors and he is incharge in there ''safe zone'' so this is why everybody calls him the ''leader''.

John McMiller
He is not really very important person in the story, but he is the Robert's right hand. He was captain in the San Andreas S.W.A.T team. He is 35 years old and he is a very good shooter.


Enemys:

Zombies
They are just normal zombies, not too slow, not too fast, but very very hungry.

Stronger zombies
This zombies are much more dangerous, they are harder to kill and they are more aggressive

Fire zombies
This zombies are not as strong as the stronger zombies, ( they can be killed quicker ) but they are much more dangerous, cause if you don't kill them quickly they can make a lot of damage on your health.

Much more characters later in the story


Missions:

Chapter one - Time to survive
Mission #1 - Wake in hell
Mission #2 - Out of ammo
Mission #3 - Not alone
Mission #4 - Way back
Mission #5 - Way back PART 2
Mission #6 - Good plan
Mission #7 - Fuel
Mission #8 - Bye Los Santos

Pack of all 8 missions from Chapter 1


Chapter two - Far from home
Mission #9 - Unplanned stop
Mission #10 - Finding medicine
Mission #11 - New ride
Mission #12 - Finally safe ?
Mission #13 - Old friend



Progress:

Chapter one ( Time to survive ) - 100% finished

Chapter two ( Far from home ) - work in progress

Chapter three - not started yet ( maybe it's going to be canceled )


Updates:
20.March 2013 - New part: #5 Way back PART 2
23.March 2013 - New part: #6 Good plan
25.March 2013 - New part: #7 Fuel
25.March 2013 - New character/zombie added
28.March 2013 - New part: #8 Bye Los Santos
28.March 2013 - Chapter one ( Time to survive ) finished
6.April 2013 - Pack of all 8 missions from chapter 1
14.April 2013 - New part: #9 Unplanned stop
14.April 2013 - Start of Chapter 2 ( Far from home )
2.May 2013 - New part: #10 Finding medicine
2.May 2013 - New character ( Jimmy Nelson/ Drake Morris )
4.May 2013 - New part: #11 New ride
11.May 2013 - New part: #12 Finally safe ?
18.June 2013 - New part: #13 Old friend
18.June 2013 - New character ( Robert 'Leader' Willson / John McMiller )


Apit2010 played my missions and post it on youtube

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Video of mission 1 - Wake in hell

Video of mission 2 - Out of ammo

Video of mission 3 - Not alone


Doublepulse did the review for Dead World

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Review of mission 1 - Wake in hell


Credits:

Dutchy3010 and PatrickW - for making the best mod in GTA San Andreas
apit2010 - for playing and posting missions on youtube
Doublepulse - for reviewing Dead World

Please don't forget to rate and comment I will appreciate your opinion wink.gif
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Posted 10 March 2013 - 12:12 AM Edited by Chips237, 10 March 2013 - 08:29 AM.

lol.gif This looks awesome, i'm gonna try it out.
Hope i dont get a heart attack, Haha
EDIT: I played all four missions, i'd say there was nothing scary.
It's a very good mission series, the cars, objects and actors were well placed.
So here are my scores:

Story: 8.5/10 - I like the story, he got hit by a truck then he wakes up to find Los Santos f***ed up.
Writing: 7/10 - I saw a few grammatical errors and coloring errors. But mostly the dialogues were well-written.
Gameplay: 8/10 - The gameplay like finding specific things, following actors and killing enemies were great, but next time make more such as driving to places and making decisions (that would be great).

Overall: 8/10 - This is an awesome mission pack, keep up the good work icon14.gif
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Posted 10 March 2013 - 09:52 AM

QUOTE (Chips237 @ Sunday, Mar 10 2013, 00:12)
EDIT: I played all four missions, i'd say there was nothing scary.

Well some sound effect are maybe to loud, and some people get scared easily ( I'm that kind of person tounge.gif )
Most important thing is that you like the missions biggrin.gif

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Posted 10 March 2013 - 10:40 AM

I played all four of your storyline missions
I like how they are made ​​objects, cars ..
the plot does not seem to have gaps
also sounds give the impression of being in a zombie apocalypse
you did a good job man, keep it up.
one last thing that I do not really liked
since I am a fanatic of everything related to zombies
I wanted to tell you to put (if they want) "headshot" "on" zombie
so that they die once the shots in the head
so as to make the game more real
since the zombies, once you shoot in the head, they die.
is not a criticism, but a council (:

Vote 8/10

Sorry for my english confused.gif
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Posted 10 March 2013 - 01:15 PM

QUOTE (The - Hunter @ Sunday, Mar 10 2013, 10:40)

I wanted to tell you to put (if they want) "headshot" "on" zombie
so that they die once the shots in the head
so as to make the game more real
since the zombies, once you shoot in the head, they die.
is not a criticism, but a council (:

I know it's more realistic if you can shoot them in the head, but I put headshot ''off'' because this make more challenging for a player, cause this make zombies ''harder'' to kill wink.gif
Like I always say the most important thing is that you like it biggrin.gif

Note: Part 5 coming out tonight

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Posted 11 March 2013 - 09:20 AM

Nice. :3
I'm expecting scarier scenes in Part 5. smile.gif

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Posted 18 March 2013 - 07:14 AM

Good mission

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Posted 20 March 2013 - 07:59 PM

New part ( #5 Way back PART 2 ) finally released
Sorry that I didn't upload this part sooner, but my GTA San Andreas just started to work slowly and it started crashing, this is why this mission is shorter than the others ;(
I don't know why did the game start to do that, it work normaly till 9 days ago confused.gif ( I didn't upload any new mods )

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Posted 21 March 2013 - 01:25 PM

Played the five missions.

Pros:

-Good use of objects (zombie apocalypse feel)
-Good use of vehicles (zombie apocalypse feel)
-Good use of dead bodies (zombie apocalypse feel)
-Nice concept (supplies gathering)
-First person view (in second mission at hospital)
-Variety of friendly actors
-Stronger zombie (different skin than normal zombies)
-Spelling (it's good)

Cons:

-Predictible battles (always after a reach checkpoint cutscene most of the time)
-Repetitive battles (always the same kind of battles)
-Sounds (add more to the missions or add none at all)
-Variety of enemy actors (always the same looking zombies)
-Spelling (but it could have some improvement)


Note:

7/10

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Posted 22 March 2013 - 02:36 PM

Played the fifth mission
has been done well in my ward
But I ask you something, that maybe I did not like
why do not you add more zombies?
zombie maybe 25 or 30 would be nice smile.gif
maybe then remove them when they are dead with the hide.

I will make a short mission zombie
and I may have found a way to make it difficult
the fight with zombies, making it more real
Other aspect of this storyline missions.

sorry for my english smile.gif

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Posted 23 March 2013 - 01:17 AM

always love playing Zombie missions, keep up the good work.

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Posted 23 March 2013 - 07:08 AM

QUOTE (GalacticXp1 @ Saturday, Mar 23 2013, 01:17)
always love playing Zombie missions, keep up the good work.

thanks galactic ! I'm one of your biggest fans and it means alot to me that you like it biggrin.gif

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Posted 23 March 2013 - 11:43 AM

Played the 5th mission.
Writing: 8.5/10 - Same as before, improve your grammar and writing and i might give you a 9.5.
Story: 9/10 - I liked it how they stayed at some house before going to theirs. Gives a "move always" feel.
Gameplay: 7/10 - Sorry, but no improvements from the past four missions. Still, don't let DYOM's limitations ruin your story's gameplay. If you mess around with DYOM, you might be able to create objectives that aren't normally possible, such as rescuing someone 5 seconds before they are shot (like what Zizo008 did) and destroying objects (like what Mattatta did). Use randomization sometimes that was introduced in v7, giving the missions a thrilling feel.
Overall: 8.5/10 - Slight improvement, keep this up and you'll receive a perfect 10. icon14.gif

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Posted 23 March 2013 - 05:54 PM

New part ( Good plan ). I fix my GTA San Andreas and I made this mission longer then the previous one biggrin.gif
In this mission you get to choose something. If you want to check how did your choice affect on the story check the file called: Choose IMPORTANT
You can find this file in the archive that you download wink.gif

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Posted 24 March 2013 - 11:05 AM

very good
the sixth mission I really liked
however, to make the idea of a city post-apocalyptic
why do not you put more abandoned cars
or roadblocks with fences, to make it look real.
continues man icon14.gif wink.gif

sorry for my english

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Posted 25 March 2013 - 05:05 PM Edited by basket_boy123, 25 March 2013 - 09:06 PM.

Thanks to all that are playing and loving my mission pack ! biggrin.gif
New part ( Fuel ) is out.

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Posted 26 March 2013 - 02:48 AM

Very nice this seventh mission
To tell the truth I have nothing to complain about
other than that it is a little short as mission
aspect the next mission

good job man wink.gif icon14.gif

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Posted 28 March 2013 - 04:58 PM

Last part of Chapter one ( Time to survive ) was upload it.
First part for Chapter two coming soon.
Can someone please rate the whole chapter ( story, gameplay and so on ) and can you tell me which is your ''favorite'' and the ''worst'' character so I'll know which would you ''miss'' the most if he/she dies tounge.gif

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Posted 28 March 2013 - 10:47 PM

Mission very pretty
although it is too short as mission
wait for the next chapter
good job

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Posted 29 March 2013 - 07:46 AM Edited by Chips237, 29 March 2013 - 07:59 AM.

Played Missions 6-8.

Overall Rating of Chapter 1:

Writing: 8.5/10
Story: 9/10
Gameplay: 8.5/10

Overall: 8.5/10: Nice work on Chapter 1, i'm expecting more improvements on Chapter 2.

My favorite character is of course, Leo, but if not the main character, then David and Mike
My LEAST favorite character is Kevin because he's just plain annoying and always gives a negative reaction to what the group decides.

P.S., thanks for adding the decisions and driving objectives. I'm happy to see someone followed my advice.

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Posted 29 March 2013 - 01:48 PM

QUOTE (Chips237 @ Friday, Mar 29 2013, 07:46)
My LEAST favorite character is Kevin because he's just plain annoying and always gives a negative reaction to what the group decides.


Well Kevin was meant to be that kind of person, the ''annoying'' one tounge.gif
Thanks for rating the whole chapter, I will try to make chapter 2 even better wink.gif

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Posted 31 March 2013 - 11:21 AM

I would rate it 9/10
My favorite are Leo and Mike
For least favorite I don't know confused.gif maybe Kevin

Please chapter 2 soon ! tounge.gif

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Posted 31 March 2013 - 01:38 PM

QUOTE (basket_boy123 @ Friday, Mar 29 2013, 13:48)
QUOTE (Chips237 @ Friday, Mar 29 2013, 07:46)
My LEAST favorite character is Kevin because he's just plain annoying and always gives a negative reaction to what the group decides.


Well Kevin was meant to be that kind of person, the ''annoying'' one tounge.gif
Thanks for rating the whole chapter, I will try to make chapter 2 even better wink.gif

Yeah. I wish Kevin would just get gobbled up by the zombies or shot dead by Leo, i would be the happiest person in the world.

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Posted 31 March 2013 - 07:12 PM

Good mission, expecting for the new chapters

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Posted 31 March 2013 - 07:57 PM

QUOTE (Chips237 @ Sunday, Mar 31 2013, 13:38)
Yeah. I wish Kevin would just get gobbled up by the zombies or shot dead by Leo, i would be the happiest person in the world.

Later in the story you will know why Kevin is so annoying and you will maybe change your opinion wink.gif

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Posted 05 April 2013 - 10:30 AM

Try to upload A zip file which contains Full chapter 1 biggrin.gif

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Posted 06 April 2013 - 05:15 PM

A pack ( zip file ) of all 8 mission from chapter 1 have been uploaded biggrin.gif
Chapter 2 ( Far from home ) will maybe get a little delayed, cause of the school. I have a lot of tests coming from April to end of May suicidal.gif

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Posted 06 April 2013 - 10:06 PM

I haven't played this yet, and I got many MPs to play, but I just have some side comment about people's favorite characters.

I like how you ask people's opinions of these characters, but Im having some feeling that Kevin will be one of those hated characters that transforms and becomes a hero or a badass by the end. I could be wrong, and I'm just sayin, I just have a good feeling about some of these things if the Author asks which character is your favorite.

Probably will check this out tounge.gif , but don't expect feedback right away.

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Posted 08 April 2013 - 03:20 AM

Nice Missions
Your this series is awesome i really like this series nice mission all of i was very enjoy every mission. Starting of story its very good an accident then wake up and every thing is changed Keep up buddy.
And one thing your characters Kevin its very enjoyable person i like his dialouges.
This series its look like real well your concept its good to
I give it 8/10

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Posted 13 April 2013 - 08:26 PM

QUOTE (DyomKing @ Monday, Apr 8 2013, 03:20)
Nice Missions
Your this series is awesome i really like this series nice mission all of i was very enjoy every mission. Starting of story its very good an accident then wake up and every thing is changed Keep up buddy.
And one thing your characters Kevin its very enjoyable person i like his dialouges.
This series its look like real well your concept its good to
I give it 8/10

Thanks DyomKing !

Note: Start of Chapter 2 ( Far from home ) maybe tomorrow or next week




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