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Eminence E.
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Posted 09 March 2013 - 11:16 AM Edited by Eminence E., 22 June 2014 - 05:20 PM.

MBKMS 1

My Body Killed My Soul revolves around the story of Mike, how his life turns out to be something he never thought it would be. Everything gone good and then...
Play as Mike and go through what he went through, you won't be dissapointed.
Note: MBKMS and MBKMS (HI) are similar stories, MBKMS (HI) has major improvements though.
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Posted 09 March 2013 - 11:31 AM

I played the series, all i can say it was awesome.
Not really that touching, though.
Also i noticed a lot of grammatical errors such as: (not intending to embarass you)
"These are the best days of my life" - When Mike won that deathmatch thing.
"Quite no one talks while im driving" - When Charlie was driving his car to George and Peter
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Posted 09 March 2013 - 01:02 PM Edited by Eminence E., 22 May 2014 - 04:40 PM.

Yeah there maybe mistakes, but thats just because I was in a hurry to complete the story fast. wink.gif

Edit: Ah, I played the story again and I found a lot of more mistakes then you pointed out..

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Posted 01 May 2013 - 02:20 PM

Announcement:
MBKMS 2 soon to release!

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Posted 09 May 2013 - 12:20 AM

Good missions and good quantity, expected updates.
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Posted 11 May 2013 - 02:57 AM

QUOTE (salvadorc17 @ Thursday, May 9 2013, 00:20)
Good missions and good quantity, expected updates.

Glad you liked it. smile.gif
MBKMS 2 will be even better. biggrin.gif

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Posted 22 May 2014 - 04:51 PM

Finally I'm free from all the school activities. Now I can start up with MBKMS 2. Trying to complete it within 4 days, i haven't started with it actually..

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Posted 22 May 2014 - 04:57 PM

Finally I'm free from all the school activities. Now I can start up with MBKMS 2. Trying to complete it within 4 days, i haven't started with it actually..

Good luck for MBKMS 2 :^:

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Posted 23 May 2014 - 12:32 AM

It's back :)

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Posted 23 May 2014 - 01:39 AM

It's back :)


Yes it is. :D

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Posted 23 May 2014 - 03:55 PM

Good Luck Dude And Your Missions Are Great

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Posted 23 May 2014 - 04:44 PM Edited by Eminence E., 23 May 2014 - 04:56 PM.

Thanks QaiserH. I'll try to do much more better this time.

Edit: So far i've completed 2 missions :(, i may have to extend the release date if tommorrow is as worse as today was.
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