DYOM Chain Story
Posted 18 March 2013 - 08:23 AM
1) Go anywhere and fight.
Posted 18 March 2013 - 08:44 AM
BTW: Sorry for adding that "lesbian" boss thing. I just wanted CJ to be mad at his boss because he broke up with his GF off-scene. Also, the way the boss treats CJ is in a gayish/sweet way. "Hi CJ, i have work this night, meet me at East Beach" should be "Yo, motherf*cker. I have some jobs for you to do, Get ya ass over here, nigga."
EDIT: There's a slight problem.
After Vincent picks a gun and then exits the Ammu-Nation, he exits the Ammu-Nation in San Fierro instead of the one in Market.
If you go back in, the game crashes.
Am i the only one experiencing this bug?
Edited by Chips237, 18 March 2013 - 09:03 AM.
Posted 18 March 2013 - 09:08 AM
Posted 18 March 2013 - 11:25 AM
|QUOTE (salvadorc17 @ Sunday, Mar 17 2013, 19:43)|
| About Cj day story ending good work for you, the only i dont like in that mission is Chimpso comment about abandon "lesbian boss".|
Good one the next mission.
I have decide to sneak in Xiang mansion.
Now there are choices:
1. Go back to boss and pick up some guys ( To help you find the traitor)
2. Go talk with Ned about the traitor.
3. Sneak into boss personal room and look for evidence about betrayal.
Ok. Ok. I'm gonna' tell whats wrong about your mission. The protagonist isn't Mike, it's Vincent, and It isn's Xiang, it's Xang. And you have several grammatic mistakes. Another thing, i don't know why you put "Mafia Story" in the title, because it's Mafia Adventures. Man, you guys can't even design.
Edited by Dude1, 18 March 2013 - 11:28 AM.
Posted 18 March 2013 - 11:30 AM
Posted 18 March 2013 - 04:01 PM
Please wait for my update.
|Continuing Part 5.|
Actually salvadorc had posted part 4 but Dyomking did not rename it as Part 5 while he continued it.
And about the 'summary' I think Dude1 would do it better than anyone else since he started it.
I have fixed the problem.Story will continue where Dyomking stopped.
Shall I rectify all the grammatical errors in this mission ?
Note:I had stated previously in the mission that the gates of the stairs leading to the roof of Xang's Mansion are closed. So I am keeping the gates closed.You have to find another way to get to the roof of Xang's mansion.
Edited by Zohair12345, 18 March 2013 - 05:18 PM.
Posted 18 March 2013 - 05:30 PM
Mafia Adventures Part 6
@Chips237 : Now you can continue the mission from the link I have provided . It contains the corrected mission . So it would be easy enough to understand what is going on.Also I havent continued it after King.
Posted 18 March 2013 - 07:04 PM
Firts, my mistake was i have get confused some things in the mission. Excuse for that.
Second, Dyom King you need to add 3 choices or more, and it will be more specific, dont post generic sentences.
And last, what are you doing Zohair, if there is a mistake just message me and i will fix it, but now this is altered to your preference.
Now i will suggest, do a summary of each mission to prevent something like that.
Posted 19 March 2013 - 03:54 AM
I havent altered to my preference, just corrected the mistakes I have done.
Will someone tell what to do now ? I really like this topic and dont want it to be closed...
Shall we continue it ? OR SHALL WE START A NEW CHAIN STORY ?
Edited by Zohair12345, 20 March 2013 - 07:51 AM.
Posted 20 March 2013 - 06:55 PM
Its your decision.
Posted 21 March 2013 - 11:15 AM
Edited by Zohair12345, 21 March 2013 - 04:46 PM.
Posted 22 March 2013 - 07:11 PM
I have started a new Chain Story : Riots .
You play the role of Chris Evans who is a resident of San Andreas . One fine day he wakes up to find the whole San Andreas in havoc , riots going on .
He has the following choices to make :
|Go to see your brother Michael Evans.||You are worried about your brother's safety.|
|Go to the San Andreas Police Department||Ask the cops as to how the riots began .|
|Buy a weapon for Self - Defence.||Get to the Ammunation to purchase some arms and ammunition.|
Note : I suggest whoever is playing this Chain Story should even mention the description to avoid messing up with the story .
Edited by Zohair12345, 22 March 2013 - 07:15 PM.
Posted 24 April 2013 - 07:48 PM
We are still alive and continue if all of you want to do...
Posted 25 April 2013 - 09:05 AM
Wait for me to edit.
EDIT : I have chosen to go to see Michael Evans.
Link : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25131
1) Escape to the countryside.
2)Go to SAPD and investigate the riots.
3)Go to Raga, boss of Azteca Gang to seek protection.
Edited by Zohair12345, 25 April 2013 - 09:56 AM.
Posted 28 April 2013 - 01:31 PM
EDIT : Nope it didnt. I played it till the end where King left choices.
Edited by Zohair12345, 28 April 2013 - 01:42 PM.
Posted 28 April 2013 - 02:37 PM
Posted 28 April 2013 - 07:15 PM
Posted 28 April 2013 - 11:03 PM
Someone else do it.
Edited by Chips237, 28 April 2013 - 11:18 PM.
Posted 29 April 2013 - 01:29 AM
1. Go to the countryside to stay safe
2. Go to the LAPD to find out what started the riot
3. Steal some things, since there is a riot
4. Try and stop the riot
Edited by thegtaman531, 29 April 2013 - 03:12 AM.
Posted 29 April 2013 - 07:10 PM
Ill decide to go to countryside to stay safe.
Pd. I forgot to put the new mission one.
Zombie Chain story part 1.
1. Find out what happen with the explosions.
2. Go to labs and destroy the virus.
3. Search for survivors.
Edited by tote514, 29 April 2013 - 07:44 PM.
Posted 30 April 2013 - 07:37 PM
Then, my choice is find whats happen with the explosions.
Zombie Chain Story part 2: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/25252
-Go to second floor and check for survivors.
-Go back outside and ask for reinforcements.
-Put explosives in all the hospital.
Posted 01 May 2013 - 03:44 AM
-Stop the virus from spreading to other cities
-Go back inside the hospital with the reinforcements and look for survivors
-Kill every zombie you see
-Nuke Los Santos
Edited by thegtaman531, 01 May 2013 - 05:55 AM.
Posted 09 May 2013 - 12:18 AM
Anyone want to continue or make a new misison?
Posted 12 May 2013 - 03:33 PM
|QUOTE (salvadorc17 @ Thursday, May 9 2013, 00:18)|
| Wow i checked your part and you got some mistake, the mission is not needed to be complicated with spreading the virus into the city, the idea of the story is an hospital quarantine.|
Anyone want to continue or make a new misison?
Can i Play?
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