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[gguywesker101]

some of the missions in the storyline will happen at the same time that the biker stories missions do,but mostly this story takes place BEFORE biker stories,but is still conected to it.

Story:the forrelis and the leone crime family have been at war for generations,john forreli wants to end it but has no luck,a horibble war rages over the 2 families and many die,but john forreli will do anything to reunite cosa nostra (sicilian mafia),lifestyle of a mobster isint easy ,but it has its rewards

the storyline will involve : 40 - 50 unique amazing missions
sound effects and music (mafia style music)
moving objects and other 7.2 features
INTENSE action and storyline
a bit of romance =)
INTENSE car/bike chases
EXPLOSIONS
many hard but fun bossbattles
find out a little bit more about john forreli and black fox

SEEMS PROMISING RIGHT

COMING SOON for dyom 7.2

[gguywesker101]

logo made by me (finaly had some time ,headers will be done soon)

[O.G Skletal]

Can't wait to play your storyline!! I like the genre and storylines with many missions(like billions lol). Love the logo too.
Good luck gguywesker101!!

[Zizo.]

Crossing storyline and use of new features? Great man. 50-40 missions is alot, hope you complete it.
Use some BBcodes to get text looking good.

[gguywesker101]

i ALWAYS use BBcodes lol,i always have,bikeer stories is just an old storyline that was done a year and a half ago XD,all my newest creations have them,like claude in las venturas (which was a big sucess)

i also ask you people to give me sugestions for missions,what kind of missions would you like to see,and i will look into it SINCE THINKING UP 40 missions ISINT easy XD

ALSO,Claude in las venturas also had 30 missions and the story was unique,everyone on my friends website liked it alot,it uses coloured text and other stuff BUT was still made in v6 CLAUDE IN LAS VENTURAS DOWNLOAD

Edited by gguywesker101, 27 February 2013 - 10:48 AM.

[gguywesker101]

i would like you to give me sugestions of what kind of missions you would like (LIKE prison brake,chase,ambushes,airbattles ect..)

[Rytuklis]

I'm really skeptical about storylines, whose authors say that it's gonna be the best one ever made and decides whenever it is promising regardless the feedback. Simply put - i aint playing it.

[O.G Skletal]

Personally i like ambush,betrayal,real action,airbattle missions(because i love jets)etc. But i think you should decide,because you're putting up the missions for the storyline,so my little advice 'do what you can do best'
Good luck!!!

[gguywesker101]

QUOTE (skletal @ Monday, Mar 4 2013, 16:59)

Personally i like ambush,betrayal,real action,airbattle missions(because i love jets)etc. But i think you should decide,because you're putting up the missions for the storyline,so my little advice 'do what you can do best' Good luck!!!

good ones,all of them will be put inside (JUST NOT BETRAYAL XD) ,those are great idea.tnx skeletal

[O.G Skletal]

You're welcome gguywesker101,cant wait to play missions with such features!!! So cool!!!
Cheers

[gguywesker101]

this might think 3 months BUT IT WILL BE WORTH IT,it can take less,if i get even more ideas and more time,school you see

[O.G Skletal]

3 months of mission designing is worth the best ever made! I totally agree,because i believe the missions will be quality and intense,don't you think so?

[Zizo.]

Biggest advice you should follow is to, honestly, stop bragging and acting as if you were the best designer:

QUOTE (gguywesker101 @ Wednesday, Feb 27 2013, 11:44)

i ALWAYS use BBcodes lol BUT IT WILL BE WORTH IT SINCE THINKING UP 40 missions ISINT easy XD best EVER made

That will give you reactions like this (which i agree with)

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I'm really skeptical about storylines, whose authors say that it's gonna be the best one ever made and decides whenever it is promising regardless the feedback. Simply put - i aint playing it.

If you are modeste, have good english and great topic making, you'll have positive feedback from players and viewers. For now, i think you should give us a taster, a demo, simply a mission that'll prove that this is worth the wait.

[gguywesker101]

QUOTE (Zizo008 @ Friday, Mar 8 2013, 12:03)

Biggest advice you should follow is to, honestly, stop bragging and acting as if you were the best designer: QUOTE (gguywesker101 @ Wednesday, Feb 27 2013, 11:44) i ALWAYS use BBcodes lol BUT IT WILL BE WORTH IT SINCE THINKING UP 40 missions ISINT easy XD best EVER made That will give you reactions like this (which i agree with) QUOTE I'm really skeptical about storylines, whose authors say that it's gonna be the best one ever made and decides whenever it is promising regardless the feedback. Simply put - i aint playing it. If you are modeste, have good english and great topic making, you'll have positive feedback from players and viewers. For now, i think you should give us a taster, a demo, simply a mission that'll prove that this is worth the wait.

i find this offensive,BY SAYING BEST MISSIONS EVER MADE I MEANT BY ME,my best creation yet (tought it is hard since im running out of good ideas),im not saying im the best ( BUT ITS EVERY DESIGNERS DREAM) ,so please think about what are you gonna post BEFORE you post it


btw ,demo is already in making O_o (BEFORE YOU TOLD ME)

[gguywesker101]

oh and btw skeletal,i seen a number of your creations on the dyom website,great job,quite enjoyable

[Zizo.]

QUOTE (gguywesker101 @ Tuesday, Mar 12 2013, 10:58)

QUOTE (Zizo008 @ Friday, Mar 8 2013, 12:03) Biggest advice you should follow is to, honestly, stop bragging and acting as if you were the best designer: QUOTE (gguywesker101 @ Wednesday, Feb 27 2013, 11:44) i ALWAYS use BBcodes lol BUT IT WILL BE WORTH IT SINCE THINKING UP 40 missions ISINT easy XD best EVER made That will give you reactions like this (which i agree with) QUOTE I'm really skeptical about storylines, whose authors say that it's gonna be the best one ever made and decides whenever it is promising regardless the feedback. Simply put - i aint playing it. If you are modeste, have good english and great topic making, you'll have positive feedback from players and viewers. For now, i think you should give us a taster, a demo, simply a mission that'll prove that this is worth the wait. i find this offensive,BY SAYING BEST MISSIONS EVER MADE I MEANT BY ME,my best creation yet (tought it is hard since im running out of good ideas),im not saying im the best ( BUT ITS EVERY DESIGNERS DREAM) ,so please think about what are you gonna post BEFORE you post it btw ,demo is already in making O_o (BEFORE YOU TOLD ME)

I don't understand why you see it offensive, all i did was give you advice. You want this looking more attractive? First of all ask a mod to change the title to simply "[Storyline] Rise of Forelli". Second, when i said BBCodes i didn't mean colored text in missions, i mean't the topic. Let me fix it up for you:

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[IMG]http://i47.tinypic.com/2rdi2yv.png[/IMG] [B][font=Arial][SIZE=14]STORY:[/SIZE][/font][/B] The Forellis and the Leone crime family have been at war for generations. John Forelli wants to end it but has no luck, a horibble war rages over the 2 families and many die, but john forreli will do anything to reunite Cosa Nostra (Sicilian mafia), lifestyle of a mobster isn't easy, but it has its rewards... [font=Arial][SIZE=7]40 - 50 Unique Amazing Missions Sounds! Moving Objects and More V7 Features INTENSE Action! A bit of romance... Crossing Storyline![/SIZE] [center][B][SIZE=14]COMING SOON! [/SIZE][/B][/center] [/font]

I didn't add much exept few minor improvements, biggest thing to do is to at least add a stroke to the logo and resize it.

QUOTE

btw ,demo is already in making O_o (BEFORE YOU TOLD ME) BY SAYING BEST MISSIONS EVER MADE I MEANT  BY ME

See? You're still doing your thing! You have to be polite and more understanding with people interested in your SL. It's great that you thought about the demo. And about Best Ever made thing, maybe you should have been more clear next time. And don't double post and please stop writing in caps.

Edited by Zizo008, 12 March 2013 - 12:07 PM.

[gguywesker101]

dont teach me how to talk,i can do that myself thank you very much...



by the way,the project is ON HOLD due to PERSONAL MATTERS (IRL MATTERS),will be continued ASAP


regards,the G

[O.G Skletal]

Please guys calm down. We should all listen to advices from other people and be tolerant

[gguywesker101]

agreed (btw skeletal,seen some of your work,gj mate)

[Rytuklis]

If you find an opinion offensive.. Well... Dont ask for one?

[xweert123]

QUOTE (Rytuklis @ Monday, Mar 4 2013, 15:00)

I'm really skeptical about storylines, whose authors say that it's gonna be the best one ever made and decides whenever it is promising regardless the feedback. Simply put - i aint playing it.

Hey, I know Gguy. It's definitely worth it.





On topic, about time I found your DYOM missions, gguy! This sounds pretty sweet.

[Canadian Scrotum]

QUOTE (skletal @ Thursday, Mar 7 2013, 12:38)

3 months of mission designing is worth the best ever made! I totally agree,because i believe the missions will be quality and intense,don't you think so?

I can only, but completely disagree with you.

I worked on a mission pack five months and yet it is not the best one ever made.

[Rytuklis]

You must understand that anyone barely even knows you. We, the community of DYOM, tend to know who are the best designers amongst us, but then some stranger we dont even know comes and claims that his mission pack will be the best!

What reactions honestly do you expect?

[gguywesker101]

soory for HUGE inactivity,but i have been busy with many websites,youtube ect (IM A REALY REALY REALY busy guy)

i decided that the series will be made into 3 parts ,each ,part 1 (15 missions) will be done soon,and as skeletal said (I LIKE THOSE KINDS OF MISSIONS,SO COOL),its COOL making them,and i hope it will be COOL playing em

either way,project will now continue


ALSO,i never said its gonna be the best in the history of dyom,i said it will be the best one ( I ) ever made

xweert123,wtf are you doing here?

[KD himan]

logo please..... i like it and want it... : )

 

soory for HUGE inactivity,but i have been busy with many websites,youtube ect (IM A REALY REALY REALY busy guy)

i decided that the series will be made into 3 parts ,each ,part 1 (15 missions) will be done soon,and as skeletal said (I LIKE THOSE KINDS OF MISSIONS,SO COOL),its COOL making them,and i hope it will be COOL playing em

either way,project will now continue


ALSO,i never said its gonna be the best in the history of dyom,i said it will be the best one ( I ) ever made

xweert123,wtf are you doing here?