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Have Mercy
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#1

Posted 15 February 2013 - 05:48 PM Edited by Have Mercy, 28 March 2016 - 04:06 AM.

redacted lol


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Posted 15 February 2013 - 07:30 PM

Not bad tupac, But you should try paragraphing you know? Check out my story yeah?

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Posted 15 February 2013 - 08:04 PM Edited by MERCYOVTHEDEVIL, 15 February 2013 - 08:49 PM.

QUOTE (-Ryder- @ Friday, Feb 15 2013, 19:30)
Not bad tupac, But you should try paragraphing you know? Check out my story yeah?

I do paragraph, just not the prologue.. And I've seen it already, reading through it still..

EDIT: Chapter 1 is up.

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#4

Posted 15 February 2013 - 09:12 PM

Very good so far! smile.gif

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 09:40 PM

Ete historia e muy bien ecrito. Yo me crie en Washington Heights y era un cuidad malo para mi porque de la violencia pero me fue de ahi y mude a Jersey City. Epero por el proximo capitulo.

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This story is very well written. I was raised in Washington Heights and it was a bad city for me because of the violence but I soon left and moved to Jersey City. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.


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#6

Posted 19 February 2013 - 09:52 PM

Damn man, that wasn't too far from my house..




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