Posted 15 February 2013 - 07:30 PM
Posted 15 February 2013 - 08:04 PM Edited by MERCYOVTHEDEVIL, 15 February 2013 - 08:49 PM.
|QUOTE (-Ryder- @ Friday, Feb 15 2013, 19:30)|
|Not bad tupac, But you should try paragraphing you know? Check out my story yeah?|
I do paragraph, just not the prologue.. And I've seen it already, reading through it still..
EDIT: Chapter 1 is up.
Posted 19 February 2013 - 09:40 PM
This story is very well written. I was raised in Washington Heights and it was a bad city for me because of the violence but I soon left and moved to Jersey City. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
- Junior Gutierrez
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