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[Storyline] The Flats - Chapter 2 is HERE!

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#91

Posted 06 January 2014 - 12:39 PM

Of course!

1. To be honest, I don't know. All I know is that the whole structure of the story is about to build up, I've been thinking about it lately, about which characters could I use, what kind of conflicts would happen in the story. I got a folder on my computer called "The Flats" which includes all my ideas, with a .txt which has the chapter ideas, but I'm not so sure about it yet. I will have to take some to make the whole script of the storyline done from beginning to end.
2. I can't tell the answer for that either. :D I will graduate this year from high school, and I got another hobby of mine that I do so I can't tell you surely. But I can tell you now that I'm finished with the second chapter, I get back to play with VCS, and I'm pretty sure that I won't start working on it until I finish that game. :D
3. Pretty much will go until the end of the story, although I doubt that there'll be just as much missions as in the original game. I've been thinking about the ending too, and I already know which characters will I include in it, I just don't know how should the story end yet.

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Posted 06 January 2014 - 06:30 PM

No more crashing! I've installed a clean version...and re-installed only a few car mods. I enjoy playing the story and using strategy in the missions. Tyrell is the perfect protagonist, I'm looking forward to what happens next in this chapter. I'll continue playing later on tonight. 


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Posted 07 January 2014 - 04:44 PM

Played chapter 1. Pretty impressive if you ask me

 

The feeling of The Ballas, the conversation, the action. All perfect with the theme. Pretty hard missions if you ask me, but finally finish it

 

Keep it up


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#94

Posted 10 January 2014 - 11:15 PM

I've run into a problem with the mission "Never Slippin'". At the deadend, nothing happens. I'm stuck. I'm about to try this for the third time to see this happens again.

 


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Posted 11 January 2014 - 12:27 PM Edited by BK90s, 11 January 2014 - 12:28 PM.

After the truck stops at the end of the airport driveway, nothing happens, no dialogs or something? Send me a screenshot in PM where it stops exactly.


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Posted 11 January 2014 - 02:54 PM

After the truck stops at the end of the airport driveway, nothing happens, no dialogs or something? Send me a screenshot in PM where it stops exactly.

I sent you a PM.


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Posted 13 January 2014 - 12:45 PM Edited by BK90s, 13 January 2014 - 12:46 PM.

Hey everyone, the annual awards are here, so I'd like to ask you guys, if you liked the storyline, and you think this little story should get just a little bit of a recognition on the forums, then go and nominate it! There is a Mission of the Year award in the modding awards category, but unfortunately, there is no Storyline of the Year. Although there is a category where you can create your own award, so that is the place where you can help me out! :D All you have to do is insert this little text there in this topic alone or with other nominations of yours:

Create your own Award

Design Your Own Mission - Storyline of the Year - The Flats

 

Thanks for the die hard fans for showing love for this little project of mine, I promise that I won't disappoint you with the continuations of the story! ;) :cool:

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Posted 01 March 2014 - 05:27 PM

Awesome storyline BK90s, you're an amazing designer. I hope that you are making a progress in this Storyline. I played Chapter 1 and 2 and they were perfect.. Good luck with this man and keep up with the good work I mean excellent work.


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Posted 10 March 2014 - 01:22 PM Edited by Rytuklis, 10 March 2014 - 01:23 PM.

Hey... I've just completed Chapter 1 and to be honest, while playing the first two missions I was like "meh, boring".. But after these two missions... The rest of the storyline was a f*ckING MASTERPIECE! 

The character and story development seemed kind of dim at first, I could hardly understand character relations and so on, but as the storyline progressed, I got to know each character and their relations between each other. Just like in original GTA storylines! The dialogue was awesome, it's just natural, and the story is great, I love how it has refferences to the original storyline, such as Sweet not allowing drugs in his gang and so on. I'm going to play Chapter 2 now and I really hope there will be Chapter 3 or, perhaps, a new storyline coming from you. But I really hope that whatever storyline or mission pack youll do next, you'll make it the same style you did this one - GTA style, not some military or other stuff :)


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Posted 11 March 2014 - 04:39 PM

It appears that Bomb the Tower in Chapter 2 is broken.. Whenever i equip my guns from the flat and go to the checkpoint, it crashes. Tried it twice.


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#101

Posted 11 March 2014 - 05:37 PM

It appears that Bomb the Tower in Chapter 2 is broken.. Whenever i equip my guns from the flat and go to the checkpoint, it crashes. Tried it twice.

Same for me.


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#102

Posted 14 March 2014 - 03:28 PM

You guys are not the first ones with this problem, only problem that my PC had some issues, had to reinstall some stuff and it'll take a while fix the bug, but I'll do it as soon as possible!


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Posted 15 March 2014 - 09:11 AM

You guys are not the first ones with this problem, only problem that my PC had some issues, had to reinstall some stuff and it'll take a while fix the bug, but I'll do it as soon as possible!

GREAT! You finally replied! Will we see Chapter 3 as well?


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Posted 26 March 2014 - 12:02 PM

Played Chapter 2. I have to say, it's better than first one. So, are you planning to finish Chapter 3 soon or what?
 


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Posted 26 March 2014 - 01:12 PM Edited by Chips237, 26 March 2014 - 01:14 PM.

Played Chapter 2. I have to say, it's better than first one. So, are you planning to finish Chapter 3 soon or what?
 

Good things come to those who wait.

Impatience will just make you hated. He spent a year working on Chapter 2, so don't expect Chapter 3 to come soon.


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Posted 23 September 2014 - 07:34 PM

Hello, BK90.

Lovin' all of the missions, man. I've been wodering if you have any updates to throw for us about that fix and possible Chapter 3?
I got stuck at the mission Boming the Tower just like others that reported here.
Would love to finish the chapter, because this is just amazing!

 

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Posted 23 September 2014 - 08:36 PM

Dat feeling when one of the DYOM legends describes your storyline as amazing.

 

But, well...

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#108

Posted 3 weeks ago

Hey guys, long time no see. Sorry to disappoint y'all, as much as I like the whole conception of creating this story, I don't quite have the time anymore to continue working on it, so as you might have noticed, I put it on a hiatus. I don't guarantee that I will ever finish it, but I definitely plan to at least write a little script of all of the things and twists I planned for this mission pack. Anyway, thank you everyone for the positive feedbacks, appreciation and support!

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Posted 3 weeks ago

Hey guys, long time no see. Sorry to disappoint y'all, as much as I like the whole conception of creating this story, I don't quite have the time anymore to continue working on it, so as you might have noticed, I put it on a hiatus. I don't guarantee that I will ever finish it, but I definitely plan to at least write a little script of all of the things and twists I planned for this mission pack. Anyway, thank you everyone for the positive feedbacks, appreciation and support!

sh*t, he finally posted. 

Okay, you don't know who I am, but I know who you are. I'm one of your fans man.

Even though I am sad by your post, at least it still shows that you're still alive and not (entirely) dead yet. And by my experience, if you're alive, you will come back, one day....

One day...


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#110

Posted 3 weeks ago

sh*t.. I'm dissappointed son..

BTW, had such a honor to have my storyline compared to yours :D. Sorry LCJ, I think this guy has claimed the best designer title from you.


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Posted 3 weeks ago Edited by Boris The Vodka, 3 weeks ago.

Sorry LCJ, I think this guy has claimed the best designer title from you.

who's that LCJ you're talking about?

also it was claimed from him like a long time ago

 

some on-topic so this post matters: that's a real shame you're too busy to finish this masterpiece of a storyline

how many more chapters have you planned anyway?


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Posted 3 weeks ago

Hey guys, long time no see. Sorry to disappoint y'all, as much as I like the whole conception of creating this story, I don't quite have the time anymore to continue working on it, so as you might have noticed, I put it on a hiatus. I don't guarantee that I will ever finish it, but I definitely plan to at least write a little script of all of the things and twists I planned for this mission pack. Anyway, thank you everyone for the positive feedbacks, appreciation and support!

When I saw that you made a post, I thought that you released chapter #3 of this masterpiece, but it turns out that I was wrong. I hope that you'll be back one day and surprise everybody just like you did before and I assure you that this storyline will be remembered in DYOM history, mate.


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Posted 3 weeks ago

Thank you for the kind words, all of you, I really appreciate it. :D

...also sorry for being way too late with fixing the Bombing the Tower mission. Now I tried to find a solution for the problem but since I didn't use for DYOM a long time, I kinda forgot my debugging methods so I posted a thread into the Support thread, I hope they can help with it... :rol:


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Posted 3 weeks ago Edited by BK90s, 3 weeks ago.

Sorry for the double post, so after a little while I figured out that there were some problems with the actors, and changed them, now the Bombing The Tower mission works like a charm. I fixed the whole mission pack on the DYOM website but if you only wanna change this file, then click here and put this file into your DSL folder.

 

And to answer this question:

 

how many more chapters have you planned anyway?

 

I was planning 9 chapters in all, 3 in Los Santos, 3 in Las Venturas, 3 in San Fierro, in this order.

 

Also shoutout to LnDProductions for doing a great job with the storyline's walkthrough on YouTube. (also I would be grateful if you could do a playlist including only these videos. :D )

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Posted 3 weeks ago

 

Sorry LCJ, I think this guy has claimed the best designer title from you.

who's that LCJ you're talking about?

 

Seriously, who is he?

 

Just so you know, I had that title once and as far as I remember it was 2011. Now, every designer is the best in their own way.

 

 

(also I would be grateful if you could do a playlist including only these videos. :D )

 

Sure! Here you go: http://www.youtube.c...7AF5674CC98F94F

 

Going to continue playing in no time! :)

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Posted 5 days ago Edited by BK90s, 5 days ago.

Hey guys, I was reading the recent posts about 2nd Chapter in this thread, and I kinda noticed that it is a topic of conversation in the community so I did a quick search on this forum, and what I saw blew my mind. The fact that my storyline is being talked about in a way that set the bar in this community, and people are saying my storyline's name as a prime example of a good storyline... Well I kind of have a loss on words because I was always bad at answering to compliments throughout my whole life. :D

So after making myself recall the content of the first two chapters (by watching the walkthroughs of LCJ of course! ...Tahoma-homa-homa. :lol: ) and after making a whole bunch of research by the help of revisiting the missions from the beginning of the original game (I even made a freaking chart about those missions, no joke :panic: ) and visiting gta.wikia for a while...

 

I wrote down a little plan. The script of a storyline that consists of 20 missions.

Gentlemen, I proudly like to announce that I began the working process of
THE FLATS - CHAPTER III.: TOP OF THE WORLD

All I can ask from you guys is your patience. The implementation will indeed take some time to finish, certainly no chance of finishing it this year, that is why I'm not setting a deadline so I can work on it with putting my best into it. And it is kind of a suicide deal to announce this, but I don't give a goddamn because I like to create this story as much as you guys like to play with it: There is no chance of me not finishing the creation of all the remaining chapters. I'm not guaranteeing that there won't be a few hiatuses in between them, but I will definitely finish it. Thank you for your appreciation and support, nothing but love from yours truly: BK90s. ;)

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Posted 5 days ago

Good luck with Chapter 3, man. 2015 will easily be the hottest year of DYOM world. Loving it.

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