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Posted 27 December 2012 - 11:03 PM Edited by leoncj, 17 June 2013 - 12:21 AM.

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Only One Leaf Left (OOLL) is a mission-pack made in DYOM V7.0.
Only One Leaf Left means that if a tree doesn't have any leaves on it, it means it's dead. So only one leaf left is only one last chance left to succeed in life and do something right and defeat the baddies.


STORY

"My name is Carlo McVann and I did something wrong in life, one simple mistake and you already have one last chance to live, otherwise you're dead. I've been running for four months now since that mistake I did. My wife and my 19 years old son are dead, because of this stupid mistake I did. I still have only one leaf left, one last chance to get everything right. I never expected my life to be this sh*tty, I never expected I will have to learn how to shoot. For four months I'm being chased by the devil... I need to live, I need to survive... I must, I have to!"



CHARACTERS


CARLO MCVANN
"Introduced since: Introduction"
Carlo is the main protagonist of the story. He's 38 years old and he was a business man in Los Santos. He had a wife and a son before all this. He made a mistake by doing something that the mafia of Las Venturas didn't like. Now, for four months, he's being chased by the mafia. His wife and son got killed, he cannot ask help in the police as the mafia has an informer in every police station of San Andreas. His only last hope is to stop the mafia himself.

OLIVIA
"Introduced since: Raid"
Olivia is a secret FBI agent, working on Carlo's case. She's 30 years old and she lives in Los Santos. Instead of taking Carlo to protect him, she wants to help him stop the very same mad man in Las Venturas, the leader of the mafia. She believes if they work together as a team, they might defeat him and his filthy goons.

MARK
"Introduced since: Raid"
Mark is the "capo" of the Mafia in Las Venturas. His job is to take care of Carlo in Los Santos, sending goons after him and also do some quick business in his one warehouse.

KALVIN
"Introduced since: Guardian Angel"
Kalvin is a secret FBI agent, he's a friend Olivia in work. They did some cases together, fought crime together. But the agency got tricked and his current job/case is to put both Olivia and Carlo either to custody or death.

FREDIV
"Introduced since: One Leaf For You"
Frediv is the one that sent the hunt on Carlo. It's seems that Carlo did something really bad that really pissed him off. Frediv is to blame for Carlo's wife's and son's death, as he is in control of the biggest mafia in San Andreas.

MISSIONS


Episode 1: The Chase
  1. Introduction
  2. Being Chased
  3. Set Sail
  4. Final Stand?
Episode 2: A Helping Hand
  1. Raid
  2. How do you like to be chased?
  3. Mansion Struggle
  4. A Lovely Trip
Episode 3: The Fate of the Leaf
  1. Guardian Angel
  2. A Pain in the Ass
  3. One Leaf For You
  4. Outro


LET'S PLAYS


You may do let's plays on the missions and post the links to your videos in this topic, I'll highlight them here! smile.gif
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Posted 27 December 2012 - 11:33 PM

Glad to see you didn't retire LCJ. Good luck on this! (:

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 12:50 AM

It's finally here! I've been waiting for this for a long time. Will give feedback once the 1st mission is released. It sure would make the topic look better with some headers.

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 02:48 AM

Looks interesting leoncj. Good luck with this wink.gif

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 05:01 AM

Did you continue long road and MHP or you handover it to some body. confused.gif

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 09:07 AM

You're back as well. That's nice... Nice...

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 09:50 AM

Wow. Great to see you're back as well LnD.

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 10:54 AM

I knew you were going to come back! Can't wait to play this. smile.gif

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 05:47 PM Edited by leoncj, 28 December 2012 - 05:50 PM.

Thanks for the support, guys! c:

Mission 1: Introduction is released.
(Special thanks to Arejai for his tutorial of adding sounds. (: )
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Did you continue long road and MHP or you handover it to some body.


I'm still thinking of what to do with those...

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 06:30 PM

QUOTE (leoncj @ Friday, Dec 28 2012, 17:47)
Thanks for the support, guys! c:

Mission 1: Introduction is released.
(Special thanks to Arejai for his tutorial of adding sounds. (: )
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QUOTE
Did you continue long road and MHP or you handover it to some body.


I'm still thinking of what to do with those...

LCJ, where did you get the music?

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 06:34 PM

Nice to see you back LnD. I'm about to play the introduction now.

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 06:35 PM

I'll play the introduction later. It's great to see the old designers back smile.gif

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 06:50 PM

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Look who's back! ^^
Welcome back, dude! smile.gif

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 06:55 PM

QUOTE (Dude1 @ Friday, Dec 28 2012, 18:30)
QUOTE (leoncj @ Friday, Dec 28 2012, 17:47)
Thanks for the support, guys! c:

Mission 1: Introduction is released.
(Special thanks to Arejai for his tutorial of adding sounds. (: )
========================

QUOTE
Did you continue long road and MHP or you handover it to some body.


I'm still thinking of what to do with those...

LCJ, where did you get the music?

I got it from googling "free non-copyrighted music".
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Posted 28 December 2012 - 07:04 PM

QUOTE (leoncj @ Friday, Dec 28 2012, 18:55)
QUOTE (Dude1 @ Friday, Dec 28 2012, 18:30)
QUOTE (leoncj @ Friday, Dec 28 2012, 17:47)
Thanks for the support, guys! c:

Mission 1: Introduction is released.
(Special thanks to Arejai for his tutorial of adding sounds. (: )
========================

QUOTE
Did you continue long road and MHP or you handover it to some body.


I'm still thinking of what to do with those...

LCJ, where did you get the music?

I got it from googling "free non-copyrighted music".
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You wont get sued for using music from video games or other stuff, as long as you dont claim yourself as the author tounge.gif

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 07:04 PM

Which mafia is following Carlo? the leonies, the sindacco's or the forelli's, or your own mafia?

Anyway, good luck with this. icon14.gif

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Posted 28 December 2012 - 07:11 PM

Aww look who is back. I played the intro mission and it was TRASH GARBAGE AND sh*tTY MAN!! Kidding tounge.gif

I loved it biggrin.gif ! It is pretty short but the music is awesome in the intro. The moving cutscenes are better than what I know right now biggrin.gif .

Good luck on this MP icon14.gif

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Posted 29 December 2012 - 12:51 AM

After playing this mission, I think you will have one of the most downloaded mission packs come January. icon14.gif

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Posted 29 December 2012 - 10:09 AM

Played the introduction. It has been short, but nice!

Nicely done with the moving cutscenes tounge.gif

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Posted 29 December 2012 - 03:04 PM Edited by leoncj, 29 December 2012 - 03:12 PM.

Awww, thanks guys! ((:
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You wont get sued for using music from video games or other stuff, as long as you dont claim yourself as the author tounge.gif


I know, but I'm using the non-copyrighted music not for me, but for those who, if will, do let's plays on the missions. I don't want them to get copyrights warnings. (:
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Which mafia is following Carlo? the leonies, the sindacco's or the forelli's, or your own mafia?

My own mafia.
I think, I don't wanna lie, but I think I never used any content from the original San Andreas game, I don't know, but I think that way.
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Mission 2 Released, by the way! (:

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Posted 30 December 2012 - 05:06 AM

Good luck with this, LnD. Can't wait to play this, glad to see you back. smile.gif

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Posted 30 December 2012 - 04:46 PM

I played the 2 missions. But sadly, it didn't come to my expectations whatsthat.gif
They were too short in my opinion. The music in the first mission felt too "happy", it's better in the 2nd mission though. I really think you should have combined them, perhaps even the 3rd mission, because the "chased" part didn't seem to end. But the rest is positive, you made good use of the new features, especially the moving cutscenes and the new objects.
If only they were longer, i'd give it 7/10 but for now, it's 6/10. Sorry confused.gif It's just that i expected something way better than this. I hope the next ones are improved.

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Posted 30 December 2012 - 05:03 PM

QUOTE (Zizo008 @ Sunday, Dec 30 2012, 16:46)
I played the 2 missions. But sadly, it didn't come to my expectations whatsthat.gif
They were too short in my opinion. The music in the first mission felt too "happy", it's better in the 2nd mission though. I really think you should have combined them, perhaps even the 3rd mission, because the "chased" part didn't seem to end. But the rest is positive, you made good use of the new features, especially the moving cutscenes and the new objects.
If only they were longer, i'd give it 7/10 but for now, it's 6/10. Sorry confused.gif It's just that i expected something way better than this. I hope the next ones are improved.

Dont judge him, he's been from a retirement that lasted like 2 months. Im happy that he even got around on making a new MP. He's gonna' return to his normal style of desinging soon. I hope bored.gif .

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Posted 30 December 2012 - 05:25 PM Edited by guib, 30 December 2012 - 05:29 PM.

QUOTE (Dude1 @ Sunday, Dec 30 2012, 17:03)
QUOTE (Zizo008 @ Sunday, Dec 30 2012, 16:46)
I played the 2 missions. But sadly, it didn't come to my expectations  whatsthat.gif
They were too short in my opinion. The music in the first mission felt too "happy", it's better in the 2nd mission though. I really think you should have combined them, perhaps even the 3rd mission, because the "chased" part didn't seem to end. But the rest is positive, you made good use of the new features, especially the moving cutscenes and the new objects.
If only they were longer, i'd give it 7/10 but for now, it's 6/10. Sorry  confused.gif It's just that i expected something way better than this. I hope the next ones are improved.

Dont judge him, he's been from a retirement that lasted like 2 months. Im happy that he even got around on making a new MP. He's gonna' return to his normal style of desinging soon. I hope bored.gif .

If everybody gave him positive reviews, he would not become better, so you are wrong, people should always give advice to the maker about how to improve their mission.

Anyway, the second mission was good, only it was a little short.
I was gonna say something about how you were lazy about using the same cars, but then those guys said that you stole one of the cars, and then I realized that it was their gang car.

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Posted 30 December 2012 - 06:18 PM

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it's 6/10. Sorry


That's pretty much what I expected, actually.
I'm the one who needs to say sorry.
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Anyway, the second mission was good, only it was a little short.

Every mission will be short, I think, I don't know yet.
Because that is why I can't finish Matthew Hegan's Path, that's the biggest mistake I made... 200 missions, jeeeez what was I thinking. biggrin.gif
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Plus, this mission-pack is more like a testing test, get everything figured out with V7 and then do the two biggest projects and those are the Ghost Ship: Remake and my part in Cold Year 2.
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P.S. Mission 3 is released. .

Each Episode will have for four missions only, so yeah. confused.gif

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Posted 31 December 2012 - 08:59 AM

Played 1st - 3rd mission and they're pretty amazing. I loved the first action, when we need to kill two of those guys; I'm almost die there. The 'parkour' part was very nice, though. It's a very cool way to escape.

Well, this is my positive feedback. I don't have any more constructive comment, since the others have said it.
Anyway, these missions were pretty good, even though they're short. Tired of the .noa files, uh? lol.gif

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Posted 31 December 2012 - 11:11 AM

Yeyyy,LCJ back in town,Goodluck LCJ biggrin.gif

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Posted 05 January 2013 - 03:39 AM

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That's the worst mission I have ever played in my whole life!!..ha ha ha
How's that for a joke?? I think it is one of the most thrilling and interesting mission packs I have ever played..

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Posted 05 January 2013 - 03:17 PM

Now that New Year vacation ended...

Mission 4 released. Episode 1 Completed.
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Tired of the .noa files, uh?


Yes. I am. biggrin.gif




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Posted 05 January 2013 - 04:20 PM

QUOTE (leoncj @ Saturday, Jan 5 2013, 15:17)
Mission 4 released. Episode 1 Completed.

Played the mission, music choice was good, but the mission was short and had a lack of intro cutscenes...




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