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Nopheros
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#541

Posted 06 July 2013 - 05:33 PM

This isn't my song.
This is my brothers song.

Summary: In 2012 a December morning my brother was in a car accident, and he was almost certain to die. But today he is alive, can walk and is a father. A miracle, he made a song about it.



The English lyrics aren't gonna sound as good as it is, but it's good trust me. I get goosebumps everytime. The original is in Norwegian, I translated it to English.


7th December 2012 I was in a car accident that has changed my life forever. Yo listen.
My thoughts are spinning from everything tha happened
the day that I was cold and afraid.
Icy in the morning,
when I sat in the frontseat
the engine got pressed in
I know that it's insane.
dunked my head in the wheel
I can't understand
bleeding from my face hands legs and teeth.
Pain in my legs, the two of them is crushed
fracture, and lot of fossing blood
can't remember much, but I talked to the guy
that was with me, he told me that I wanted to call
my girlfriend one last time, before i'm in a casket in the ground.
But they got me in, they fixed everything
my legs were in the air, and I was drugged
Happy I'm alive, but hope you do not think that..

Chorus x2:
You will never see me back down
You should know that it's my life and my body, my friend. And I will get back up again.

Pills to breakfast, pills to dinner
f*ck pills, I took them away
look at my weight lost, i'm in a bad mood.
Everything is black, I hope I get back.
soon, I want to walk again
I don't want to be in this chair for the rest of my life,
I want to do things I did before, me in a chair? I think i'd rather die.
There's a scratch in my memory
nightmares about things my brain will forget
things I don't remember I would rather dream
I stood back up again, bad balance it looks like a dance that i'm dancing.
Quit smoking but started again, the cigs were missed but it was my friend.

Chorus x2:
You will never see me back down
You should know that it's my life and my body, my friend. And I will get back up again.

END.


Again, the English lyrics aren't as good as the Norwegian but the song is very good.

What do you think?

Piperka
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#542

Posted 09 July 2013 - 12:05 PM


cbiscuit93
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#543

Posted 22 July 2013 - 02:31 AM

Let chya' boii know what ya' think of 'da new beat..

https://soundcloud.c...692612/stockfin

Ats.
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#544

Posted 26 July 2013 - 11:41 AM

Hey guys. I don't know how many of you are aware of this, but I stumbled upon this new music publishing site called DistroKid. It's basically like Tunecore and all the other sites like that, but it's really cheap. When Tunecore asks $29.99 and each following year $49.99 for an album distribution, then on DistroKid you pay $19.99 a year and get unlimited uploads to iTunes, Spotify etc. Also a very cool thing is that everyone is getting a free upload. You just have to register and upload your track.

If you're interested then, register by clicking this link.


Check out one of my tracks on iTunes

Piperka
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#545

Posted 29 July 2013 - 03:53 AM

^ If someone buys a song, how long does it take to process into your "bank" on DistroKid?


Ats.
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#546

Posted 29 July 2013 - 12:40 PM

QUOTE (Piperka @ Monday, Jul 29 2013, 05:53)
^ If someone buys a song, how long does it take to process into your "bank" on DistroKid?


Don't know for sure, but I think it won't take very long. You'll get your money monthly though.

cbiscuit93
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#547

Posted 30 July 2013 - 01:51 AM

New beat deff not my favorite but take a listen I'd like some feedback.

https://soundcloud.c...65692612/golden

Ats.
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#548

Posted 31 July 2013 - 01:26 PM

Piperka, gotta say this is my favourite track of yours so far. Liking the dark-ish sound and production.

cbiscuit93, nice simplistic beat. Also sounds well mixed. The melody gets a bit repetitive though.

Also, just saying that I'm 1 register away from unlimited uploads on DistroKid. So if anyone's interested then - distrokid.com/u/548742

cbiscuit93
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#549

Posted 31 July 2013 - 09:19 PM

QUOTE (Ats. @ Wednesday, Jul 31 2013, 13:26)
cbiscuit93, nice simplistic beat. Also sounds well mixed. The melody gets a bit repetitive though.

Thanks for the feedback brohdie.

Just uploaded a new beat. I like the sounds but I feel like it has the potential to be a lot better than it currently is.

https://soundcloud.c...165692612/crisp

EvilFuture
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#550

Posted 02 August 2013 - 06:16 PM

https://soundcloud.c...thingy-extended

Here's one I'm working on, I do believe it's the heaviest thing I've ever done thus far. Tell me what you think

RockKiller
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#551

Posted 02 August 2013 - 06:26 PM

QUOTE (gtafreak10 @ Friday, Aug 2 2013, 20:16)
https://soundcloud.c...thingy-extended

Here's one I'm working on, I do believe it's the heaviest thing I've ever done thus far. Tell me what you think

Crazy sh*t, awesome dude!

Rockstar Cake
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#552

Posted 07 August 2013 - 02:19 AM

Rockstar CakeQ. WalkerSinger/Songwriter, Drummer, Bass Guitar, Piano, Percussion SamplingAlternative metal, art rock, progressive metal, progressive rockNone

I find that when I fall into a deep depression, I tend to write good material. Now that I'm there, and I've got some good bud to mellow me out, I'm going to write in the first time in a while. I'll post it here, I suppose. Nothing much else to do with it. No copies, k?

EvilFuture
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#553

Posted 11 August 2013 - 03:40 PM Edited by gtafreak10, 18 August 2013 - 04:25 AM.

https://soundcloud.c...ic-guitar-track

Here's the guitar track for one of my recent songs.

EDIT: I am asking everyone that has a Soundcloud to please follow me, I really need more followers. I will follow you back.

https://soundcloud.com/jeff-seabolt
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DerpBerp
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#554

Posted 30 August 2013 - 07:00 AM

https://soundcloud.c...arrick/thoughts This is just a test me and a bro have been messing with to try and find a new sound (the bassier sound and the other synth) but if anyone wants a peak message me if you think i could do something different with it biggrin.gif

cbiscuit93
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#555

Posted 03 September 2013 - 01:10 AM

Do ya' boii a solid 'N check out 'da new beat -

https://soundcloud.c...65692612/liquid

Fraizer
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#556

Posted 07 September 2013 - 06:24 PM Edited by FRA1Z3R, 08 September 2013 - 02:21 AM.

Over a couple of years I have wrote a couple of songs, all the music I do myself from Drums, Guitar, bass, piano vocals etc. I haven't quite learned how to extract a song with it mastered the way i have it in garageband... garageband sucks when it comes to trying to master... anyway. Here are a few have done.    
 
https://soundcloud.c...hall-we-fall-in
 
https://soundcloud.c...3r/i-walk-alone
 
https://soundcloud.c...ay-away-from-me


Rockstar CakeQ. WalkerSinger/Songwriter, Drummer, Bass Guitar, Piano, Percussion SamplingAlternative metal, art rock, progressive metal, progressive rockNoneI find that when I fall into a deep depression, I tend to write good material. Now that I'm there, and I've got some good bud to mellow me out, I'm going to write in the first time in a while. I'll post it here, I suppose. Nothing much else to do with it. No copies, k?


Sometimes that is when some of the best music is written, it flows, it becomes easier to transfer your emotions onto paper because you are passionate about expressing your feelings in some way. At least this is what I feel the reasons are.

Souths CraZe
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#557

Posted 10 September 2013 - 10:40 PM Edited by Glenn., 10 September 2013 - 10:41 PM.

Just got a freestyle track done today. Pritty good in my opinion. If your into Rap you should check it out and inbox me. 


Piperka
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#558

Posted 13 September 2013 - 12:43 PM Edited by Piperka, 13 September 2013 - 12:44 PM.


Souths CraZe
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#559

Posted 15 September 2013 - 01:48 AM

That was really nice! I love the vibe to it.

 

How do you publicize your music?


Piperka
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#560

Posted 15 September 2013 - 12:24 PM Edited by Piperka, 15 September 2013 - 12:26 PM.

I don't really, just post a link on fb, and here, that's pretty much it haha.

 

I'm 150% sure the "301+" views is just a glitch.


Souths CraZe
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#561

Posted 16 September 2013 - 05:40 PM

Oh I see :) , I've been doing the same and was wondering f I could get a few more views. I've managed to scrape over 80! 

 

Does anybody else have an idea what to do? Or in fact even interested i working together to help get each other get veiws?


Ed 
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#562

Posted 16 September 2013 - 05:43 PM

Views aren't important. Comments and criticism from the listeners are.


Souths CraZe
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#563

Posted 16 September 2013 - 10:54 PM

Yeah thats what I need, honestly, I think the more exposure something gets will result in more feedback.


Ats.
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#564

Posted 25 September 2013 - 02:09 PM

Snippet of a beat I'm working on.

 

https://soundcloud.com/klndvc/wip-beat


Piperka
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#565

Posted 01 October 2013 - 08:41 AM


krystall
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#566

Posted 10 October 2013 - 12:23 PM

https://soundcloud.c...september-remix

This Is my September Remix

What You Guys Think ?

& It's Free To download


Forsas Saltis
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#567

Posted 24 October 2013 - 01:39 PM

Today I released my very 1st rap. However, it's Lithuanian language, not English 'cause I more like that language but who cares? I'm probably the 1st Lithuanian who makes Gangsta Rap music. Check it out!

 

 

Hope you like it!

 

 


Piperka
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#568

Posted 25 October 2013 - 03:59 PM


Souths CraZe
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#569

Posted 25 October 2013 - 05:15 PM Edited by Glenn., 26 October 2013 - 09:21 PM.

 


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#570

Posted 30 October 2013 - 11:05 PM

[tr]Sarge64641[tdSargeMines[/td]DJ/ProducerDubstep/Traphttps://twitter.com/SargeMines[/tr





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