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Posted 04 October 2012 - 11:14 AM Edited by KaRzY6, 22 January 2013 - 11:14 AM.

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Tom Price is an employee at The Well Stacked Pizza in Idlewood. His day is the same everyday, working and sitting at home. But one day at work, something will change that. A Balla member, named Freddy, attempts to rob the store. Tom grabs the store's shotgun and kills him. Freddy's fellow gangsters change the crime scene around and Tom is convicted of murder. Tom is sent to prison...

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Tom PriceTom is the protagonist of the mission-pack. He is 25 years old, and doesn't have a lot of money. He lives in a unit in Willowfield and is an employee of The Well Stacked Pizza in Idlewood. Living in the scum most of his life, Tom has become self dependent and doesn't take sh*t from anyone.
Andy RichmondAndy is the manager of the Idlewood Well Stacked Pizza. He can survive but struggles with money. The Idlewood store is losing business and Andy struggles to keep the store running, pay his employees and have a bit of money left for himself. Andy cut most of his stuff and does most of the shifts himself.
FreddyFreddy is a gangster in the "Ballas", a Los Santos street gang. Not much is known about Freddy, but he has several criminal offences for robbery in the Idlewood area.
Officer TenpennyTenpenny works in a police squad called "C.R.A.S.H", who specialise in gang crime. Tenpenny is called to the Well Stacked Pizza because Freddy was involved in the street gang called the "Ballas".
Officer JacobsJacobs is a rookie in the "C.R.A.S.H" squad and is partnered up with Tenpenny.
Detective LeppardLeppard has been a detective for 25 years and is very well respected throughout the state of San Andreas. Leppard had a little bit of time to take the case of Freddy, but most of the time he does more important cases.
Mr WatersWaters is a lawyer, specialising in murder cases. Waters has been a lawyer for 12 years, but rarely wins the cases of his clients (because most of the time they did do it).


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1. Sudden Change - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21544
2. Sneaking Ballas - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/23329
3. Behind Bars - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/23406

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KaRzY6 - Mission designer
UNRATED69 - GFX designer
Dutchy3010 and PatrickW - DYOM creators


NOTE: First mission is made with v6.1. Second mission and onwards is v7.

This thread is still under construction.

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 02:37 PM Edited by LFarmer, 04 October 2012 - 02:40 PM.

Just played the mission.
Not much to say. Well, here's my rating.

3.5/5

I'm looking forward to this MP.
Keep up the good work and good luck! icon14.gif

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 03:29 PM

Finally you made another mission-pack biggrin.gif
I already play the intro, i liked it.
Here's my rating: I give you cookie.gif cookie.gif cookie.gif cookie.gif /5 hope you like it

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 11:11 PM

Thanks LFarmer and XProyect for playing the mission and giving some good ratings and feedback. I seriously thought there'd be more posts, but doesn't matter. Might start to make the 2nd mission today. (:

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Posted 05 October 2012 - 01:18 AM

Yeahhh, I think I'm gonna get back to playing dyom mission and give feedback. So yeah good luck, man. I'll give this a try soon. smile.gif

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Posted 05 October 2012 - 04:21 AM

For a moment there I thought the robber freddy was going to be ryder seeing how everything played the same! And since when does a gangster pack up a body Armor. My rating 4/5.
Will play the next One so keep em coming

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Posted 18 January 2013 - 05:14 AM

New mission, about time I started designing. This is the first time I have tried designing with v7, I mainly just learnt the cutscenes in this mission. Expect some more action in the upcoming missions, as well as some of the new v7 features. smile.gif

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Posted 19 January 2013 - 01:20 AM

Too bad people do not appreciate the work of others. I hope you don't cancel this biggrin.gif

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 06:17 AM

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I hope you don't cancel this biggrin.gif

I'm not dude. smile.gif

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Too bad people do not appreciate the work of others.

What do you mean?

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 08:32 AM

Oh. I meant that people just look at your topic and they just walk by.

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 08:45 AM

QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Tuesday, Jan 22 2013, 19:32)
Oh. I meant that people just look at your topic and they just walk by.

Yeah, I hope some more people start to play this and comment. Also, I'm working on the next mission now. smile.gif

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 10:54 AM

Like for example me. Feedback is coming soon and if you need GFX,here i'am. icon14.gif

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 11:17 AM

New mission released! Check it out!

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Like for example me. Feedback is coming soon and if you need GFX,here i'am. icon14.gif

Thanks Andrej, I would really appreciate some feedback. I like the logo, but if you wanted to make some headers, that would be great! smile.gif

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 07:37 PM

I saw there is written map in the main post,but you haven't got the map. So i thought if you need map (teritories,icons radar,etc..) i could make you. But if you need new logo and headers,i'm here to help. icon14.gif

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 06:33 AM

QUOTE (AnDReJ98 @ Wednesday, Jan 23 2013, 06:37)
I saw there is written map in the main post,but you haven't got the map. So i thought if you need map (teritories,icons radar,etc..) i could make you. But if you need new logo and headers,i'm here to help. icon14.gif

I would like a map, but not till the mission-pack is finished, so I know all the locations. smile.gif




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