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Posted 18 June 2012 - 08:35 PM Edited by Notna, 28 June 2012 - 11:39 AM.

Mission pack status: FINISHED
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This is my 3rd mission pack. It's finished and it contains of 14 missions. Play and enjoy! And don't forget to give me feedback! biggrin.gif

Story
Antoine Lee was a contract killer working for the San Fierro Triads. However, he decided to step out and move to Fallen Tree and live his life in peace. Anyhow, old ghosts from his past come and hunt him, to make sure he doesn't forget the bad things he did. Now he has to survive from two deadly enemies - a revenge wanting maniac and his own conscience.

Characters

Antoine "Ant" Lee
Nationality: Chinese
Age: 29
First met: Introduction
Antoine is a man, who once were a Triad, working as a contract killer. However, he didn't feel it was the right thing to do, and he stepped out of the picture. He settled to Fallen Tree to live his life happily ever after, anyhow, an old enemy, who wants his revenge, isn't going to give up until Antoine rests 6 feet under the ground. But this time, the maniac picked a deadly enemy...


Arthur Chinlock
Nationality: American
Age: 33
First met: Arthur Chinlock (voice only), Is Ballas playing a role in? (First met)
Killed: How It Works, by Antoine Lee
Arthur's brother Rob was once killed by Antoine 3 years before the story begins. Now Arthur has found Antoine and wants to avenge the death of his older brother. He is leader of big crime syndicate and is one of the most wanted men by federals in the state of San Andreas.

Mike Cheng
Nationality: Chinese
Age: 30
First met: Honor of an Asian
Mike is Antoine's powerful friend from the times when he still was in the Triads. Mike respects the Chinese traditions and he owns a dojo in San Fierro. He is also very skillful in martial arts himself.

Jack Anarchy
Nationality: American
Age: 31
First met: Honor of an Asian
Jack is a mysterious person, who is a high ranked CIA agent. However, he's been suspected of abusing his postion and stealing top secret CIA documents. He is also told to be one of the best trackers in earth. He is cold hearted and kills his enemies with no hesitation.

Kara Ling
Nationality: Chinese
Age: 27
First met: Deadly Talk
Kara is a tomboy, who is a good Taiwanese translator because of the years she lived in Taiwan. She's also a good shooter and wants always to be in action. She also seems to like Ant the romantical way.

Timothy "Green Dog" Smith
Nationality: Jamaican
Age: 35
First met: Is Ballas playing a role in?
Killed: Ballas' Last Stand, by Antoine Lee
Green Dog is the leader of the San Fierro Ballas. He is been in jail for many armed robberies and drug deals. He has an addiction to beer, drugs and burgers. One of the most wanted men by the police and FBI in San Andreas.

Dan Smith
Nationality: Jamaican
Age: 36
First met: All For Love
Killed: All For Love, by Antoine Lee
Dan is Timothy's cousin who owns a strip and dance club in Battery Point, SF. His crime businesses include drug dealing and prostitution. Also believed to have connections with San Fierro Ballas.

Jimmy Wilson
Nationality: American
Age: 24
First met: Enemy of Enemies
Jimmy is Jack's friend and a member of Grove Street Families. He is a stone cold killer and told by many sources to have the biggest gangster body count ever in the state of San Andreas. He hates Ballas and Green Dog over everything.

Craig Lynch
Nationality: American
Age: 30
First met: Captive Plans
Killed: How It Works, by Jack Anarchy
Craig is Chinlock's commando and one of his best men and his good friend. He is loyal to Arthur and doesn't hesitate to do whatever his big bad boss tells him to do. He has committed many murders and robberies under his name.

Bob Myers
Nationality: German
Age: 43
First met: Captive Plans
Killed: Captive Plans, by Jimmy Wilson
Bob is Chinlock's friend and one of his best men. Bob has worked as a contract killer in his younger age, now he works with Craig Lynch for Chinlock. He was suspected from murders of many politicians in Germany.

Missions
Mission 1. - Introduction - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19610
Mission 2. - Arthur Chinlock - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19611
Mission 3. - Honor of an Asian - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19620
Mission 4. - Deadly Talk - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19628
Mission 5. - Is Ballas playing a role in? - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19640
Mission 6. - First date is the worst - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19641
Mission 7. - All For Love - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19644
Mission 8. - Ant the Saver - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19653
Mission 9. - Jack's Trouble - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19659
Mission 10. - Unwanted Visitors - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19665
Mission 11. - Enemy of Enemies - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19672
Mission 12. - Ballas' Last Stand - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19673
Mission 13. - Captive Plans - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19678
Mission 14. - How It Works (Final Mission) - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19679

.Rar-files:
Missions 1-8 - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19657
All Missions - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19680


Progress
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June 18th, 2012; 23:35: Topic made, first two missions added
June 19th, 2012; 13:12: Mission "Honor of an Asian" added, logo added, character list updated
June 19th, 2012; 20:27: Mission "Deadly Talk" added, theme song added, character list updated
June 20th, 2012; 18:47: Missions "Is Ballas playing a role in?" and "First date is the worst" added, character list updated
June 20th, 2012; 21:46: Mission "All For Love" added, character list updated
June 21st, 2012; 20:10: Mission "Ant the Saver" added
June 22nd, 2012; 17:30: Mission "Jack's Trouble" added
June 23rd, 2012; 14:10: Mission "Unwanted Visitors" added
June 23rd, 2012; 19:35: Missions "Enemy of Enemies" and "Ballas' Last Stand" added, character list updated
June 24th, 2012; 11:26: Mission "Captive Plans" added, character list updated
June 24th, 2012; 15:45: Mission "How It Works" added, mission pack completed!

Play and enjoy! Give me feedbacks! biggrin.gif

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Posted 18 June 2012 - 08:53 PM

Good good good mission Notna tounge2.gif
I like the history above the whole planning of the mission smile.gif

Good luck Mission pack Notna icon14.gif icon14.gif biggrin.gif

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Posted 18 June 2012 - 09:15 PM

I'll play it as soon as possible,i can't now because i have problem with making GTA San Andreas Stories. I need to work on that fast. Anyway goodluck!

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Posted 18 June 2012 - 09:26 PM

Very Interesting this story...
played and I'ts good! A man who lives in peace,
but someday a couple of guys attacked him... so good!

Gonna play the next missions for sure!

Also: Have you cancelled Farmers Paradise?

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 01:46 AM

I played both missions. They were good. I only noticed about 2 grammar/spelling mistakes. Keep up the missions!

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 05:59 AM

Thanks everyone for playing and commenting! smile.gif

And caio, no, I haven't cancelled Farmer's Paradise, it's just the fact that I don't have any ideas how it would continue..

More missions today!

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 10:12 AM

Progress updated! 1 new mission and logo added!

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 10:48 AM

You try the first 3 parts that to say..
The understand introduction him so much good
but continuing in the other 2 missions I have understood the motive tounge2.gif

the 3 part seems better exit in comparison to the others
above all for the cutscenes that make to understand well the mission colgate.gif

Now I wait for to play the 4 part smile.gif
I wish you good luck with your mission pack
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Posted 19 June 2012 - 10:58 AM

Thanks Hunter, I hope to finish the 4th mission tonight! smile.gif

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:08 AM

Cool Notna, another mission-pack. I'll have to play these missions. biggrin.gif

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:28 AM

Thanks Karzy, waiting for your feedbacks biggrin.gif

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:29 AM

QUOTE (Notna @ Tuesday, Jun 19 2012, 22:28)
Thanks Karzy, waiting for your feedbacks biggrin.gif

Do you still want me to do the video reviews for Farmer's Paradise, or this one?

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 12:27 PM

Well, Karzy, if I get this done you can do video reviews on this one.

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 12:27 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Tuesday, Jun 19 2012, 23:27)
Well, Karzy, if I get this done you can do video reviews on this one.

Okay, sounds good to me. smile.gif

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 12:34 PM Edited by caio3771, 19 June 2012 - 12:54 PM.

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no, I haven't cancelled Farmer's Paradise, it's just the fact that I don't have any ideas how it would continue..


Thanks for the answer,
No problem about it Notna..

I'll play again when you release whole chapter 1

Good Luck!

EDIT: Okay Notna, 15 Missions is not that bad.

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 12:52 PM

Caio, I'll release a .zip file when the whole mission pack is ready. It isn't going to be a long one, about 15 missions.

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 05:31 PM

Progress updated! 1 mission added ( download here!), character list added and theme song added!

Play, enjoy and give me feedbacks ! biggrin.gif

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Posted 20 June 2012 - 12:39 PM Edited by tinu09, 20 June 2012 - 12:41 PM.

Yeah!Another mission pack by Notna , good luck with this, and I will play this when I will have time!

And a question:
You canceled RLC?Please, don't say NO!

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Posted 20 June 2012 - 12:49 PM

Played the last mission you have done a good job and you deserve yourself a feeeback biggrin.gif
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Posted 20 June 2012 - 12:55 PM

@Tinu no, I didn't cancel it. Thanks anyway.

@Hunter, thanks for the good feedback, feels great to see that someone plays and enjoys my missions like I always suggest when releasing a new mission biggrin.gif

Wait for more missions today, I already finished making mission 5 but I'll release it when I get mission 6 done as well!

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Posted 20 June 2012 - 02:48 PM

Two new missions released and character list updated!

Mission links:
Is Ballas playing a role in?
First date is the worst

Play, enjoy and give me feedbacks people ! biggrin.gif

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Posted 20 June 2012 - 06:48 PM

One more mission added and character list updated.

All For Love

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Posted 21 June 2012 - 05:11 PM

New mission released!

Ant the Saver

Play and enjoy! And I would appreciate some kind of feedback, I've worked like a crazy on the latest missions smile.gif

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Posted 22 June 2012 - 03:09 AM

Hey Notna, can you upload the missions in a zip file (from 1-8)? biggrin.gif

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Posted 22 June 2012 - 04:37 AM

QUOTE (xGhostx @ Friday, Jun 22 2012, 06:09)
Hey Notna, can you upload the missions in a zip file (from 1-8)? biggrin.gif

Done it, it's a rar file but works atleast as good. http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19657

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Posted 22 June 2012 - 04:40 AM

Alright thanks, I'm gonna play and give feedback soon. icon14.gif

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Posted 22 June 2012 - 04:44 AM

Great, can't wait for your feedback.

And I am going to make atleast one mission today. And I have now decided how many mission this will include, the final count is 14.

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Posted 22 June 2012 - 12:26 PM

Alright I played 8 missions, first thing I need to say is you're missing mission 5 in the rar file.
I have to say the missions were really good, the story was great, I saw some writing mistake but it doesn't effect the missions. The cutscene are sometimes fast to me. The length is long in some missions, I mean, we have to drive really far distance, if we ramp into something, the car turn up side down...failed. This is just my opinion, I think you should make a checkpoint in the car, don't use the car as an objective. If the player accidentally bump the car into the water or destroy it,...they can find another car to get to the destination, it suck when you keep restarting the mission because of a damn car. In the mission ''the first date is the worst'', when I was about to call Jack, I sit in the red car...and the result is...WASTED-MISSION FAILED...because you hided the car and add the objective car, it's kind of annoying to me.
But the missions were really good, mission ''Ant the saver'' was the best to me (poor Kara, she was raped...), I think it would be awesome if this were a story-line.
Keep up the good word, waiting for more. icon14.gif
Rating: 8/10

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Posted 22 June 2012 - 12:34 PM

Thanks a lot for the good rating. Mission 5 missing? Oh damn, now I see it.
About the car objective thing you said, I've used that style and maybe I'll get back to it, but my thing is, when I play missions by others I usually kind of own their style if I like it, and use the same style. As known, I am a big fan of Jackal's Hard Boiled, so guess twice whose style I've been using.

Anyway, did you download the 5th mission anyway? Well it's not too important for the story but still.
However, thanks for playing!

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Posted 22 June 2012 - 12:42 PM

Alright, you've uploaded the mission in .zip file. I'll play this and give feedback. smile.gif




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