Life of Antoine Lee
Posted 18 June 2012 - 08:35 PM Edited by Notna, 28 June 2012 - 11:39 AM.
- Theme song -
This is my 3rd mission pack. It's finished and it contains of 14 missions. Play and enjoy! And don't forget to give me feedback!
Antoine Lee was a contract killer working for the San Fierro Triads. However, he decided to step out and move to Fallen Tree and live his life in peace. Anyhow, old ghosts from his past come and hunt him, to make sure he doesn't forget the bad things he did. Now he has to survive from two deadly enemies - a revenge wanting maniac and his own conscience.
Antoine "Ant" Lee
First met: Introduction
Antoine is a man, who once were a Triad, working as a contract killer. However, he didn't feel it was the right thing to do, and he stepped out of the picture. He settled to Fallen Tree to live his life happily ever after, anyhow, an old enemy, who wants his revenge, isn't going to give up until Antoine rests 6 feet under the ground. But this time, the maniac picked a deadly enemy...
First met: Arthur Chinlock (voice only), Is Ballas playing a role in? (First met)
Killed: How It Works, by Antoine Lee
Arthur's brother Rob was once killed by Antoine 3 years before the story begins. Now Arthur has found Antoine and wants to avenge the death of his older brother. He is leader of big crime syndicate and is one of the most wanted men by federals in the state of San Andreas.
First met: Honor of an Asian
Mike is Antoine's powerful friend from the times when he still was in the Triads. Mike respects the Chinese traditions and he owns a dojo in San Fierro. He is also very skillful in martial arts himself.
First met: Honor of an Asian
Jack is a mysterious person, who is a high ranked CIA agent. However, he's been suspected of abusing his postion and stealing top secret CIA documents. He is also told to be one of the best trackers in earth. He is cold hearted and kills his enemies with no hesitation.
First met: Deadly Talk
Kara is a tomboy, who is a good Taiwanese translator because of the years she lived in Taiwan. She's also a good shooter and wants always to be in action. She also seems to like Ant the romantical way.
Timothy "Green Dog" Smith
First met: Is Ballas playing a role in?
Killed: Ballas' Last Stand, by Antoine Lee
Green Dog is the leader of the San Fierro Ballas. He is been in jail for many armed robberies and drug deals. He has an addiction to beer, drugs and burgers. One of the most wanted men by the police and FBI in San Andreas.
First met: All For Love
Killed: All For Love, by Antoine Lee
Dan is Timothy's cousin who owns a strip and dance club in Battery Point, SF. His crime businesses include drug dealing and prostitution. Also believed to have connections with San Fierro Ballas.
First met: Enemy of Enemies
Jimmy is Jack's friend and a member of Grove Street Families. He is a stone cold killer and told by many sources to have the biggest gangster body count ever in the state of San Andreas. He hates Ballas and Green Dog over everything.
First met: Captive Plans
Killed: How It Works, by Jack Anarchy
Craig is Chinlock's commando and one of his best men and his good friend. He is loyal to Arthur and doesn't hesitate to do whatever his big bad boss tells him to do. He has committed many murders and robberies under his name.
First met: Captive Plans
Killed: Captive Plans, by Jimmy Wilson
Bob is Chinlock's friend and one of his best men. Bob has worked as a contract killer in his younger age, now he works with Craig Lynch for Chinlock. He was suspected from murders of many politicians in Germany.
Mission 1. - Introduction - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19610
Mission 2. - Arthur Chinlock - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19611
Mission 3. - Honor of an Asian - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19620
Mission 4. - Deadly Talk - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19628
Mission 5. - Is Ballas playing a role in? - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19640
Mission 6. - First date is the worst - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19641
Mission 7. - All For Love - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19644
Mission 8. - Ant the Saver - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19653
Mission 9. - Jack's Trouble - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19659
Mission 10. - Unwanted Visitors - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19665
Mission 11. - Enemy of Enemies - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19672
Mission 12. - Ballas' Last Stand - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19673
Mission 13. - Captive Plans - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19678
Mission 14. - How It Works (Final Mission) - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19679
Missions 1-8 - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19657
All Missions - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19680
Times in UTC+3
June 18th, 2012; 23:35: Topic made, first two missions added
June 19th, 2012; 13:12: Mission "Honor of an Asian" added, logo added, character list updated
June 19th, 2012; 20:27: Mission "Deadly Talk" added, theme song added, character list updated
June 20th, 2012; 18:47: Missions "Is Ballas playing a role in?" and "First date is the worst" added, character list updated
June 20th, 2012; 21:46: Mission "All For Love" added, character list updated
June 21st, 2012; 20:10: Mission "Ant the Saver" added
June 22nd, 2012; 17:30: Mission "Jack's Trouble" added
June 23rd, 2012; 14:10: Mission "Unwanted Visitors" added
June 23rd, 2012; 19:35: Missions "Enemy of Enemies" and "Ballas' Last Stand" added, character list updated
June 24th, 2012; 11:26: Mission "Captive Plans" added, character list updated
June 24th, 2012; 15:45: Mission "How It Works" added, mission pack completed!
Play and enjoy! Give me feedbacks!
Posted 18 June 2012 - 08:53 PM
I like the history above the whole planning of the mission
Good luck Mission pack Notna
Posted 18 June 2012 - 09:15 PM
Posted 18 June 2012 - 09:26 PM
played and I'ts good! A man who lives in peace,
but someday a couple of guys attacked him... so good!
Gonna play the next missions for sure!
Also: Have you cancelled Farmers Paradise?
Posted 19 June 2012 - 01:46 AM
Posted 19 June 2012 - 05:59 AM
And caio, no, I haven't cancelled Farmer's Paradise, it's just the fact that I don't have any ideas how it would continue..
More missions today!
Posted 19 June 2012 - 10:48 AM
The understand introduction him so much good
but continuing in the other 2 missions I have understood the motive
the 3 part seems better exit in comparison to the others
above all for the cutscenes that make to understand well the mission
Now I wait for to play the 4 part
I wish you good luck with your mission pack
Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:08 AM
Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:29 AM
|QUOTE (Notna @ Tuesday, Jun 19 2012, 22:28)|
|Thanks Karzy, waiting for your feedbacks|
Do you still want me to do the video reviews for Farmer's Paradise, or this one?
Posted 19 June 2012 - 12:27 PM
Posted 19 June 2012 - 12:27 PM
|QUOTE (Notna @ Tuesday, Jun 19 2012, 23:27)|
|Well, Karzy, if I get this done you can do video reviews on this one.|
Okay, sounds good to me.
Posted 19 June 2012 - 12:34 PM Edited by caio3771, 19 June 2012 - 12:54 PM.
|no, I haven't cancelled Farmer's Paradise, it's just the fact that I don't have any ideas how it would continue..|
Thanks for the answer,
No problem about it Notna..
I'll play again when you release whole chapter 1
EDIT: Okay Notna, 15 Missions is not that bad.
Posted 19 June 2012 - 12:52 PM
Posted 20 June 2012 - 12:39 PM Edited by tinu09, 20 June 2012 - 12:41 PM.
And a question:
You canceled RLC?Please, don't say NO!
Posted 20 June 2012 - 12:49 PM
continuous so bushels being all right
Posted 20 June 2012 - 12:55 PM
@Hunter, thanks for the good feedback, feels great to see that someone plays and enjoys my missions like I always suggest when releasing a new mission
Wait for more missions today, I already finished making mission 5 but I'll release it when I get mission 6 done as well!
Posted 22 June 2012 - 03:09 AM
Posted 22 June 2012 - 04:44 AM
And I am going to make atleast one mission today. And I have now decided how many mission this will include, the final count is 14.
Posted 22 June 2012 - 12:26 PM
I have to say the missions were really good, the story was great, I saw some writing mistake but it doesn't effect the missions. The cutscene are sometimes fast to me. The length is long in some missions, I mean, we have to drive really far distance, if we ramp into something, the car turn up side down...failed. This is just my opinion, I think you should make a checkpoint in the car, don't use the car as an objective. If the player accidentally bump the car into the water or destroy it,...they can find another car to get to the destination, it suck when you keep restarting the mission because of a damn car. In the mission ''the first date is the worst'', when I was about to call Jack, I sit in the red car...and the result is...WASTED-MISSION FAILED...because you hided the car and add the objective car, it's kind of annoying to me.
But the missions were really good, mission ''Ant the saver'' was the best to me (poor Kara, she was raped...), I think it would be awesome if this were a story-line.
Keep up the good word, waiting for more.
Posted 22 June 2012 - 12:34 PM
About the car objective thing you said, I've used that style and maybe I'll get back to it, but my thing is, when I play missions by others I usually kind of own their style if I like it, and use the same style. As known, I am a big fan of Jackal's Hard Boiled, so guess twice whose style I've been using.
Anyway, did you download the 5th mission anyway? Well it's not too important for the story but still.
However, thanks for playing!
Posted 22 June 2012 - 12:42 PM
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