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Posted 07 May 2012 - 06:27 PM Edited by leoncj, 15 July 2012 - 06:43 PM.

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Plot


• Long Road is a action, adventures, myth, traveling missions in story-line feature. Missions are in days, the whole plot is about James Miller, seeking for adventures in the San Andreas, hoping to find some myths around the ruins, forest. You'll have to have good knowledge of San Andreas, a good jumping skills (maybe), realistic shootouts (cover in all any means).

• There's an article of Long Road in DYOM Wiki.

• Missions will be in days, chapters/episodes in weeks, acts in months.

Story


1992. San Andreas.
"I never expected to have such life, every day going into different adventures. It all has to end, now.
I always end up empty, after long time of searching, I think I'll start believing that there are no f*cking myths in San Andreas.
But not until today, I've got another mission, it's to find some sort of weapon from 20's, but from it's description, it doesn't sound like it's from 20's, it's more like from the future, some kind of alien sh*t.
I also have a competition, like always, good guys versus bad guys. If I won't find it in time, my old enemy Mr. Z will get to it and then it's the end of the world for us all. It's time to get serious, this is my game, this is... my story." - James Miller.



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"James Miller is a 32 years old man, he loves adventures and to risk his life over some ancient ruins that were left in San Andreas. James can't stop thinking of them, not because of money, but because of trophies, except the fact that his best friend Harrison would sell them, that's why James shares the glory with him. James has an informer, his own brother George, but George doesn't come along into James' adventures. Sarah Allen joins James' adventures only sometimes, James calls her "Mysterious Sexy Ass" as he has fell in love with her since Harrison introduced him to her. Now, things will change when George found out about the ancient weapon of mass destruction... everyone wants it.

Sarah Allen
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Sarah Allen is a 30 years old woman, she loves adventures just like James does and she always risks her life. James' and Sarah's relationship is weird, they both go into adventures, seeking for ancient ruins, but sometimes Sarah goes away with James' found ancient treasure. Harrison says that she "stole the treasure from James", but James says "finders keepers", due to his secret crush on her.

Harrison Pride
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Harrison Pride is a 38 years old man, he loves to help James on his adventures, as they are best friends. Harrison is always loyal to James, even if Sarah "steals" from them, he could of joined her, but he's still with James. Harrison is always the guy with the weapons, while George is the map guy, James is the risky and Sarah is the stealer. Sometimes, James calls Harrison as "Chubby Harry", due to his whining to go driving, than walking or climbing... he's just over weight.

George Miller
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George Miller is 35 years old man, he's more different from the crew. He's a business man, while his brother risks his life into seeking for ancient ruins, but George never says no to James when he asks for help. George is the informer, he finds out where the ancient ruins MIGHT be located, he does the reading, but he never joins James in his risky adventures as George has his own business life in Los Santos.

Mr. Z
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Mr. Z is a mysterious guy, who seeks for ancient ruins more than James and his crew. Mr. Z always interrupts James in his adventures, always steals his treasure, all for money. Mr. Z has his own mafia army, protecting and helping. Now, it's time to change the money into power, when there's an ancient weapon of mass destruction, Mr. Z will surely go and steal it... every bad guy wants to rule the world, it's a fact.

Diary


Diary will start after Week Four of March.

Adventures


*Work Days means that there won't be any missions on them kind of days, work days are job doing, hard working, days.

March
Week Three: Miller's One Way Ticket

Day 1 - A Fall from a Tree
Day 2 - A Little Robbery Won't Hurt
Day 3 - Work Day
Day 4 - Work Day
Day 5 - Work Day
Day 6 - Work Day
Day 7 - Long Road Awaits
Week Four: On The Move
Day 1 - ???
Day 2 - ???

No info, yet.



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Posted 07 May 2012 - 06:43 PM

Trailer has been released.



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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gna7KP5jJmo

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Posted 07 May 2012 - 07:12 PM Edited by Darkseller63, 08 May 2012 - 04:26 PM.

Heeey, LnD! Glad to see that you decided to stay for longer in DYOM! icon14.gif I wish ya' luck in your new storyline! icon14.gif

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Posted 07 May 2012 - 08:48 PM

I was thinking for something like that,but i'm glad to see someone else doing it. So goodluck with this and also MHP!

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Posted 07 May 2012 - 09:22 PM

LeonCJ, I'm a big fan of yours smile.gif
Nice to see you here in DYOM.
And, great trailer, can't wait for more information and missions! xD

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Posted 08 May 2012 - 02:43 AM

Well, I already said everything at The Designers Lounge. Good luck to you.

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Posted 08 May 2012 - 04:05 AM

I'm a fan of yours, too! colgate.gif
Can't wait for your missions!
In your trailer, ''0:50-1:13'', how can you do that stuff?

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Posted 08 May 2012 - 10:33 AM

QUOTE (xGhostx @ Tuesday, May 8 2012, 04:05)
I'm a fan of yours, too! colgate.gif
Can't wait for your missions!
In your trailer, ''0:50-1:13'', how can you do that stuff?

When using Sony Vegas Pro program, hold CTRL and drag the video.
There should be a tutorial on YouTube, if you're using Sony Vegas, of course.

@Everyone else, thank you a lot already. Don't forget this, I ain't leaving my favorite mod, I will always come up with something.

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Posted 08 May 2012 - 12:42 PM

More info added, story added.
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Posted 09 May 2012 - 02:33 AM

Sheez, this is gonna be interesting. I'm so waiting for the missions. Is it storyline or mission-by-mission?

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Posted 09 May 2012 - 08:10 AM

QUOTE (SatournFan @ Wednesday, May 9 2012, 05:33)
Sheez, this is gonna be interesting. I'm so waiting for the missions. Is it storyline or mission-by-mission?

QUOTE (leoncj)
Long Road is a action, adventures, myth, traveling missions in story-line feature.


I think it explains what you asked. Honestly, I also wanted to ask this, but when I read the main post, I understood it.

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Posted 09 May 2012 - 12:08 PM

It's Story-Line. As you can see at title of topic. One day - mission,one week - chapter/episode will be realased like storyline. It'll contains 7 missions.

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Posted 09 May 2012 - 12:19 PM

QUOTE (AnDReJ98 @ Wednesday, May 9 2012, 12:08)
It's Story-Line. As you can see at title of topic. One day - mission,one week - chapter/episode will be realased like storyline. It'll contains 7 missions.

Nope.
Each days will have their own missions.
For example: Day 1 will contain like 6 missions. Day 2 will contain 4 missions. (actually they won't, it's just example).

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Posted 09 May 2012 - 12:24 PM

Ok,but it'll contains very much missions. You'll need more time,the end of school will be soon,so goodluck with this!

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Posted 09 May 2012 - 02:07 PM

New update.
Characters are listed and their info are written.

Soon new updates will come, such as Diary information and Day 1 release. smile.gif

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Posted 09 May 2012 - 03:57 PM

Again, I have to tell you that it's awesome - the idea, the trailer, the characters...
Can't wait for the missions and the "days" tounge.gif
Keep up the great work!

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Posted 18 May 2012 - 05:05 PM

Day 1 of Week Three, March is released.

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Posted 18 May 2012 - 06:13 PM

Played. Well i can say the missions are simple and short. I finished it in 5 minutes.
No offense bro,anyway goodluck with this! I'm waiting for MHP Act II too.

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Posted 18 May 2012 - 07:47 PM

QUOTE (AnDReJ98 @ Friday, May 18 2012, 18:13)
Played. Well i can say the missions are simple and short. I finished it in 5 minutes.
No offense bro,anyway goodluck with this! I'm waiting for MHP Act II too.

All of the missions of Day 1 were just training. It's my style. smile.gif

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Posted 18 May 2012 - 08:06 PM

I knew it! icon14.gif

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Posted 20 May 2012 - 11:06 PM Edited by Platinum Card, 21 May 2012 - 05:22 PM.

DAY 1 was amazing, I'm surprised how good of an introduction it was. I really like the style that you're coming into. I felt like James and Sarah were carefree freerunners, living life on the edge doing what they love. I really like the pacing of it all and the comedy. I like to see a good mix of comedy, romance, and drama in mission. Reminds me of the main game itself and just damn good writing. Can't wait for the rest bro. I wish you the best of luck.

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Posted 21 May 2012 - 11:04 AM

Played Day 1, the missions were short and simple, but good for an introduction. Looking forward to more missions.

Also nice use of humour in the dialogues, especially the intro mission and third.

Good luck with this MP. smile.gif

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Posted 29 May 2012 - 09:58 AM

Played Day 1.
Cool missions for an introduction, I would say. smile.gif Waiting for more. biggrin.gif

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 08:34 PM

March: Week Three - Day 2 RELEASED.

Gotta' warn you, though, the whole week is just a tutorial.
Real thing will start from the next week.

But now, enjoy a little robbery won't hurt day.

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 09:12 PM

Hell yeah!

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 09:18 PM

just what i was waiting for, this sounds amazing. I will play day 2 right now. By the way, how many missions can we expect in the next weeks days ?

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 09:23 PM

QUOTE (cammi @ Monday, Jun 25 2012, 21:18)
just what i was waiting for, this sounds amazing. I will play day 2 right now. By the way, how many missions can we expect in the next weeks days ?

Honestly, I don't know. :

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 09:32 PM

well good luck anyway.

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Posted 26 June 2012 - 06:37 PM

Very nice. Amazing as always. Sometimes the gammar is odd but the characters are foreign so it makes since.

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Posted 28 June 2012 - 08:52 AM

why is there no week 1 or week 2 mercie_blink.gif




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