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Jackal1337
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#1

Posted 13 April 2012 - 06:44 PM Edited by Jackal1337, 08 October 2013 - 06:39 PM.

 


Jimmy_Leppard
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Posted 13 April 2012 - 06:53 PM Edited by Jimmy_Leppard, 13 April 2012 - 07:46 PM.

I absolutely love prison themed mission series aswell as movies and TV shows. Prison Break is by far my favorite TV series of all time and I also made a ''GTA: Prison Break'' mission series based on the same TV show, so.. I'll check this out as soon as I can and get back to you with a feedback wink.gif

EDIT: I played a couple of missions. First of all, I'll say the things I liked:

- Nice use of actor animations and good cutscene views.
- Pretty cool overall prison interior. It really made a better ambience.
- Very good use of interiors aswell.
- Kinda funny and yet good prison jobs such as driving that forklift to get the supplies to the prison kitchen.
- I also liked the fights in prison and defending ally prisoners.
- Nice text coloring.
- I liked how you used ''multi-protagonist'' way to tell the tale of other prisoners.

Now, the stuff I didn't find so good/you should improve: (SPOILERS)

- Killing your wife and her lover in a heartbeat is not something I expected. To be honest, I really didn't expect the guy who makes breakfast for his wife every morning and treats her (obviously) like a princess to change his behavior from a caring husband to ultra-raged killer. And all that because his wife was cheating on him. Also, maybe you could make a story a little bit longer if someone heard the shots and called the police rather than having the protagonist calling the police and making a confession immediately. That is also a quick change of behavior from ultra-rage to some kind of a cooperative convict. Anyway, the story is good once the protagonist gets into prison.

- Also another thing I would like to recommend you, use the ''hide'' function more. For example, in the first mission when we get out of the house to get to work, there is no car in the cutscene, but after the cutscene, the car is there. Also, after teleporting to work and back home, there are two cars at the house at the end of the day.

Overall, I'd give you a pretty good 7.5/10 since this is still chapter one. I'm sure the rating will go up as the story progresses. Good luck in the future wink.gif

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 08:19 PM

Great, the king is back biggrin.gif

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 08:57 PM

Goodluck and welcome back!

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 12:23 AM

Nice to see you back Jackal. I will definitely try this. The story looks nice. icon14.gif

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 12:35 AM

Glad you are back Jackal. Good luck with this. icon14.gif

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 07:18 AM

Ooh my. Jackal's back. Almost wrote that Brock Lesnar's back but anyhow.

I'll play this as soon as I get back home.

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 06:54 PM

Mission 2: routine part 2 crashes for me can you tell me how to fix it?

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#9

Posted 15 April 2012 - 10:50 AM

QUOTE (Skander Blade @ Saturday, Apr 14 2012, 18:54)
Mission 2: routine part 2 crashes for me can you tell me how to fix it?

at what part exactly?

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Posted 15 April 2012 - 12:20 PM

QUOTE (Jackal1337 @ Sunday, Apr 15 2012, 10:50)
at what part exactly?

First, the forklift part and after i restarted it it was ok and then it crashed again after stocker takes brass to solitary

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Posted 17 April 2012 - 01:13 PM

QUOTE (Skander Blade @ Sunday, Apr 15 2012, 12:20)
QUOTE (Jackal1337 @ Sunday, Apr 15 2012, 10:50)
at what part exactly?

First, the forklift part and after i restarted it it was ok and then it crashed again after stocker takes brass to solitary

wow.gif i crashed at solitary part too, i thought i tested it before i released it D:

well mission ends anyway after solitary part

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#12

Posted 01 June 2012 - 11:47 AM

Please a make a ZIP with all missions...

AnDReJ98
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Posted 01 June 2012 - 11:54 AM

Next time don't bump the topic. Use PM instaed this.

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Posted 01 June 2012 - 12:16 PM

Nice Missions colgate.gif icon14.gif

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Posted 05 June 2012 - 10:43 PM

I'm just seeing this for the first time. Downloading the missions now.




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