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[TSoAS] The Story of A Soldier

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#31

Posted 26 March 2012 - 01:51 PM

Well then, I can't really understand what you're saying but...
I guess that you said that, you lost your GTA SA, and you can't install it back.
Just play it when you have your GTA SA back alright? wink.gif

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#32

Posted 21 April 2012 - 05:19 AM

Finally an update. Mission 2.2 is finally uploaded!

Link - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18601

Please play, rate and post feedback. biggrin.gif

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#33

Posted 21 April 2012 - 09:27 AM

Sorry -S-hark, I haven't been able to play the 2nd mission. Sorry.
I will play the whole Act 1 and give a detailed feedback about it.
Looks great though.
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#34

Posted 21 April 2012 - 09:30 AM

Thanks MJ. I'll wait for your feedback. wink.gif

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 11:35 AM

Cool, I was waiting for this moment. Gonna play this and give feedbacks.

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 12:34 PM

Thanks shiva. I'll wait for your feedback bud'. wink.gif

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#37

Posted 22 April 2012 - 03:49 AM

Since I have played the first mission before, I will only give feedback to the 5 other missions.

The Training:
• Nice and quite hard mission. Rockets flying everywhere and "time limited" objectives.
• Even though the aspect of it as a training is nice, it kinda resemblance (for me) a mission Codename:ZULU which is kinda off to me, but still I like it as a mission.

Underground Training:
• Another hard mission, but this time you have a fellow friendlies which is a plus factor for me.
• Nice actor movements, it's really like they are talking.
• It's a nice training, since it will test your skill on firing and surviving.

Stealth Training:
• I really like this mission, it's the one I liked most from all of them.
• It's really nice that you made a rule which if broken, you'll get the consequences. You want us to kill all the soldiers via stealth kills, if we try anything funny, we're in a big trouble. Nice work!
• It's awesome but you should have made it longer, like make it atleast reach the bunker or something, but nonetheless, still awesome.

Training at the Desert:
• Not much to say since it's like the others, it's just testing your skills.

The Last Training:
• It's a nice mission, cause you only have a limited cover (for the boxes can be destroyed). Nice one there.
• You should have atleast lessen the armor (could've atleast make it just 2 instead of 3).
• Again, nice training mission.


Overall:
• It's all good for a training mission. But you could've add something new, cause after testing your skill at driving, parachuting, you will end up shooting again, which is kinda boring, but challenging. Add variety next time though.

Spelling/Grammar:
• There is some typo error and in grammar too. Such as "eleminate" instead of "eliminate". "You" instead of using "You're". But don't worry, it's understandable.

RATING:
3.9/5


- You did a good job here. A very challenging and great training missions. I actually died many times (6 that is). This mission just proved to be hard as shell and nice as star (I dunno where I got that). Keep it up -S-hark! Simply Great!

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#38

Posted 22 April 2012 - 03:59 AM

Thanks for the feedback MJ. I'll try to improve on the next cause I made all the training as fast as I can. tounge.gif
Anyway, I got news for everyone.

From now on, I'll try to make the missions around 60+ objective. So, it will be a little late for update.

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#39

Posted 22 April 2012 - 04:01 AM

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Sunday, Apr 22 2012, 03:59)
Thanks for the feedback MJ. I'll try to improve on the next cause I made all the training as fast as I can. tounge.gif
Anyway, I got news for everyone.

From now on, I'll try to make the missions around 60+ objective. So, it will be a little late for update.

Ok, I will look forward to that. biggrin.gif icon14.gif

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Posted 22 April 2012 - 12:54 PM

Yo i played mission 2.1 and 2.2,
i like that situation for a 'gunfire'
and i like all military-themed-mission......
i rated ****/***** = icon14.gif

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#41

Posted 22 April 2012 - 01:00 PM

Thanks for the feedback Yezz. biggrin.gif
I'll try on the next mission to make you give me full rating. tounge.gif

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#42

Posted 16 June 2012 - 02:23 PM Edited by -S-hark21, 22 June 2012 - 12:59 PM.

After a looooong time, I've finally bump this topic. Here's updates for my topic! biggrin.gif

Update :

- Added some new gangs/team in the characters section
- Mission 2.3 is uploaded. Check the main post.
- Added videos review by SatournFan. Thanks!

Please, enjoy my new mission. And do give me feedback and rate.

"Negative are much better than positive feedback." - shiva s smile.gif

Edit :

Here's much more easier version of the 2.3 mission.

Link - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19658

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#43

Posted 16 June 2012 - 02:29 PM

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Saturday, Jun 16 2012, 14:23)
After a looooong time, I've finally bump this topic. Here's updates for my topic! biggrin.gif

Update :

- Added some new gangs/team in the characters section
- Mission 2.3 is uploaded. Check the main post.
- Added videos review by SatournFan. Thanks!

Please, enjoy my new mission. And do give me feedback and rate.

"Negative are much better than positive feedback." - shiva s smile.gif

I'd been waiting to see this post for a long time. Going to play the mission. Thanks for choosing my quote. I really feel kinda proud and excited 'bout it. smile.gif

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Posted 16 June 2012 - 02:45 PM

QUOTE (shiva s @ Saturday, Jun 16 2012, 22:29)
QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Saturday, Jun 16 2012, 14:23)
After a looooong time, I've finally bump this topic. Here's updates for my topic! biggrin.gif

Update :

- Added some new gangs/team in the characters section
- Mission 2.3 is uploaded. Check the main post.
- Added videos review by SatournFan. Thanks!

Please, enjoy my new mission. And do give me feedback and rate.

"Negative are much better than positive feedback." - shiva s smile.gif

I'd been waiting to see this post for a long time. Going to play the mission. Thanks for choosing my quote. I really feel kinda proud and excited 'bout it. smile.gif

No problem buddy. Besides, that quote awesome. Anyway, thanks. I'll be waiting for your feedback. smile.gif

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#45

Posted 28 June 2012 - 12:16 PM

Another update! biggrin.gif

Updates :

- Mission 2.3 (Easy Version) has been uploaded. Decided to do it since the other one is very hard.
- Trailer added.
- Mission 2.4 - Saving James added.

All updates is at the main post. Please check it.

Do rate and give feedback.

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#46

Posted 02 July 2012 - 02:00 PM

Updates again! Please guys, give me some feedback. smile.gif

- Mission 2.5 added. Link at the main post.
- Review by lee_atsugai added. Thanks buddy! icon14.gif

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#47

Posted 02 July 2012 - 04:03 PM

I wanna continue with chapter 2 but I don't have my PC atm. I'll play it at this weekend and give feedbacks for sure. ;D

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Posted 02 July 2012 - 11:09 PM

Okay shiva, I'll wait for your feedback. smile.gif

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Posted 04 July 2012 - 01:27 PM

Mission 2.6 added. Which is the twelve mission of TSoAS.

Link - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19783

Please, do give feedback and rate. It is so appreciate. smile.gif

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#50

Posted 15 July 2012 - 11:23 AM

Played the first three missions of act 2. I loved the shootout in the Ghost Town. You did a great job by placing the objects at the right place. The other two missions are pretty good. Sorry, I can't play the rest of the missions as I have no time. Also, I apologise for the feedback for being too short but I really don't know how to submit a feedback with much details. Anyway, keep up the good work wink.gif .

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#51

Posted 15 July 2012 - 12:05 PM

QUOTE (shiva s @ Sunday, Jul 15 2012, 19:23)
Played the first three missions of act 2. I loved the shootout in the Ghost Town. You did a great job by placing the objects at the right place. The other two missions are pretty good. Sorry, I can't play the rest of the missions as I have no time. Also, I apologise for the feedback for being too short but I really don't know how to submit a feedback with much details. Anyway, keep up the good work wink.gif .

Don't mind if it's short man . Anyway, thanks for your feedback. This MP is surely is lonely. Only you have post feedback around this time. confused.gif




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