Edited by Vercetti21, 12 April 2012 - 08:08 PM.
Posted 03 March 2012 - 05:05 PM
If you want any more opinion on it I'd be happy to dole mine out, but I've found that simple appreciation maintains the special feeling behind a poem.
Posted 07 April 2012 - 10:04 PM
I really enjoyed this on first reading. I'm still going over it as we speak, and probably will do a couple times, trying to piece together its meaning. What I wanted to comment on initially was your use of diction; the relations between the word choices and the way they all unfold around a central theme was really striking to me. I quite like the progression it has.
Posted 08 April 2012 - 12:27 PM
I like it, and the way it flows, It provokes some thoughts in me of jobs being a chore, like a daily grind (i dont know if that's just on my mind anyway or whether it's my interpretation.) I often find the beauty of poetry is that it can be inturpreted in many ways. I remember I uploaded some here once and people took different things from it.
Nice work there, don't be shy to post more
Posted 11 April 2012 - 03:01 PM
Glad to see the writing community picking up. I need to swing by here more often.
Posted 11 April 2012 - 03:23 PM
I love this peace, it's fantastic.
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