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sayooj
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#1

Posted 25 February 2012 - 02:01 AM Edited by sayooj, 25 February 2012 - 02:22 AM.

THIS IS RL's PLACE

user posted image
trailor:RL trailor

This will take the review of RL missions
CHARACTERS
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  • tomuser posted image

  • johnuser posted image

  • garryuser posted image


Rick's
Life

rick is a salesman from liberty city who came to palaminos creek to see his friends cool.gif : tom,john, garry. years before, rick's house was in palomino creek, then he becomes friends with tom,john,garry. they played happily by smashing others butt. then after, everyone got jobs. then they planned to meet together. as they said they've meeted together in a vacation.you must play chapter 1 to know more. read this:you must read the following only after playing chapter 1
chapter 1 download:RL chapter 1
REVIEW OF CHAPTER 2

In chapter 2, you will get gta4 mods to download. there are some videos:



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#2

Posted 25 February 2012 - 02:24 AM Edited by -S-hark21, 25 February 2012 - 02:33 AM.

Hm, I know you for the DYOM website. Welcome to the DYOM forums.
Anyway, good luck with this, will give feedback to make you improve.
It's good to see a newcomers.

Edit :

Oh, and improve your english.

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#3

Posted 25 February 2012 - 02:31 AM

Man, Story looks f*cked up.

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Posted 25 February 2012 - 02:49 AM Edited by ThaBoY, 25 February 2012 - 03:06 AM.

Hmm, I don't really get the story.
So he visites his friends and then....
What happens?

If you want that people 'll play your missions, you should give more info.
And improve your english a bit (you could use google translator too).
And make the image smaller.

Anyway,
Welcome to the forum and good luck with this storyline smile.gif

Edit:

Btw, you know this is a review, right?

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#5

Posted 25 February 2012 - 03:10 AM

QUOTE (ThaBoY @ Saturday, Feb 25 2012, 13:49)
Hmm, I don't really get the story.
So he visites his friends and then....
What happens?

If you want that people 'll play your missions, you should give more info.
And improve your english a bit (you could use google translator too).

Anyway,
Welcome to the forum and good luck with this storyline smile.gif

Edit:

Btw, you know this is a review, right?

No, don't use Google translater. It does work.

Example:

If you translate "How many years old are you?" to French, it becomes wrong. Because if you translate the french sentence into English, they say something completely different (I learn French at school, but I forgot what it was). So it actually gets things mixed up. My advice is take an English class.

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Posted 25 February 2012 - 03:42 AM Edited by ThaBoY, 25 February 2012 - 03:56 AM.

So if you translate "How old are you?" to french, it doesn't say "Quel âge a-tu?" or "Tu as quel âge?" ?
Going to test that in a minute...

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#7

Posted 25 February 2012 - 03:52 AM

QUOTE (ThaBoY @ Saturday, Feb 25 2012, 14:42)
So if you translate "How old are you?" to french, it doesn't say "Quel âge a - tu?" or "Tu as quel âge?" ?
Going to test that in a minute...

Wait, I don't think your getting what I'm saying. Because the words are in different order to English. So your not actually getting the proper grammar. Do you get it? I'm not the best at explaining.

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#8

Posted 25 February 2012 - 04:58 AM

Good luck buddy!

@the others
this is a mission pack, not a grammar debate....... lol.gif
You should help him, if you know what he means......

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#9

Posted 25 February 2012 - 05:55 AM

It will be better for us to see this variant than that you got:

QUOTE (sayooj corrected by me)
Rick is a salesman from Liberty City who came to Palomino Creek to see his friends: Tom, John and Garry. Years before, Rick's house was in Palomino Creek, then he became friends with Tom, John and Garry. They played happily by smashing others butt. Then after, everyone got jobs. Then, they planned to meet together. As they said, they'll meet each other while on vacation.


How you like it? Other than that, good job.

sayooj
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#10

Posted 25 February 2012 - 01:08 PM

QUOTE (ThaBoY @ Saturday, Feb 25 2012, 02:49)
Hmm, I don't really get the story.
So he visites his friends and then....
What happens?

If you want that people 'll play your missions, you should give more info.
And improve your english a bit (you could use google translator too).
And make the image smaller.

Anyway,
Welcome to the forum and good luck with this storyline smile.gif

Edit:

Btw, you know this is a review, right?

they guy, i said to play the missions to know more about it

sayooj
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#11

Posted 25 February 2012 - 01:12 PM

sorry guys, i'm stopping to make this f*cking missions pack. i'm looking for a new one catspider.gif lol.gif

Boris The Vodka
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#12

Posted 25 February 2012 - 02:41 PM

Uhm... what? It's just because we're so rude to you, or because you're so stupid to create the topic and say that you cancel it the same day later? Seriously, if it's not anything I posted, then why you posted this topic?

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Posted 25 February 2012 - 03:35 PM

Yeah, and your reply is going to help him a lot... sarcasm.gif


OP: Why do you quit?
Did we do something wrong or don't you have any motivation anymore?
You could at least try to continue this.

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#14

Posted 08 April 2012 - 09:45 AM

QUOTE (ThaBoY @ Saturday, Feb 25 2012, 15:35)
Yeah, and your reply is going to help him a lot... sarcasm.gif


OP: Why do you quit?
Did we do something wrong or don't you have any motivation anymore?
You could at least try to continue this.

no, not that, i feel boring by making this f*uc*ing missionpack, i'm making a new one and it'll be COOL!

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#15

Posted 08 April 2012 - 09:50 AM

AND, don't worry that i stopped the pack because you guys are rude, i like you guys, you guys are COOL!
smile.gif cool.gif

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#16

Posted 08 April 2012 - 09:56 AM

I don't see the above posts as cool! lol.gif
Anyways good luck! Feel free to ask me for help!




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