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Posted 17 February 2012 - 11:44 AM Edited by Jimmy_Leppard, 23 July 2012 - 12:46 PM.

Mission series status: Finished

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Play the mission and give me feedback about it biggrin.gif

Hi, guys. This mission series is called ''Kidnapped''. It's finished and it consists of 12 missions. All my missions are connected to each other, so I suggest you play them by order which you are able to follow in this topic.

Theme song:

Summary:

Alex Pierce is an early-retired FBI agent currently living in Bayside. Since he'd retired, he's been living a quiet, boring life all to the one morning when his cellphone rang. It was a call from his sister's husband Rick who've had some terrible news. He called him to say that Alex's younger sister Jane has been kidnapped yesterday night by a group of guys driving a black van. Since the police doesn't know where to start looking for his sister, Alex decided to return to Los Santos, meet with Rick and find his kidnapped sister on his own. Will Alex's FBI expertees be enough to find his sister or not?

Characters:

Character NameCharacter Description
Alex Pierce
The protagonist/playable character. He is an early-retired FBI agent who lives in Bayside. After he finds out his sister Jane has been kidnapped, he decides to travel to Los Santos and find her.
Rick Robinson
He's Jane's husband. He's older than Jane. He's the one who called Alex and told him what happened to his sister.
Jane Robinson
She is Rick's wife and Alex's younger sister. She's a photographer, very good looking woman and a tender person.
Daniel Becker
He's Alex's old friend from the days when Alex worked for the FBI. Unlike Alex, Daniel is still working for the FBI as the computer expert and a data analyst.
Jethro Cruz
He's the owner of the big mansion in Verdant Bluffs and he's the host of the party that the black van owner was invited to.
Lewis Horton
Alex's old friend from the days when he was in the FBI. Lewis is a human wheel. He can drive practically anything. He lives in Las Venturas.
Frankie Sabers
Alex's old friend from the days when he was in the FBI. He's a great Sniper.
John McHale
Alex's old friend from the days when he was in the FBI. He's a cool guy, often very into action and demolishion. He has a brother, Clyde. He is an electronics expert.
Clyde McHale
Alex's old friend from the days when he was in the FBI. Also a cool guy and often very into action and demolishion. He has a brother, John.
Simon Carson
Description not available. Play the mission series to find out about this character.

Mission list:

Chapter 1: Family matters

ZIP file with all the missions of the mission series - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=20117

1.) Shocking night out - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=17422
2.) The Scars - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=17430
3.) Shadow of trouble - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18487
4.) Unit reunion - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19796
5.) Law and disorder - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19801
6.) Leaks and plugs - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19805
7.) Mystical divergence - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19808
8.) Voice of the unknown - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19809

Chapter 2: Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide

1.) Nick of time - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19860
2.) Showdown in the desert - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=19879
3.) Old memories upon the threat PART 1 - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=20115
4.) Old memories upon the threat PART 2 - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=20116

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 11:48 AM

Great story Jimmy! I can't wait for this. After BTH and The Runaway, I'm looking forward to this. I will play the intro ASAP, and post feedback. Good luck, Jimmy. biggrin.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 11:49 AM

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 11:48)
Great story Jimmy! I can't wait for this. After BTH and The Runaway, I'm looking forward to this. I will play the intro ASAP, and post feedback. Good luck, Jimmy. biggrin.gif

Wow. Thanks for the fast reply, man. biggrin.gif Great. I hope you'll like it.

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 11:49 AM Edited by AnDReJ98, 17 February 2012 - 12:02 PM.

Good luck with this! Gonna download it now,then feedback! Okey?
Now i'm going outside with the friends.When i come back,i'll play the mission and send you feedback! wink.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 11:50 AM

QUOTE (AnDReJ98 @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 11:49)
Good luck with this!

Thanks a lot, AnDReJ !! biggrin.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 11:53 AM

Awww. All I can say right now.

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 11:54 AM

QUOTE (Notna @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 11:53)
Awww. All I can say right now.

Haha. I'll take that as a good ''Aww''. When you have time, check the intro mission out and give feedback about what you think of it biggrin.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 11:55 AM

For sure, Jimmy. I would never miss a mission made by you. I am not at my computer now but will play it later. Good luck icon14.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:01 PM

Nice! Another great mission pack by Jimmy_Leppard. Will play the intro! icon14.gif
And, good luck with this!
You will surely got tons of feedback from me, and other too.

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:05 PM

@ Notna - Cool biggrin.gif Can't wait biggrin.gif

@ -S-hark21 - Thanks a lot, man. I appreciate it. I hope it will be a success too. Can't wait to hear your feedback aswell biggrin.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:07 PM

Wow, great story. I'll give it a try later.
Well.. right now my DYOM is having a problem.

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:12 PM

Good luck with this, Jimmy. 'll, I have one condition to be met if you want me to play this. I.E, it should have a lot of twists just like BTH and The Runaway. Don't worry, I'll play this even if the above condition was not met because I won't keep up my words first of all. Just kidding, good luck, dude.

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:15 PM

@ Arejai - Thanks, man. Oh.. Well, I hope you'll fix it soon smile.gif

@ Shiva S - Thanks a lot, dude biggrin.gif Don't worry, it will involve as much twists as the previous mission series biggrin.gif Can't wait for your feedback smile.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:21 PM

I've played the intro and here's my feedback

1. I love how you making Jane kidnapped by the Scars. F*cking love it.

2. I'm also love how you make Daniel using the computer to find the address. I was thought that when Alex say he wants the license plate then, Daniel will tell the license plate. (You understand what I mean right?) tounge.gif

3. I played around 5 - 6 minutes. So, it's a great intro for making it that long. (Without no gunfight)

I want to ask you a couple of questions.

1. Will you make this mission pack more gameplay than the Runaway

2. Is the Scars are all Mexican?

There are no red on my feedback because it was too good.Congratz! Now, that's all my feedback on the intro.
Rating :
9.1/10

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:31 PM

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 12:21)
I've played the intro and here's my feedback

1. I love how you making Jane kidnapped by the Scars. F*cking love it.

2. I'm also love how you make Daniel using the computer to find the address. I was thought that when Alex say he wants the license plate then, Daniel will tell the license plate. (You understand what I mean right?) tounge.gif

3. I played around 5 - 6 minutes. So, it's a great intro for making it that long. (Without no gunfight)

I want to ask you a couple of questions.

1. Will you make this mission pack more gameplay than the Runaway

2. Is the Scars are all Mexican?

There are no red on my feedback because it was too good.Congratz! Now, that's all my feedback on the intro.
Rating :
9.1/10

Wow, thanks for a detailed feedback in such a short period of time and for a such a high rating for the intro. I really appreciate it biggrin.gif

Let's start explaining and answering your questions:
Yes, I understand what you meant, but I didn't want to write the plate number cause it's not really necessary.

Yeah. I did put a brawl fight instead of a gun fight cause Alex went to the address without intention just to kill everybody there. He needed answers first so.. He couldn't get any info from those guys if he just shot them biggrin.gif

Well, we'll see. I don't have the detailed script/summary of the mission series, so I can't actually answer your first question. In most cases I make up the story on my way through so.. We'll see biggrin.gif Actually, the only mission pack where I had a detailed 100% made up script was for my first mission pack ''GTA CJ Stories''. All my other mission packs had just a starting summary.

Umm, it's too early to give that one up. All I can say is that the Scars have Mexican members in the gang. biggrin.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:12 PM

Wow, i played some of your other missionpacks, they were really awesome, gonna give it a try. smile.gif
Also, how you make that Character list like that?

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:21 PM

QUOTE (Venus FlyTrap @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 13:12)
Wow, i played some of your other missionpacks, they were really awesome, gonna give it a try. smile.gif
Also, how you make that Character list like that?

Hey, thanks a lot, man biggrin.gif Great. Looking forward to your feedback then.

Well, it's a [tableb] code.

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:34 PM

Good luck man! gonna' try this for sure!

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:38 PM

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 13:34)
Good luck man! gonna' try this for sure!

Thanks smile.gif Don't forget to give feedback smile.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:41 PM

Awesome you made a new mission pack, good luck with this icon14.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:43 PM

QUOTE (Skander Blade @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 13:41)
Awesome you made a new mission pack, good luck with this icon14.gif

Thanks, man smile.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:57 PM

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 13:38)
QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 13:34)
Good luck man! gonna' try this for sure!

Thanks smile.gif Don't forget to give feedback smile.gif

Of course I won't!

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 02:05 PM

Yes another mission pack of Jimmy Leppard, this will be amazing!!

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 02:10 PM

QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 14:05)
Yes another mission pack of Jimmy Leppard, this will be amazing!!

Thanks X-man wink.gif I hope it will be a success too biggrin.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 02:22 PM

Played the mission, Jimmy. Everything was perfect. I thought that, Rick's gonna be the protagonist but I was suprised when Alex took the role of the protagonist. The cutscene inside the house where Alex gives his camera to get some evidences is my favourite becuz it reminds me one of the scene from my very favoruite movie.
I can't wait and 'm so eager to know, what's gonna happen next?. Ofcourse, this MP will turn into a huge success. No doubt.

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 02:26 PM

QUOTE (shiva s @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 14:22)
Played the mission, Jimmy. Everything was perfect. I thought that, Rick's gonna be the protagonist but I was suprised when Alex took the role of the protagonist. The cutscene inside the house where Alex gives his camera to get some evidences is my favourite becuz it reminds me one of the scene from my very favoruite movie.
I can't wait and 'm so eager to know, what's gonna happen next?. Ofcourse, this MP will turn into a huge success. No doubt.

Thanks, man. I'm glad you liked the intro biggrin.gif

Well, yeah. That's what I was aiming at. In every mission series I made so far, there was always a protagonist in the first ''story'' cutscene. Never an antagonist or some minor character, so I decided to try something new and I guess it worked quite well biggrin.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 02:31 PM

C'mon, man, this is unfair! I wanted to get the first comment!

Okay, kidding. Gonna play the first mission soon.

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 02:57 PM

QUOTE (SatournFan @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 14:31)
C'mon, man, this is unfair! I wanted to get the first comment!

Okay, kidding. Gonna play the first mission soon.

Haha. Oh, well biggrin.gif Great. I'm looking forward to seeing your feedback, man wink.gif

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 03:01 PM

It's still a mission that has been released and this thread already has 2 pages ? mercie_blink.gif
I have to play it right now. But well, I don't have much time in this week. So maybe tomorrow

But looking from the story, I hope it will turn to be a great missions pack

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Posted 17 February 2012 - 03:03 PM

QUOTE (alifjenius @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 15:01)
It's still a mission that has been released and this thread already has 2 pages ? mercie_blink.gif
I have to play it right now. But well, I don't have much time in this week. So maybe tomorrow

But looking from the story, I hope it will turn to be a great missions pack

Hey, man. Thanks a lot. No problem. Play it when you find some free time. Good luck with your exams biggrin.gif




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