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#31

Posted 23 March 2012 - 10:59 AM

Hey sorry man. I'm going to reduce the number of Ballas members and reupload it soon.

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Posted 08 April 2012 - 01:39 AM

NOTICE


Another version of 4th mission has been uploaded.

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Posted 09 April 2012 - 12:43 PM

Played the latest mission NS. I love how you make the ambush part (i have download the fixed mission). It's confusing when at first, Denise and Ryder don't have any gun. But after they arrive at the last house (forgot his name), they have SMG. So, work more on that.

Still, it's a good mission. Keep up! biggrin.gif

Rating: 4.3/5

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#34

Posted 09 April 2012 - 12:54 PM

QUOTE (lee_atsugai @ Monday, Apr 9 2012, 12:43)
Played the latest mission NS. I love how you make the ambush part (i have download the fixed mission). It's confusing when at first, Denise and Ryder don't have any gun. But after they arrive at the last house (forgot his name), they have SMG. So, work more on that.

Still, it's a good mission. Keep up! biggrin.gif

Rating: 4.3/5

Thanks for the feedbacks, lee!

I made Ryder and Denise armed. So you will have a better chance of winning in the ambush. wink.gif

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#35

Posted 07 May 2012 - 01:16 PM

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Review section has been updated. Big thanks to Nitesh for the reviews!

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Posted 25 December 2017 - 05:43 AM

 

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This is a surprise for everyone in DYOM!

CONTENTS - Story
- Theme Song
- Trailer
- Characters
- Gang/ Organization
- Missions
- Achievements
- Screenshots
- Reviews
- Video Review With Commentary
- Credits

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Welcome To San Andreas. Welcome to the 1990.

Denise Robinson is a high-ranking member and the co-leader of the Grove Street Families, one of the five prominents gang in Los Santos, a city tearing itself apart with never-ending gang trouble, drugs and corruptions.

A couple of months before the First Great Gang War, gang's activites become worser and more dangerous. There are no days in Los Santos without gang wars and deaths. On March 13, a shootout between the Grove Streets and Ballas broke out under the highways. Greens blasting reds.


Denise, Sweet, Ryder and Smoke were involved in the shootout. Denise was unknowingly lost her unconciusness in the middle of the fights. She has to act fast to defeat the remaining Ballas and soon she was forced on a journey that takes her across the entire state of San Andreas to take control of the streets.

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You guys may think this song was not fit with the mission's theme. But still, I choose this song as the theme song.



A pretty badass song I ever heard!

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#1 Trailer - Thaboy


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The list will be updated as the missions continues and more characters revealed
Protagonist
Name Description Affiliation Status Mission Appearances Denise Robinson The protagonist of the series. She has close ties and was a high-ranking member of Grove Street Families. She helps Sweet to heads up the gang. Friendly, most trusted and a homegirl. Grove Street Families Playable, Alive As the protagonist, she appears in every mission. HAS YOUR MIND EXPLODED YET? Major Characters
Name Description Affiliation Status Mission Appearances Sean "Sweet" Johnson Sweet, a powerful and uncontrollable figure, heads up the Grove Street Families--a gang with a never-ending list of problems. Extremely loyal towards his gang, and the hood. Grove Street Families Friend, Alive 1. Start Of The Line
2. Homegirl In, Homegirl Out
3. Armed And Dangerous
4. The Distribution (mentioned)
Melvin "Smoke" Harris Long-time family friend and member of the Grove Street Families. Big Smoke is extrmely overweight and obsessed with money. Disloyal - independant - always in it for himself. Grove Street Families Friend, Alive 1. Start Of The Line
2. Homegirl In, Homegirl Out
Lance "Ryder" Wilson Ryder, a 'loose cannon', is very passionate about the Grove Street Families and a troublemaker. Short, scrawny, but violent. Disloyal and greedy. Grove Street Families Friend, Alive 1. Start Of The Line
2. Homegirl In, Homegirl Out
3. Armed And Dangerous
4. The Distribution
Minor Characters
Name Description Affiliation Status Mission Appearances LB Ryder's long time friend. Currently he didn't play a big role. Grove Street Families Friend, Alive 1. The Distribution B-Dup He is not physically appears but his voice is heard. Grove Street Families Friend, Alive 1. The Distribution (voice only) Emmet A wise old man and well-known gang supplier, Emmet runs a small-time gun dealership in Willowfield, Los Santos. Grove Street Families Friend, Alive 1. Armed And Dangerous Enemies
Name Description Affiliation Status Mission Appearances Unknown Man Who's he? What's his name? No one knows. Will his identity be revealed in the next missions? A relationship with a woman Potential Enemy, Alive 1. Start Of The Line Unknown Woman She is, more mysterious. No physical appearance, just voice! A relationship with a man Potential Enemy, Alive 1. Start Of The Line (voice only) Frank Tenpenny A corrupt cop. Seen as being a respectable officer, when he is infact a maniacal bully who has been watching Grove Street Families for three years. Tenpenny heads up LSPD's anti-gang unit known as Unit 180 Force LSPD, Unit 180 Force Enemy, Alive 1. Start Of The Line Eddie Pulaski Tenpenny's right hand man. Pulaski was also a member of corrupt Unit 180 Force. Powerful and ruthless when accompanied by his superior, but when he is alone, he is just an useless motherf*cker. LSPD, Unit 180 Force Enemy, Alive 1. Start Of The Line 8V3Au.png

The list will be updated as the missions continues and more gangs/organization revealed
Street Gangs
Name Leader Description Preferred Weapons Status Grove Street Families Sean "Sweet Johnson (active) The Grove Street Families have been silenced over the past few years by drugs, internal disagreements and their arch rivals, the Ballas. It was led by Sean "Sweet" Johnson and co-led by Denise Robinson. The Grove Street Families controls the area of Ganton, Idlewood and East Los Santos. Pistol 9mm, Tec-9, AK-47 Befriended, Active The Ballas Unknown (active) The Ballas have a bitter rivalry with the Grove Street Families. The Ballas have been around since the 1970's - Involved in drug dealing, gang banging, prostitution, arms dealing, vandalism, degeneracy, but mainly, the cocaine trade. Mindless, uncontrollable, and thought to have ties with other unrevealed gangs Baseball Bat, Shovel, 9mm Pistol, Micro Uzi, Shotgun, AK-47 Rival, Active Organizations
Name Leader Description Preferred Weapons Status Unit 180 Force Frank Tenpenny (active) This LSPD's anti-gang unit have been around since the 1960's, watching and controlling Los Santos's gang activities. The majority of the members, however were involved in gang businesses. They serve as the main group antagonist, beside the rival gang. 9mm Pistol, D-Eagle, Shotgun, M4 Dreaded, Active 5ceLU.png
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Chapter 1: The Set Up

Chapter 1 .zip -

1. Start of the Line - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=17216
2. Homegirl In, Homegirl Out - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=17583
3. Armed and Dangerous - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=17584
4. The Distribution - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18016
More missions soon!
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More achievements will be added as the mission continues. Achievement is just for fun!
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Achievement's Name Achievements' Despcription Where To Get The Achievement [center][b]Red Asphalt Complete "Start Of The Line" mission. Mission "Start Of The Line" My Bodyguard Have at least 15 Grove boys survived the shootout Mission "Start Of The Line" Anne Oakley-Wannabe Defeat the Ballas sharpshooters. Mission "Start Of The Line" Prison Break Complete "Homegirl In, Homegirl Out" mission. Mission "Homegirl In, Homegirl Out" Target Enemy Only Don't harm any pedestrian in the jail. Mission "Homegirl In, Homegirl Out" Not So Pro Kill the sharpshooter cop by one hit. Mission "Homegirl In, Homegirl Out" A Trade Is Going On Complete "Armed and Dangerous" mission. Mission "Armed and Dangerous" Air Crash Investigation Destroy two enemy choppers Mission "Armed and Dangerous" I Am Strong Never equip armors when fighting the armies Mission "Armed and Dangerous" Delivery Complete "The Distribution" mission. Mission "The Distribution" Racing Against Time Deliver all the guns in less than 4 minutes. Mission "The Distribution" Untouchable Keep the delivery truck remains undamaged til the end. Mission "The Distribution" [anchor=H] UAHZZ.png
No screenies. You can upload one, too!

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QUOTE (Mission 1 by Nitesh aka AAAAAA) Hello everyone,

Today, I'm going to review a mission made by NothingSpecial. They're part of his Denise's Story series.
Please click on the link below in order to view the topic and find links to download them:
http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=499727

Now, it's time for the review,

- Writing: Good. There were very few noticable grammar mistakes. Most of the dialogues were exaggerated by the use of captil letters or repeateduse of certain letters in the word.
- Presentation: Very good, The cutscenes used were perfectly focused and timed. Appropriate animations were given to the actors in the cutscenes.

Start of the line
- Length: Very good, as it can be done in about 8 minutes. The player, Denise, and the other Groves are in a fight against the Ballas. There are three waves, one is already in the fight. After defeating them, the Groves notice some sharp shooters on the road side above. After taking them all down, some Ballas tough guys jumps from the road and they also have to be killed. After that, an unknown man calls the cops which arrives instantly. The other groves manages to escape leaving Denise in the hands of the cops.
- Difficulty: Normal. Even though there are many enemies, the fight takes place in an open area which gives the player a space in case the health starts getting low. Also the large number vf the Groves makes it easier. However, the player has to be careful so that not too many Ballas attack Big Smoke, Sweet and Ryder because they have the must survive property.
- Variety:Very good. Characters include Denise, Sweet, Ballas, Big Smoke, Groves, unknown man, Tenpenny, Pulaski and other cops. Cars include police cars and other random cars which were placed in order to provide cover. Weapvns include AK 47, Shotguns and some melee weapons.

Overall the mission was good and full of action. Even though not much of a story is explained, it can be understandable because it's just the first mission. The designer did a good job in the designing of the mission and should keep up with it.

QUOTE (Mission 2 @ 3 and 4 by Nitesh aka AAAAAA) Hello everyone,

Today, I'm going to review 3 missions made by NothingSpecial. They're part of his Denise's story series.
Please click on the link below in order to view the topic and find links to download them:
http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=499727

Now, it's time for the review,

- Writing: Very good. There were a very few noticeable typos and the text was easy to understand. The dialogues also suited the theme of the mission.
- Presentation: Excellent, The cutscenes were perfectly focused and timed. They included a lot of animations and activity which made them very lively.

Homegirl in, Homegirl out
- Length: Excellent, as it takes about 14 minutes to complete. Denise is in the cell and realises that Big Smoke is also in the cell next to hers. When an officer comes to give her food, she beats him down and gets out of her cell to free Big Smoke. After a gunfight they reach at the parking basement. They find Sweet and the gang there. The whole gang then goes to Grove Street after a chasedvwn from the Cops.
- Difficulty: Hard. There are a lot of officers in and outside the LSPD. The chasedown is also difficult because of the huge number of vehicles chasing them.
- Variety:Very good. Characters include Denise, Big Smoke, officers, Sweet and Ryder. Different weapons including the pistol, rifles, SMG's and M14 were used in the mission. Vehicles include the police bikes and cars.

Armed and Dangerous
- Length: Long, as it takes about 15 minutes to complete. Ryder goes over to Denise's place and asks her to help him steal guns from the army but she says it's not worth risking their life and they can easily get the weapons from Emmet. As the transaction is taking place between Emmet and Denise, Ryder comes running to them and suddenly the army attacks them. After defending themselves fro the army Denise and Ryder makes there way back to Grove Street.
- Difficulty: Very Hard. There are huge waves of army that comes to attack the three. The fight takes place in an enclosed area so it's difficult to escape fro the bullets fired from high accuracy army. A couple of hunters also attack them.
- Variety:Very good. Characters include Denise, Ryder, Emmet, and Army. Weapons include SMG, AK 47 and M14, . Vehicles include Hustler, Hunter, Flatbed

The distribution
- Length: Very good, as it takes about 8 minutes to complete. Ryder tells Denise that they go deliver the guns to their gang. The last place was at Jefferson's where they are ambushed by the Ballas and have to kill them. They find that they still have some guns to spare so they keep for themselves.
- Difficulty: Medium. Most of the mission includes driving around. There is an ambush by the Ballas but most of them carry melee weapons so not a difficult task to kill them.
- Variety:Good. Characters include Denise, Ryder, B Dup, LB, Ballas and the GSF. Weapons include baseball bat, SMG's and other melee weapons. Vehicles include Flatbed.

Overall the missions were good and full of action. It is recommended for all those who like challenging missions which have wild gunfights. Also recommended for gangster theme lovers. The designer has put in a lot of effort in the presentation of the mission. The designer did a good job in designing the missions and should keep up with it.


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Chapter 1: The Set Up
Mission 1: Start of The Line - alifjenius


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Dutchy3010 and PatrickW - For creating the awesome DYOM mod
narcis_speed6 - For creating the logo, signature and headers
KaRzY6 - For his support to this mission pack biggrin.gif
TheXProyeck - For testing the first mission
alifjenius - For awesome video review
Thaboy - For the first trailer
Nitesh - For his support to this mission pack wink.gif
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Anyone who play my mission and even view this topic

 

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#37

Posted 25 December 2017 - 06:50 AM

Did you really have to quote the whole post?

 

No.

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