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Posted 27 January 2012 - 01:12 PM Edited by NothingSpecial, 08 May 2012 - 02:20 AM.

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This is a surprise for everyone in DYOM!


CONTENTS
- Story
- Theme Song
- Trailer
- Characters
- Gang/ Organization
- Missions
- Achievements
- Screenshots
- Reviews
- Video Review With Commentary
- Credits


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Welcome To San Andreas. Welcome to the 1990.


Denise Robinson is a high-ranking member and the co-leader of the Grove Street Families, one of the five prominents gang in Los Santos, a city tearing itself apart with never-ending gang trouble, drugs and corruptions.

A couple of months before the First Great Gang War, gang's activites become worser and more dangerous. There are no days in Los Santos without gang wars and deaths. On March 13, a shootout between the Grove Streets and Ballas broke out under the highways. Greens blasting reds.


Denise, Sweet, Ryder and Smoke were involved in the shootout. Denise was unknowingly lost her unconciusness in the middle of the fights. She has to act fast to defeat the remaining Ballas and soon she was forced on a journey that takes her across the entire state of San Andreas to take control of the streets.


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You guys may think this song was not fit with the mission's theme. But still, I choose this song as the theme song.




A pretty badass song I ever heard!


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#1 Trailer - Thaboy



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The list will be updated as the missions continues and more characters revealed

Protagonist

NameDescriptionAffiliationStatusMission Appearances
Denise Robinson
The protagonist of the series. She has close ties and was a high-ranking member of Grove Street Families. She helps Sweet to heads up the gang. Friendly, most trusted and a homegirl.
Grove Street Families
Playable, Alive
As the protagonist, she appears in every mission. HAS YOUR MIND EXPLODED YET?
Major Characters

NameDescriptionAffiliationStatusMission Appearances
Sean "Sweet" Johnson
Sweet, a powerful and uncontrollable figure, heads up the Grove Street Families--a gang with a never-ending list of problems. Extremely loyal towards his gang, and the hood.
Grove Street Families
Friend, Alive
1. Start Of The Line
2. Homegirl In, Homegirl Out
3. Armed And Dangerous
4. The Distribution (mentioned)
Melvin "Smoke" Harris
Long-time family friend and member of the Grove Street Families. Big Smoke is extrmely overweight and obsessed with money. Disloyal - independant - always in it for himself.
Grove Street Families
Friend, Alive
1. Start Of The Line
2. Homegirl In, Homegirl Out
Lance "Ryder" Wilson
Ryder, a 'loose cannon', is very passionate about the Grove Street Families and a troublemaker. Short, scrawny, but violent. Disloyal and greedy.
Grove Street Families
Friend, Alive
1. Start Of The Line
2. Homegirl In, Homegirl Out
3. Armed And Dangerous
4. The Distribution
Minor Characters

NameDescriptionAffiliationStatusMission Appearances
LB
Ryder's long time friend. Currently he didn't play a big role.
Grove Street Families
Friend, Alive
1. The Distribution
B-Dup
He is not physically appears but his voice is heard.
Grove Street Families
Friend, Alive
1. The Distribution (voice only)
Emmet
A wise old man and well-known gang supplier, Emmet runs a small-time gun dealership in Willowfield, Los Santos.
Grove Street Families
Friend, Alive
1. Armed And Dangerous
Enemies

NameDescriptionAffiliationStatusMission Appearances
Unknown Man
Who's he? What's his name? No one knows. Will his identity be revealed in the next missions?
A relationship with a woman
Potential Enemy, Alive
1. Start Of The Line
Unknown Woman
She is, more mysterious. No physical appearance, just voice!
A relationship with a man
Potential Enemy, Alive
1. Start Of The Line (voice only)
Frank Tenpenny
A corrupt cop. Seen as being a respectable officer, when he is infact a maniacal bully who has been watching Grove Street Families for three years. Tenpenny heads up LSPD's anti-gang unit known as Unit 180 Force
LSPD, Unit 180 Force
Enemy, Alive
1. Start Of The Line
Eddie Pulaski
Tenpenny's right hand man. Pulaski was also a member of corrupt Unit 180 Force. Powerful and ruthless when accompanied by his superior, but when he is alone, he is just an useless motherf*cker.
LSPD, Unit 180 Force
Enemy, Alive
1. Start Of The Line
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The list will be updated as the missions continues and more gangs/organization revealed

Street Gangs

NameLeaderDescriptionPreferred WeaponsStatus
Grove Street Families
Sean "Sweet Johnson ( active )
The Grove Street Families have been silenced over the past few years by drugs, internal disagreements and their arch rivals, the Ballas. It was led by Sean "Sweet" Johnson and co-led by Denise Robinson. The Grove Street Families controls the area of Ganton, Idlewood and East Los Santos.
Pistol 9mm, Tec-9, AK-47
Befriended, Active
The Ballas
Unknown ( active )
The Ballas have a bitter rivalry with the Grove Street Families. The Ballas have been around since the 1970's - Involved in drug dealing, gang banging, prostitution, arms dealing, vandalism, degeneracy, but mainly, the cocaine trade. Mindless, uncontrollable, and thought to have ties with other unrevealed gangs
Baseball Bat, Shovel, 9mm Pistol, Micro Uzi, Shotgun, AK-47
Rival, Active
Organizations

NameLeaderDescriptionPreferred WeaponsStatus
Unit 180 Force
Frank Tenpenny ( active )
This LSPD's anti-gang unit have been around since the 1960's, watching and controlling Los Santos's gang activities. The majority of the members, however were involved in gang businesses. They serve as the main group antagonist, beside the rival gang.
9mm Pistol, D-Eagle, Shotgun, M4
Dreaded, Active
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Chapter 1: The Set Up

Chapter 1 .zip -

1. Start of the Line - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=17216
2. Homegirl In, Homegirl Out - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=17583
3. Armed and Dangerous - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=17584
4. The Distribution - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18016
More missions soon!

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More achievements will be added as the mission continues. Achievement is just for fun!
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Achievement's NameAchievements' DespcriptionWhere To Get The Achievement
[center][b]Red Asphalt
Complete "Start Of The Line" mission.
Mission "Start Of The Line"
My Bodyguard
Have at least 15 Grove boys survived the shootout
Mission "Start Of The Line"
Anne Oakley-Wannabe
Defeat the Ballas sharpshooters.
Mission "Start Of The Line"
Prison Break
Complete "Homegirl In, Homegirl Out" mission.
Mission "Homegirl In, Homegirl Out"
Target Enemy Only
Don't harm any pedestrian in the jail.
Mission "Homegirl In, Homegirl Out"
Not So Pro
Kill the sharpshooter cop by one hit.
Mission "Homegirl In, Homegirl Out"
A Trade Is Going On
Complete "Armed and Dangerous" mission.
Mission "Armed and Dangerous"
Air Crash Investigation
Destroy two enemy choppers
Mission "Armed and Dangerous"
I Am Strong
Never equip armors when fighting the armies
Mission "Armed and Dangerous"
Delivery
Complete "The Distribution" mission.
Mission "The Distribution"
Racing Against Time
Deliver all the guns in less than 4 minutes.
Mission "The Distribution"
Untouchable
Keep the delivery truck remains undamaged til the end.
Mission "The Distribution"
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QUOTE (Mission 1 by Nitesh aka AAAAAA)
Hello everyone,

Today, I'm going to review a mission made by NothingSpecial . They're part of his Denise's Story series.
Please click on the link below in order to view the topic and find links to download them:
http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=499727

Now, it's time for the review,

- Writing: Good . There were very few noticable grammar mistakes. Most of the dialogues were exaggerated by the use of captil letters or repeateduse of certain letters in the word.
- Presentation: Very good , The cutscenes used were perfectly focused and timed. Appropriate animations were given to the actors in the cutscenes.

Start of the line
- Length: Very good , as it can be done in about 8 minutes. The player, Denise, and the other Groves are in a fight against the Ballas. There are three waves, one is already in the fight. After defeating them, the Groves notice some sharp shooters on the road side above. After taking them all down, some Ballas tough guys jumps from the road and they also have to be killed. After that, an unknown man calls the cops which arrives instantly. The other groves manages to escape leaving Denise in the hands of the cops.
- Difficulty: Normal . Even though there are many enemies, the fight takes place in an open area which gives the player a space in case the health starts getting low. Also the large number vf the Groves makes it easier. However, the player has to be careful so that not too many Ballas attack Big Smoke, Sweet and Ryder because they have the must survive property.
- Variety: Very good . Characters include Denise, Sweet, Ballas, Big Smoke, Groves, unknown man, Tenpenny, Pulaski and other cops. Cars include police cars and other random cars which were placed in order to provide cover. Weapvns include AK 47, Shotguns and some melee weapons.

Overall the mission was good and full of action. Even though not much of a story is explained, it can be understandable because it's just the first mission. The designer did a good job in the designing of the mission and should keep up with it.

QUOTE (Mission 2 @ 3 and 4 by Nitesh aka AAAAAA)
Hello everyone,

Today, I'm going to review 3 missions made by NothingSpecial . They're part of his Denise's story series.
Please click on the link below in order to view the topic and find links to download them:
http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=499727

Now, it's time for the review,

- Writing: Very good . There were a very few noticeable typos and the text was easy to understand. The dialogues also suited the theme of the mission.
- Presentation: Excellent , The cutscenes were perfectly focused and timed. They included a lot of animations and activity which made them very lively.

Homegirl in, Homegirl out
- Length: Excellent , as it takes about 14 minutes to complete. Denise is in the cell and realises that Big Smoke is also in the cell next to hers. When an officer comes to give her food, she beats him down and gets out of her cell to free Big Smoke. After a gunfight they reach at the parking basement. They find Sweet and the gang there. The whole gang then goes to Grove Street after a chasedvwn from the Cops.
- Difficulty: Hard . There are a lot of officers in and outside the LSPD. The chasedown is also difficult because of the huge number of vehicles chasing them.
- Variety: Very good . Characters include Denise, Big Smoke, officers, Sweet and Ryder. Different weapons including the pistol, rifles, SMG's and M14 were used in the mission. Vehicles include the police bikes and cars.

Armed and Dangerous
- Length: Long , as it takes about 15 minutes to complete. Ryder goes over to Denise's place and asks her to help him steal guns from the army but she says it's not worth risking their life and they can easily get the weapons from Emmet. As the transaction is taking place between Emmet and Denise, Ryder comes running to them and suddenly the army attacks them. After defending themselves fro the army Denise and Ryder makes there way back to Grove Street.
- Difficulty: Very Hard . There are huge waves of army that comes to attack the three. The fight takes place in an enclosed area so it's difficult to escape fro the bullets fired from high accuracy army. A couple of hunters also attack them.
- Variety: Very good . Characters include Denise, Ryder, Emmet, and Army. Weapons include SMG, AK 47 and M14, . Vehicles include Hustler, Hunter, Flatbed

The distribution
- Length: Very good , as it takes about 8 minutes to complete. Ryder tells Denise that they go deliver the guns to their gang. The last place was at Jefferson's where they are ambushed by the Ballas and have to kill them. They find that they still have some guns to spare so they keep for themselves.
- Difficulty: Medium . Most of the mission includes driving around. There is an ambush by the Ballas but most of them carry melee weapons so not a difficult task to kill them.
- Variety: Good . Characters include Denise, Ryder, B Dup, LB, Ballas and the GSF. Weapons include baseball bat, SMG's and other melee weapons. Vehicles include Flatbed.

Overall the missions were good and full of action. It is recommended for all those who like challenging missions which have wild gunfights. Also recommended for gangster theme lovers. The designer has put in a lot of effort in the presentation of the mission. The designer did a good job in designing the missions and should keep up with it.


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Chapter 1: The Set Up

Mission 1: Start of The Line - alifjenius



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Dutchy3010 and PatrickW - For creating the awesome DYOM mod

narcis_speed6 - For creating the logo, signature and headers

KaRzY6 - For his support to this mission pack biggrin.gif

TheXProyeck - For testing the first mission

alifjenius - For awesome video review

Thaboy - For the first trailer

Nitesh - For his support to this mission pack wink.gif

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Anyone who play my mission and even view this topic

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Posted 27 January 2012 - 01:23 PM

Wow, thanks for putting me in credits! biggrin.gif icon14.gif I will definitely play this. I have been waiting awhile. Sorry if the feedback is delayed a bit. I have a massive long list saved on a notepad document for all the mission-packs I have to play. Anyway, good luck with this! biggrin.gif

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Posted 27 January 2012 - 01:49 PM

Man, this is the coolest post, I've ever seen. I'll play this and give constructive feedbacks.

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Posted 27 January 2012 - 01:51 PM

@KaRzY6: You're deserved to be listed in the credit list! biggrin.gif
@shiva s: Thanks colgate.gif

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Posted 27 January 2012 - 02:37 PM Edited by -S-hark21, 27 January 2012 - 02:56 PM.

Alright, I will play this and give feedback

Edit :

I played the mission, I got crash when Ballas falling.

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Posted 27 January 2012 - 05:00 PM

I'll give this a try... good luck

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Posted 27 January 2012 - 10:06 PM Edited by NothingSpecial, 27 January 2012 - 10:32 PM.

@S-shark : If you suffered a crash after the falling Ballas cutscene...
Before you pop all the Ballas accurate shooters down, command Sweet, Smoke and Ryder to follow you. Bring them far far away from the shootout and command them to wait. Make sure they don't follow you when you're trying to kill the Ballas down.

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A crash has been reported in the first mission. To fix this problem, read in this post or read in the first post, at the mission section.

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Posted 28 January 2012 - 10:17 AM

I will surely play this, the post and the story looks promising. GOOD LUCK! icon14.gif icon14.gif icon14.gif

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Posted 29 January 2012 - 12:15 AM

@IXMJXI : Thx, make sure you read the "Mission's Problem" before playing wink.gif

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Posted 02 February 2012 - 02:04 PM

I'm going to play it tomorrow, I'll play it for sure, don't think that no one plays your missions, they do.....

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Posted 02 February 2012 - 10:22 PM

@abishai.kochara : I never think the people don't like my missions. smile.gif
A fixed first mission will be uploaded, but first I need some people to test it.

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Posted 02 February 2012 - 10:29 PM

QUOTE (NothingSpecial @ Thursday, Feb 2 2012, 22:22)
@abishai.kochara : I never think the people don't like my missions. smile.gif
A fixed first mission will be uploaded, but first I need some people to test it.

Me

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 04:32 AM

NOTICE


The REVIEW section has been updated!

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 07:37 AM

I played the first mission! It's nice! Cutscenes are well made and so on. I like it
I give it 9/10.
"Ten Penises" biggrin.gif :D:D

I'll play the next mission for sure.

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 09:48 AM

@Rytuklis : Thanks for the feedbacks. Glad you loved this biggrin.gif I'm still fixing the second mission's bugs, while the third is ready

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Posted 26 February 2012 - 09:16 AM

NOTICE


Two missions added. Characters list updated. And say hello to our newest sections : VIDEO REVIEWS WITH COMMENTARY and ACHIEVEMENTS!

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 02:54 PM

I'll play these missions when I have time. Good luck icon14.gif

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 03:21 PM

@Notna: thx man. I appreciate that smile.gif

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Posted 14 March 2012 - 02:42 PM

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Trailer and video commentary section has been updated! Special thanks for Thaboy and alifjenius for the videos.

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Posted 16 March 2012 - 12:34 PM

Played the 1st mission

I must say this mission is a great introduction. the difficulty, the plot, well... everything! happy.gif
Umm.... i can't play the 2nd mission because i got crash in the beginning cutscene

Rating: 8/10

Keep up! smile.gif

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Posted 16 March 2012 - 01:12 PM

QUOTE (lee_atsugai @ Friday, Mar 16 2012, 12:34)
Played the 1st mission

I must say this mission is a great introduction. the difficulty, the plot, well... everything! happy.gif
Umm.... i can't play the 2nd mission because i got crash in the beginning cutscene

Rating: 8/10

Keep up! smile.gif

Thanks for the feedbacks and the rating. colgate.gif Sorry about the crash, I asked Nitesh and he will get rid of this problem.

Oh, you didn't play the third mission yet?

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Posted 16 March 2012 - 01:29 PM

oh yeah. almost forgot to give the feedback for the third mission

the mission is good and (very) hard for me. it took me 4 times to pass the mission. still, it's a good mission smile.gif

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Posted 16 March 2012 - 01:41 PM

QUOTE (lee_atsugai @ Friday, Mar 16 2012, 13:29)
oh yeah. almost forgot to give the feedback for the third mission

the mission is good and (very) hard for me. it took me 4 times to pass the mission. still, it's a good mission smile.gif

Let me guess. You must be killed many times when the army ambush you lol.gif
And again, thanks for the feedbacks.

More missions are on their way to "Publish Mission" button

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Posted 16 March 2012 - 01:49 PM

QUOTE (NothingSpecial @ Friday, Mar 16 2012, 13:41)
QUOTE (lee_atsugai @ Friday, Mar 16 2012, 13:29)
oh yeah. almost forgot to give the feedback for the third mission

the mission is good and (very) hard for me. it took me 4 times to pass the mission. still, it's a good mission smile.gif

Let me guess. You must be killed many times when the army ambush you lol.gif
And again, thanks for the feedbacks.

More missions are on their way to "Publish Mission" button

correct biggrin.gif
i'll wait for the next missions

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 09:54 AM

Played all the missions.

I don't get the story yet, but the missions are fun to play especially because of the difficulty of the gameplay. There's not a single out of three that I finished in my first try.

You have also kept a hell lot of effort in hiding spawning of actors and giving them the appropriate animations. What I usually do is to spawn two actors, give them the moving hand animation and they talk talk till the end and then I hide them. That's a good job you did there.

Btw, none of the missions crashed for me, except the first which I fixed.

I have made a gameplay video (no commentary) of the third mission because I wanted to practise out some video editing but am not sure when I will upload it coz I have to make a YouTube account first and then check if my slow internet allows me to upload it.

Going to play others as they come. biggrin.gif

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 10:37 AM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Saturday, Mar 17 2012, 09:54)
Played all the missions.

I don't get the story yet, but the missions are fun to play especially because of the difficulty of the gameplay. There's not a single out of three that I finished in my first try.

You have also kept a hell lot of effort in hiding spawning of actors and giving them the appropriate animations. What I usually do is to spawn two actors, give them the moving hand animation and they talk talk till the end and then I hide them. That's a good job you did there.

Btw, none of the missions crashed for me, except the first which I fixed.

I have made a gameplay video (no commentary) of the third mission because I wanted to practise out some video editing but am not sure when I will upload it coz I have to make a YouTube account first and then check if my slow internet allows me to upload it.

Going to play others as they come. biggrin.gif

Thanks for the feedbacks smile.gif .

You may want to review the second and third because they worked for you (abishai.kochara attempted to review them, but he always got crashes).


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I have made a gameplay video (no commentary) of the third mission because I wanted to practise out some video editing but am not sure when I will upload it coz I have to make a YouTube account first and then check if my slow internet allows me to upload it.


Of course you can, but remember me!

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Posted 18 March 2012 - 01:25 PM



Sorry for the bad quality, but that's the best I could for now.

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Posted 19 March 2012 - 10:04 AM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Sunday, Mar 18 2012, 13:25)


Sorry for the bad quality, but that's the best I could for now.

Not bad at all icon14.gif

Let me guess. You must be using Fraps to record this video, right?

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Posted 23 March 2012 - 01:57 AM

NOTICE


The fourth mission added!

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Posted 23 March 2012 - 10:49 AM

I have played the 4th mission. I got crash when the ballas ambush me




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