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Posted 02 February 2012 - 03:02 PM

UPDATE:
Added more characters,map and interesting part!!

Did you know that the all my story-lines are fonection? - Please answer!

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Posted 03 February 2012 - 06:53 AM

What 'fonection' means?

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Posted 03 February 2012 - 01:28 PM

QUOTE (SatournFan @ Friday, Feb 3 2012, 06:53)
What 'fonection' means?

This:
All my story-lines are specifieces because they are same characters with same names and same castes,and time happening is conection too with arriveng new characters and death older characters.
That is conection!

Conection! Sorry my fault it's not fonection. biggrin.gif

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Posted 04 February 2012 - 03:02 AM

Then, it's connection.

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Posted 04 February 2012 - 12:50 PM

QUOTE (SatournFan @ Saturday, Feb 4 2012, 03:02)
Then, it's connection.

Yes it's conection! biggrin.gif

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#36

Posted 11 February 2012 - 04:13 PM

UPTADE:
Episode 2 part 2 coming soon!!!!

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Posted 12 February 2012 - 02:33 PM

UPDATE:
Uploaded Episode 2 part 2

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#38

Posted 12 February 2012 - 02:41 PM

UPDATE:
New icon's uploaded,characters will be uploaded today/tomorrow!

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#39

Posted 12 February 2012 - 06:17 PM

UPDATE:
Added new better map.

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#40

Posted 12 February 2012 - 06:26 PM

I tried to play the missions from Episode 1, but the first mission is impossible. It is impossible to find the invisible checkpoint. And you really have to improve your English.

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Posted 13 February 2012 - 06:47 PM

UPDATE:
Episode 2 part 3 uploaded!!!

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Posted 13 February 2012 - 07:08 PM

UPDATE:
Added more characters gang and icons!

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#43

Posted 14 February 2012 - 12:13 PM

UPDATE:
Added informations about game.


If someone can review this story-line please to do that.Here's the official topic about DYOM reviewers by AznKei.

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#44

Posted 14 February 2012 - 12:18 PM

I played the first episode. I liked everything but you've to add the name of the respective person's dialogues. For eg you added " why are you here?" I was confused and wondered who'd talked that. To make it clear, you should add like this "(Mike) why you're here?". It can be made this way. Anyway, you've improved a lot. Put a little effort on your english and you'll do good.

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Posted 14 February 2012 - 12:25 PM

QUOTE (shiva s @ Tuesday, Feb 14 2012, 12:18)
I played the first episode. I liked everything but you've to add the name of the respective person's dialogues. For eg you added " why are you here?" I was confused and wondered who'd talked that. To make it clear, you should add like this "(Mike) why you're here?". It can be made this way. Anyway, you've improved a lot. Put a little effort on your english and you'll do good.

Everybody ask me why i didn't wrote dialogues. tounge.gif In other episodes i've done it. icon14.gif
Example:
(Mike)
About English.Episode 1 part 1 is so old,you see,i haven't much mistakes here. I've been made Ep.1 pt.1 when i knew English worse than now.Thats all i think wink.gif

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#46

Posted 20 April 2012 - 08:24 PM

Well guys,i'm finally back at Mike Devison Chronicles,and i want to continiou it. Episode 3 (final) part 1 is not ready to be realased yet,but here's the progress:

Update:

Since i'm back,i've already finished first four missions from Episode 3 part 1. These missions won't be like in pervious episodes.
They will be better and higer quality! I need to finish 11 missions and Episode 3 part 1 will be realased.

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I decited to come back on this cause i'm free from other DYOM projects now. Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas Stories is
wating for realase date,GTA Los Santos is on hold,other projects i've already finished. School took time from me very much,but i'll try to finish
this as soon as possible.

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Please play the pervious episodes and give me an feedback. Expect an big update on main topic soon! As you want to see
my mission topic,you can look at here. Happy waiting final missions!

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#47

Posted 22 April 2012 - 04:22 PM

Well,guys i have to tell you something...This has been canceled...I made 9 missions and started 10...sudnelly they have lost. GTA SA crashed.
I have to make 25 missions to be end. I must cancel this coz i don't have a time to finish and remake missions again. They were very long and high quality... sad.gif

This Story-Line is canceled!


Mabey,i'll get time from school holiday (1 may) then i'll mabey try to finish this,but don't expect that of me,might i won't ??? cause from 1 May i'm starting GTA SAS with 60 (mabey more) missions.




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