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Posted 29 December 2011 - 07:57 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 13 February 2012 - 10:11 PM.

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Story:

When started 1995 year,Mike Devison was working for lost asteces gang in Los Santos.Everything was good,when the russian & gracia's gangs started attacking him becasue of his bad job for them.
They didn't like that Mike Devison work for asteces gang.One day they attacked Mike,he was runing somewhere (he didn't know where),when he remembered,his old helihopter is on the mounth.
He got him and flew somewhere far away.Lukas Ray ordered his gang members to find Mike and kill him.He ordered to kill gracia's gang members too,because they didn't finished their part of job good...



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Logo 3
Logo 4

Map:

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Territory detalis:

Light blue - Lost aztesac
Orange - Italian mafia (GRACIA)
Gray - Russian mafia
Black - Traids
Blue - San Fierro rifa
Brown - Da naga boys
Yellow - Los Santos Vagos
Green - Grove street families
Purple - Ballas


Map detals:

user posted image-Jerry Connor

user posted image-Lary Parcker

user posted image-Black Vinston

user posted image-Casino Traids

user posted image-Brian Robison

user posted image-Woozie

user posted image-Mistery

user posted image-John Stark

user posted image-Mao

user posted image-Lee

user posted image-The truth

When the other parts will be uploaded,i will upload and others maps.


Cast:

Mike Devison
Original skin 1,Skin 2,Skin 3

Player in this game.Lost asteces started run for him to catch him.Becasue they thinking that the Other largest gangs have someone deal with him.


Jerry Connor
Skin 1,Skin 2

Mike's old friend.They was working on the building together,Jerry was working for Ballas gang,he don't has problems with old live,just he helping Mike.

Lary Parcker
Skin 1,Skin 2

Lary is good man.He usually makes some things on the cars.He became his friend,when Mike save him of someone assholes.

Black Vinsten
Skin

First guy in Lary's new gang.He has apartment in Las Venturas.He usually work coll jobs like casing...

Wo-zi-mu
Skin

He's leader of traids in San Fierro.He doesn't has full control under all traids because in Las Venturas,they have more which want to controling gang alone.

Brian Robison
Skin

Brian is main character from EPFSF,but here isn't.He's frendly to and he'll help you in bettele against da naga boys and SF rifa.

John Stark
Skin

He's from EPFSF story too! Frendlly too! Everything like Brian Robison.He has best friend Brian,and he works for traids in San Fierro too.

Lukas Ray
Skin ???

Lukas Ray is very big factor here.He's from JP,EFTV,GGS series,Jack Prinston in the end series in 1995 has killed Lukas Ray.You will see more about Lukas Ray.He started livin in Los Santos,but when he was in Vice City to finish someone job in 1993,he say that he will move to Vice City when he has a time.That year is 1995...

Mao Moto
Skin

He's one of main traid's people from Liberty City.He wants his brother back because rifa has been captured Mao's brother,so Mao wants to destroy rifa everywhere...

Lee Moto
Skin

Lee is Mao's brother which captured from San Fierro rifa gang,because he usually has been a spy which works for traids...

The Truth
Skin

New unknow man which will help you and be with you only in part 3...

More them coming son,when the others parts of game will be uploaded.


Gangs:

Vrrios Aztecas gang:
Mike Devison was working for this gan before all this happenings.Their location is in desert and Los Santos.They wants to catch Mike to ask him why he got out of them...

Russian mafia:
They have very big territory becasue their boss Lukas Ray has been took new teritorry in Los Santos then 1994 he got to live in Vice City and get teritorry there,but he has back to Los Santos when started 1995 year to catch Mike Devison,but he got...

Italian mafia: (GRACIA)
Italian mafia has poblems becasue of Jack Prinston which want to destoroy them.Now Lukas Ray has Italian mafia in his own hands...

The traids:
Traids are small actor in this story,Mike just work for them.They have war with Da naga boys.And sometimes have problems with San Fierro rifa nothing more...

San Fierro rifa:
They aren't like before.Now rifa has largest teritorry than before and wants to get more of traids...

Da naga boys:
Da naga boys has very much money which they stole of San Fierro.So they have new weapons and people which will help them to destory traids,they want to get biyside and traids teritorry...

Los Santos Vagos
Very old gang in Los Santos now arrives to angel plane because they need someone hideout to hide their units there of other gang wars or something like that...

More them coming son.

Missions:


Episode 1:
Part 1: Download
Part 2: Download

Episode 2:
Part 1: Download
Part 2: Download
Part 3: Download

Episode 3:
Part 1:
Part 2:


Informations

Status: Wrok in proggres
Game type: Story-line

Episode 1:
Part 1: Used skin number #1.You have missions at Jerry and Lary.
Location: Desert
Mission number: 9
Part 2: Used skin number #2.You have missions at Jerry,Lary,Traids and Vinsten.
Location: Las Venturas
Mission number: 12
Episode 2:
Part 1: Used skin number #2.You have missions at Woozie,Brian,John,mistery.
Location: San Fierro
Mission number: 10
Part 2: Used skin number #3.You have missions at Woozie,Brian,Mao,Lee.
Location: San Fierro
Mission number: 9
Part 3: Used skin number #3.You have missions at Truth and ammu-nation.
Location: Forests
Mission number: 5
Episode 3
Part 1: Used skin number #1 and #2. ???
Location: Los Santos
Mission number: 15
Part 2: Used skin number #1 and #3. ???
Location: Los Santos
Mission number: 10

It will be with 70 on the end.


Trailer:


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Posted 29 December 2011 - 08:14 PM

Storyline added on my official topic: All AnDReJ98's missions.

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Posted 30 December 2011 - 02:49 AM

I wish Russians are allies in this? Luck. icon14.gif

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Posted 30 December 2011 - 08:12 AM

Played the Chapter 1. The missions are not bad. But there are some remarks:

1. English. You should improve it a lot.
2. Why don't you write the names in the dialogues, without this I often can't understand, who is talking.

P.S. I saw, that intro and some missions are very like to the intro and some missions from MHP.

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Posted 30 December 2011 - 02:14 PM

QUOTE (Darkseller63 @ Friday, Dec 30 2011, 08:12)
Played the Chapter 1. The missions are not bad. But there are some remarks:

1. English. You should improve it a lot.
2. Why don't you write the names in the dialogues, without this I often can't understand, who is talking.

P.S. I saw, that intro and some missions are very like to the intro and some missions from MHP.

Okey for English and dialogues,but what's MHP?

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Posted 30 December 2011 - 02:49 PM

MHP is Matthew Hegan's Path (Story-Line) by LeonCJ.

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Posted 30 December 2011 - 07:40 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 04 January 2012 - 12:28 PM.

QUOTE (Darkseller63 @ Friday, Dec 30 2011, 14:49)
MHP is Matthew Hegan's Path (Story-Line) by LeonCJ.

I'll play it next year. lol.gif

Played MHP.It's very cool!


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Posted 02 January 2012 - 07:59 PM

QUOTE (SatournFan @ Friday, Dec 30 2011, 02:49)
I wish Russians are allies in this? Luck. icon14.gif

Oh,yes! I forgot,you will see if you will follow the story.

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Posted 02 January 2012 - 11:57 PM

@AnDReJ98

Shouldn't double post bro. Use the edit button. Anyway good luck with this icon14.gif Might give it a shot later on biggrin.gif

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 12:27 PM

Can someone tell me why gtagarage files didn't uploaded here? I used tab ''UPDATE'' and nothing!
Please tell me what to do.

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 01:23 PM

well, The moderators will scan your file for possible threats and viruses. So, it may even take weeks time. Be patient , dude.

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 01:26 PM

yeah, be patient man. it just like my dyom missions
I uploaded the DEMO of my mission pack, The Story of a soldier
It take months for they to accept

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 02:14 PM

Thanks guys.Hey -S-hark21 can you make the trailer of this storyline?

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 02:20 PM Edited by -S-hark21, 04 January 2012 - 02:41 PM.

Yeah sure, I haven't play this storyline
but since I got my SA back I will do it biggrin.gif

EDIT :
Forgot to tell, the trailer maybe tomorrow or in 2 more days
Since it's school now

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 02:38 PM

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Wednesday, Jan 4 2012, 14:20)
Yeah sure, I haven't play this storyline
but since I got my SA back I will do it biggrin.gif

Thanks man!

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Posted 07 January 2012 - 08:35 PM

Part two uploaded.Play him and give me feedback.Sorry for any mistake of me.

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Posted 08 January 2012 - 02:28 PM

Andrej Just wanted to tell. The trailer is a bit late
Cause I still learning using Sony Vegas. Maybe in three more days or four

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Posted 08 January 2012 - 02:53 PM

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Sunday, Jan 8 2012, 14:28)
Andrej Just wanted to tell. The trailer is a bit late
Cause I still learning using Sony Vegas. Maybe in three more days or four

No problem!

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Posted 08 January 2012 - 07:29 PM Edited by leoncj, 12 February 2012 - 02:52 PM.

deleted, lol??

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Posted 08 January 2012 - 09:31 PM

QUOTE (leoncj @ Sunday, Jan 8 2012, 19:29)
Hey, nice icons, the V one is looking smoothly... though I've seen J somewhere, nevermind.
Nice idea with the missions with mission counter and oh, 70 storyline missions... goodluck. (Though I see the "Maybe" part... o.o)
And, I think the map is too... big? Or Monitor is too small, other than that goodluck with the missions. ^__^
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Wow,here's one of my best friends on DYOM and GTAforums,can i get someon yours icon?To know friend,the icons on the map are better so much in game friend,belive me friend.
And that ''mabey'' don't worry about it,100% i'll finish this story with 70 story-line missions.Oh,this with big map,if you want i'll change it!And very important: Matt Hegan's path-inspiration!

Thanks for feedback friend!

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Posted 13 January 2012 - 07:54 PM

Sorry for waiting for the Episode 2 part 1,because 4 my missions have been deleted i don't know how,i'll scan my PC.I'll upload it for 4-5 days.

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 02:49 PM

Trailer added.Thanks S-hark21 !! cool.gif

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Posted 24 January 2012 - 08:37 PM

UPDATE
Added new logo!

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Posted 25 January 2012 - 09:00 PM

Nice story-line friend! icon14.gif

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Posted 26 January 2012 - 09:13 AM

Pick your own style of writing, buddy, don't steal mine.

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Posted 26 January 2012 - 02:05 PM

QUOTE (AnDReJ98 @ Thursday, Dec 29 2011, 19:57)
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Story:

In 1996 year,Mike Devison was working for lost asteces gang in Los Santos.Everything was good,when the russian & gracia's gangs started attacking him becasue of his bad job for them.
They didn't like that Mike Devison work for asteces gang.One day they attacked Mike,he was runing somewhere (he didn't know where),when he remembered,his old helihopter is on the mounth.
He got him and flew somewhere far away.Lukas Ray ordered his gang members to find Mike and kill him.He ordered to kill gracia's gang members too,because they didn't finished their part of job good...



Other logos:

Logo 1
Logo 2
Logo 3
Logo 4


Map:

user posted image

Map detals:

user posted image-Jerry Connor

user posted image-Lary Parcker

user posted image-Black Vinston

user posted image-Casino Traids

When the other parts will be uploaded,i will upload and others maps.


Cast:

Mike Devison
Original skin 1,Skin 2,Skin 3

Player in this game.Lost asteces started run for him to catch him.Becasue they thinking that the Other largest gangs have someone deal with him.


Jerry Connor
Skin 1,Skin 2

Mike's old friend.They was working on the building together,Jerry was working for Ballas gang,he don't has problems with old live,just he helping Mike.

Lary Parcker
Skin 1,Skin 2

Lary is good man.He usually makes some things on the cars.He became his friend,when Mike save him of someone assholes.

Black Vinsten
Skin

First guy in Lary's new gang.He has apartment in Las Venturas.He usually work coll jobs like casing...

More them coming son,when the others parts of game will be uploaded.


Gangs:

Vrrios Aztecas gang:
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Russian mafia:
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Italian mafia: (GRACIA)
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The traids:
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More them coming son.

Missions:


Episode 1:
Part 1: Download [The desert]
Part 2: Download [Las Venturas]

Episode 2:
Part 1: [San Fierro]
Part 2: [San Fierro]
Part 3: [Forests]

Episode 3:
Part 1: [Los Santos]
Part 2: [Los Santos]


Trailer:


By: -S-hark21

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Posted 26 January 2012 - 02:08 PM

Woah man, do quote all the main post man. And also, if you got nothing to say, you don't need to post like that.

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Posted 27 January 2012 - 01:04 PM

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Thursday, Jan 26 2012, 14:08)
Woah man, do quote all the main post man. And also, if you got nothing to say, you don't need to post like that.

Yeah! I don't know what he want?

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Posted 28 January 2012 - 08:08 PM

UPDATE:
Added story-line ''Episode 2 part 1''

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Posted 28 January 2012 - 08:50 PM

Update:
Added more gang,ions and characters!




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