"It's something hard to be, who you want to be"
Chapter 1 Trailer
Trailer by Notna
Chapter 2 Trailer
Trailer by ThaBoy
STATUS : COMPLETE
Agent AK reporting! I will complete my assignment of finishing the review of the mission 'the story begin' from 'the story of the transporter' by Arejai
Writing Good. Very very clear! It is understandable and just flows with the story, you probably won't remember reading but will remember the wordings.
Presentation Excellent. Cutscenes are accurate from all views and have perfect timing, good work AJ(mind if I call you that?) Really good job and one of the cutscenes has the enemies appearing as bikers! it was my favourite!
'the story begin'
Length Excellent. No kidding the action continues! It just doesn't end and goes on for 7 - 10 minutes! You recieve a call and after leaving your house with your guns you face an huge outwave of enemies. Not for beginners though they should try.
Difficulty Hard. Thats 'cause you're surrounded by enemies, they're all around you have a MP5 and a silenced pistol while they have AK47's
Variety Decent . They're the gorgonit guys from '8 Miles'(just a reference I dunno what they're called!) They all use AK47's.
In the end it was enjoyed heartfully and was something I didn't expect, the first mission itself was filled with so much action it was awesome. Good job and good luck with the rest. This is a must-play.
Note : If you hate to read all this long story, you can just read the summary.
A secret agent, Markson Ricos a.k.a 'The Transporter', was working for a mysterious guy named Glog for a long time. He become popular since working with the guy. A lot of missions has been done by himself, without any objection. Killing a target, eliminating a group, and protecting someone, was his main job.
Becoming popular is not as great as he thought..
One day, at the morning, he got called from Glog that he got many hits and wanted by all organizations in Los Santos, except C.O. Glog tell him to leave his house as soon as possible. Although Markson didn't get what happened at all, he decide to obey the ordered and leave the place. But, before he can do anything, the enemies arrived and encountered the place.
Why they wanted to kill him? How he got so many hits suddenly? And who started it?
Follow and play this mission-pack to see what happen next and how can Markson do survive himself.
As a great and popular agent, Markson got many hits and become wanted by all the enemies.
Play this mission-pack to see what Markson can do to survive himself.
Actors will be update according to the story.
|Markson Ricos||Protagonist and playable character.He was a secret agent and working for a secret guy called Glog.|
|Glog||He is Markson's boss that gives a tasks to Markson when it comes a mission. Known as mysterious guy that all people, even Markson hard to meet him.|
|Mr. Kong||Leader of C.O. He is friend to Markson and always help him when he need some help.|
|Randolph Gong||Assistant of Mr. Kong and because of his 'no-emotions' face, we don't know what he thinks.|
|Colombo Bunacire||Leader of THOR that rules Los Santos and the most feared leader in Los Santos.|
|Jean Pedro Estonia|
|From Mexico, he comes to Los Santos and create a new organization called Men of Mayhem.|
|Louis Boderick||A cop that helped Markson at the gas station.|
|Charlie McGuire||He's Glog's nephew. A very cheerful person.|
|Zimmer McGuire||He's Glog's nephew. He hate Markson at first, but at last he accept Markson as his housemate.|
|Mr. Jordan||The owner of the gas station at Easter Basin.|
|Duke||Co-worker of the gas station at Easter Basin.|
|Jacob||Owner of Bings Bong's.|
|Gao Song||Mr. Kong's assistant.|
|Hooper||The owner of the dock at Easter Basin.|
|Sgt Jade||One of the sargeant of Los Santos Police Department.|
|Robert & Walker||Sgt Jade's men.|
|Katie||Sgt Jade's scout. She is a cheerful person and although she is a girl, she knows a lot about the enemies.|
Organization will be update according to the story.
|CHINESE ORGANIZATION |
|Lead by Mr. Kong and allied to Markson.|
Richest organization in Los Santos.
|THE HORDES OF REDCONE (T.H.O.R)||Lead by Colombo Bunacire and the biggest organization in Los Santos. Was created 5 years ago where Los Santos is still in a peaceful condition.|
|LOCAL STREET||The second biggest organization and lead by Javier Rowten. |
Is in a bussiness with THOR.
|WILD SCORPION||Lead by Jean Pedro Estonia. Still a small gang but pretty dangerous.|
|MEN OF MAYHEM|
|A gang that work everywhere, but didn't work with any other organizations. They just work for their importance.|
Download Chapter 1
1) The Story Begin
2) Long Runaway
3) Battle at Gas Station
4) Artificial Sheriff
6) Agent Black & White
7) Glog's Message
Download Chapter 2
1) A New Life
2) Truck Delivery
3) Car Replacement
4) It's Mine
5) True Housemate
6) Going To Race
7) Worst Day
9) Give Me One More Chance
10) Back To Old Style
1) Back To Los Santos
2) Lend An Assistance
3) Highway Shootout
4) Parking Lot
5) It's Not Just A Bus
6) Say Hello
7) Mall Defence
8) Into The Palace
9) Catch Up
11) One Way To Go
12) End Of The Line
Download all missions here:
Not update yet.
Dutchy3010 and PatrickW for making DYOM ( best mod ever)
Secronom President for a help in DYOM forums
Chimpso for DYOM tutorial
Notna and ThaBoy for the trailer
abishai.kochara for the review
The others, for any helped you give
THANKS FOR PLAYING AND FEEL FREE TO GIVE FEEDBACK
Edited by Arejai, 24 January 2012 - 05:13 PM.