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abishai.kochara
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#1

Posted 22 December 2011 - 01:46 PM Edited by abishai.kochara, 10 January 2012 - 02:54 PM.

8 Miles

-presented by Abishai Kochara

Note to all players-
Firstly guys, I know i'm not that good at designing but I've improved and have made these missions with a lot of hard-work, this my rebirth in DYOM. I'll continue those missions and will create new missions only when I finish this, this my resolution. Please give me feedback and do comment and rate.
GAME NOTE: The story, characters and information will be updated as missions are uploaded.



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Story
Characters
Game
Information(briefing)


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Story
Abishai Kochara, an ex-military, now in Los Santos, has plans to go around San Andreas as a camper through the countryside, he and his friends plan to go to a friend's place but fate has other plans when they get there, they go around town with Jenil, they go to a bar at night when some people dressed as cleaners barg in and drag jenil out, after getting into a gunfight you realize Jenil is dead...............



Characters

Abishai Kochara (AK)
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He was part of the Military, now he is retired after a grenade blew up while he and Dipesh Suvarna , Ravindranath Venkata and Yash Patil were about 5 metres away from it.
Now he lives on the money he saved,
he loves adventures and adreline,
had a very hurtful childhood.

Dipesh Suvarna (DS)
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He is Abishai's Friend, dangerously accurate with guns, he's useless with throwables.
The first to come around after the blast.
The last to recover from it.

Ravindranath Venkata (RV)
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The most strategic and patient person here, better known as Ravi, he's the man with a plan.
He knows what he's doing and does everything with a purpose.

Yash Patil (YP)
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He's the brains here, knows the name of almost every techonology, electronic device, software, hardware, etc.
Real good with maths(they all copied his maths homework), He had won an award for something they don't know. All of them have won awards.

Donnel Lieu
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Abishai's Butler, very faithful, loyal.

Jenil Mange (JM)
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He had a government job, he just retired and was very excited on Abishai and his friends arrival.
Status: Dead

Abhirup Kamath
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Actually a government official he's one of abishai's childhood friends.......
he is K.I.A in ' The 4 dragons have arrived '
Status : Dead




Chapter 1 : The Thing that started it all

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The Discussion
Bank Shootou t
a good start, a good meet
Bar War
Death that changed my life
Funeral of death
knock on the door, blast on the lawn
to Mt.Chiliad

Chapter 2 : Beginning to rise
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for control
for annoyance
They're back for us
The lure
order of blood
Aha! San Escapado, the chase begins
San Escapado, a grand escape
Parking lot struggle


Chapter 3 : The Deathride
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The struggle continues
A lead to last
The 4 dragons have arrived
Neatly planned assasination
Attack on general ding's 'base'
THE ESCAPE

Screenshots, Videos

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Information(Briefing)

Factions
The Cleaners
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Abishai strictly believes that they are killers in disguise of cleaners but was dumbstruck when they appeared in a cleaner van but their being killers was evident......


Gorgonits
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The only faction known in the Whetstone areas.
Abishai and Ravi - the only people who banged 'em
They have weapons that they know very well to use, the only reason they lost was because the guys they(AK & RV) fought were newbies to this gang.

STATUS : COMPLETED

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#2

Posted 22 December 2011 - 03:19 PM

guys i need a trailer, please do this someone. smile.gif

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#3

Posted 23 December 2011 - 03:32 AM

the mission ' a good start, a good meet' was supposed to released now but.......
i made the mission and when i tried to test it.......
it crashed in the fourth cutscene, anyway i'll make it again and release it today,
Give me feedback to improve.
And also I need logos, can anyone do them?

(Notna will do the trailer, thanks a lot notna! biggrin.gif

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#4

Posted 23 December 2011 - 10:56 AM

I feel stupid but how do i make missions inside hidden interiors without making me fall in heaven when i play it? sad.gif
Help please, I need it. sad.gif

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#5

Posted 23 December 2011 - 10:59 AM

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 18:56)
I feel stupid but how do i make missions inside hidden interiors without making me fall in heaven when i play it? sad.gif
Help please, I need it. sad.gif

Wow.. what a glitch

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#6

Posted 23 December 2011 - 11:03 AM

QUOTE (Arejai @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 10:59)
QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 18:56)
I feel stupid but how do i make missions inside hidden interiors without making me fall in heaven when i play it? sad.gif
Help please, I need it. sad.gif

Wow.. what a glitch

well, stupid glitch, it wastes my time, i have to go out and make the mission too, i made a huge mission played it, BLAM! its gone. Now I have to remake it,
but please someone give a solution. sad.gif

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#7

Posted 23 December 2011 - 04:57 PM

Uploaded missions -
a good start, a good meet
Bar War
Death that changed my life


These missions were all supposed to be in one mission but due to a glitch.....
The next missions will be action-packed and will be large!
Anyways enjoy

Please give me feedback to improve

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#8

Posted 23 December 2011 - 05:02 PM

About that glitch that the player is falling because the interior become unsolid
It is because you didn't spawn the actor player in the same interior with the cutscene
So make the player spawn somewhere in the interior. It should work

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#9

Posted 23 December 2011 - 05:07 PM

QUOTE (alifjenius @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 17:02)
About that glitch that the player is falling because the interior become unsolid
It is because you didn't spawn the actor player in the same interior with the cutscene
So make the player spawn somewhere in the interior. It should work

i know how to teleport an actor(thats what I do) into an interior but spawning........... I don't know.
When i make a mission inside an interior alone, it works but when i put half mission outside and half inside, i fall down sad.gif

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#10

Posted 23 December 2011 - 05:14 PM

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Saturday, Dec 24 2011, 00:07)
When i make a mission inside an interior alone, it works but when i put half mission outside and half inside, i fall down sad.gif

If you do that, then spawn the player actor inside the interior you want. Not on the outside

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#11

Posted 23 December 2011 - 05:18 PM

ok i get it
thanks a lot alif biggrin.gif
very helpful

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#12

Posted 24 December 2011 - 07:00 AM

released the mission -
Funeral of death

Enjoy
I will add the next mission shortly
Enjoy biggrin.gif
Give me feedback to improve friends.
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#13

Posted 24 December 2011 - 08:37 AM

released the mission -

knock on the door, blast on the lawn

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it contains one whole rampage
don't go by the screenshot- it depicts the action inside the house,
Enjoy
Give me feedback to improve guys.

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#14

Posted 24 December 2011 - 11:30 AM

check out the new Logos I made them myself biggrin.gif
how are they?

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#15

Posted 28 December 2011 - 01:36 PM

Added new mission -
to Mt.Chiliad

Chapter 1 Completed!

Added missions for a new chapter
Chapter 2 : Beginning to rise
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for control
for annoyance
They're back for us
The lure

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#16

Posted 28 December 2011 - 01:38 PM Edited by abishai.kochara, 28 December 2011 - 01:42 PM.

Added .zip file of

Chapter 1 : The Thing that changed my life

STATUS Completed!

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(P.S actually I don't know how but due to something the above post was repeated here so I edited this post when I remembered i forgot to add the link of .zip file)

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Posted 29 December 2011 - 08:31 AM

lol, Gorgonits. Hate much?

Already finished? Cool, gonna play them.

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#18

Posted 29 December 2011 - 09:09 AM

QUOTE (SatournFan @ Thursday, Dec 29 2011, 08:31)
lol, Gorgonits. Hate much?

Already finished? Cool, gonna play them.

haha... lol.gif
those missions were the dumbest, the gorgonits face us with such stupid weapons.... lol.gif
it all just gets amazing, a fist fight, a fight in which you have to use their weapons.
I got that name by just looking at them.... lol.gif
Anyways enjoy. Thanks for playing

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#19

Posted 29 December 2011 - 09:39 AM

QUOTE (Arejai @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 10:59)
QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 18:56)
I feel stupid but how do i make missions inside hidden interiors without making me fall in heaven when i play it? sad.gif
Help please, I need it. sad.gif

Wow.. what a glitch

I advice you to put some objects bellow the floor of the interrior, this will make the ground solid wink.gif

Good Luck

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#20

Posted 29 December 2011 - 09:43 AM

QUOTE (Rytuklis @ Thursday, Dec 29 2011, 09:39)
QUOTE (Arejai @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 10:59)
QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 18:56)
I feel stupid but how do i make missions inside hidden interiors without making me fall in heaven when i play it? sad.gif
Help please, I need it. sad.gif

Wow.. what a glitch

I advice you to put some objects bellow the floor of the interrior, this will make the ground solid wink.gif

Good Luck

thanks a lot, that will help me a lot as I have a few missions coming up that are in interiors.
Thanks biggrin.gif

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#21

Posted 29 December 2011 - 01:30 PM Edited by abishai.kochara, 04 January 2012 - 04:05 PM.

Released the following missions, enjoy!

order of blood
Aha! San Escapado, the chase begins
San Escapado, a grand escape


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#22

Posted 29 December 2011 - 01:37 PM

well, guys i forgot to add a mission to the .zip file of chapter 1, so I've repaired it made everything proper, renamed, etc, etc

This is the correct file-
Chapter 1 : The Thing that started it All- STATUS COMPLETE


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#23

Posted 30 December 2011 - 02:51 AM

That glitch about interiors. You mean, actors fell down while cutscenes went? If yes, then you need to put a player inside the interior, so they won't fall.

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#24

Posted 30 December 2011 - 04:06 AM

QUOTE (SatournFan @ Friday, Dec 30 2011, 02:51)
That glitch about interiors. You mean, actors fell down while cutscenes went? If yes, then you need to put a player inside the interior, so they won't fall.

ok, thanks a lot

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#25

Posted 31 December 2011 - 07:52 AM

I've played the 1st chapter. The story is ok. But, the presentation. The subtitle. It's something weird. Hard to read and hard to understand. confused.gif

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#26

Posted 31 December 2011 - 07:59 AM

QUOTE (Arejai @ Saturday, Dec 31 2011, 07:52)
I've played the 1st chapter. The story is ok. But, the presentation. The subtitle. It's something weird. Hard to read and hard to understand. confused.gif

well read the characters, Abishai Kochara (AK)
Dipesh Suvarna (DS)
thats how it works, just read the character section!
thanks for playing, any more feedback to improve and on action?

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Posted 31 December 2011 - 08:11 AM

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Saturday, Dec 31 2011, 15:59)
QUOTE (Arejai @ Saturday, Dec 31 2011, 07:52)
I've played the 1st chapter. The story is ok. But, the presentation. The subtitle. It's something weird. Hard to read and hard to understand.  confused.gif

well read the characters, Abishai Kochara (AK)
Dipesh Suvarna (DS)
thats how it works, just read the character section!
thanks for playing, any more feedback to improve and on action?

One more.. if you want to make two actors talking in one cutscene, make it a bit longer like 5-8 seconds. icon14.gif

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#28

Posted 02 January 2012 - 01:32 PM

Added the missions -

Parking lot struggle

Chapter 2 : Status : Completed!

Chapter 3 : The Deathride
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The struggle continues
A lead to last
The 4 dragons have arrived

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#29

Posted 04 January 2012 - 03:53 PM Edited by abishai.kochara, 04 January 2012 - 04:07 PM.

Added:

Neatly planned assasination
Attack on general ding's 'base'
THE ESCAPE

Chapter 3 : Status : COMPLETED

8 Miles COMPLETED

ENJOY!
GIVE FEEDBACK!


EDIT : In the last mission press AEZAKMI as soon as you reach the airport, sorry for the bug
Enjoy


Added .zip file of chapter 2 & chapter 3

Chapter 2 : Beggining to rise
Chapter 3 : The Deathride


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#30

Posted 04 January 2012 - 04:12 PM

8 MILES COMPLETED!

added .zip file of the whole game!

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