San Fierro Burglars
Posted 15 December 2011 - 08:41 AM Edited by john12, 30 December 2011 - 06:50 AM.
This is- by John12.
I will use the Logo of UNRATED and Headers of Narcis. Sorry Grope_4_That day, i won't use it for now.
You are Zero living in San Fierro. Your life is pleasent but you have some problems. You girlfriend left you because of your enemy, Berkly. One night, your house get's burglared and you go to Burglary Corporation. You join them in burglary but Berkly has also set up a Burglary. It's time to see who get's money and Klye!
Zero- He is really smart enough and his IQ is 376.5577. He doen't use a gun but learns the art of guns. He is the Main Character. He has a problem with Berkly.
Cheetah- Zero's favourite blue cheetah. It drives and jumps fast but get's destroyed easily.
Klye- She was the girlfriend of Zero but left him. Berkly was responsible for the break-up.
Berkly- He is really interested in creating things and robbing items. He was forced to leave SA in 1992 but returned at 1995. He hates Zeor and want's to destroy him.
Justin (not Justin Bebear )- He looks like a clown but he is the leader of Burglary. He has a huge area in Doherty. The area where people filled the form is now under Berkly's control.
Gaurds- They protect the Corporation from any harm. They are friendly.
Workers- Actually they don't work but burglar people's house.
Alen Winks- He was a worker in B.C. (Burglary Corporation) and was patner of Berkly in earning money but Berkly killed him and took the Form filling's building's key.
Rick- He is your patner in burglaring. He Respect you and disrespect you. Don't know why...
Triads- Born to be dark. There are many of them and they are your and Rick's Friend.
Cops- They roam around and try to find out what's going on.
Gay- The word says everything .
Da Nang Boys (DNB)- These are Rick's enemy aswell as Triads. They are really strong. They deal with Barbars.
Barbers- They have top grade drugs. They are all around SA.
More coming soon
1. Burglary is my Passion
2. Ocean Drive
3. Lurk is Jurk
4. Dark is the Source
5. Act upon 69 - Part 1
6. Act upon 69 - Part 2
7. A Night with no wonder...
8. A day beating night
* Chapter 1
1. THE CRASH!!! is on hold because of lack of ideas. But i will continue it too.
2. Please give feedbacks for every mission.
3. This is a Burglary Mission pack so I guess no one has ever made it.
Posted 15 December 2011 - 08:42 AM Edited by -S-hark21, 15 December 2011 - 12:55 PM.
Posted 15 December 2011 - 08:42 AM Edited by john12, 20 December 2011 - 11:39 AM.
Credit for the pic goes to me.
Credit for making the Trailer goes to -S-Hark21.
More to Come
Posted 15 December 2011 - 08:44 AM Edited by john12, 30 December 2011 - 04:12 AM.
I will ask questions based on the missions-
1. What do you think how did Berkly came?
2. Why is Rick like that? Why does he like and dislike you both?
3. What is Shining Lighter?
4. What do you think their research would be?
5. Triad was dead. Is something related with Rick?
6. What were the Gays doing (Heatseeker and Dildo)?
7. Why was Rick taking the weed?
8. How do you think cops escaped?
More Questions Coming soon You can answer them anytime.
Here I will put the News what will happen next.
|Time for 2nd chapter.|
2. Dutchy3010 and PatrickW
3. GFX Team
3. All the supporters
4. And you (points at you)
Thanks and Have Fun
Posted 15 December 2011 - 09:08 AM Edited by -S-hark21, 15 December 2011 - 09:14 AM.
About feedbacks here it is.
Eventhough it's a starter mission, we already in a gunfight
But still, it's awesome! The cutscene, the talk, the story , the car.
By the way, you should make some car locked.
Because the van are usable because it din't been locked
And for answer the questions
1. What do you think how did Berkly come?
No idea but I think I got one, I think Berkly came with his friend in the first cutscene after some burglar.
Hope you forgive me John12
Sorry for the post
Posted 15 December 2011 - 09:11 AM
|[center]Continue from down.[/center]|
Thanks for the feedback and i will look after it. The Headshots were on
Posted 15 December 2011 - 12:06 PM
And, congrats on your over 1,000 posts
Posted 15 December 2011 - 12:12 PM
Link at the main post.
Tip:There aren't any case or something but there are invisibe checkpoints which you need to find and cross. Good Luck
@Notna: Thanks. My 1000th post was on Community Survey topic .
Posted 15 December 2011 - 12:31 PM
You have so nyan avatar. Ooooh!
Gonna try these missions. Good luck.
Posted 15 December 2011 - 12:47 PM
Not today but tomorrow. Now i will wait for feedbacks.
This theme is really easy and able theme in which we can make many missions.
I saw that the title and the topic title is different .
Posted 15 December 2011 - 03:00 PM
The mission was easy but sometimes when I want to assassinate them with a knife,
They were looking at me. So I gotta to kill them using my silenced.
Don't know why that happen, I guess it's a bug.
And also after the police know we were stealing,
You should make the time limit to 0. Cause they already we were stealing.
But still, awesome mission and keep it up!
Question no. 2 :
My answer will be no idea
Posted 15 December 2011 - 03:06 PM
Thanks for the feedback
Posted 16 December 2011 - 07:16 AM
I guess there might be bugs so report. Thanks!
Tip: Don't try to mess around just take care of the traffic and you will do fine
Next mission on the way
Posted 16 December 2011 - 07:53 AM Edited by -S-hark21, 16 December 2011 - 08:03 AM.
Here's my feedback :
There are some spelling mistake but still understandable
And also that mission was more easy than the other one
But still, this is so awesome ! I think this will be my favorite mission pack
Posted 16 December 2011 - 08:57 AM
My school is on holiday because our principal was insulted. Politics were doing wrong.
Respect of our principal was down and our teachers couldn't bear it and thrashed them. Well done, my teachers
Ok, it was off-topic
Posted 16 December 2011 - 04:05 PM Edited by Darkseller63, 19 December 2011 - 02:04 PM.
Gonna play your missions and give feedback!
Posted 16 December 2011 - 05:59 PM
What can I say? The idea is very cool, but there are some spellings in the dialogues, but don't mind on that.
Great work! Keep it up!
Posted 17 December 2011 - 08:05 AM
Posted 17 December 2011 - 09:22 AM
Link at the main post
Tip: You must open the parachute ASAP, good Luck ]
@K6: Thanks, buddy. This will be over soon.
Posted 17 December 2011 - 10:19 AM
It has two parts and it will continue.
So, stay tuned
Posted 17 December 2011 - 11:21 AM
I forgot to say that please activate Cinematic Camara View for better chase
C'mon guys, be more active and don't stay still. I am Double-posting but it is an update.
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