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Nitesh002
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#121

Posted 04 February 2012 - 08:25 AM

Played and enjoyed chapter 1.

Your gameplay is good. I think the difficulty of the missions was also good. Not too hard, not too easy. Although some were very easy.

But you should also focus more on the story. All the events that happened so far looks completely random. For example, why kill Pippie? So far there is no main story that I could figure out. No main antagonist, no conflict. They looked like side missions. I think that's the only negative, I noticed in the missions.

Going to play the next chapter after it's complete.

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Posted 04 February 2012 - 08:50 AM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Saturday, Feb 4 2012, 19:25)
Played and enjoyed chapter 1.

Your gameplay is good. I think the difficulty of the missions was also good. Not too hard, not too easy. Although some were very easy.

But you should also focus more on the story. All the events that happened so far looks completely random. For example, why kill Pippie? So far there is no main story that I could figure out. No main antagonist, no conflict. They looked like side missions. I think that's the only negative, I noticed in the missions.

Going to play the next chapter after it's complete.

Thanks for the feedback Nitesh. I'm glad you liked it. About the random missions, they aren't so random.

Example...

Racing Against All Odds: Jamie asks Leroy if he wants money, Leroy replies yes, so he says there's a race

Q. Why you kill Pippie?
A. Pippie is a drug dealer, like 52. 52 wants him dead because of compition.

Q. Why no main antigonist or conflict?
A. Play the 2nd chapter and it will begin the conflict. It will reveal one of the antigonists, but the other one is yet to be completed.

I hope you liked it, and will continue... biggrin.gif

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#123

Posted 04 February 2012 - 09:09 AM

Oh ok. Thanks for clearing that up.

I will start chapter 2 after you complete it. I assume, only one mission to go, ya?

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Posted 04 February 2012 - 09:38 AM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Saturday, Feb 4 2012, 20:09)
Oh ok. Thanks for clearing that up.

I will start chapter 2 after you complete it. I assume, only one mission to go, ya?

Yeah, thanks Nitesh. If you have anything else you need to clear up, let me know.

Yeah, one mission left, maybe? I don't know when it will be released, maybe a week or 2. I'm sort of on a small brake from designing at the moment. I am currently playing Minecraft and Age of Empires 2. Trust me, I'll be back designing in no time.

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Posted 07 February 2012 - 10:15 AM Edited by abishai.kochara, 07 February 2012 - 10:18 AM.

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#126

Posted 07 February 2012 - 05:24 PM

I like chapter 1.
But can you make a .zip file of chapter 2 so I can continue without downloading 'em one by one.

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#127

Posted 08 February 2012 - 10:17 AM

QUOTE (ThaBoY @ Wednesday, Feb 8 2012, 04:24)
I like chapter 1.
But can you make a .zip file of chapter 2 so I can continue without downloading 'em one by one.

Thanks, but the chapter is not completed. I will upload it oncethe chapter is done.

@Abishai

Thanks alot! biggrin.gif

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#128

Posted 08 February 2012 - 11:22 AM

Any news about the last mission of chapter 2? Or few spoilers? smile.gif

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#129

Posted 08 February 2012 - 11:45 AM

Oh, I thought it was finished blush.gif
Then I 'll just download 'em one by one I 'll give you feedback when I played all the missions

Anyway,
Nice missions and keep it up smile.gif

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#130

Posted 08 February 2012 - 03:29 PM

Damn dude.... forgot to give feedback.... so here we go....

Played the missions and enjoyed them, I skipped two missions and I hope that doesn't fire you up, one was where we find the clues and the other was 'Judge Barry'.
The missions were really cool and I enjoyed playing them, I felt really different while playing them, the missions offer
a lot of gameplay and they're fun, really great job on the missions, you probably did a lot of hardwork,
I love the way you use the surroundings and blend them with the missions. Good job altogether and I know you'll do better, really, the missions are good, make 'em excellent. Good job!

G o o d w o r k a n d g o o d l u c k!

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#131

Posted 17 February 2012 - 05:59 AM

@Abishai
Thanks for the feedback, bro. biggrin.gif

@ThaBoY
Sorry, I might have the next mission done soon.

@NothingSpecial
I have sort of thought an idea on the next mission. smile.gif

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#132

Posted 15 March 2012 - 09:49 AM

Update:
Just edited the story. The story was not very interesting, so I edited it a bit. Even though the missions are a lot better, I thought the topic had to look okay. smile.gif

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#133

Posted 28 March 2012 - 08:56 AM

Finally, I'm back. I got DYOM working earlier today and I whipped up a short and sweet mission.

Here it is:
http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18121

The mission is called Drug Farm. It's my first mission in 74 days. So I hope you enjoy it. smile.gif

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Posted 29 March 2012 - 10:24 AM

Glad your DYOM is finally working! icon14.gif I'll play the mission now, but the feedbacks will a bit late, cuz I'm busy with my mp now. Anyway, good luck!

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Posted 29 March 2012 - 10:34 AM

QUOTE (NothingSpecial @ Thursday, Mar 29 2012, 21:24)
Glad your DYOM is finally working! icon14.gif I'll play the mission now, but the feedbacks will a bit late, cuz I'm busy with my mp now. Anyway, good luck!

Glad you noticed the update. Thanks NS. I will really appreciate that, if you give some feedback. I have to play alot of missions to catch up with what I missed, including your MP. Anyway, thanks. smile.gif

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Posted 29 March 2012 - 11:39 AM

Man, I can't tell how glad I am to see you back. I'll try to find some time to try the new mission.

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Posted 30 March 2012 - 11:29 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Thursday, Mar 29 2012, 22:39)
Man, I can't tell how glad I am to see you back. I'll try to find some time to try the new mission.

WOW! Thanks Notna. That's great. Well I noticed you brought out another MP yourself, so I'll have to try that sometime soon. Also, it's the start of my school holidays. So expect some more missions soon. smile.gif

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Posted 31 March 2012 - 02:55 AM Edited by shiva s, 31 March 2012 - 04:42 AM.

Your DYOM is working? Well, that's a good news, mate. Glad to see you back in designing.
Btw, I've finished the first half of TSoLK. Waiting for more.

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#139

Posted 31 March 2012 - 03:13 AM

shiva, it's "your", not "you're".

Anyway, glad to see you back, Karzy. I wish you good luck in ending this. Gonna play it when I'll have time.

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Posted 31 March 2012 - 03:28 AM

@Shiva
Yeah, I finally found something to make CLEO work. Anyway, thanks man. Hope you enjoy it.

@SatournFan
Thanks man. I really appreciate that. smile.gif

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Posted 31 March 2012 - 04:45 AM

Thanks for pointing out, Satourn Fan. I'm still learning some better english.

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Posted 31 March 2012 - 04:48 AM Edited by shiva s, 31 March 2012 - 12:26 PM.

Sorry for my double post. I have no idea how it occured. It is due to my net problem

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#143

Posted 31 March 2012 - 12:17 PM

@shiva: Ouch. Double post.

I've played the last mission of chapter 2.

First time I played it, I failed because the time runs out before I reached the checkpoint at the farm. 1 minute, are you kidding me? mercie_blink.gif
Second try. I reached the checkpoint just in time. But I forgot my gun is at the hotel, and the russian mafia killed me quickly as I rushed into the gunfight.
The last try. Picked the gun and killed all the russians. Then bring Collin home.

I saw only one error here. When Leroy arrived at 52's house, Collin phoned Leroy. But Leroy didn't hold his phone, and the rest of conversation made him looks like he talked to himself. I'm LOL'd. lol.gif

Overal the mission was good and I give it 4/5

Can't wait for next missions.


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Posted 31 March 2012 - 12:27 PM

QUOTE (NothingSpecial @ Saturday, Mar 31 2012, 23:17)
@shiva: Ouch. Double post.

I've played the last mission of chapter 2.

First time I played it, I failed because the time runs out before I reached the checkpoint at the farm. 1 minute, are you kidding me? mercie_blink.gif
Second try. I reached the checkpoint just in time. But I forgot my gun is at the hotel, and the russian mafia killed me quickly as I rushed into the gunfight.
The last try. Picked the gun and killed all the russians. Then bring Collin home.

I saw only one error here. When Leroy arrived at 52's house, Collin phoned Leroy. But Leroy didn't hold his phone, and the rest of conversation made him looks like he talked to himself. I'm LOL'd. lol.gif

Overal the mission was good and I give it 4/5

Can't wait for next missions.

Thanks Man smile.gif

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Posted 31 March 2012 - 12:28 PM

Thanks, NS.
I wanna apologise for the double posts. It occured due to my net problem. Sorry once again.

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Posted 31 March 2012 - 12:33 PM

QUOTE (shiva s @ Saturday, Mar 31 2012, 12:28)
Thanks, NS.
I wanna apologise for the double posts. It occured due to my net problem. Sorry once again.

Nah, that's okay. I'm happy to remind someone about their accidental fatality. wink.gif




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