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#1

Posted 19 November 2011 - 01:41 PM Edited by KaRzY6, 04 December 2011 - 06:47 AM.

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Status - Work In Progress

user posted imageYes, this is apart of the series 'Superstar Baseballer' set one year earlier. Dustin is a minor character in Superstar Baseballer.
Superstar Baseballer Series:
  • Superstar Baseballer (1996) - Josh Carr
  • O.C Snake Story (1997) - Lawrance Flower
  • Creek Banditos (1995) - Dustin Reffroy
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This mission-pack is based in the year 1995, and the protagonist, Dustin Reffroy. Who is the leader of small Las Venturas gang, The Creek Banditos. Him and bestfriend O.C Snake, are on a mission to make the Banditos a top gang in Las Venturas. Make them a city-wide gang, not just a small section gang. They make many new friends on their journey, but too many enemies!

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Picture Name Age Description Status
---Major Characters-
user posted imageDustin Reffroy27He is the leader of small Las Venturas gang, the Creek Banditos.The Protagonist
user posted imageLawrance 'O.C Snake' Flower29Snake is a high and very respected member of the Creek Bandito. He is also Dustin's bestfriend.Friendly
user posted imageMark 'Buffalo' Harris32Buffalo is apart of the gang, Green Devils. He is the leader of a set in Roca Escolante.Enemy
user posted imageJoey Borrelli27Joey is the son of Leon Borrelli, the leader of the Borrelli Family Mafia. Joey owns the Four Dragons Casino.Enemy
user posted imageMystery Man???Do you think you know who it is. Guess who he/she is by posting on the topic biggrin.gif ???
---Minor Characters-
user posted imageJacob Flower26Jacob is O.C Snake's brother, He lives with his mother
(???) and brother(Luke) in Grove Street, Los Santos. But owns a waste pipe company, east of Creek, Las Venturas. So he is in Las Venturas very often.
Friendly
user posted imageFrank Heppell25Frank is a police officer from the LSPD. But got sent to Fort Carson for a training program. Frank is a friend of the mystery manNeutral/Friendly
user posted imageLeon Borrelli48Leon is the leader of the Borrelli Family Mafia. He owns a mansion of the Los Santos Hills and owns 2 casinos in Las Ventarus. He also brought Joey the Four Dragons Casino as his son's, Joey 25th birthday gift. He also has a place in Chinatown, San Fierro.Enemy
user posted imageJordan Paige24Jordan is the bartender at the Lil' Grobe Inn, just outside Fort Carson.Friendly

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Play the mission in order, to get the storyline.

# Name Quick Description Find It
- - Chapter 1: The Beginning -
1IntroductionDustin and O.C Snake attack a Green Devil's set in Roca Escolante.Link
2Buffalo's RevengeAfter the Banditos quick attack on the Green Devils. Buffalo wants revenge.Link
3Gun And SuppliesTo rise to the top, you need guns and other supplies.Link
4Help A Brother OutAfter you store the helicopter at Jacob's waste pipe. The army find it.Link
5Plane ToubleOC Snake gets in some trouble with the Borrelli Family Mafia. They have him hostage on a plane to Liberty City, You have to save him.Link
6Borrelli Family MafiaAfter the plane trouble, OC Snake tells you about the 'Borrelli Family Mafia'. So you go show them they don't mess with the Banditos.Link
- - Chapter 2: Mystery Man -
7Big Ear BusinessA mystery man calls you to go to the Lil' Probe Inn. He leaves a note there. You read it and do what he says.Link
- - Chapter 3: The Rise -
- - Chapter 4: The Fall -
Chapter Link
Chapter 1 Here
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  • KaRzY6 - Designer and writter.
  • Juan-R - Made the logo and headers.
  • Dutchy3010 - Made DYOM.
  • PatrickW - Made DYOM.
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Posted 19 November 2011 - 01:51 PM

You know what I like from your missions ? The universe. All your missions pack (with an exception of AGH69, though it still fit with the universe) shared the same universe. Now you have made 3 missions pack (if I'm not wrong) that shared the same universe ! Keep it up, Karzy. You know, I planned the similiar ways like your a lot of time ago, but you beat me up first tounge.gif

Keep up the good work, 'kay ?

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Posted 19 November 2011 - 02:00 PM Edited by KaRzY6, 04 December 2011 - 07:31 AM.

Thanks alifjenius, much appreciated. biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

Intro will be completed tomorrow.

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Posted 20 November 2011 - 05:25 AM

Damn, I read "best friend" in OC Snake's description as boyfriend, lol biggrin.gif

I see, second spin-off for Superstar Baseballer, eh? Gonna play it for sure.

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Posted 20 November 2011 - 05:28 AM Edited by KaRzY6, 20 November 2011 - 05:37 AM.

Thanks SatournFan biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

Progress Updated
Intro added.

There's a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but you will get what it says.

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Posted 20 November 2011 - 06:04 AM

Just played the Intro. It was cool, but you still need to learn English. No offense, but I think that I know English better. biggrin.gif

And that time challenge was a real challenge. Good start! icon14.gif

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Posted 20 November 2011 - 06:15 AM

Thanks bro biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

Well i'm 100% english. I know no other language besides about 10 words in french. But I hate typing on DYOM. When you press the keys sometimes, the letters don't even come up. confused.gif

Anyway, thanks for playing. Stay tuned, might have the next mission up in about 2 hours or so. Depends how busy i am. biggrin.gif


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Posted 20 November 2011 - 06:33 AM

My lord, you are a special desginer from now on to me. What a guy, never quits making missions. I'm definatly gonna play this. icon14.gif x7

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Posted 20 November 2011 - 06:38 AM

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Sunday, Nov 20 2011, 17:33)
My lord, you are a special desginer from now on to me. What a guy, never quits making missions. I'm definatly gonna play this. icon14.gif x7

Thanks bro. Hope you enjoy. biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

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To everyone that doesn't get how 'Superstar Baseballer' and this are connected. In Superstar Baseballer, It says in the character section that O.C Snake use to be in the Creek Banditos and Dustin Reffroy was the leader of them. Dustin is featured in the mission 'O.C Snake' and he gets killed by Josh Carr and O.C Snake.

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Posted 20 November 2011 - 06:46 AM

So, Dustin betrayed them or got btetrayed? Very interesting turn here.

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Posted 20 November 2011 - 06:57 AM

Well, O.C Snake leaves the gang. Then in the mission O.C Snake of 'Superstar Baseballer'. Josh and Snake want info about Lee Poky but Dustin tells them nothing and sends homies onto them. Then they chase Dustin and kill him.

So a bit of both.

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Posted 20 November 2011 - 09:28 AM

Progress Updated

Mission 1 added.

Buffalo's Revenge - Link

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Posted 20 November 2011 - 09:22 PM

Played them both, loved them! Only flaw, some grammar mistakes between cutscenes. Other than that, excellent!
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Posted 21 November 2011 - 05:24 AM

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Monday, Nov 21 2011, 08:22)
Played them both, loved them! Only flaw, some grammar mistakes between cutscenes. Other than that, excellent!
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Awesome as, Thanks Juan-R biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 05:31 AM

OMG, finally, someone is alive on this section today! I've been online for 6 hours straight and not 1 person besides me was in this section. Can't wait for the 3rd mission biggrin.gif

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 05:39 AM

Hehe biggrin.gif Might have the next mission out in a few hours. Depend s how busy i am. smile.gif

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 08:53 AM

Played it.

Easy one, piece 'a cake. Make them lonegr and harder, please. And also, to add difficulty, make enemies with headshot OFF, 'kay?

Good one, keep it up! biggrin.gif

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 08:55 AM

Thanks bro, biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

Well, i'm making the 3rd mission now. Which shall be more difficult.

Might be done in half-an-hour. biggrin.gif

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 10:01 AM

Progress Updated

Mission 2 added

Name - Guns and supplies
Link - Here

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 12:04 PM

Damn, man. You have been here just a month, and you have already 4 mission packs. I've been designing missions for 7 months and I have 3 mission packs. Man, damn biggrin.gif But yeah, I'll try this out for sure, good luck icon14.gif

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 03:29 PM

I'ma play the 2nd mission tounge.gif

Tip: I usually make enemies with headshot off and with 250 HP. That way, it adds diffuculty and length to the shootouts/enemy killing.

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Posted 22 November 2011 - 06:30 AM

Played it, loved it, waiting for more icon14.gif

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Posted 22 November 2011 - 07:23 AM

QUOTE (Exekucnak @ Tuesday, Nov 22 2011, 17:30)
Played it, loved it, waiting for more icon14.gif

Thanks bro, glad you liked it. Next mission will be uploaded by today or tomorrow. biggrin.gif

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Posted 23 November 2011 - 08:19 AM

Topic Updated

Logo - Thanks to Juan-R, i have a great looking logo. Thanks bro, much appreciated. biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

Info
  • I added Juan-R to the Credits.
  • Characters table a bit fixed up.
  • And just a couple of other stuff.

P.S The next mission will be added today or tomorrow.

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Posted 24 November 2011 - 06:15 AM

When's the mission gonna come out? Not rushing you or anything ^^ but forums have been pretty boring now a days.

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Posted 24 November 2011 - 06:40 AM

Hehe, maybe tonight if i can be bothered. I've done the first few cutscenes, hehe biggrin.gif

And yeah, DYOM is so boring at the moment. Nothing is happening, 'ay bro. confused.gif

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Posted 24 November 2011 - 10:27 AM

3rd mission added.

Help a brother out - Link

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Posted 24 November 2011 - 11:04 AM

Sorry, didn't see the mission pack or else you would also heard news from me too bro smile.gif

will play tomorrow and comment about it. ok? biggrin.gif

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Posted 24 November 2011 - 11:08 AM

Thanks bro biggrin.gif

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Posted 24 November 2011 - 11:14 AM

Doesn't matter. biggrin.gif
The story lookes promising.
I don't want to overwrite my mission and so downloaded only 1st mission, sorry sad.gif
Is 1st mission is good? confused.gif




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