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Posted 14 November 2011 - 07:28 PM Edited by Notna, 08 April 2012 - 09:23 AM.

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Matthew Roudy is a normal 30 years old man. He wanted to live a peaceful life with his brother Steven, who lives in Bayside.
After moving to Bayside, Matt realises that in reality Steve is not a electronics salesman. Actually, he's the leader of a group of thiefs in Bayside.
Matt is forced to join the group, though he just wanted to leave his criminal life behind and live clean. Matt founds out more and more about the secrets in
Bayside and encounters many enemies and friends on his journey.

Characters

Matthew Roudy
First met: A new life
Matthew is 30 years old and he's Steven's little brother. Before he was a criminal, but he wanted to leave the crime life and thought that moving to Bayside would change it. He thought that Steve had found a new life as a electronics salesman, however, Matt founds out that in reality Steve is a crime boss and a leader of a criminal organisation.

Steven Roudy
First met: A new life
Steve is Matt's big brother. He lives in Bayside and is a crime boss, who leads one of the biggest crime families in San Andreas. Matt doesn't know it but Steve forces him to join. Steve is mean and cruel and doesn't care about anyone, only one he cares is himself.

Alan Doop
First met: Giving the shot
Alan is a member of Steve's organisation. Once he was Steve's best friend but he didn't want to be a criminal, so Steve forced him to join his thief ring just like he forced Matt 3 years later. Alan doesn't like Steve's attitude anymore and would like to get rid of him.

William Langley
First met: Officer Langley
William is a cop who works in Bayside to capture Steve and end his business. Once he made a big mistake by uploading top secret files to the internet and the only way for him to keep his job is to stop Steve.

Missions

Introduction

Mission 1. - A new life - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15501
Mission 2. - Giving the shot - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15507
Mission 3. - Officer Langley - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15522

Work In Progress
Finished

Episode 1 - Getting used
Chapter 1 - Business gets bigger

1. Apartment finding
2. Business enlargement
3. El Quebrados

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Posted 14 November 2011 - 07:41 PM

Nice idea, I was thinking about making a Bayside storyline too, looking forward to this icon14.gif

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Posted 14 November 2011 - 07:45 PM

Thanks man, stay tuned for more missions! biggrin.gif

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Posted 14 November 2011 - 07:51 PM

Good luck with the mission pack. icon14.gif

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Posted 14 November 2011 - 07:52 PM

Thanks Nitesh, leave me feedback if you try it out wink.gif

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Posted 14 November 2011 - 10:18 PM

Wow, nice story. Good luck with this. How many missions will be in this missions pack ?

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Posted 14 November 2011 - 10:36 PM

Lookin forward into this,Notna!Goodluck biggrin.gif

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 06:24 AM

@Alifjenius Thanks man. I am thinking about doing 2 chapters, so that means 16 missions.
@ItsAllAboutGTA Thanks man. Great to see new players for my mission packs.

Both, be sure to stay tuned for more missions! biggrin.gif

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 06:32 AM

Very nice mission Notna. I'm looking forward to the rest of the mission-pack. I'll review the every mission smile.gif

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 06:40 AM

Thanks man. Great you are doing the reviews, it's much appreciated.

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 07:00 AM

QUOTE (Notna @ Tuesday, Nov 15 2011, 17:40)
Thanks man. Great you are doing the reviews, it's much appreciated.

No problem bro, Doing video reviews about this series to, because i also needed a mission-pack to do for that too. Your mission-pack will be very well advertised, and i'm sure everyone will love the missions. biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 07:10 AM

Great story, bro. I'll play this mission and tell you what I think after I rest a bit. Good luck!

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 07:23 AM

Thanks man, I am uploading a new mission in few minutes. Waiting for your feedback smile.gif

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 07:28 AM

UPDATE: 2nd mission released. Click this link to download it: click here. Play, enjoy and give me feedback! biggrin.gif

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 10:54 AM

Very good! Missions in bayside are cool! Creat more! Thanks.

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Posted 15 November 2011 - 11:00 AM

Thanks man. Maybe I'll get time to make an another mission today.

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 10:22 AM

Hey Notna, just finished playing the second mission, and it was awesome. biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

But i'll wait till there is 2 missions, before i do the reviews, so when the 3rd mission comes out, i'll do it then. smile.gif

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 12:11 PM Edited by Notna, 16 November 2011 - 03:59 PM.

Alright then, I'll maybe do the 3rd mission today.

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 12:58 PM

Played the first two missions.

What I first noticed when I was downloading the missions is that they have around 30 objectives. However, the missions are quite good. This story has potential. However, just as an advice, in your future mission series you could make a larger/longer first/intro mission (around 60 objectives) if you know what I mean. That's what I like to do. However, that actually goes from designer to designer as what they like best, so.. If you like to have shorter intros, it's cool, but you can also try this in the future biggrin.gif

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 01:09 PM

Thanks man, much appreciated.

Well, I tried to make it longer, but I honestly didn't have an idea for longer intro.

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 04:01 PM

UPDATE: 3rd mission released. Click this link to download it: click here..
And I wanted to inform you, that always in my mission series, the first few missions are short, just like that. But the length will come longer as the story goes!

Play, enjoy and give me feedback! biggrin.gif

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 04:22 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Wednesday, Nov 16 2011, 16:01)
UPDATE: 3rd mission released. Click this link to download it: click here..
And I wanted to inform you, that always in my mission series, the first few missions are short, just like that. But the length will come longer as the story goes!

Play, enjoy and give me feedback! biggrin.gif

I played all 3 missions at once, when I started with number one, I was like "hmm, another missionpack", but then steven threatens his own brother, and I was like"wow, how interesting"
So now, I played them, and your english is even better then mine, I think, cut scenes were also interesting, but the missions could be longer...

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 04:27 PM

Thanks, man. It's much appreciated.

Well, as I said, my first few missions in all of my mission series, the missions are pretty short. But from now on, they will be longer. Stay tuned for more! biggrin.gif

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 07:27 PM

You caught Jimmy's style hehe.

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 07:29 PM

Thanks, man.

Well, I don't exactly know what you mean but yes, Jimmy is my idol in making missions so there may be some elements from him.

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 07:33 PM

QUOTE (Gorgonit @ Wednesday, Nov 16 2011, 19:27)
You caught Jimmy's style hehe.

If that is Jimmy's style, then I have "jimmy's style" too...

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Posted 16 November 2011 - 09:49 PM

Already played both of the missions.
Cool story, nice introduction... xD
Very good, keep up the nice work!
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Posted 17 November 2011 - 06:34 AM

Hey Notna,

did the review for missions 2 and 3. biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

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Posted 17 November 2011 - 06:40 AM

Thanks, I noticed that. Thanks again.

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Posted 19 November 2011 - 08:10 AM

Damn it, Put After Selected screwed the whole mission. Luckily, I am able to save it, but it will take some time.




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