This is- by John12
Thanks for the Title Alifjenius
Its Late 2011 and you play as Sam (a girl) from SF who gets her job in madd dogs mansion.
BUT, somebody wants Madd Dog and his Album burned- OG Loc!!!
You show his men and him that what girls can do with a bang on his face.
But still you get hurdles to cross, people to kill, go to danger zone.
Its so much fun with a girl action.
Sam Wellison- play as main character and loves its faggio. Loves John, who is boyfriend of her. She also loves her Sea Sparrow which was gifted by John. Has to face gangs problems and OG Loc and his Druglords.
Faggio- its Sam's vehicle which she loves a lot because its all proof. But unfortunatlly it explodes in mission 'Wheels on Heels'
Madd Dog- owns a big mansion in Mullholand and is shocked by Sam's enery. Rival- OG Loc. He left LS in tremour of OG Loc.
OG Loc- used to be a rapper but now just wants revange from Madd Dog. Rival- Madd Dog.
Paul- used to be a reporter of Grove Streert. Killed in mission 'Energy Shoot'.
The Mafias-A rich gang from Liberty City, but part of It are in LV. They hate Sam because she took their protection money.
The Agents/Crew-They are the members of the mansion and protect Madd Dog from media and OG Loc. Now they protect the Mansion and wait for Madd Dog come back.
The Media/Press-If any havoc has happened then they come in seconds and cause controversy. They hate Sam because she makes them disappear with her gun. Apper in TV and Advertisments.
The Grove St-They are in groups and were the biggest gang in 1992. Their reporter paul use to tell what and whom are ballas and vagos are making deal. They get upset in mission 'Wheels on Heels' thinking that Sam wanted to kill them.
Ron-He wears cock suit but he is really good in shooting and guns. Trains Sam about guns.
Alex-He is a car mechanic and fixer of machines. He fixed Madd Dog's Music Box and Sam's Machines.
John- boyfriend of Sam. Works in Pleasures Dome. Knowledgeable person who helps Sam in troubles. He knows that Joe isn't a good guy.
Tom-son hernandez and boss of Pleasures dome. Loves to burn things and drug lord of SF. Brother of Jake. Wants to kill Sam. Dies in mission' Wheels on Heels'
Max-boss of Mafias, seems to be kind but cruel person. Hates Sam because she always disturbs his plans.
The Emergency Team-These people don't serve the nation but kill everyone who comes in their path.
Sea Sparrow- gifted by John. Its again all proof and Sam gains belief that it will be good as her Faggio.
The Triads-born to be dark. Runs many sections in SA aswell as in Liberty City. They make deal with the Mafias but hate Sam because she disturbed their deals.
Joe-lives a life of misery in Las Venturas, but hope to defeat his enemies. Seems like he also loves Sam.
Jake-son of Pulaski and brother of Tom who likes to blow things. He left OG Loc but returned for revenge. Druglord of LS.
Toshi-boss of Triads but dies really quick. Dies and appears in mission 'Divided Roles'. He has a assitant called Soyana.
Soyana-assitant of Toshi, the boss of Triads but was left alone. What she is gonna do?
Cops-you can't escape from cops hands! There are three paries, one in LS, second in SF and third in LV. There are sheriffs for cuontrysides.
Criminals-They love to do crime and all but get tricked by some ungreatful basterds.
Plumbers-No one in the game was a plumber but made a cop a plumber as he was doing something with water tank.
MORE TO COME
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|Hi guys ! |
Today I'm going to review the missions 'To the Neighbour' and 'Felt for a drink' from the 'Crash !!!!!!!!!' series by john12
Now lets get on with the review,
Writing: Very Good. The dialogues are very clear and are to the point, they just flow with the script.
Presentation: Excellent. Even though this is john12's first mission he has done a really good job, the camera angles are perfect and are really good.
To the Neighbour
Length: Very Good. The mission will take a good 8 minutes, you play as Sam, a girl whose has just been employed. You go for training with Ron and after the training's completion, face a few of the mafia.
Difficulty: Medium. The mission is easy in the training part but the difficulty level rises at once after the mafia surprise attack on you but still, there are enough places in the surrounding which can be used for cover. Remember that Ron's presence can make it a little hard in case he gets shot.
Variety: Could be Better. There is one guy who is different than the rest which makes him look like the boss but the rest don't vary to much, also, their placing spoils it even more, all the mafia are placed in one place thus you can't help, but noticing the absence of variety.
Felt for a drink.
Length: Good. The mission will take only 5 minutes if you act quickly without doing any tom-foolery. You go to meet John, your boyfriend but Tom, the druglord of San Fierro uses this as an oppurtunity to eliminate Sam. You have to drive to the Pleasures Dome and then have a gunfight with Tom's goons.
Difficulty: Medium. The mission has you surrounded on all three sides by goons but you have an armor, a grenade and a Tec-9 beside you. If you kill the goons on one side quickly (I won't tell you which one) and save the armor till then, you should easily kill the rest.
Variety : Very Good. john12 did well in this, almost all the goons are different and even if they aren't you won't even notice it so there, its better than the first one.
Overall the missions were good, they had superior gameplay, a new plot and anything and everything else needed to call it an eye-catcher. If you're looking for something new with plenty of action these are just for you. Good work john12, keep it up and design more.
Review by abishai.kochara
Today, I'm going to review 2 missions of a DYOM mission series named The Crash!!! by john12, since he requested a review many times but none had enough freetime on their hands.
Here is the link to this mission series' thread: http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=492402.
Remember, this series is still being made and this is john12's first DYOM series. So be a critic to his series, but don't be as hard on him
Anyways, here's what I think about john12's mission series so far:
- Writing: Excellent. Although there are some grammar mistakes, the text is fully understandable.
- Presentation: Very Good. Nice cutscene angles and duration. The only fault is that the player uses too much capital letters and an excessive amount of "!"s, which may make it harder to understand at some points and it may disctract the player from being able to read the whole dialogue.
- Length: Very Good. The mission can be passed in around 8 - 9 minutes. You play as a woman named Sam Wellison. She is held by a Mafia in Caligula's Casino in Las Venturas. You must escape the Mafia and fly a News Chopper back to Madd Dogg's Mansion.
- Difficulty: Medium. There are a few enemies which carry 9mm Pistols and Uzis. The player uses a Knife to stealth kill a guard, but then you pick up his weapon which is a 9mm Pistol. The enemies have about 50 accuracy.
- Variety: Good. Since there are 2 sets of Mafia skins (both Russian and Italian mafia skins) which are set up around the basement of Caligula's Casino. There are also 2 reporters and many guards for Madd Dogg. They are animated which gives it a sense of humor as to what they're doing.
Wheels on Heels:
- Length: Excellent. The mission can be passed in around 10 - 13 minutes. Sam drives her Faggio to her home in Ganton where 2 Grove St. members can be found at. She gets her weapons but the Faggio blows up near the 2 GSF members. They think she was trying to kill them and they start attacking her. Later, 2 more GSF members come as back up. Sam take's her neighbor's car and drives to Blueberry Acres where OG Loc is supposed to be. She finds herself with 5 old friends. She fights with them and kills them.
- Difficulty: Hard. The fight with the Grove St. members was easy enough. They were equipped with 9mm Pistols and have about 50 -75 accuracy. The end is a boss fight so it is harder than most encounters throughout the mission series. The enemies are equiped with Molotovs, Snipers and some other weapons. They have about 75 - 100 accuracy. At some points, you'll be close to death, but the creator/designer provided an unlimited armor pick up for us so you'll have a bit of an advantage.
- Variety: Decent. The skins you'll see are all 3 GSF skins, a SFPD officer, a SWAT trooper, a DA skin and a Paramedic. You drive a Red Turismo. There is a large amount and variety of weapons seen in this mission.
In a Summary, john12 did an Excellent job. The difficulty of the missions can be easy but sometimes challenging. The designer gives us tools to make it easier for us, thanks. The 2nd mission was very enjoyable and entertaining to me. Don't give up, you'll become a well-known designer someday, your talented, kid. Make sure you all give this series a try, you won't regret it . This has been a DYOM mission review by Juan-R, thanks for reading, folks.
Review by Juan-R
|Hey guys, today I'm going to review the missions 'Prickful Pine' and 'Gravity Situation' from John12's mission pack 'Crash!!!'|
Ok now lets get to the review,
-Writing: Good. The dialogues and the instructions are crisp and clear, there are some grammer mistakes but otherwise everything's fine.
-Presentation: Excellent. john12 has done really well here, the camera angles are really good and make the game even better.
-Length: Excellent. It would take about 10 minutes to complete the mission if you don't do any tom-foolery, the mission mainly has a guy named alex taking you(sam) through Las Venturas and introducing you to the city. It also has two gunfight sequences so overall, its job well done.
-Difficulty: Hard. It has only two gunfight sequences with heach of the gunfights being equally hard. If you play patiently you'll win.
-Variety: Very Good. Its ok you don't even notice any similarities, the placements have been done well and this has made the mission very good.
-Length: Very Good. The mission would take about 7 minutes to complete, you are in Las Venturas and almost all the gangs are after you.
-Difficulty: Hard. The enemies have high HP's thus it becomes a little difficult and to add to our woes, the headshot is off.
-Variety: Very Good. There is enough variety to make the game be new, there are different type enemies and they have different type of weapons.
Overall the missions were cool, but the first mission was an exception. It mainly consisted of traveling which could have been avoided using the teleport or timeout buttons, but otherwise the missions were awesome and you should go for them.
Review by abishai.kochara
|Hi guys ! Well today i'm gonna review the missions 'love is blind' and 'saving for a rainy day' from john12's mission pack 'Crash!!!'|
Now lets get to the review.
-Writing: Very Good. As usual john12's done a good job here, some grammer mistakes are present and so are some spelling mistakes but in the end, the instructions and the dialogues are crystal clear.
-Presentation: Excellent. Again as usual john12's done a good job here. The camera angles are good and flow with the game.
'Love is Blind'
-Length: Very Good. Play the mission real quickly and you're bound to finish it in 7 minutes(john's renowned for making looooong missions), you go on a date with Joe but are ambushed by the mafia.....
-Difficulty: Hard. No armor, no food, no anything, just a silenced pistol, a boyfriend with a pump-action shotgun make an amazing, thrilling but hard mission, awesome gunfight and gameplay, the enemies again have high HP's and headshot off which need you to use your surroundings to complete the mission, Keep it up john12.
-Vareity: Good. The mafia's have 3-4 skins but their placements make them indistinguishable, they all have MP4's.
'Saving for a rainy day'
-Length: Excellent. The mission lasts for about um.... yeah, 10 minutes, you go to the second training centre and have a really dangerous 'dummy challenge training'(hey john man, are they really dummies or are they mummies?).
-Difficulty: Hard. The dummies have low accuracies and high HP's, so why have I given it the tag 'Hard', because on one of the levels you have to kill dummies who are driving cars, and that to in a parking lot, exciting, right? its just cool, this one is a must play. Awesome gameplay john12, you probably put in a lot of thinking.
-Vareity: Decent. The dummies are............ guess who........ CJ (Carl Johnson) ! Each of the level has a different type of dummies, like, throwing dummy, UZI dummy, Pistol dummy, etc.
Well, overall, this one was an entertainer, these missions are a must, you should play if you're looking for something new. Awesome missions john12 ! Keep 'em up and please keep the headshots off for realism.
Presentation: Excellent. As expected, beautiful cutscenes from john, good camera angles, they'll keep you glued!
Writing: Excellent No mistakes, all are proper and are clearly understandable, by this I mean crystal-clear.
Length: Good Well, took me about 5 minutes to complete, you play as Sam and along with a friend, wreak havoc in a construction site filled with goons(awesome gunfights)
Difficulty: Medium I failed just once(because of ignorance) but if you play properly using your surroundings you'll probably find it real easy.
Vareity: Decent Well there are the triads and mafias as the goons but their placements make them really indistinguishable, good job john! Good idea for the location of the mission.
Awesome mission john, as expected. Our friend with a minigun makes stuff(easy) and yeah really good location for a gunfight(especially when theres a specific target). Good job john12, I have no words that can explain this mission.
Review by abishai.kochara
Thanks for those Review, guys
Thanks to abishai.kochara for these screenshots
Made by Alifjenius. Thanks
PS: Guys, can you all make a Trailer or even Pics are Ok. Because I can't do that.
1.Waaaay to go tough lady
3.Scared to be Brave.
4.To The Neighbour.
5.Felt for a Drink.
7.Wheels on Heels
8.Night City, Las Venturas
11.Love is Blind.
12.Saving for the Rainy Days.
16.Financial City, San Fierro.
2.Dutchy3010 and PratikW
3.Others Who Helped Me In Understanding the concept.
4.GFX Team (only for sub titles)
1.Its my First DYOM Mission pack, So please Don't comment bad.
2.Please read everything from up and down so there musn't be any confusion.
3.If you hate the missions then don't download it again.
4.I got this title when my DYOM used to crash!!!!!
My school hrs= 6hrs till 13hrs GMT+5 and a half
My free timings= 14hrs till 21hrs (on wed and fri different)
You can PM Me too.
Please give me feedback of Part 1 and tell me if understand it.
THANKS AND HAVE FUN
Edited by john12, 27 December 2011 - 12:57 PM.