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Posted 05 November 2011 - 09:27 AM Edited by KaRzY6, 22 December 2011 - 11:49 AM.

Army: Team AGH69 - Created by KaRzY6

Status - Complete

Trailer - Made by -S-hark21


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Plot:
You play as Fraser Allen, who is sick of living a boring life in Los Santos. He decides to join the army, because that was his childhood dream. He goes to a sign-up in San Fierro, and Sergant Farpot gives him a spot in the army. Sergant Liverpool is the captain of a team called AGH69. Where Fraser is placed. It seems normal at the start, he is gaining much respect. Then some twists occur...Play, to find out what happens.

Characters:
CharactersAboutStatus
Fraser AllenFraser lives in a house on Grove Street, Ganton, Los Santos. And he is sick of living a boring life so he joins the army(his childhood dream).The Protagonist
Sergeant LiverpoolSergeant Liverpool is the leader of a army team called AGH69.Friendly
Private GoodesGoodes is placed in the same team as Fraser, AGH69.Friendly
Private ThompsonThompson is placed in the same team as Fraser, AGH69.Friendly
Private FolkFolk is placed in the same team as Fraser, AGH69.Friendly
Agent HolmesHolmes is a F.B.I agent and is the leader of the Secret Operation in Bayside.Friendly
Baghdad OsamaOsama is a terrorist in San Andreas. He destroyed the Empire Tower in San Fierro, and killed a couple of thousand people.Enemy
Gary HefferS.S.O agent, on a undercover mission to kill Baghdad Osama.(Seems like Enemy)Friendly
Salvator HansonS.S.O agent, on a undercover mission to kill Baghdad Osama.(Seems like Enemy)Friendly
Sergeant FarpotFarpot is the Army recuiter.Friendly

Packs:

PackCotains
Pack 1Intro, first 7 missions
Pack 2Missions 8-13


Missions:
--> Introduction
1--> Training
2--> President In Town
3--> Ghost Town Protest
4--> Secret Operation
5--> Plan Put Into Place
6--> Killing Baghdad Osama
7--> Break - (NOTE: Lots of cutscenes, not alot of game play, but need to play to get storyline).
*The mission will begin to come in packs, from now.*
8--> Hostige
9--> Lubeek's Death
10--> Army Door Knocking
11--> Flash Back
12--> Time To Die
13--> Hospitalisation
--> Outroduction

Credits:
KaRzY6 - Designer and writer
Dutchy3010 - Making DYOM
PatrickW - Making DYOM
-S-hark21 - Made the trailer
alifjenius - For video reviews

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Reviews by alifjenius
Intro, Mission #1 and #2

Mission #3 and #4

Mission #5, #6 and #7

Mission #2.1 and #2.2

Mission #2.3 and #2.4

Mission #2.5, #2.6 and Outro

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Posted 05 November 2011 - 09:56 AM

Damn, bro, you work fast! Ima try this later and post feedback. icon14.gif

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Posted 05 November 2011 - 09:57 AM

Yeah, same here. When I got some time I'll try all of your missions.

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Posted 05 November 2011 - 10:01 AM

@ Juan-R

Yeah i know, hehe biggrin.gif

@ Notna

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Posted 05 November 2011 - 06:37 PM

I just got done playing the 3 missions (literally, I finished them about 10 seconds ago) and they were great but short. It lacked of length. It could've been put into 1 mission but I liked the plot (objective) to the missions. Nice work, but make 'em longer please smile.gif

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Posted 05 November 2011 - 06:47 PM

I'm impressed, short missions but you really know how to do them. Keep the good WORK!

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Posted 05 November 2011 - 11:41 PM

@Juan-R
Your i know, but i'll make the missions harder and longer as it goes on. Because he has only just joined the army, his missions aren't as good at the time.

@Gorgonit
Thank you. I'll begin to make the missions longer and harder.

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Posted 06 November 2011 - 01:35 AM

Progress Updated

Mission added.

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Posted 06 November 2011 - 01:36 AM Edited by Juan-R, 06 November 2011 - 01:52 AM.

Gonna try it, I'll post my feedback right away on and edit of this reply to avoid "spam" from me on your topic tounge.gif

EDIT: Amazing! Awesome! EPIC! Nice mission, bro. With the sound and effect mods I have installed, it was like a full blown war movie in HD. Keep up the great work icon14.gif cookie.gif cookie.gif

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Posted 06 November 2011 - 01:38 AM Edited by KaRzY6, 06 November 2011 - 02:01 AM.

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Sunday, Nov 6 2011, 12:36)
Gonna try it, I'll post my feedback right away on and edit of this reply to avoid "spam" from me on your topic  tounge.gif

Thanks Juan-R, biggrin.gif

I made it longer and hopefully a bit harder. But i'm not very good at making hard missions.

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Thank you, thank you, thank you biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

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Posted 06 November 2011 - 03:05 AM

Progress Updated

Mission Added - Secret Operation

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Posted 06 November 2011 - 03:12 AM Edited by Juan-R, 06 November 2011 - 03:31 AM.

As always, I will play and love this mission ^^
Also I will edit this reply with my thoughts.

EDIT/REPLY TO MISSION 5: Well, it was well thought out, but too short. I just feeel some things could've been added. Oh and again, to prevent spam, I'll edit THIS post every time I have a reply colgate.gif

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Posted 06 November 2011 - 03:40 AM

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Sunday, Nov 6 2011, 14:12)
As always, I will play and love this mission ^^
Also I will edit this reply with my thoughts.

EDIT/REPLY TO MISSION 5: Well, it was well thought out, but too short. I just feeel some things could've been added. Oh and again, to prevent spam, I'll edit THIS post every time I have a reply colgate.gif

Okay, thanks Juan-R. Um well i couldn't think of what else i could add.

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Posted 06 November 2011 - 10:01 AM

Picture added

also next mission will be on in a couple of days, laptop needs fixing. sad.gif
so just wait and bare with me.

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Posted 07 November 2011 - 06:29 AM

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Sunday, Nov 6 2011, 10:01)
Picture added

also next mission will be on in a couple of days, laptop needs fixing. sad.gif
so just wait and bare with me.

Sure thing, bro. Can't wait colgate.gif

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Posted 07 November 2011 - 06:33 AM

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Monday, Nov 7 2011, 17:29)
QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Sunday, Nov 6 2011, 10:01)
Picture added

also next mission will be on in a couple of days, laptop needs fixing.  sad.gif
so just wait and bare with me.

Sure thing, bro. Can't wait colgate.gif

I like how Juan-R(A great designer and popular person in forums), likes my missions. It makes my feel like a good designer biggrin.gif

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Posted 07 November 2011 - 06:52 AM

Just speaking my thoughts ^^
But seriously, you are a great designer! I'm sure you be a well-known designer in the GTA SA universe. Oh and just a quick tip, NEVER GIVE UP wink.gif

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Posted 07 November 2011 - 07:00 AM

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Monday, Nov 7 2011, 17:52)
Just speaking my thoughts ^^
But seriously, you are a great designer! I'm sure you be a well-known designer in the GTA SA universe. Oh and just a quick tip, NEVER GIVE UP wink.gif

Thanks Juan-R!!! biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif well i've only been designing for about 4 weeks, so hopefully in a year i'm well-known!!! biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 November 2011 - 07:17 AM

Progress updated

Mission added - Plan Put Into Place

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Posted 08 November 2011 - 07:39 AM

Yes! At last a new mission! Gonna play it in the morning since it's 1:32 am here and I don't have school (I won't go since I'm sick). So expect feedback in some hours colgate.gif

Offtopic: I recently (about 2 - 3 hours ago) made and uploaded an army mission for a ongoing DYOM contest here on forums. And I used the name A69 (which stands for area 69) for one of the teams mentioned. I just noticed that if your series is named AGH69 (without GH it is A69) so sorry bout that, buddy. biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 November 2011 - 10:00 AM

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Tuesday, Nov 8 2011, 18:39)
Yes! At last a new mission! Gonna play it in the morning since it's 1:32 am here and I don't have school (I won't go since I'm sick). So expect feedback in some hours colgate.gif

Offtopic: I recently (about 2 - 3 hours ago) made and uploaded an army mission for a ongoing DYOM contest here on forums. And I used the name A69 (which stands for area 69) for one of the teams mentioned. I just noticed that if your series is named AGH69 (without GH it is A69) so sorry bout that, buddy. biggrin.gif

Hey Juan-R thanks biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

And don't worry bro, i don't give a f*ck about the name. biggrin.gif

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Posted 09 November 2011 - 06:27 AM

I forgot to post feedback lol.gif

Feedback: I really liked the mission and the objectives! The whole mission was overall fantastic! But I feel it could've been a bit longer. Good work, bro. icon14.gif

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Posted 09 November 2011 - 06:31 AM

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Wednesday, Nov 9 2011, 17:27)
I forgot to post feedback lol.gif

Feedback: I really liked the mission and the objectives! The whole mission was overall fantastic! But I feel it could've been a bit longer. Good work, bro. icon14.gif

Thanks bro, middle of making next mission. Shall be done in about 15 mins. smile.gif

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Posted 09 November 2011 - 07:37 AM

Progess Updated

Mission added - Killing Baghdad Osama

Also edited the post a bit.

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Posted 09 November 2011 - 09:01 AM

Progress Updated

Mission added - Break

Note: There are alot of cutscenes and not alot of gameplay. But need to play the mission to get the storyline. smile.gif

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Posted 09 November 2011 - 07:06 PM

I played all the missions and they are very nice! The Bayside base was best thing i have seen in Army missions, keep it up!

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Posted 10 November 2011 - 05:22 AM

QUOTE (Exekucnak @ Thursday, Nov 10 2011, 06:06)
I played all the missions and they are very nice! The Bayside base was best thing i have seen in Army missions, keep it up!

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 12:18 PM

Downloaded every mission. Gonna play for sure. wink.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 12:28 PM

QUOTE (john12 @ Friday, Nov 11 2011, 23:18)
Downloaded every mission. Gonna play for sure. wink.gif

Thanks bro biggrin.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 01:11 PM

Topic Updated

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