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Alif Akbar
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#91

Posted 11 November 2011 - 10:12 AM

Glad you're back, and for the latest mission, what a nice stealth mission, though it is easy to beat. What I like in this missions pack is the story.

Somehow, when I saw Rick was shot dead by Stan (if I'm not wrong), I feel something different, not a feeling when I played another designer's mission (no offense bro wink.gif ). The feeling is like.... When I saw the ending of the first GTA V Trailer (I don't know, maybe because the story is very awesome). This missions pack is more like a movie. Yeah, a blockbuster movie.

And somehow, I find the intro is like Sylvester Stalone's "The Specialist". Because... The main protagonist is both an army, and have an order to kill a courier (in the film, a drug dealer) and they don't know that the target is a kid. So they betrayed their own associate. But the continuing story is different, and in the film, the target is eliminated but in here, the boy escaped. So I might say that this missions pack is very original

Good luck with your next missions. I'm expecting more missions from you

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 11:21 AM

I played the 6th mission. It was awesome, as usually. Good work. icon14.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 11:25 AM

@ alifjenius - Thank you, man. I really appreciate you feedback. I've never seen the Sly movie, but it sounds interesting. And I'm glad you like the story so far.

@ BDR - Thanks, man. It's good to hear from you. biggrin.gif

More missions on the way. Maybe even tonight biggrin.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 11:25 AM

I am shocked to see many cutscenes so far. Too bad that Rick Died.

But I have some problems in cutscene making.

If i make an exterior cutscene and make another interior cutscene then everything dissapers. your cutscenes were not like that, anyway everything is very good! icon14.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 12:00 PM

QUOTE (john12 @ Friday, Nov 11 2011, 13:25)
I am shocked to see many cutscenes so far. Too bad that Rick Died.

But I have some problems in cutscene making.

If i make an exterior cutscene and make another interior cutscene then everything dissapers. your cutscenes were not like that, anyway everything is very good! icon14.gif

Come on man, ask that on pm. You're spamming other topics and asking them to help you. No offense.

Jimmy, so your comeback happened now? I mean, that wasn't just one mission you made when you had time, I mean, you're back in business again?

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 12:01 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Friday, Nov 11 2011, 12:00)
QUOTE (john12 @ Friday, Nov 11 2011, 13:25)
I am shocked to see many cutscenes so far. Too bad that Rick Died.

But I have some problems in cutscene making.

If i make an exterior cutscene and make another interior cutscene then everything dissapers. your cutscenes were not like that, anyway everything is very good! icon14.gif

Come on man, ask that on pm. You're spamming other topics and asking them to help you. No offense.


Sorry man, just telling that the more the cutscenes the better the missions.

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 12:02 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Friday, Nov 11 2011, 23:00)
QUOTE (john12 @ Friday, Nov 11 2011, 13:25)
I am shocked to see many cutscenes so far. Too bad that Rick Died.

But I have some problems in cutscene making.

If i make an exterior cutscene and make another interior cutscene then everything dissapers. your cutscenes were not like that, anyway everything is very good! icon14.gif

Come on man, ask that on pm. You're spamming other topics and asking them to help you. No offense.

Jimmy, so your comeback happened now? I mean, that wasn't just one mission you made when you had time, I mean, you're back in business again?

Hope so.. smile.gif

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#98

Posted 11 November 2011 - 12:16 PM

Well, I don't have much more to say about the mission since almost everything have been said. However, I liked the stealth part.

Keep up the good job. icon14.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 06:28 PM

@ Notna - Yes, something like that. My time in general has been re-scheduled, to say it that way, so, yea. I'll have some more free time from now on and I'll focus on mission making during that time biggrin.gif

@ Secronom President - Thanks a lot, man. biggrin.gif

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#100

Posted 11 November 2011 - 06:47 PM

Update: 7th mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and give me feedback, people biggrin.gif

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#101

Posted 11 November 2011 - 07:50 PM

played the 7th mission. perfect sory so far. I can't wait for next mission. I wonder what will happend next. icon14.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 08:04 PM

QUOTE (nitrousoxide @ Friday, Nov 11 2011, 19:50)
played the 7th mission. perfect sory so far. I can't wait for next mission. I wonder what will happend next. icon14.gif

Thanks, man. More missions on the way biggrin.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 08:21 PM

Played the mission, man, great.

Not much gameplay, but I kinda like it, cause I enjoy watching movies and making my own on free time. And about the shooting part, it was pretty simple but still effective. only minus is that you'd have used less health for the enemies, because with a silenced Colt-pistol it can take very long to kill all enemies. But, awesome job man. icon14.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 08:27 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Friday, Nov 11 2011, 20:21)
Played the mission, man, great.

Not much gameplay, but I kinda like it, cause I enjoy watching movies and making my own on free time. And about the shooting part, it was pretty simple but still effective. only minus is that you'd have used less health for the enemies, because with a silenced Colt-pistol it can take very long to kill all enemies. But, awesome job man.  icon14.gif

Hey, man. Thanks a lot. biggrin.gif

Well, I wanted to be hard to kill the cops. To explain it by story, when the hotel manager called the cops, the first officer on the scene called for backup which resulted by sending 3 more cops, but a little bit more combat-set. (That means wearing bulletproof vests which explains why I did put 500 heath for them and not the usual 100 or 250.)

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#105

Posted 11 November 2011 - 08:30 PM

Very good mission man, good job. Gunfight part was very nice. icon14.gif

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Posted 11 November 2011 - 08:33 PM

QUOTE (BDR @ Friday, Nov 11 2011, 20:30)
Very good mission man, good job. Gunfight part was very nice. icon14.gif

Thanks, dude. Stay tuned for more missions and more unexpected twists biggrin.gif

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#107

Posted 13 November 2011 - 12:23 PM

well your last mission was good but you can put more action too.

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#108

Posted 13 November 2011 - 12:34 PM

QUOTE (john12 @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 12:23)
well your last mission was good but you can put more action too.

Well, there will be more action in the future missions. biggrin.gif

But since I see you're a newbie and you haven't played my other mission packs, I will explain to you just so that you know for the future: My work focuses much more on the deeper story-telling than just on a pure gunfight. I like to have clean-cut and flawless story with every little detail explained how a certain character or a situation got to a certain point. So, I hope you understand that.

Thanks a lot for the feedback though. I appreciate it biggrin.gif

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#109

Posted 13 November 2011 - 01:24 PM

yeah, I also want to make emotinal missions too like someone is sufering and all.

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#110

Posted 13 November 2011 - 01:53 PM

Update: 8th mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and give me feedbacks. I want to hear what do you think about the first chapter of the story so far. biggrin.gif

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#111

Posted 13 November 2011 - 01:57 PM

Nice, this time gonna play from start. colgate.gif

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#112

Posted 13 November 2011 - 01:58 PM

Can you please upload the chapter 1 file as a zip file?

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#113

Posted 13 November 2011 - 02:01 PM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 13:58)
Can you please upload the chapter 1 file as a zip file?

I don't usually do that. I only upload ZIP file when I complete the series. But, if you really want it, then I'll upload it biggrin.gif

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#114

Posted 13 November 2011 - 02:06 PM

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 17:01)
QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 13:58)
Can you please upload the chapter 1 file as a zip file?

I don't usually do that. I only upload ZIP file when I complete the series. But, if you really want it, then I'll upload it biggrin.gif

Nah, it's okay then. I will downlod them. You can expect fedback later on when I finish the chapter.

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#115

Posted 13 November 2011 - 02:07 PM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 14:06)
QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 17:01)
QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 13:58)
Can you please upload the chapter 1 file as a zip file?

I don't usually do that. I only upload ZIP file when I complete the series. But, if you really want it, then I'll upload it biggrin.gif

Nah, it's okay then. I will downlod them. You can expect fedback later on when I finish the chapter.


It's already uploaded. Here you go, guys. The chapter one of ''The Runaway'' is uploaded --> http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15472

Now you don't have to download all missions of the first chapter seperately. biggrin.gif

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#116

Posted 13 November 2011 - 02:11 PM

Played the mission.

Cutscene based, but I really like those missions, as said. There was really interesting twists in the mission, as usually in your missions. I had fun while driving from Lou's place to Las Venturas, because I always took the wrong route biggrin.gif

It's great that you're back. Keep up the awesome work and you're still the best mission designer for me icon14.gif

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#117

Posted 13 November 2011 - 02:14 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 14:11)
Played the mission.

Cutscene based, but I really like those missions, as said. There was really interesting twists in the mission, as usually in your missions. I had fun while driving from Lou's place to Las Venturas, because I always took the wrong route biggrin.gif

It's great that you're back. Keep up the awesome work and you're still the best mission designer for me  icon14.gif

Thanks, man. I'm glad you liked it. Now, in the second chapter, you can expect much more action cause the first chapter was based on getting to know Jeff and the part of the General Mills in the story.

The second chapter will involve a lot more twists cause now Jeff and Spencer have backup.

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#118

Posted 13 November 2011 - 02:14 PM Edited by Nitesh aka AAAAAAA, 13 November 2011 - 02:18 PM.

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 17:07)

It's already uploaded. Here you go, guys. The chapter one of ''The Runaway'' is uploaded --> http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15472

Now you don't have to download all missions of the first chapter seperately. biggrin.gif

Wow, thanks. That was fast.

I never noticed that you don't make ZIP files for every chapter, because I usually download the missions as soon as they are released. This time, well because of exams, I couldn't...

Anyways, I will download it as soon as I get my hands on the computer, and then give you feedback.

Thanks again for uploading the whole pack. biggrin.gif

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#119

Posted 13 November 2011 - 02:16 PM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Sunday, Nov 13 2011, 14:14)
Wow, thanks. That was fast.

I never noticed that you don't make ZIP files for every chapter, because I usually download the missions as soon ads they are released. This time, well because of exams, I couldn't...

Anyways, I will download it as soon as I get my hands on the computer, and then give you feedback.

Thanks again for uploading the whole pack. biggrin.gif

No problem. I respect you as a fan and a friend. I can't refuse to do you a favor biggrin.gif

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#120

Posted 13 November 2011 - 03:04 PM

Well, I played the last two missions of chapter one.

Well, as usual, there's always someone from the neutral party that 'betrays' the main character. We can't really blame him though: he did what he thought that was right. There wasn't much action in it, but the cutscenes were still entertaining.

The only thing I can say about the last missions is that the team, which is the name of chapter two, reminds me of a crew in another mission pack. I think it was 'Las Venturas Crew' by Doublepulse. Anyway, sounds like there's another similarity with another mission pack: FBI helping Jeff and Spencer. In this one, Holding is an FBI agent helping them and in The Story of Jack Frazer there is a secret organisation helping the main character (if I remember quite well.)

Anyway, keep up the good job and I hope to see chapter two soon. icon14.gif




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