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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:00 PM Edited by Jimmy_Leppard, 17 February 2012 - 11:40 AM.

Mission series status: Finished


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Play the missions and don't forget to give me feedback about them. biggrin.gif

Hello, guys. As I promised, this is my new mission series. It's called ''The Runaway'' and it consists of 32 missions. All my missions are connected to each other, so I suggest you play them by order which you are able to follow in this topic. I uploaded a ZIP File with all the missions in it so that you don't have to download all the missions seperately. You can find it on the bottom of this post. biggrin.gif

Theme song:

Summary:

Jeff Parker is an U.S. soldier stationed in Las Venturas Desert Base. He's in the military for 10 years now. General Mills, General of the U.S. Army, organized an operation in which Jeff has the leading role. The goal of the operation was to eliminate the courier who works for the enemy. However, after Jeff and his team had arrived at the destination of the courier, Jeff realised that the target is - A 17 year old kid, who is in a role of a courier for the enemy and not even knowing it. After Jeff refuses to shoot the courier from the obvious reasons, General Mills orders an elimination of the kid and Jeff to for disobeying the orders of the operation. Jeff Parker will find himself in a position where he has to run away and hide from the U.S. Army which gave him the status of an ''Enemy of the State'' and also find someone who can help him prove he is innocent.

Characters:

Character NameCharacter Description
Jeff Parker
The protagonist/playable character. He is an U.S. Army soldier who refused to kill an innocent kid, but in return, the Army gave him the status of an ''Enemy of the State'' which will make Jeff one of the most wanted men in the U.S. His nickname is ''Jeffo'' - By Spencer Wing.
General Mills
He's the General of the U.S. Army and also the man who framed Jeff and who wants him dead.
Spencer Wing
He is Jeff's old friend. He and Jeff know each other since high school. Spencer runs a weapon store in Las Venturas. His nickname is ''Wingman'' - By Jeff Parker.
Stan Hart
He's a guy who blackmails Spencer and wants him to shut down his weapon store for no particular reason.
Lou Gamble
He is Spencer's friend. He's a car racer and also a car dealer.
Rick Parker
He is Jeff's older brother. Jeff and Rick haven't seen each other for 5 years since Jeff had been stationed in the Army base in Las Venturas. They don't get along fine.
Brad Holding
He is an FBI agent. He wants to put together a team which would work against the man he's trying to capture for 3 years.
Gordon Case
He is another member of agent Holding's team and he has to help the team put General Mills behind bars.
Paul Hale
He is an assassin hired by General Mills whose mission is to find and kill every member of the team working against General Mills. His partner is Sam Peterson.
Sam Peterson
He is an assassin hired by General Mills whose mission is to find and kill every member of the team working against General Mills. His partner is Paul Hale.
Nick Howstore
He is a 40 year old employee of Ecofield Corporation and he is the guy who works at the office in which Jeff and the team planned to break into.

Mission list:

Chapter 1: Orders

1.) The beginning - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14783
2.) Wingman - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14790
3.) Don't be a fool - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14799
4.) Stay away - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14826
5.) Desert sheep - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14881
6.) Evacuating the city - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15407
7.) Bayside hotel - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15429
8.) Cat and mouse - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15471

Chapter 2: Las Venturas Team

1.) And then there were 4 - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15500
2.) Ecofield Corporation - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15520
3.) Mystery man - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15534
4.) Cameras - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15572
5.) The snitch - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15698
6.) Background check - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15728
7.) Disconnect - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15738
8.) Blood spills - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15776

Chapter 3: Night As An Ally

1.) Loose ends - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=15784
2.) Reaching out - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16559
3.) Roll the dice - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16573
4.) Vanished - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16580
5.) Burning chains - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16602
6.) Cover the tracks - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16616
7.) Tonight's the night - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16656
8.) Splitting apart - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16662

Chapter 4: Lock up

1.) Bird's eye - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16675
2.) Black line - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16691
3.) Friendship above all - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16714
4.) Masterminds of the right - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16721
5.) The conference - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16728
6.) Determination for success - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16752
7.) Deep impact - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16759
8.) Limitless - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16780

ZIP File with all the chapters - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=16781

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#2

Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:18 PM

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Saturday, Oct 8 2011, 16:00)
Mission series status: In progress


Play the mission and don't forget to give me feedback about it. biggrin.gif

Hello, guys. As I promised, I'm starting a new mission series. It's called ''The Runaway''. So far I've made one (intro) mission. All my missions are connected to each other, so I suggest you play them by order which you are able to follow in this topic.

Theme song:

Summary:

Jeff Parker is an U.S. soldier stationed in Las Venturas Desert Base. He's in the military for 10 years now. General Mills, General of the U.S. Army, organized an operation in which Jeff has the leading role. The goal of the operation was to eliminate the courier who works for the enemy. However, after Jeff and his team had arrived at the destination of the courier, Jeff realised that the target is - A 17 year old kid, who is in a role of a courier for the enemy and not even knowing it. After Jeff refuses to shoot the courier from the obvious reasons, General Mills orders an elimination of the kid and Jeff to for disobeying the orders of the operation. Jeff Parker will find himself in a position where he has to run away and hide from the U.S. Army which gave him the status of an ''Enemy of the State'' and also find someone who can help him prove he is innocent.

Characters: (The character list will be updated every time a new character comes to the story.)

Character NameCharacter Description
Jeff Parker
The protagonist/playable character. He is an U.S. Army soldier who refused to kill an innocent kid, but in return, the Army gave him the status of an ''Enemy of the State'' which will make Jeff one of the most wanted men in the U.S.
General Mills
He's the General of the U.S. Army and also the man who framed Jeff and who wants him dead.
Mission list: (The mission list will be updated every time a new mission is released.)

Chapter 1: Orders

1.) The beginning - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14783

Holy sh*t! The story is f*cking dramatic! Gotta see this later.

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:20 PM

Thanks, Gorgonit biggrin.gif The intro is just a short picture of the main problem. However, following missions will be more dramatic and there will be twists, of course biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:30 PM

Wow, so fast! I am in a middle of something(Vice City reference biggrin.gif ), and will try this later and leave feedback then.

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:31 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Saturday, Oct 8 2011, 16:30)
Wow, so fast! I am in a middle of something(Vice City reference biggrin.gif ), and will try this later and leave feedback then.

Thanks, man. I'll be waiting biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:34 PM

I'll give this a try when I'm done with The Story of Samuel Garret, seeing military (and related) is another type of mission pack I like.

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:35 PM

QUOTE (Secronom President @ Saturday, Oct 8 2011, 16:34)
I'll give this a try when I'm done with The Story of Samuel Garret, seeing military (and related) is another type of mission pack I like.

Cool. Good to hear from you biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:39 PM

This is surely going to be the first mission pack I will play as soon as I am through with my exams. Then I will give you my feedback.

Ijust love the way you develop your stories, and can't wait to find out how this will turn out to be.

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:42 PM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Saturday, Oct 8 2011, 16:39)
This is surely going to be the first mission pack I will play as soon as I am through with my exams. Then I will give you my feedback.

Ijust love the way you develop your stories, and can't wait to find out how this will turn out to be.

Thanks for giving me so much credit, I really appreciate it, man. I have exams myself and I'll try to make the second mission when I grab some free time. I'll try my best to make this series successful aswell biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:44 PM

Looks nice, I'll try the first mission. I'll give feed back on Monday. sleepy.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:44 PM

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Saturday, Oct 8 2011, 16:44)
Looks nice, I'll try the first mission. I'll give feed back on Monday. sleepy.gif

Great. Looking forward to it biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 05:29 PM

Played the mission.

As always, I fall in love with the story you are having. It's very original. Althrough there wasn't much of gameplay yet, I still liked it.
I don't have much to say for now, but can't wait for the next missions!

Keep it going! icon14.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 06:27 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Saturday, Oct 8 2011, 17:29)
Played the mission.

As always, I fall in love with the story you are having. It's very original. Althrough there wasn't much of gameplay yet, I still liked it.
I don't have much to say for now, but can't wait for the next missions!

Keep it going! icon14.gif

LOL. Thanks a lot biggrin.gif Yea. As I said, the first mission I made is just to show how the real problem started. Now the ''real'' missions come along. Be sure to check them out biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 07:38 PM

Update: Second mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and give me feedbacks biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 07:48 PM

This time, it's you who's working fast! Right now, I am watching a movie from tv, so I will play the 2nd mission tomorrow morning.

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 07:51 PM

QUOTE (Notna @ Saturday, Oct 8 2011, 19:48)
This time, it's you who's working fast! Right now, I am watching a movie from tv, so I will play the 2nd mission tomorrow morning.

biggrin.gif I know. I'm free right now, so I use this time to make the missions cause tomorrow, I won't be free for most of the time. And thanks. I appreciate it biggrin.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 08:29 PM

I remember watching a movie with the same storyline but i forgot the title, well... good luck with this icon14.gif

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 08:32 PM

QUOTE (Skander Blade @ Saturday, Oct 8 2011, 20:29)
I remember watching a movie with the same storyline but i forgot the title, well... good luck with this icon14.gif

Really? I just made that up combining my own ideas with video games LOL. If you remember the name, tell me, it must be a great movie then biggrin.gif And thanks a lot. I'll try my best.

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 01:57 AM Edited by SatournFan, 09 October 2011 - 02:29 AM.

Ye-he-hey, Jimmy made his new mission pack!

Alright, I tried those you did. Like in every beginning, lots of cutscenes and less gameplay, but still, you're one of the best, if not the best, man who can deal with them cutscenes.

Waiting for more gameplay in future, and good luck!

QUOTE (Gorgonit)
Holy sh*t! The story is f*cking dramatic! Gotta see this later.


From when Jimmy didn't have the dramatic story? Every mission pack he created and I played had the drmatic story, even CJ Stories and multi-designer projects.

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 05:59 AM

Okay, I played the 2nd missions.

When story goes deeper, I get caught in it just more and more. Like, amazing.
There was more gameplay than in the intro, and it was very enjoyable. It was also good that Jeff left the MP5 to Spencer's shop, cause a firefight in 2nd mission - in, my language; ei nšin. Meaning that not this way. In the 1st mission it was okay, because it was leading to the story.

I also liked the skin you picked up for Jeff. It'll be really enjoyable to play.

Awesome work and keep it going! icon14.gif

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 06:41 AM

@SatournFan - Wow. Thanks a lot for that, man. Stay tuned for more missions. biggrin.gif

@Notna - Thank you. Yea. Well, have in mind that Jeff has been a soldier for 10 years and he can't go around killing people. He just went there to see what the problem between Spencer and Stan is. However, Stan is the one who brought up the fight, so Jeff had to defend himself.

Stay tuned for more missions. I hope I'll find some time later today or tomorrow biggrin.gif

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 07:10 AM

AWESOME MISSIONS Jimmy. smile.gif Can't wait to see more from you. Good luck icon14.gif

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 07:11 AM

QUOTE (nitrousoxide @ Sunday, Oct 9 2011, 07:10)
AWESOME MISSIONS Jimmy. smile.gif Can't wait to see more from you. Good luck icon14.gif

Thanks, nitrousoxide. I'm glad you liked the missions biggrin.gif

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 07:37 AM

The story seems very good. I will play this per chapter, so inform me when you've done the 1st chapter biggrin.gif

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 07:48 AM

QUOTE (Mati @ Sunday, Oct 9 2011, 07:37)
The story seems very good. I will play this per chapter, so inform me when you've done the 1st chapter biggrin.gif

Thanks, mati biggrin.gif OK, you got it.

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 10:41 AM

Update: 3rd mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and give me feedbacks biggrin.gif

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 10:52 AM

Just finished the 3rd mission, and here's the feedback:

I expected less gameplay, but, as surprise, you did a good work at polygon. And how the hell did you do so that the time didn't replay after each checkpoint?

I'm waiting for the next mission for sure, and I liked this text repeat at another cutscene, like "Here's a brand new Jester" and then comes another cutscene with the same text.

Keep the good work!

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 10:58 AM

QUOTE (SatournFan @ Sunday, Oct 9 2011, 10:52)
Just finished the 3rd mission, and here's the feedback:

I expected less gameplay, but, as surprise, you did a good work at polygon. And how the hell did you do so that the time didn't replay after each checkpoint?

I'm waiting for the next mission for sure, and I liked this text repeat at another cutscene, like "Here's a brand new Jester" and then comes another cutscene with the same text.

Keep the good work!

Hey, that was a fast reply. Thanks a lot, SatournFan. I'm glad that you like the missions so far biggrin.gif

Well, if you want that the time doesn't replay after you go through each checkpoint, you have to do this: After you put all your route checkpoints (ex. 10 checkpoints), you have to go to each one of them again and edit them. (Just click edit objective and retype everything in every checkpoint in your route) I know, it's pretty annoying, but that's the deal.


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Posted 09 October 2011 - 11:29 AM

Played the 3rd mission, and you did excellent work, again.
Polygon was very well made, I think you put much effort in it, ya? And looks like that Jeff is getting himself in very deep problems.
Wondering how the story continues. When's the next mission coming?

Great work and keep it up Jimmy icon14.gif

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 11:33 AM

QUOTE (Notna @ Sunday, Oct 9 2011, 11:29)
Played the 3rd mission, and you did excellent work, again.
Polygon was very well made, I think you put much effort in it, ya? And looks like that Jeff is getting himself in very deep problems.
Wondering how the story continues. When's the next mission coming?

Great work and keep it up Jimmy icon14.gif

Thanks, Notna. Yes, I did. I actually spent some time just to survey that area and to make the route of the polygon using the whole field. And yes. Jeff is in a lot of trouble biggrin.gif

Unfortunately, I don't think I'll have time to make another mission today. I'll try to grab some free time in the evening and maybe release 4th mission then. If not, then next week for sure. biggrin.gif




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