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Posted 05 August 2011 - 01:25 PM Edited by mati, 21 September 2011 - 04:02 PM.

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Episode One: Dave Jacobs' Story
Theme Song

Factions and characters:

The Brotherhood
- Monica
- Manny
- The Menace

WDR (Wild Desert Raiders)
- Aisha
- Monica
- Manny
- Scorpio

The Reclaimers
- Dr. Black

The Cerberus Company (?)
- Miranda


Chapter one: One Thousand Questions

The Rebirth gives us Dave Jacobs' point of view over the post-apocalyptic State of San Andreas in the year 2200. 200 years ago, the world suffered by the Third World War, with huge influence of Nuclear Warfare. The survivors have grounded small groups called factions and are trying to gain control over the State. Dave Jacobs has survived the bombing because he was asleep in a cryo inside a mysterious facility, even if the facility was strongly infected by radiation. As he gets woken up 200 years later, he has thousands of questions, friends and enemies, trying to understand the whole situation.
This mission pack is strongly inspired by the Fallout series but has no connections both story-wise and gameplay-wise.




Genesis
New Life in Las Payasadas?
The Brotherhood
The Reclaimers
Heavy Rain


Chapter 2: The Spirit of Brotherhood

The continuation of Dave Jacobs story, after his awakening in The Reclaimer facility and living inside the WDR, Dave decided to join The Brotherhood, a well organized faction with smart steps and no mercy for its enemies. Dave along with his new friends Diana and Manny are working for The Menace, a paranoid and naive leader of The Brotherhood. Will they manage to rule the desert sands and expand to other cities? And will Dave manage to revive his memories from over 200 years ago?

Blood on the Bayside
Homefront
Old World Blues
The Takeover
Reclaim The Truth

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#2

Posted 05 August 2011 - 02:00 PM

Looks good. Looking forward to this icon14.gif

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Posted 05 August 2011 - 04:21 PM

Thanks!

First mission uploaded on gtagarage! Genesis. I couldn't upload it on the DYOM site because of an error. Enjoy and give me some feedback.

I'd be glad about a new logo.

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Posted 06 August 2011 - 10:08 AM

QUOTE (Mati. @ Friday, Aug 5 2011, 16:21)
Thanks!

First mission uploaded on gtagarage! Genesis. I couldn't upload it on the DYOM site because of an error. Enjoy and give me some feedback.

I'd be glad about a new logo.

Try not adding Screenshot when you upload mission. I think that's the problem... icon14.gif

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Posted 06 August 2011 - 10:20 AM

Thanks.

Now ready for download on dyom.gtagames.nl!

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Posted 06 August 2011 - 10:59 AM

Played it. It kinda have a promising story. Looks good. I'll be waiting till the whole mission is done and then play it. For the first mission / intro, I'll rate it 8.5/10 icon14.gif

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Posted 06 August 2011 - 11:23 AM

That's a great rating, thanks for playing. More is coming soon.

I'm searching for a good theme song, suggestions?

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Posted 06 August 2011 - 11:35 AM

QUOTE (Mati. @ Saturday, Aug 6 2011, 11:23)
That's a great rating, thanks for playing. More is coming soon.

I'm searching for a good theme song, suggestions?

I'm no good with theme songs. But try checking B.B's (Breaking Benjamin) Songs. I find them entertaining for Zombie movies/games.

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Posted 06 August 2011 - 11:49 AM

The DYOM download link is fluffled, repost it please? I really wanna try that missions (especially cause it's a post apocalyptic one). For a theme song I think Mr Sandman ( ) and I think you should like for a video to post on youtube show a video of the wasteland and destroyed cars, and stuff like that.

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Posted 06 August 2011 - 12:00 PM

QUOTE (alucardiff @ Saturday, Aug 6 2011, 11:49)
The DYOM download link is fluffled, repost it please? I really wanna try that missions (especially cause it's a post apocalyptic one). For a theme song I think Mr Sandman ( ) and I think you should like for a video to post on youtube show a video of the wasteland and destroyed cars, and stuff like that.

It should be there on the dyom site, I have no problem downloading it.
http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13824
The theme song fits very well. But people who haven't played fallout will think ''wtf is this the theme song?''
How about this:

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Posted 06 August 2011 - 02:48 PM

I loved it i absolutley loved it nice story

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Posted 07 August 2011 - 12:59 PM

Thanks everyone. Next mission is coming tomorrow.

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Posted 07 August 2011 - 04:24 PM

I just finished playing Fallout 3, so I tried this, pretty nice mission with nice atmosphere. The scene over the map was brilliant icon14.gif Looking forward for more missions

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Posted 08 August 2011 - 10:05 AM

Update!

Three new character descriptions have been added. One new faction has been added. One new building has been added.

New mission: New Life in Las Payasadas?

This took me a lot of effort, feedback is appreciated!

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Posted 08 August 2011 - 12:13 PM Edited by Exekucnak, 08 August 2011 - 12:49 PM.

Pretty nice mission, the village is designated very well, nice athmosphere again and nice lenght of the mission, only the Police stars could be turn off 9.5/10 icon14.gif Can't wait for next mission

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Posted 08 August 2011 - 01:03 PM

Ah damn, I knew I forgot something!
Just imagine that the police are The Reclamiers biggrin.gif
Thanks for your feedback, I put much effort into the village.

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Posted 08 August 2011 - 02:02 PM

Nice mission loved the village design... keep up the good work icon14.gif

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Posted 10 August 2011 - 08:12 AM

Thanks for the feedback colgate.gif
Theme song updated!

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Posted 10 August 2011 - 09:21 AM

Alright, just finished bombing duh bar on mission 2. So, I have to say, I didn't like Genesis AT ALL, but the New life in Las Payasadas one made up for it - well done Mati, I really want more. Also, I loled my ass out when I hear all kinds of "WE GOT A MURDER IN LAS PAYASADAS, CHHH", lol dude, HOW can you forget removing the police? Oh and the theme song fits pretty well may I say.

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Posted 10 August 2011 - 08:27 PM

Thanks man, more missions are on the way. The first chapter will contain 10 missions.

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Posted 11 August 2011 - 10:52 AM

I see your tried to add more gameplay elements to it? buildings, fractions? I still have no idea what those are meant for and I'll be sure to check it out but I'd request a smaller chapter so I would be able to review it, if you're interested.

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Posted 11 August 2011 - 10:55 AM

Well, I was planning to do something... let's say ''special'' after the 5th mission (won't tell what though) so the 1st chapter could contain 5 missions. A new mission is coming tomorrow.

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Posted 11 August 2011 - 02:21 PM

I like the missions, f*cking great, oh, and the name "Las Padasayas" is mispelled, it's "Las Payasadas" lol, but good work.

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Posted 11 August 2011 - 08:40 PM

Good job with the missions, mati. I like post-apocalyptic mission series biggrin.gif

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Posted 12 August 2011 - 09:57 AM Edited by Mati., 12 August 2011 - 10:05 AM.

Thanks everyone smile.gif

New mission released!

The Brotherhood

Remember to have fun and give me some feedback.


I know the dyom page says its the 2nd mission, my mistake.

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Posted 15 August 2011 - 11:54 AM

Nobody? confused.gif

I have something huge in my mind, be sure to follow the story..

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Posted 15 August 2011 - 04:47 PM

QUOTE (Mati. @ Monday, Aug 15 2011, 11:54)
Nobody? confused.gif

I have something huge in my mind, be sure to follow the story..

I like your way to create missions, specially the "The Brotherhood" one, it was good, keep the good work man!

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Posted 15 August 2011 - 07:37 PM

Thanks, that's exactly what I needed. The 4th mission is ready for an upload, but I'm getting the 403 forbidden again ._.
It's great that you enjoy my style of missions, because the next one works quite similar tounge.gif

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Posted 16 August 2011 - 11:45 AM Edited by Mati., 16 August 2011 - 12:19 PM.

Da news:

New Mission uploaded.

The Reclaimers

Please have fun and leave me some feedback.


Somehow, my first post removed itself after I edited it sad.gif
I don't have time to write things like characters down again, maybe I do it some other time.

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Posted 16 August 2011 - 03:08 PM

This is great. Good luck with future missions. icon14.gif




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