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Posted 23 July 2011 - 07:18 PM Edited by Gorgonit, 04 November 2012 - 10:19 PM.

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"The money is very important, not my life"


HISTORY:

Harry Gibson, a 25 years old man, have a very bad life at London, he got a lot of debts,so he decided to go to Las Venturas, money opportunity land, where his brother Mac Gibson lives, he will do his best to get a lot of money, the main objective of his life, he will encounter a lot of problems along the way, will he survive? Will he get a lot of money and become the richest man? Will he buy a potato from a shop? Let's see what happens to him in this history!

CHARACTERS:


Harry Gibson
The main protagonist of the story, he's 25 years old, he came to Las Venturas to get a lot of money. Brother of Mac Gibson.
Status: Friend

Mac Gibson
Harry's younger brother, he's 24 years old, he lives at Las Venturas, at Pike Creek. He lives with Harry.
Status: Friend
Meet up in: Brother's Gibson

Leoniel Connor
One of Mac's friends, he's 28 years old, he lives near Mac's house. He gives jobs to Harry. He owns a weapon depot too.
Status: Friend
Meet up in: A walk in the park

Mervin "Rook" Johnson
Leader of the Rockshore West Thugs gang, he's an old friend of Mac.
Status: Friend
Meet up in: Rockshore West Thugs

Marco Forelli
Leader of the Forelli Mafia, he was the old boss of Mac.
Status: Dead
Meet up in: Yet More sh*t
Dies: Yet More sh*t

Ray Brevic
Leader of the Russian Mafia, Harry owes him a lot of money.Very dangerous man.
Status: Enemy
Meet up in: Yet More sh*t

Ryan McGregor
Leader of the Hunter Quarry, he's one of the old friends of Mac.
Status: Friend
Meet up in: No Ryan, No Work

Gotalino
Not much is known about this Bolivian gang leader. He owns the Bolivian Cartel.
Status: Enemy
Meet up in: Just one more step

Tom Garrey
One of Harry's new friends. He became friend of Harry when he joined the gang.
Status: Friend
Meet up in: Territory Takedown

Tripp Campbell
One of Harry's new friends. He became friend of Harry when he joined the gang.
Status: Friend
Meet up in: Territory Takedown

! CHARACTER LIST GETS UPDATED PER MISSION !

GANGS:


Gibson Gang
Harry's gang, owns all Pike Creek and sub urbs area, powerful gang, as Connor supplys it.
Status: Friend
Leader: Harry Gibson

Bolivian Cartel
Bolivian gang that owns most part of city's limit. Very dangerous.
Status: Nemesis
Leader: Gotalino

Forelli Mafia
Italian mafia that owns most part of The Strip, his main place is the Caligula's Casino. Enemy to the Bolivian Cartel and the Rockshore West Thugs. His place is taken by the Red Tong Japanese Gang.
Status: Destroyed
Leader: Nobody

Rockshore West Thugs
Gang that owns all Rockshore West part, his main place is one of the old houses near the shore. A long time ago, they had an affiliation with Mac.
Status: Friend
Leader: Mervin "Rook" Johnson.

San Andreas Police Department
Government security service in San Andreas, you hate 'em, they hate you, simple as that.
Status: Enemy
Leader: ?????

Mexicanos 4 Life
Mexican gang that owns most part of Spinybed.
Status: Neutral.
Leader: Hazer.

Russian Mafia
Russian mafia that owns most part of Los Santos, and outskirts of London.
Status: Nemesis
Leader: Ray Brevic.

Red Tong Japanese Gang (RTJG)
Japanese mafia/gang that owns most part of The Strip, they got as main place the Caligula's Casino.
Status: Enemy
Leader: ?????

! LIST CAN BE UPDATED !

MISSIONS:


EPISODE 1: Fresh but not fresh start RAR FILE
CHAPTER 1: Getting a life
Brother's Gibson - Harry's arrived to the town.
A walk in the park - Harry meets up Connor, they go around the city to know better it.
Robbing the Store - This time Harry and Connor go to rob a store, but the police are in his tail.
Safehouse - Connor found a safehouse near the suburbs, but It's owned by mexicans.
CHAPTER 2: Hardware
Rockshore West Thugs - Mac,Harry and Connor decided to visit the Rockshore Thugs to get Hardware, but they will need to do a couple of jobs for them.
Hell Launcher - Rook asks the group to destroy a Forelli supply line, anyway Harry will care it by himself.
Yet More sh*t - Rook asks Harry to kill Marco Forelli.
Just one more Step - Finally, Rook gives the hardware location to the group.
No Ryan, No Work - Ryan, a friend of Mac, will assemble the hardware for the group, but Ryan needs some help...

EPISODE 2: Up to being rich (you need this mod to play this episode. Here a pic.)
CHAPTER 1: Own problems
Time Bomb - Harry will do a couple of jobs for Ryan, this time he needs to kill a rival of Ryan.
Home Retake - Ryan's quarry has been occupied by the army, he asks Harry for help.
Jackin' Chan - Mac's been kidnapped! Harry must save him.
Payback- Harry and Mac go to payback the Russians.
CHAPTER 2: Our life is our territory
Need for Wheels - As a start, you must get vehicles for your gang.
The Overrun - No more guns! You must get guns for your gang.
Territory Takedown - Time to destroy the Japanese gang, destroy The Visage and capture The Esmerald Isle!
Helping the Thugs - Rook is under attack! , the gang must help him.
Cargo Robbery - Disturb the Bolivians' operation at the airport!

TROPHIES:

(Inspired by COOLMAN, great work!)

Las Venturas Trophies:

*Fabulous Las Venturas* - Complete the first mission.
*Crow's Nest* - In the mission "A walk in the park", try to go through all Las Venturas Strip when you need to hang around the zone.
*Bulletproof Idiot* - In the mission "Robbing the Store", when robbing the store, don't kill any of the security guards.
*Flash but not Fast* - In the mission "Robbing the Store", keep with atleast 1 police car and survive until the part where a blockade appears.
*Explosion Launcher* - In the mission "safehouse" find the rocket launcher.
*Fast Movers Inbound!* - Finish the mission "safehouse" under 3:45.
*Intelligent* - Don't die or fail in the mission "Rockshore West Thugs"
*You're a Cat* - Find the Security officer in the mission "Hell Launcher" under the time 1:35.
*You still are a Hitman* - In the mission "Yet More sh*t", kill EVERY ENEMY and ONLY USE HEADSHOTS, (Don't count if enemy don't have headshot on)
*Giant Knife* - Don't use guns inside the factory until you're spotted in the mission "No Ryan, No work"
*You got all your life* - In the mission "Time Bomb", when you need to take away Carl's car, wait until the timer is at 15 seconds and complete the mission.
*Commando* - In the mission "Home Retake", when you are at the first gate, don't let your armour get down 50 percent.
*Chuck Norris* - In the mission "Home Retake", don't destroy Commander's helicopter with the Rocket Launcher, instead of that, do one shot kill with the sniper. Destroying the helicopter.
*Made it!!* - In the mission "Jackin' Chan", when you need to kill the Russian Mobster, kill your brother first, then the mobster.
*Oh yeah, hehe.* - In the mission "Payback", did you noticed that Russian cars are white instead of blacks for the first time you played the mission?
*Russian BBQ* - In the mission "Payback", don't let your health go down 75 percent.
*The f*ck?! - In the mission "Territory Takedown", capture The Esmerald Isle in less than 2:30.
The Armored Man - Don't die in the mission "Helping the thugs".
Blowin' up stuff - Complete the mission "Cargo Robbery".

Special Trophies:

*Drug Seller* - Find 5 drug canisters.
*Great Brother* - Find 20 drug canisters.
*Prize!* - Find 40 drug canisters.
*Indiana Jones* - Find 100 drug canisters.
*No way!* - Find an easter egg.

Credits only go to Dutchy3010 and PatrickW , DYOM creators.

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Posted 23 July 2011 - 07:31 PM

First mission released! Give a comment and a feedback smile.gif

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Posted 23 July 2011 - 08:29 PM

Second mission released! Give comment and feedback

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Posted 24 July 2011 - 06:44 PM

Third mission released! Give feedback and comment biggrin.gif

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 12:47 PM Edited by Jimmy_Leppard, 25 July 2011 - 01:28 PM.

Since I've finished ''Brian Thompson's heist'' and I don't have any new ideas for a new mission series yet, I'm gonna download these now and give you feedback after I play them biggrin.gif

EDIT: I've played the missions and here is my feedback:

I liked the coloring text in the cutscenes. But, I've had a little problem reading all the text in them cause they are changing fast. I assume you've put your cutscene lenght to 4, maybe 5 seconds. But, it's alright. I've managed to read almost everything biggrin.gif

First mission - It was good for an intro mission. I just have one question: What happened to the airplane that blew up in the air and how did everyone survive the fall?

Second mission - I couldn't finish this mission. When I'm supposed to follow Leoniel to his car, he just happens to walk across the street and then bumps into a building wall. I replayed the mission but he walked to that same wall and start bumping into it.

Third mission - Good mission. First day in town and Harry gets into trouble already biggrin.gif

Overall, since I couldn't finish the second mission, I'd give 5/10. So far, it's good. It's only the beginning of the mission pack. Don't take this as a bad rating. When you get a little deeper into the story, rating will probably go up. Good luck with your future missions biggrin.gif

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 05:07 PM

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Monday, Jul 25 2011, 12:47)
Since I've finished ''Brian Thompson's heist'' and I don't have any new ideas for a new mission series yet, I'm gonna download these now and give you feedback after I play them biggrin.gif

EDIT: I've played the missions and here is my feedback:

I liked the coloring text in the cutscenes. But, I've had a little problem reading all the text in them cause they are changing fast. I assume you've put your cutscene lenght to 4, maybe 5 seconds. But, it's alright. I've managed to read almost everything biggrin.gif

First mission - It was good for an intro mission. I just have one question: What happened to the airplane that blew up in the air and how did everyone survive the fall?

Second mission - I couldn't finish this mission. When I'm supposed to follow Leoniel to his car, he just happens to walk across the street and then bumps into a building wall. I replayed the mission but he walked to that same wall and start bumping into it.

Third mission - Good mission. First day in town and Harry gets into trouble already biggrin.gif

Overall, since I couldn't finish the second mission, I'd give 5/10. So far, it's good. It's only the beginning of the mission pack. Don't take this as a bad rating. When you get a little deeper into the story, rating will probably go up. Good luck with your future missions biggrin.gif

Thanks for the feedback Jimmy, about the cutscenes, I put them 4 seconds or 3 seconds, but I don't use 5 seconds.

About the first mission, I did not put how the passengers died, but remember that Harry got "debts" at London, that's because the plane exploded, It's like Ray Bulgarin from GTA IV, but I will not reveal the character name until the story goes deeper. About the second mission, there's an invisible checkpoint just where Leoniel stops, I don't know why you have problems to get to it, anyway the checkpoint is at the left upper corner of the car.

About the rating, there's no problem man, that's help, why? Simple, it tells you the errors of your mission, you fix them, and you're good, simple as that. Thanks biggrin.gif

In the fourth mission, Harry was supposed to kill a Forelli Mafia member at the Esmerald Isle, anyway I cutted it because it was kinda stupid for me. Here a word for the real fourth mission: safehouse.

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 05:49 PM

Fourth mission released and chapter 1 ends! Give comment and feedback biggrin.gif

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 08:24 PM

Fifth mission released! Give comment and feedback

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Posted 28 July 2011 - 10:15 PM Edited by Gorgonit, 29 July 2011 - 12:50 AM.

Nevermind.

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Posted 28 July 2011 - 10:51 PM

I'll check it out.

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Posted 29 July 2011 - 12:51 AM

Well, I dont know but... there was no homework to do for tomorrow, sorry for my fail:

Sixth mission released! Play, comment and give feedback.

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Posted 29 July 2011 - 02:58 PM

Played the first chapter.

The missions have been nicely made especially as the animations you have made for the actors. Also you tried to make sure that the friend actors almost always remain with the main actor, especially in the 'follow Connor' objectives.

Until now there are a few mistakes I saw. Instead of using the word 'Selection' you were writing 'election.'

Also, the long drive from Las Venturas to Bayside. It is really boring to drive such long distances with no action going on between. Even though there were three stars wanted level, in the desert, not even one police car could even reach me so it was just like a normal drive.

Apart from that the missions are good.

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Posted 29 July 2011 - 07:42 PM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Friday, Jul 29 2011, 14:58)
Played the first chapter.

The missions have been nicely made especially as the animations you have made for the actors. Also you tried to make sure that the friend actors almost always remain with the main actor, especially in the 'follow Connor' objectives.

Until now there are a few mistakes I saw. Instead of using the word 'Selection' you were writing 'election.'

Also, the long drive from Las Venturas to Bayside. It is really boring to drive such long distances with no action going on between. Even though there were three stars wanted level, in the desert, not even one police car could even reach me so it was just like a normal drive.

Apart from that the missions are good.

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Nice to hear it from you Nitesh, about that spelling mistake thing, for some reason DYOM doesn't type the characters the speed I type, that's because some characters are missing, anyway, I'll try to type more slowy, about the mission "Robbing the Store", theres no logic way to make very hard polices, so I recommend to keep with them so you can have some fun. (especially the scene where everything explodes)Again thanks a lot Nitesh.

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Posted 29 July 2011 - 07:57 PM

I have played it. What can I say, it isn't the best mission pack out there but so far it's pretty good. There are a couple things that bother me but they have been mentioned before. I didn't have a problem with the long ride though, listening to K-DST should fix the boredom biggrin.gif

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Posted 31 July 2011 - 02:18 AM

7th Mission released! Play, comment and give feedback.

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Posted 07 August 2011 - 12:29 AM

Finally 8th mission uploaded!! Play, give comment and feedback!

PS: Search for easter eggs please smile.gif

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Posted 07 August 2011 - 07:39 AM

Is the 8th mission the last mission? You could upload it as a rar/zip then biggrin.gif
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Posted 07 August 2011 - 03:15 PM

QUOTE (Mati. @ Sunday, Aug 7 2011, 07:39)
Is the 8th mission the last mission? You could upload it as a rar/zip then biggrin.gif
Well done icon14.gif

In the ninth mission I will introduct a new character, a lil great job for the group and character 2 completed, and episode 1 too biggrin.gif , I expect there will be over 30 - 20 missions due to the story. When I complete everything, you will see a .rar file or a storyline.

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Posted 07 August 2011 - 06:27 PM

I played the first chapter.I gotta say that the story is very good and I didn't have problems with cutscenes and that long distance,especially because they were no cars. sigh.gif
Anyway,you get a 8.5/10 from me. icon14.gif

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Posted 07 August 2011 - 07:00 PM

QUOTE (MegaDas14 @ Sunday, Aug 7 2011, 18:27)
I played the first chapter.I gotta say that the story is very good and I didn't have problems with cutscenes and that long distance,especially because they were no cars. sigh.gif
Anyway,you get a 8.5/10 from me. icon14.gif

Thanks man.

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Posted 09 August 2011 - 07:55 PM Edited by Gorgonit, 09 August 2011 - 08:25 PM.

Ninth mission uploaded! Play, give comment, find easter eggs and give feedback!

Nevermind, chapter 1 rar uploaded.

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Posted 11 August 2011 - 06:20 PM

10th mission uploaded! Play, give comment or feedback and find easter eggs!

PS: Remember to download the skin mod so you can see a new skin for Harry biggrin.gif

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Posted 12 August 2011 - 07:49 PM

I will give it a try tommorow and give you a feedback
Now, good night ;D

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Posted 12 August 2011 - 08:04 PM

QUOTE (Rytuklis @ Friday, Aug 12 2011, 19:49)
I will give it a try tommorow and give you a feedback
Now, good night ;D

O'raight then my friend.

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Posted 15 August 2011 - 05:48 PM

Mission 11 released! Comment, give feedback, play and find easter eggs!

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 05:55 PM

Sorry for wait guys, here's the 12th mission! Comment, give feedback and find easter eggs!

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 06:33 PM

Few spelling mistakes and fewer bugs. Nice and simple, I like it.

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 08:03 PM

QUOTE (alucardiff @ Saturday, Aug 20 2011, 18:33)
Few spelling mistakes and fewer bugs. Nice and simple, I like it.

Thanks, I try to do my best when typing wink.gif , about bugs... which bugs you noticed?

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 08:07 PM

QUOTE (Gorgonit @ Saturday, Aug 20 2011, 20:03)
QUOTE (alucardiff @ Saturday, Aug 20 2011, 18:33)
Few spelling mistakes and fewer bugs. Nice and simple, I like it.

Thanks, I try to do my best when typing wink.gif , about bugs... which bugs you noticed?

Well I honestly just played the first mission and I just had a car spawn in the checkpoint where you leave the car in the driveway, but that's random and not really a bug.

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 08:11 PM

QUOTE (alucardiff @ Saturday, Aug 20 2011, 20:07)
QUOTE (Gorgonit @ Saturday, Aug 20 2011, 20:03)
QUOTE (alucardiff @ Saturday, Aug 20 2011, 18:33)
Few spelling mistakes and fewer bugs. Nice and simple, I like it.

Thanks, I try to do my best when typing wink.gif , about bugs... which bugs you noticed?

Well I honestly just played the first mission and I just had a car spawn in the checkpoint where you leave the car in the driveway, but that's random and not really a bug.

I noticed that bug too, but I just ignored it, because it is a car spawn from GTA, not from DYOM.




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