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The Tale of Jack Frazer [Mission series]

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 04:15 PM Edited by Jimmy_Leppard, 19 September 2011 - 11:10 AM.

Mission series status: FINISHED

Hello, guys. This is the second ''multi-designers mission series project.'' The previous one was ''Johnny Nixon Chronicles'' and it was a great success. This project is called ''The Tale of Jack Frazer'' and I really hope this one turns out to be good to.
It's finished and it consists of 26 missions.

All our missions will be connected to each other, so I suggest you to play them by order so that you can understand and follow our story. You are able to follow the mission order in this topic.

NOTE for the participants: I would like you to read the project rules so that we avoid mix-ups and problems in our ''project path''.

The participants are: Doublepulse, mati1501, pauliux2, guib, Secronom President, Stuntzman, SevilleCheng and me.

The project rules for the participants:

1.) Don't join this project unless you really can participate and if you are serious about this. Any trolling, rude behaviour or breaking the rules will get you kicked out of the project.
2.) Stick to the theme of the story. You can find it in this post.
3.) You are not allowed to make missions if it's not your turn cause you will mess up the order and the story.
4.) Try to be as grammaticaly correct as you can when writing the text in the mission. Use the internet translator if you need to.
5.) Respect and use the names and the skins of the characters that other participants gave to them.
6.) You MUST keep the main character alive. He must not die.

When it's your time to make the mission, you can take the story in any direction you want. (Look on that you make it as more dramatic and unpredictable as you can.) You're free to put characters in the story when your turn comes, but don't get carried away and put 3-4 characters at once every time your turn comes. Your mission must be connected to the previous missions made by other participants. So, be sure to download and play every previous mission made by other participants so that you can organize and continue the story in the right path.

The turn list for making missions:

When your turn comes, you're allowed to make 1 mission. When your turn comes, you have maximum of 3 days to make your mission, otherwise you'll be skipped and the next person on the turn list can make the mission instead of you. If you start making your mission and you see that you'll need more time than 3 days, post a comment about it in this thread or PM me with the reason why you can't complete the mission in 3 days so that you wouldn't be skipped for nothing. The mission making can be prolonged to 6 days if you have problems with the mission. When you are finished making the mission, write in the comment in this thread that you are done so that the next person on the turn list can organize and start making the next mission. After that, you MUST send me a PM with the link of the uploaded mission so that I could put it in the mission list in this thread. When all participants make their mission, the turn list resets and the first person from the list is next to make the mission after the last one from the list.


Summary of the mission series:

A group of 6 criminals, who are strangers to each other, except for two of the criminals who secretly know each other, were gathered by a crime lord named Frank Naysmith to do a casino robbery in Las Venturas. Their task is to break into a casino vault with 40 million dollars in it before the money is transfered to a high security vault outside of San Andreas. Since the 6 criminals are very skilled and prepared for the theft, no one assumed that the theft could have gone wrong. Although all 6 skilled, smart and greedy criminals are completely different from each other, they all have the same hidden motive: They all want the money for themselves. The story follows Jack Frazer, one of the 6 criminals.

Characters:

Character NameCharacter Description
Jack Frazer
The protagonist/playable character. He is one of the 6 people for the job. He is a great shooter. He thinks this job will help him establish a better life.
Frank Naysmith
He is the crime lord and also the boss of the 6 criminals. He runs the job. He is rich, smart and powerful. The casino vault robbery is the last job he's gonna run cause he wants to retire.
Donny White
One of the 6 people for the job. He is an electronics expert, great shooter and he doesn't like company. He prefers working alone.
Nick Growster
One of the 6 people for the job. He is a great driver, he always makes fun of people and he's always looking for trouble. So far, he killed over 20 cops while he was in Liberty City.
Kyle Lemmet
One of the 6 people for the job. He is a great shooter, a comedian. He likes to laugh a lot. He is always honest.
Ryan Bale
One of the 6 people for the job. He is a great driver and shooter. He doesn't like to talk much. He talks only when he needs to. He hates cops and rats.
Logan Jett
One of the 6 people for the job. He is a psyho when he needs to be one. He doesn't pick his victims. If he needs to kill, he kills whoever he needs to kill. He is also a great shooter.
The Agent
Strange guy who wants Jack to do jobs for him. SPOILER: His real name is John Secronom He is very calm and knows how to deal with stressful situations.
Clarence
Frank's lapdog. Frank and him go way back. They were once best friends, but Frank's gone too far and Clarence doesn't like that.
Kyle Frazer
Jack's son. He is 17 years old.
Kate Frazer
Jack's sister.
Jeff Frazer
Jack's father.
Seville Cheng
He is a Chinese who used to be the president of Triads until he got married and gave them away to his friend, Shindo Wu.
Jasmine Liu
Seville's wife. She is one year younger than Seville.
Shindo Wu
The current president of Triads. He works for Seville. He is only mentioned in the series until now.
Lee
Ryan's friend who owns a car palace. Ryan always buys sports cars from him. His nickname is ''The Rocket Racer''. He is also a secret friend of Seville and he works for him against Ryan.
Dragan
Hitman working for a mysterious organization. He doesn't have friends or enemies, he only has targets on his list. He may kill your friends but your enemies as well.
The Signal
Part of the mysterious organization, Dragan is one of his employees. He gives Dragan new targets by a headset.
Speedless Lu
General of The Special Force of China Navy who is sent by the government to get the money back.
Little Carl
Speedless Lu's translator who's good at English and Japanese.
James Hernandez
Son of Pablo Hernandez. What he wants is to kill those who killed his father. SPOILER: He is ''The Signal''.
Mitch
Johnny's informant.
Layla
A mysterious woman who is trying to help Jack, because they both have the same goal. She was once betrayed by both Mitch and Naismith.

Mission list:

Chapter 1: The crew and the boss

1.) Introduction - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12836
2.) Tonight's the Big Night - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12842
3.) Twenty millions, Two lifes, One Way To Go - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12847
4.) An old Ally - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12851
5.) Chase through the desert - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12854
6.) Another stupid day - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12861
7.) Bad boys vs. bad boy - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12883
8.) San Fierro - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12907

Chapter 2: San Fierro problems

1.) Something new - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12908
2.) Taking care of Donny White - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=12956
3.) The Truth - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13000
4.) Family problems - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13235
5.) San Fierro is ready for a war ! - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13246
6.) It's just getting started - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13344
7.) The same thing in different way - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13499
8.) Downhill - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13501

Chapter 3: Gun limit

1.) Captured! - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13545
2.) Extermination - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13651
3.) The bad choices - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13765
4.) Is China playing a role in? - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13797
5.) Were it so easy.. - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13909
6.) No mercy - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=13921
7.) Prison escape - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14030
8.) A choice to make - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14217

ENDING (Choice) MISSIONS:

Choice 1: What will be the final?
- http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14219
Choice 2: Payback time - http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=14523

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 04:19 PM

I made the intro mission. It's in the ''Mission list''. Be sure to download and play it so that you can follow the story and continue it. biggrin.gif

Doublepulse, you're next to make a mission. You have 3 days to make a mission. Be sure to download the intro mission and play it before you start making yours so that you can continue the series in the right path. When you make it, send me the PM of the uploaded missions so that I could put it in the mission list.

Good luck biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 04:35 PM

DP hasn't been online recently, was he?
Anyway, I played the intro. Short, but a great way to introduce the story. BTW, you can add in the character description who the 6 robbers are, I only see 4 of them

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 04:40 PM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Jun 3 2011, 16:35)
DP hasn't been online recently, was he?
Anyway, I played the intro. Short, but a great way to introduce the story. BTW, you can add in the character description who the 6 robbers are, I only see 4 of them

Ok. I'll write who is who to everyone specific biggrin.gif

EDIT: Added. Now it says who is the robber biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 04:45 PM

I played the intro, it was nice.

Between, could you tell me the characters' numbers? I fear I won't remember them...

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 04:47 PM Edited by Jimmy_Leppard, 03 June 2011 - 04:59 PM.

QUOTE (Secronom President @ Jun 3 2011, 16:45)
I played the intro, it was nice.

Between, could you tell me the characters' numbers? I fear I won't remember them...

No problem. I sent it to you in PM. biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 05:06 PM

Maybe it's too late to change the robbers' descriptions, but I find them all kinda the same. I get it that they're all great shooters, but besides that?

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 05:09 PM

QUOTE (Stuntzman @ Jun 3 2011, 17:06)
Maybe it's too late to change the robbers' descriptions, but I find them all kinda the same. I get it that they're all great shooters, but besides that?

It's too early to tell. That are the basics that we now for now. As the missions progress, the descriptions will change. There are multiple participants and they will all show the characters in different lights, so.. There is no need to tell anything more. The story itself will tell what they're like. biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 05:20 PM

Write me up, i want to participate

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 05:21 PM

QUOTE (Rytuklis @ Jun 3 2011, 17:20)
Write me up, i want to participate

Ok. That makes us 10. Welcome. biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 05:57 PM

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Jun 3 2011, 16:47)
QUOTE (Secronom President @ Jun 3 2011, 16:45)
I played the intro, it was nice.

Between, could you tell me the characters' numbers? I fear I won't remember them...

No problem. I sent it to you in PM. biggrin.gif

Could you PM me too about the characters, my memorie sucks. tounge.gif (or perhaps you can write it down here??)

Anyway, I will play the first mission NOW!

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 05:59 PM

QUOTE (guib @ Jun 3 2011, 17:57)
QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Jun 3 2011, 16:47)
QUOTE (Secronom President @ Jun 3 2011, 16:45)
I played the intro, it was nice.

Between, could you tell me the characters' numbers? I fear I won't remember them...

No problem. I sent it to you in PM. biggrin.gif

Could you PM me too about the characters, my memorie sucks. tounge.gif (or perhaps you can write it down here??)

Anyway, I will play the first mission NOW!

I'll PM it to you now. biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:02 PM

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Jun 3 2011, 17:59)
QUOTE (guib @ Jun 3 2011, 17:57)
QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Jun 3 2011, 16:47)
QUOTE (Secronom President @ Jun 3 2011, 16:45)
I played the intro, it was nice.

Between, could you tell me the characters' numbers? I fear I won't remember them...

No problem. I sent it to you in PM. biggrin.gif

Could you PM me too about the characters, my memorie sucks. tounge.gif (or perhaps you can write it down here??)

Anyway, I will play the first mission NOW!

I'll PM it to you now. biggrin.gif

PM me too..

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:04 PM

QUOTE (pauliux2 @ Jun 3 2011, 18:02)
QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Jun 3 2011, 17:59)
QUOTE (guib @ Jun 3 2011, 17:57)
QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Jun 3 2011, 16:47)
QUOTE (Secronom President @ Jun 3 2011, 16:45)
I played the intro, it was nice.

Between, could you tell me the characters' numbers? I fear I won't remember them...

No problem. I sent it to you in PM. biggrin.gif

Could you PM me too about the characters, my memorie sucks. tounge.gif (or perhaps you can write it down here??)

Anyway, I will play the first mission NOW!

I'll PM it to you now. biggrin.gif

PM me too..

Count me in... Or simply post it here tounge.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:05 PM

pauliux2, mati, I sent you PM biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:15 PM

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Jun 3 2011, 12:47)
QUOTE (Secronom President @ Jun 3 2011, 16:45)
I played the intro, it was nice.

Between, could you tell me the characters' numbers? I fear I won't remember them...

No problem. I sent it to you in PM. biggrin.gif

Thanks for the PM.

Hope my game gets better when my turn comes.

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#17

Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:15 PM Edited by mati1501, 03 June 2011 - 06:20 PM.

Theme/trailer song suggestions:
Gang Starr - Moment of truth (although it sounds a bit gangsta, but fits the topic IMO, the lyrics are perfect.)
Crysis 2 theme song(Fits very well, no lyrics.)
Johnny Cash - Gods gonna cut you down(Fits as well)

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:25 PM Edited by Jimmy_Leppard, 03 June 2011 - 06:30 PM.

I vote for Johnny Cash biggrin.gif Although that first song really has perfect lyrics biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:29 PM

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Jun 3 2011, 18:25)
I vote for Johnny Cash biggrin.gif

I like Johnny Cash's music, but not this one, I vote for Crysis 2 theme song...
Because it is dramatic!!

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:32 PM

I vote for Johnny Cash - God's Gonna Cut You Down.

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:38 PM

I vote for Gang Starr. RIP Guru and RIP Johnny Cash BTW.

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 06:41 PM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Jun 3 2011, 18:38)
RIP Guru and RIP Johnny Cash BTW.

Hmmm, does that goes a little to far??? tounge.gif

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 07:30 PM

Gang Starr is my favourite of these.

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 09:01 PM

2-1-2
2-2

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 09:32 PM

Just letting everyone know that I am working on the next mission

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Posted 04 June 2011 - 01:37 AM

QUOTE (Doublepulse @ Jun 3 2011, 17:32)
Just letting everyone know that I am working on the next mission

When is it coming?

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Posted 04 June 2011 - 01:57 AM

Hopefully no later than tomorrow,


If I choose to do the "robbery" portion then the mission will be slightly longer, so far I only have cutscenes.

Or I can let someone else do the robbery, and give the player something else to do, I already have in mind who I think his "partner" should be. Its like sharing all the ideas and putting them into one. biggrin.gif I will think about it.

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Posted 04 June 2011 - 02:09 AM

QUOTE (Doublepulse @ Jun 3 2011, 21:57)
Hopefully no later than tomorrow,


If I choose to do the "robbery" portion then the mission will be slightly longer, so far I only have cutscenes.

Or I can let someone else do the robbery, and give the player something else to do, I already have in mind who I think his "partner" should be. Its like sharing all the ideas and putting them into one. biggrin.gif I will think about it.

Ok, can't wait to see it.

That's your choice. One thing though; don't make me do a boring mission. tounge2.gif

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Posted 04 June 2011 - 06:15 AM

Update on my progress of the mission: I am 45% done with the entire mission, and most of it is going very smoothly. Im trying to make the cutscenes very "professional" by adding multiple actors with different animations.

Problem is if I can not cure the crash on one of the cutscenes, I might need to break the mission into 2 parts, if it is ok with you guys. One will be pt.1 and other will be pt.2


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Posted 04 June 2011 - 06:46 AM

QUOTE (Doublepulse @ Jun 4 2011, 06:15)
Update on my progress of the mission: I am 45% done with the entire mission, and most of it is going very smoothly. Im trying to make the cutscenes very "professional" by adding multiple actors with different animations.

Problem is if I can not cure the crash on one of the cutscenes, I might need to break the mission into 2 parts, if it is ok with you guys. One will be pt.1 and other will be pt.2

Oh, I didn't know that you're having problems with the mission. Well, if you can't find a way to cure the problem with the cutscene, you can break it in two parts.

But, I want you all to know that the rule is that every participant can make only one mission per turn, but in this situation, I'll let Doublepulse to make two, cause basicaly, that's one mission but in two parts biggrin.gif




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