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#1

Posted 26 February 2011 - 06:22 PM Edited by universetwisters, 10 September 2011 - 12:38 PM.

working on something better ATM

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Posted 26 February 2011 - 06:25 PM Edited by akavari112, 24 June 2011 - 07:10 PM.

Welcome to the forums. This is not a bad start for your first concept thread, even though I can't pronounce the title biggrin.gif

If you're looking to improve this, I would take some time to organize it and break up the information a bit so it isn't a huge wall of text. Then you could add some more to this story, explaining who the main character really is and who he meets in this place. icon14.gif

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Posted 26 February 2011 - 06:28 PM

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Optional First Person View

Jizz In Mah Pants.

But, jizzing aside, I agree with akavari, you need to separate the wall of text and organize it a little bit, but aside from that, well done, man. f*ckin' A.

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Posted 26 February 2011 - 06:29 PM

Maybe use spaces between each section of writing but not bad for first time icon14.gif

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Posted 26 February 2011 - 06:40 PM

It's a pretty good start though. wink.gif

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Posted 26 February 2011 - 07:10 PM

QUOTE (akavari112 @ Feb 26 2011, 18:25)
Welcome to the forums. This is not a bad start for your first concept thread, even though I can't pronounce the title biggrin.gif

If you're looking to improve this, I would take some time to organize it and break up the information a bit so it isn't a huge wall of text. Then you could add some more to this story, explaining who the main character really is and who he meets in this place. icon14.gif

I say the same thing.

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 01:37 AM

mkay, i fixed it. Hows it nao?

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 01:53 PM

Interesting, this is good for your first topic.
However the location is obscure and the storyline is a little weak.

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:24 PM

QUOTE (brownbear @ Feb 27 2011, 13:53)
Interesting, this is good for your first topic.
However the location is obscure and the storyline is a little weak.

well i just dont wanna go too far into the storyline cause im thinking about making this into a real game under a different name. and the location? Its just unique to me, compared to tall buildings and ghettos. think of it as "Raising hell in a small town"

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Posted 18 March 2011 - 09:24 PM

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1995 Volvo 240

.....Does not exist.

Also, stop making threads on /b/.

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Posted 18 March 2011 - 09:26 PM

QUOTE (The Sound of Milli Vanilli?! @ Mar 18 2011, 21:24)
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1995 Volvo 240

.....Does not exist.


cool man thanks for pointing that sh*t out

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Posted 18 March 2011 - 09:44 PM

QUOTE (The Sound of Milli Vanilli?! @ Mar 18 2011, 21:24)
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1995 Volvo 240

.....Does not exist.

Also, stop making threads on /b/.

Threads on /b/? How did this happen.

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Posted 18 March 2011 - 10:51 PM

QUOTE (Pedochu @ Mar 18 2011, 21:44)

Threads on /b/? How did this happen.

I was posting this on /b/. I am planing on turning this into a real game, minus the "gta" title. you can see my thanks to /b/ in my "Special Thanks" section

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 12:55 AM

This is a good start. Not bad icon14.gif

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 01:06 AM

QUOTE (Drift-Kingz @ Mar 19 2011, 00:55)
This is a good start. Not bad icon14.gif

thnx smile.gif

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 03:40 AM

Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say. biggrin.gif icon14.gif Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces.

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 12:29 PM

QUOTE (StoneHead37 @ Mar 19 2011, 03:40)
Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say. biggrin.gif icon14.gif Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces.

how can i make the said header?

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 01:44 PM Edited by drscot, 19 March 2011 - 01:49 PM.

The language of the Gaels? gaelic? nice topic but random name lol smile.gif

i love mallaig my in-laws live there lol

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 01:57 PM

QUOTE (drscot @ Mar 19 2011, 13:44)
The language of the Gaels? gaelic? nice topic but random name lol smile.gif

i love mallaig my in-laws live there lol

wow you know gaelic? epic. not a lot of video games these days have any gaelic in them, and i hope to change that

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 02:25 PM

QUOTE (universetwisters @ Mar 19 2011, 12:29)
QUOTE (StoneHead37 @ Mar 19 2011, 03:40)
Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say.  biggrin.gif   icon14.gif   Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces.

how can i make the said header?

Two ways you can obtain a header, you can make one if you know how. But, if you don't have no idea on how to make a header, head to the GFX Request & Tutorials in the Experession forum and create a post stating what you would want and wait for somebody to make it for you. When you get to the GFX & Tutorial page, you might want to read the guidelines first.

Hope this helps you out. biggrin.gif icon14.gif

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 03:40 PM

QUOTE (StoneHead37 @ Mar 19 2011, 14:25)
QUOTE (universetwisters @ Mar 19 2011, 12:29)
QUOTE (StoneHead37 @ Mar 19 2011, 03:40)
Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say.  biggrin.gif   icon14.gif   Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces.

how can i make the said header?

Two ways you can obtain a header, you can make one if you know how. But, if you don't have no idea on how to make a header, head to the GFX Request & Tutorials in the Experession forum and create a post stating what you would want and wait for somebody to make it for you. When you get to the GFX & Tutorial page, you might want to read the guidelines first.

Hope this helps you out. biggrin.gif icon14.gif

ill pass thanks though i wanna keep the old school look

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Posted 21 March 2011 - 12:04 PM

Hey, put in "Never Gonna Give You Up" by Rick Astley in WTFM.

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Posted 21 March 2011 - 02:52 PM

Hmm. How do you pronounce the title?

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Posted 21 March 2011 - 02:59 PM

Not bad, needs a logo, though. Some headers would be nice, too icon14.gif

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Posted 21 March 2011 - 07:23 PM Edited by drscot, 21 March 2011 - 07:26 PM.

QUOTE (universetwisters @ Mar 19 2011, 13:57)
QUOTE (drscot @ Mar 19 2011, 13:44)
The language of the Gaels? gaelic? nice topic but random name lol smile.gif

i love mallaig my in-laws live there lol

wow you know gaelic? epic. not a lot of video games these days have any gaelic in them, and i hope to change that

yeah its my natural tounge lol wink.gif
Blitz: the title Cànan Nan Gàidheal is pronounced cannon-nan-gayd-hal wink.gif

and isnt it St. Leonard?

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Posted 25 March 2011 - 11:09 PM

QUOTE (drscot @ Mar 21 2011, 19:23)


and isnt it St. Leonard?

Nope. In the early stages of the game, i wanted it to be in the real life town of Leonard, Maryland. (Ghosts/Aliens reference). However, my friends decided to make it a fictional location, so I kept the name and changed the map, making the surrounding area similar to Narrows Park, MD, a small town outside of Cumberland. I guess you can say that Leonard is based on Narrows Park, judging by its location. However, i decided to base it on just a generic small town/suburb in the Rust belt. If you want to learn more, look at "location"

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Posted 02 April 2011 - 11:30 PM

QUOTE (The Sound of Milli Vanilli?! @ Mar 18 2011, 21:24)


Also, stop making threads on /b/.

i dont mean to sound like a prick, but give me a good reason not to

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Posted 04 April 2011 - 03:44 AM

Great stuff ya got here...looks epic!

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Posted 04 April 2011 - 05:00 AM

Nice stuff man. Maybe request a logo and headers in the GFX section.
I'm sure they'll be happy to make you one up.
You can find the GFX section the the left side navigator.

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Posted 09 April 2011 - 12:24 AM

QUOTE (BrannonTDS @ Apr 4 2011, 03:44)
Great stuff ya got here...looks epic!

cool thnx




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