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Posted 18 February 2011 - 02:46 PM Edited by mati1501, 12 March 2011 - 01:35 PM.

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The story drops us into the shoes of Danny Lopez, a member of the powerful Latin Lords in San Fierro which has gotten the task to buy cocaine from the Italian Mafia together with his brother. It's supposed to be an easy exchange which ended up as an act of betrayal and death of Danny's brother. Danny himself has been left for dead in the middle of the empty desert without any resources. Soon he gets connected to many friends in the wastelands and works for them with keeping the revenge in the back of his head. Unfortunately he will be contacted to government agents, wild bikers. crazy and deadly robbers and much much more. Afterwards follows a trip trough the whole state of San Andreas to build an Empire and payback his brother's death. Will Danny survive this crazy, gruesome adventure?

The Story will be split into 5 chapters, each chapter has a total of 8 missions (Intro, 6 missions, Outro). Hope you will be amused playing.

Chapter One: The Sands of Death.

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(Characters of Ch.1 only. Description may change in future chapters.)

Danny Lopez
The Protagonist of SotF. He is a handsome, helpful young man which got connected to the mafia life of the Latin Lords. He decided to help his brother which is also a Latin Lord member on a drug deal with the Italian Mob. It went wrong since Pete, the drug dealer betrayed them. Now Danny is very lucky to be alive. A young girl named Jonelle found him in the middle of the desert along with 20 bullets inside Danny's body. Danny is a fan of The Simpsons.

Rico Lopez
Danny's brother. A long time member of the Latin Lords in San Fierro which convinced his brother to join the gang and help them on a drug deal. Rico always was an optimist and everything was easy for him. Maybe it's because of the drugs.

Pete Adriano
The Italian drug dealer. He has a arrogant, egoistic and everything else than a tolerant character. He is the one who gave the task to kill Danny and Rico... is he?

The Mysterious mobster
Seen on the drug dealer the first time and we see him here and there on some missions. What is his real purpose?

Jonelle Snakeskin
Jonelle is the young girl who saved Danny. She and her father own a ranch in the outskirts of the desert. She lives a dangerous live, is often involved with wrong people. Danny will have to save her life pretty often. Are Jonelle and Danny just friends?

Wayne ''Snake'' Snakeskin
Jonelle's proud father and the boss of The Cobras Motorcycle Club. A rough boss, often makes the wrong decision but very friendly and constructive. Likes to party pretty often. He is involved to the drug dealers in Los Santos and has a huge gang war with the Country Robbers.

Sheriff Marston
Sheriff of Fort Carston. He has the tough task to keep the town safe from the terrible Country Robbers which terrorize the whole desert and countryside.

Horatio
A government agent that plans to get his hands on Danny. He knows everything about him and if he doesn't follow his tasks, Danny is going to prison for a long time.

Patrick
Patrick is the underboss of the Country Robbers which makes him Gerald's right hand man. His skill are used for its purpose, he is a talented robber which isn't scared to have a gun to his head. But after he gets caught by the sheriff, all he wants is to go to prison to have peace.

Gerald
Boss of the desert chapter of the Country Robbers, does everything to terrorize every small town in the desert by killing civilians, robbing stores or starting gang wars with the Cobras. If he doesn't like you, he does everything to destroy your life.

Brian
Brian is a high ranked Cobra biker from the deserts, a professional shooter along with mechanic skill he can make every bike something special. He has many friends in San Fierro. Not much is known about him.

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(gangs of Ch.1 Description may change in future chapters)

The Country Robbers (desert chapter)
Boss: Gerald
Important members: Patrick
Weapons: Mostly shotguns and pistols but sometimes they have access to the whole arsenal.
Role: Enemies

The Desert Cobras
Boss: Wayne ''Snake'' Snakeskin
Important members: Jonelle, Brian
Weapons: AK47, powerful shotguns, desert eagles.
Role: Allies

Los Santos Balla
Boss: ???
Important members: ???
Weapons: Small machine guns, pistols
Role: Allies

Grove Street Families
Boss: ???
Important Members: ???
Weapons: Rifles, machine guns
Role: Enemies

Italian Mob
Boss: ???
Important members: Pete
Weapons: Heavy and light machine guns, various pistols, heavy weapons, grenades.
Role: Enemies

Latin Lords
Boss: ???
Important members: Danny, Rico, Jake
Weapons: Pistols, machine guns. Sometimes innovative weapons.
Role: Allies

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 02:47 PM

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 02:50 PM

Chapter Three.

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 02:51 PM

Chapter Four

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 02:54 PM Edited by mati1501, 19 February 2011 - 10:16 AM.

Chapter Five

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 02:55 PM

Finally biggrin.gif Created the topic mati biggrin.gif Great icon14.gif I'm waiting for the Trailer\Missions. biggrin.gif

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 03:19 PM

Cant wait to play your missions man icon14.gif

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 03:32 PM

I added some characters but I need to fix the table confused.gif

Chapter 1 will be released tomorrow.

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 07:32 PM

Somehow the first part of the story reminded me of GTA VC, and the later part of GTA III biggrin.gif Good old time wink.gif . Anyways, gonna try your missions after i finish with just bussiness

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 07:44 PM

QUOTE (Rytuklis @ Feb 18 2011, 19:32)
Somehow the first part of the story reminded me of GTA VC, and the later part of GTA III biggrin.gif Good old time wink.gif . Anyways, gonna try your missions after i finish with just bussiness

I was inspired by many games and movies for the story. Thanks for your interest smile.gif
For now, I leave the ugly table as it is till I know how to fix it.

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Posted 19 February 2011 - 08:01 PM Edited by guib, 19 February 2011 - 08:03 PM.

Looks great, espesially when the mafia kicks in.

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Posted 19 February 2011 - 08:04 PM

QUOTE (guib @ Feb 19 2011, 20:01)
QUOTE (mati1501 @ Feb 18 2011, 19:44)
QUOTE (Rytuklis @ Feb 18 2011, 19:32)
Somehow the first part of the story reminded me of GTA VC, and the later part of GTA III biggrin.gif Good old time wink.gif . Anyways, gonna try your missions after i finish with just bussiness

I was inspired by many games and movies for the story. Thanks for your interest smile.gif
For now, I leave the ugly table as it is till I know how to fix it.

Just have played a few first missions, looks great, you my friend are going to make it in the dyom world lol.gif!

Thanks... but I haven't released any missions in this topic yet confused.gif

As you can see, the 1st chapter is 90% done. Maybe it's coming in a few hours. Keep track of this topic.

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Posted 20 February 2011 - 10:06 AM

Chapter one released!

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Posted 20 February 2011 - 04:20 PM

I just completed chapter one and it's great. icon14.gif

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Posted 20 February 2011 - 04:51 PM

I was doing some cutbacks from school but I played first chapter of this. Great plot, great thinking. It's like 3-4 movies put together biggrin.gif Keep up the great work.

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Posted 20 February 2011 - 05:19 PM

AWESOME Missions dude I played a little.

PS. Homer Simpson From Springfield not SF.? biggrin.gif You could came up with a better name biggrin.gif

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Posted 20 February 2011 - 05:22 PM

Thanks for the comments. Danny uses the name ''Homer Simpson'' sometimes so people won't find out who he really is.

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Posted 12 March 2011 - 01:00 PM

Okay, Here is your Trailer :-


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Posted 12 March 2011 - 01:36 PM

Thanks Jetjatin. Looks very good. If Pauilix also makes a trailer, I put them both in my topic.

BTW, I (finally) start working on Ch.2

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Posted 12 March 2011 - 01:39 PM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Mar 12 2011, 13:36)
Thanks Jetjatin. Looks very good. If Pauilix also makes a trailer, I put them both in my topic.

BTW, I (finally) start working on Ch.2

Good News, I'll Try it.

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Posted 15 March 2011 - 09:16 AM

Nice story line,btw after complete mission and go back to ranch(save jonnelle)i saw 3 icon:yellow dot,police,and tatto.is every icon mission dont same.like yellow dot mission is dinner is police icon diffrent

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Posted 15 March 2011 - 01:03 PM

QUOTE (maliksusanto @ Mar 15 2011, 09:16)
Nice story line,btw after complete mission and go back to ranch(save jonnelle)i saw 3 icon:yellow dot,police,and tatto.is every icon mission dont same.like yellow dot mission is dinner is police icon diffrent

Yellow dot is Jonelle's mission, police icon is Sheriff's mission and tattoo is Snake's mission.

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Posted 16 March 2011 - 12:22 PM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Mar 15 2011, 20:03)
QUOTE (maliksusanto @ Mar 15 2011, 09:16)
Nice story line,btw after complete mission and go back to ranch(save jonnelle)i saw 3 icon:yellow dot,police,and tatto.is every icon mission dont same.like yellow dot mission is dinner is police icon diffrent

Yellow dot is Jonelle's mission, police icon is Sheriff's mission and tattoo is Snake's mission.

thanks for the info

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Posted 08 October 2011 - 04:36 PM

Hey mati, are you gonna continue this series still? Chapter 1 looks amazing! But I see this topic was left and forgoten, so are you? sad.gif

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Posted 09 October 2011 - 11:11 AM

QUOTE (Juan-R @ Saturday, Oct 8 2011, 16:36)
Hey mati, are you gonna continue this series still? Chapter 1 looks amazing! But I see this topic was left and forgoten, so are you? sad.gif

I don't think I will go on with this. I didn't like this very much myself.

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Posted 14 October 2011 - 02:03 AM

I'm about to try Chapter 1 after reading the reviews.




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