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Posted 30 January 2011 - 07:19 PM Edited by Rytuklis, 24 February 2011 - 07:03 PM.

Just Bussiness ( LOGO MADE BY PAULIUX22)
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Story

Year 2001. Los Santos now has another Police Cheif... Rick Martin.. He is not so easily scared as previous chief was.. He begins agresion against Local Gangs , Mafia and Thugs.. The most drastic actions is being used against them... Now they're hunted.... Hunted by all available Law services, including LSPD, FBI, CIA, DEA.. Even San Andreas Army is involved... A one crime family called "Dogz" which had created only a few days ago before election of Rick Martin, comes up with a plan. They moved to Las Venturas, where Los Santos services can't reach them, and begins to raise, to recruit members there. Their main goal is to become one of the leader gangs in Las Venturas, unite all remaining gangsters in Los Santos and to take LS hoods back... They declares an open war against Law Enforcment in Los Santos. LSPD Chief is so pissed off.. He starts to make secret deals with LVPD Chief... A corruption shadow falls on Las Venturas... LVPD starts to hunt "Dogz" too, but they cannot do such an agression like LSPD does, because Las Venturas law doesn't let to declare a war against any criminal organisations, only to arrest the person who had broken the law, the whole family cant answer for his crimes... Las Venturas law is on "Dogz" side... Using it, they start a bloodshed against Rick Martin.

"We have no food, we have no clothes, my shoulder has been shot.. LSPD blocks any food or clothes or medical supplies to us... We feel like Jews in Germany doing World War II now... A homie gone against homie... This small territory we own now, the little street, is being too small to us now... We have to fight to prove that we're worth it, even if we will have to kill our best friend... This is the cost of survival......" - one of the Grove Street member... A hour later after he wrote this letter, he got executed...


Main Characters:


Name: Ray
Status: Don of "Dogz" crime family

Name:Chris
Status: A random coward

Name: Richard
Status: "Dogz" vehicle expert..

Name: Michael
Status: Main character, the best guy in "Dogz"

Name: Alex
Status: Old crazy dude.. Even if he can hardly walk because of his age, he can easily blow your head off with Sawed off shotgun from long long range.. His hobby is weapons and their selling in Las Venturas

Name: Pablo
Status: Boss of Colombian Gun Dealers cartel... His gang is new, and most of the mafia bosses wants him dead, because new families are not good for them...

Name: Jake
Status: "Dogz" Weapons expert... He can give you everything from knifes to cannons

Name: Lee Hong Junior
Status: The boss of Chinese Triads in Las Venturas, his father used to run Red Dragon triad in Hong Kong, but got assasinated by mysterious assasin (Hahaha biggrin.gif this character is refference to one of my favourite games of all times)



All other people is just a regular soldiers working for the family

Missions:
Chapter 1: New Life in Las Venturas

Helping Alex:

Mission 1:A cost of survival [Click Here] !!!! WARNING: Mission is going to be hard! So better be prepared! Just a tip ;D!!!
Mission 2: Just Bussines[Click Here]
Mission 3: Crazy Old Man [Click Here]
Mission 4: Delivery Boy [Click Here]
Mission 5: Tooling up [Click here]

Helping Mark:
Mission 6: Clowns Pocket [Click here]
Mission 7: Grand theft auto [Click here]
Mission 8: Unexpected warning [Click here]
Mission 9: Killing the Traitor (Grand Finale Of Chapter 1) [Click Here]

Chapter 2:The Family problems

Mission 10: Problems are not over yet [Click Here]
Mission 11: Surrounded by morons... [Click Here]
Mission 12: Saving Richard (Part 1) [Click Here]
Saving Richard (Part 2) [Click Here] WARNING: There is a problem with actor sometimes... I mean Richard, when he is following you and you get in the car, he will not get in the car with you , only follow you on foot, if you get this bug just leave him there and head for the checkpoint... I dont know how to fix this bug.. Maybe this bug is only on my PC, i dont know...
Mission 13: Gun Dealer's paradise [Click Here]
Mission 14: The Setup [Click Here]
Mission 15: Who is the traitor??? [Click here]
Mission 16: Dance with a bullet [Click Here] (Grand Finale of Chapter 2!)
New things/unlocks and contacts in Chapter 2:
Unlocked a vehicle system, sometimes after mission Richard will show you where you can steal a fast car, when you steal it, everytime before mission it appears at Dogz HQ parking lot
Weapons system unlocked! Everytime before a mission pay a visit to Jake, he will give you some strap..
New contacts: Joe ( Died in "Who is the traitor??), Chris
Contacts killed/died: Alex

Chapter 3: Getting strong position in Las Venturas

Mission 17: Meeting the Triads
Mission 18: Calligulas shootout [Click Here] (This is the best mission in this mission pack! TRY IT!!)
Mission 19: Dealing With Dealers

Chapter 4: Grand Come Back!

Mission 20: Roadblocks [Click Here]
Mission 21: Kaboom! [Click Here]
Mission 22: Special Delivery [Click Here]
Mission 23: Grand Finale! [Click Here]

This mission pack now is officialy COMPLETED! Thanks for all the people who supported me! Thank you.. If you havent played missions yet, play all from the beggining to understand the story!

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Posted 30 January 2011 - 08:13 PM

I like the story!Cant wait!

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Posted 31 January 2011 - 10:46 AM

Thanks for your feedback about story
TOPIC UPDATED: Picture changed, Mission number 1 added! Please try and give feedback!

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Posted 31 January 2011 - 10:46 AM


Perfection

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Posted 31 January 2011 - 10:55 AM

QUOTE (Skander Blade @ Jan 31 2011, 10:46)

Perfection

Thank you! Have you tried first mission? smile.gif

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Posted 31 January 2011 - 12:42 PM

TOPIC UPDATED: NEW MISSION ADDED!!! PLEASE CHECK IT OUT AND GIVE ME FEEDBACK

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Posted 31 January 2011 - 04:30 PM

NEW MISSION ADDED: CRAZY OLD MAN! PLEASE PLAY AND GIVE FEEDBACK

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Posted 31 January 2011 - 04:33 PM

I really liked the second and third missions.Really good work!Keep it up.

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Posted 01 February 2011 - 09:17 AM

NEW MISSION ADDED: TOOLING UP! PLEASE PLAY AND GIVE FEEDBACK smile.gif

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Posted 01 February 2011 - 10:02 AM

Those missions are cool! cool.gif Good work! And I'm Sorry, Leave it all!

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Posted 01 February 2011 - 10:03 AM

Ok JetJatin. Don't worry. I wasn't even angry on you! And yeah, you dont have to lie to me if you dont like them, just tell me... It will be a good tip to me to improve other missions wink.gif .

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Posted 01 February 2011 - 10:05 AM

QUOTE (Rytuklis @ Feb 1 2011, 10:03)
Ok JetJatin. Don't worry. I wasn't even angry on you! And yeah, you dont have to lie to me if you dont like them, just tell me... It will be a good tip to me to improve other missions wink.gif .

No I played the first mission its cool good setting icon14.gif (BTW, I Canceled my project, GTA : Hardcore

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Posted 03 February 2011 - 05:28 PM

Hello, i wont be able to make missions because i have temperature. BUT ILL BE BACK;)

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Posted 05 February 2011 - 10:52 AM

TOPIC UPDATED: NEW MISSION ADDED: CLOWNS POCKET

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Posted 09 February 2011 - 06:27 PM

NEW MISSION: GRAND THEFT AUTO ADDED! TOPIC UPDATED

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Posted 09 February 2011 - 06:53 PM

TOPIC UPDATED: NEW MISSION ADDED: UNEXPECTED WARNING

WARNING: This mission have been uploaded to Megaupload.com BECAUSE something wrong with dyom.gtagames.nl and i can't upload files there. Please, excuse me for this..

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Posted 15 February 2011 - 08:11 PM

Guys, this mission pack is NOT CANCELED! It's just on hold because of dyom.gtagames.nl webpage problem with uploading missions! I hope those guys fix this soon!

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 06:34 PM

Finaly, i am CONTINUING THIS!!

New mission uploaded! : Chapter 1 grand finale!!! "Killing The Traitor"! Topic Updated!!

Please play and give feedback smile.gif I hope you enjoy this mission pack! I suggest you to keep on playing because story will have very more surprises >:D

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 07:19 PM

New chapter is now working in progress!!! Will you manage to save family problems?? Will you??


New mission added: Problems Are Not Over Yet

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 08:05 PM

Played the first 5 missions. I had a little problems with the first one cause I didn't expect the bazooka guy in Grove Street so he blew up my car. The second mission is ok. I find the third mission the easiest. If you are a good shooter, you can take all police officers and swat members from the high ground. Mission 4 is good. Mostly driving and on the end shooting some bikers weren't a problem. Mission 5 is nice. biggrin.gif

Overall, the story is good. I'll continue following your story. Keep up the good work. biggrin.gif

Don't forget to give me feedback about my mission series ''The Forgotten'' biggrin.gif

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 08:12 PM

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Feb 18 2011, 20:05)
Played the first 5 missions. I had a little problems with the first one cause I didn't expect the bazooka guy in Grove Street so he blew up my car. The second mission is ok. I find the third mission the easiest. If you are a good shooter, you can take all police officers and swat members from the high ground. Mission 4 is good. Mostly driving and on the end shooting some bikers weren't a problem. Mission 5 is nice. biggrin.gif

Overall, the story is good. I'll continue following your story. Keep up the good work. biggrin.gif

Don't forget to give me feedback about my mission series ''The Forgotten'' biggrin.gif

Thanks! And sure thing! I just gonna upload next mission and i gonna check out your missions ;d

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Posted 18 February 2011 - 08:18 PM

New mission uploaded: Surrounded by morons...

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Posted 19 February 2011 - 06:13 PM

Topic updated: New mission added: Saving Richard (PART 1)

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Posted 19 February 2011 - 07:16 PM

Topic updated!: Part 2 added of mission "Saving Richard"!!! READ WARNING NEAR LINK BEFORE PLAYING!! IMPORTANT!

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Posted 19 February 2011 - 07:55 PM

Topic Updated: New Mission Added: Gun Dealer's paradise!

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Posted 19 February 2011 - 08:20 PM

Just finished "Gun Dealer's paradise" FUn misison smile.gif

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Posted 19 February 2011 - 08:21 PM

QUOTE (pauliux2 @ Feb 19 2011, 20:20)
Just finished "Gun Dealer's paradise" FUn misison smile.gif

Well... biggrin.gif Stay tuned biggrin.gif New mission "The Set Up" is coming soon biggrin.gif I already have all the things how it will look like in the mission in my head >:D biggrin.gif

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Posted 20 February 2011 - 08:23 AM

Topic updated: New Mission added: "The Setup"

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 06:52 PM

Topic updated! Trailer added! Special thanks to Pauliux22!

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 07:43 PM

Topic updated! New mission added!: Dance with a bullet! + Chapter 2 has been COMPLETED! New chapter is coming soon!




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