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Posted 09 April 2012 - 08:40 AM

Hey Morkie, reading trough your Justice in Flames inspired me enough to go on with this smile.gif

Also, just saying, this concept started in 2011 so it still can be nominated for the annual awards.

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Posted 13 May 2012 - 12:44 AM

QUOTE (Mati @ Monday, Apr 9 2012, 08:40)
Hey Morkie, reading trough your Justice in Flames inspired me enough to go on with this smile.gif

Also, just saying, this concept started in 2011 so it still can be nominated for the annual awards.

wow I'm honored

Congrats on having this win the award man. smile.gif

This played a big part in JIF.

Enjoy your medal(s) smile.gif

And i just saw your post about carrying on - i hope you do, and i think the award shows that people think it's good. It deserves to be completed i think.


Sorry for not posting - i simply didnt realise .

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#633

Posted 13 May 2012 - 01:20 AM

Yes congratulations Mati.. I voted for Pedochu (sorry) but you are a very deserving winner and I'm happy to pass the torch to you!

This definitely shows that you should carry on and complete this story. I really look forward to seeing what else you have to offer.

BTW congratulations Mokrie on best story smile.gif

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Posted 13 May 2012 - 05:45 AM

Well guys, I have to thank you for supporting this concept. As English isn't my first language and Pedochu is much better in writing than me, I didn't expect to win the first place. Congrats for him too.

Yeah, for now I'm kinda busy (exams) so I won't write that much for the next 2-3 weeks but I'm starting to work on this again.
Also, sorry Morkie for not checking out JIC since the 4th or 5th chapter. I'm very busy right now but I'll get to it when I have some free time.

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Posted 13 May 2012 - 11:16 AM

QUOTE (Mati @ Sunday, May 13 2012, 05:45)
Well guys, I have to thank you for supporting this concept. As English isn't my first language and Pedochu is much better in writing than me, I didn't expect to win the first place. Congrats for him too.

Yeah, for now I'm kinda busy (exams) so I won't write that much for the next 2-3 weeks but I'm starting to work on this again.
Also, sorry Morkie for not checking out JIC since the 4th or 5th chapter. I'm very busy right now but I'll get to it when I have some free time.

Writing is all about conveying a message. Considering english isnt your first language, you did well. Most of the errors were the typical things non english people struggle with. Our language is apparantly one of the hardest to learn.

And by all means focus on your exams.
Justic in Flames had moments where i simply couldnt write it. I tried but it wasn't happening. There were times where that, and COL could have falled by the wayside. Sometimes you have to force it, sacrifice an hour sleep or something, but sometimes you do have to just put it aside for a few days or a week. I think this is one of the latter; exams are important, and we'll all still be here when you're done.

Also as a side note, I'm going to keep Rami's backstory vague (though i have just written a bit where he explains the truth behind his infamous act of beating a man with his own leg), trying to HINT at things, so as to allow more freedom with this tounge.gif

Feel free to send me a PM when you're back posting missions and i'll re-read it smile.gif

@MOB: Thanks. I owe some thanks to Mati and this story. The dynamic of Rami and Niko works well i think, and i have to give credit to Mati for making the character appeal to me.

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Posted 13 May 2012 - 11:59 AM

Congrats Mati, you deserved to win! icon14.gif

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Posted 13 May 2012 - 01:16 PM

Congratulations, Mati, you're the one who really deserve it.

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Posted 13 June 2012 - 07:04 PM

has this died again?

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#639

Posted 13 June 2012 - 08:06 PM

Nah, give me one more week and I'm starting working on it again smile.gif

Sorry, but I wasn't really interested in continuing this at first. I've had exams, I've wrote other things and such.. but next week I'll have more time smile.gif

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Posted 13 June 2012 - 08:44 PM

QUOTE (Mati @ Wednesday, Jun 13 2012, 20:06)
Nah, give me one more week and I'm starting working on it again smile.gif

Sorry, but I wasn't really interested in continuing this at first. I've had exams, I've wrote other things and such.. but next week I'll have more time smile.gif

Cool
What else did you write? If they'd uploaded I might check them out

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Posted 14 June 2012 - 02:13 PM

Well, it's something more.. poetic. I've been writing rap songs for a while now. I haven't uploaded them anywhere yet.

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Posted 17 June 2012 - 10:51 PM

Fair enough man. If you upload them send me a PM, I'll check them out (text or audio).

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Posted 12 August 2012 - 04:00 PM

If you complete it send me a PM please.

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 05:36 PM Edited by Money Over Bullshit, 05 November 2014 - 09:41 PM.

I've been going back through old concepts to refresh my memory and one thing that stuck out for me in this (aside from how good it was) was Israeli SMG and how ugly the icon is with that stupid 2D scope on the top. I always hated it to be honest but I just thought that I would bump this topic and give some of the newcomers a chance to see it by posting an updated version of it since to be quite frank it undersells my skills as a weapon icon maker biggrin.gif

I know Mati is now busted and cant update the OP but never the less here it is:

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