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#541

Posted 27 July 2011 - 10:27 AM

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Thursday, Jul 21 2011, 21:59)
I like the quote in your sig mati. It makes mine sound very authentic too smile.gif

Thanks. I changed my sig to a obviously better one. The quote was ''No crime is as great as letting the government obey it'' for those who are interested.

New mission soon.

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#542

Posted 27 July 2011 - 11:53 AM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Wednesday, Jul 27 2011, 10:27)
QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Thursday, Jul 21 2011, 21:59)
I like the quote in your sig mati. It makes mine sound very authentic too smile.gif

Thanks. I changed my sig to a obviously better one. The quote was ''No crime is as great as letting the government obey it'' for those who are interested.

New mission soon.

haha nice. I cba to change my sig often tounge.gif

Looking forward to the next mission biggrin.gif

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#543

Posted 01 August 2011 - 07:21 PM

This looks good. Good job!

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#544

Posted 04 August 2011 - 10:26 PM

Thanks man. I don't really have time to write right now and I'm lacking inspiration ._.

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#545

Posted 09 August 2011 - 03:40 AM

Mati, come on bro you are the inspiration.

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Posted 11 August 2011 - 07:20 PM

QUOTE (vertical limit @ Tuesday, Aug 9 2011, 03:40)
Mati, come on bro you are the inspiration.

Whoa, that means a lot to me man.

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#547

Posted 11 August 2011 - 08:32 PM

It is true man. smile.gif

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#548

Posted 11 August 2011 - 08:49 PM

QUOTE (Mati. @ Thursday, Aug 11 2011, 20:20)
QUOTE (vertical limit @ Tuesday, Aug 9 2011, 03:40)
Mati, come on bro you are the inspiration.

Whoa, that means a lot to me man.

Well I agree with VL, it's true. You remind me of Scratchcard back in the day lol.gif

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#549

Posted 13 August 2011 - 09:18 PM

QUOTE (Tommy. @ Thursday, Aug 11 2011, 20:49)
QUOTE (Mati. @ Thursday, Aug 11 2011, 20:20)
QUOTE (vertical limit @ Tuesday, Aug 9 2011, 03:40)
Mati, come on bro you are the inspiration.

Whoa, that means a lot to me man.

Well I agree with VL, it's true. You remind me of Scratchcard back in the day lol.gif

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Anyway, I started working on this again. I'm thinking of removing the previous mission given by Ray Boccino including the next one given by him, I just don't see him fit in.

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#550

Posted 16 August 2011 - 10:19 PM

No opinions about the above post? I really need feedback on this, I want to lead the story on a good path.
I'm still not sure if Kenny should betray Rami, or if they stay together till the end. If you read the missions carefully, you can see that Kenny and Rami used to be friends before America. Why? If you read Kenny's police records:
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Arrived in the US in the 1980s on an Israeli passport though, this was confiscated when evidence came to light that he did not, as previously claimed, have a Jewish grandmother.

I mentioned that Rami helped Kenny to make false IDs back in... wherever they were. So I'm not very sure if I should break up their friendship and make them enemies. Yalon has thought about a retirement from his work, but I doubt that he would really do try to do it.
My plot point wasn't focused just around Kenny, I still have some things I want to reveal in the upcoming mission.

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#551

Posted 21 August 2011 - 02:24 AM

If you're not entirely sure about the Ray Boccino mission you should give it the boot. There's no point including them to extend the storyline if they add no weight to it. Vice City didn't have the most drawn out storyline, only about twenty missions, but it made sure everything that needed to be said was said.

Personally, I don't think Kenny Petrovic would betray Rami. He needs him. Goons and Grunts are ten a penny, but his most prized hitman?
Rami betraying Petrovic himself would be a more plausible conclusion. The man wants to retire, Kenny won't let him. He needs money, money that could be made selling his old adversary down the river. He obviously isn't bound by loyalties, just the figure of his payment.

Given the right number, what's the price of life to Rami Yalon?

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#552

Posted 23 August 2011 - 08:12 PM

Thanks for the comment, Tyla. This helped me out a lot.

A large layout update along with new features and rewritten missions is coming at the end of this month.

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#553

Posted 23 August 2011 - 10:54 PM

I wanna see the remaining missions! Work on COL 2 - which btw may not be called city of lies - has begun, and seeing as how I'm considering this as canon in the prelude, I'm itching to see where it goes.
Also interested to see what the COL reference is tounge.gif

Gd to see this still alive anyway smile.gif

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#554

Posted 28 August 2011 - 10:48 PM

Only because you asked, Morkie. If my concept had chapters, this would be the last mission of the first chapter.
Obviously not done yet, here's a small preview.

Enslaved
Mission Giver: Samara
Mission Start: Alderney Safehouse
Unlocked After: Complete missions 1-17, only available during daylight.

Revenge is something that happens everyday. People are avenging on their sworn nemesis, only for their own satisfaction. You can compare revenge to a huge desert, its never a straight road. It's a wasteland, and just like every other wasteland, it's easy to lose your way and forget where you were going.

Rami Yalon decides to visit his son and his wife once again. He grabs [/I]his stomach for a second and then opens the front door and walks inside. There's nobody on the first floor. ''Samara? Aaron? Anyone here?'', Rami wasn't getting any respond. It was kinda suspicious, so he checked if his gun was reloaded, making his way upstairs. He slowly approached his son's room and slowly opened the door, having his gun ready. He was hearing a noisy sound.

He kicked the door open and aimed the gun on his own son, who was wearing a headset, so he just listened to some music. ''Paranoid again, father? Haha.'', laughed his son evilly. Rami got his gun back as quick as he could and asked: ''Aaron, have you seen your mother? I thought, maybe we could do something together. Like a family. His son took off his headsets and stood up. ''You had more than 24 years to do something with your family. You wanted to kill instead.'', Aaron didn't show any kind of understanding.

Rami sat down on the nearest chair, so did Aaron. ''Aaron, I was thinking a lot. I am a killer. But...'', his son ignored him and walked out of the room. Rami shook his head in disappointment. He got approached by Samara, and received a small kiss on the cheek. She has heard their conversation. She closed the doors and took something out of a small pocket. It was a pistol. ''I found it under Aaron's bed.''

''What the f*ck is this boy up to? How did he even get this gun?'', asked Rami. ''Stop acting like a f*cking priest, we all know it's your fault!'', Samara cried out loudly. Rami took her into his arms. He did now that is's his fault. It could be just for safety. Or he wanted to be a killer too. Or it could be for any possible reason, and Rami didn't have a clue. But he realized that this can't go on like this. He's not only destroying the ones he kills. He also destroys the ones he loves. Plus, he destroys himself. ''Alright... Alright. I'll stop. Say goodbye to Kenny Petrovic, he's gone from my life forever.''

Were it so easy...

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#555

Posted 29 August 2011 - 10:38 AM

Well Mati nice job. Any plans on making a full GTA?

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#556

Posted 29 August 2011 - 10:56 AM

QUOTE (cas-97 @ Monday, Aug 29 2011, 10:38)
Well Mati nice job. Any plans on making a full GTA?

I strongly doubt it

I'm liking what I'm seeing though, Mati

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#557

Posted 29 August 2011 - 11:19 AM

Of course I'd love to make a full GTA. Does anyone know Houser's phone number so I can buy his company?
Thanks for the feedback so far, more to come.

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Posted 29 August 2011 - 03:36 PM

QUOTE (mati @ Monday, Aug 29 2011, 11:19)
Of course I'd love to make a full GTA. Does anyone know Houser's phone number so I can buy his company?
Thanks for the feedback so far, more to come.

Yeah - 555 U-Wish.

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#559

Posted 29 August 2011 - 10:34 PM

Good f*cking job mate, nice work.

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#560

Posted 03 September 2011 - 03:46 PM

Thanks. Topic is going to be updated tomorrow.

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Posted 04 September 2011 - 02:08 AM

Good to know.

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#562

Posted 06 September 2011 - 09:09 PM

33% (1 of the 3 posts) have been updated. New character descriptions and layout has been changed.

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#563

Posted 06 September 2011 - 09:25 PM

Wow, I really like the update. The characters section is really original looking. icon14.gif

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Posted 06 September 2011 - 10:13 PM

Agreed Akavari.

It is nice and looks very cool

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Posted 10 September 2011 - 04:59 AM

Thanks for the feedback, I'll update the rest of the topic as soon as I can.
I thought of a really awesome reward for 100% competition...

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Posted 10 September 2011 - 08:12 AM

QUOTE (mati @ Saturday, Sep 10 2011, 04:59)
Thanks for the feedback, I'll update the rest of the topic as soon as I can.
I thought of a really awesome reward for 100% competition...

Ooh.....?

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Posted 10 September 2011 - 08:16 AM

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Saturday, Sep 10 2011, 08:12)
QUOTE (mati @ Saturday, Sep 10 2011, 04:59)
Thanks for the feedback, I'll update the rest of the topic as soon as I can.
I thought of a really awesome reward for 100% competition...

Ooh.....?

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#568

Posted 11 September 2011 - 11:32 PM

When is the next piece coming?

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Posted 14 September 2011 - 07:43 PM

When it's done tounge.gif
Nah, I was busy with other things. I also have to finish the mission I posted on the last page.

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#570

Posted 30 September 2011 - 04:57 PM

The topic has been majorly updated.
- New layout
- Weapon customization details removed. (it still exists in this concept though)
- Vehicles removed.
- Many minor updates and changes.


So f*ck yeah, now I can work on some missions. Stay tuned.




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