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#331

Posted 02 March 2011 - 08:40 PM Edited by mati1501, 02 March 2011 - 09:04 PM.

OK, the mission is finished. Rami's activities will have huge consequences later in the storyline.

EDIT: sh*t, sorry I didn't want to double post.

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#332

Posted 02 March 2011 - 09:19 PM

So RAMI causes the bridge closures that restrict Niko from moving around?
Very nice if that's correct smile.gif

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Posted 02 March 2011 - 09:26 PM

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Mar 2 2011, 21:19)
So RAMI causes the bridge closures that restrict Niko from moving around?
Very nice if that's correct smile.gif

Yep. It's well known Loopy is not very smart and that the plan won't work forever. The reason why the Lupisellas don't want have anything to do with the Russians is because they know a war would start...

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Posted 02 March 2011 - 09:44 PM

well i likey! biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 March 2011 - 12:35 AM

Wait a second, if Rami bombs the bridges, why are they built in IV?

And how can Sergei cross?! ph34r.gif

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#336

Posted 03 March 2011 - 02:52 AM Edited by Mokrie Dela, 03 March 2011 - 02:57 AM.

same reason the crane that luis blows up in Bang Bang never disappears in IV tounge.gif

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Posted 03 March 2011 - 02:54 AM

NEVERMIND.

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Posted 03 March 2011 - 05:52 AM

He doesn't destroy the bridges, he only damages them a little.

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#339

Posted 06 March 2011 - 08:29 PM

Hey man I was thinking maybe you could add the Wildey Magnum to your arsenal of weapons since I had originally intended to use it for my Family Ties topic but ditched it in favour of the Snub Nose. Not only would it suit this topic due to Rami's somewhat Charles Bronson esque bad ass appeal but it's such a cool gun and it would a shame if nobody used it.

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Posted 06 March 2011 - 09:21 PM Edited by mati1501, 06 March 2011 - 09:24 PM.

QUOTE (Money Over Bullsh*t @ Mar 6 2011, 20:29)
Hey man I was thinking maybe you could add the Wildey Magnum to your arsenal of weapons since I had originally intended to use it for my Family Ties topic but ditched it in favour of the Snub Nose. Not only would it suit this topic due to Rami's somewhat Charles Bronson esque bad ass appeal but it's such a cool gun and it would a shame if nobody used it.

Thanks man, I'll add it smile.gif
The next mission is coming tomorrow.

EDIT: I f*cked up the coding again, can anyone help with the weapon table?

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Posted 06 March 2011 - 09:54 PM

Weapon NameAdd-Ons
Katana
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Customized Pistol
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• Explosive bullets= Increased car/body damage 10% $40/bullet
• Advanced bullets= Increased body damage 20% Decreased range 30% $100/bullet
• Golden bullets= Increased body damage 30% Decreased range 40% $200/bullet
• Silencer= Ability to stealth, helps to kill a target without alerting others. $1000
• Basic scope= Gives the ability to zoom in. $500
• Laser scope= Gives the ability to zoom in, helps killing targets. $1000
• Automag= Makes the pistol an automatic pistol $6000
Automatic Pistol
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N/A
Wildey Magnum
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Bullpup Shotgun
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Isreali Assault Rifle
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Here you go: I also changed the sequence of weapons to sequence from the game. I hope it's not a problem.

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Posted 07 March 2011 - 09:46 PM

Trying is the first step towards failure (Mark ''Loopy'')
After ''Bridge over troubled slaughter'', Rami gets a phone call from Loopy. He informs Rami about the plan being a small failure since most of the Commies had fake VISAs or just traveled by boat. So he invites Rami for a small visit at his apartment. The mission is triggered outside. A cutscene appears. Rami sighs and rings the doorbell. The door immediately gets opened up by Loopy, this time luckily with clothes. This time the place is cleaned up though: Some of the other Lupisellas are sitting in the living room, reloading their guns. Loopy wants to hit them hard by attacking Kenny Petrovic. Rami sighs down the floor and tries to explain that Kenny was operating a long time ago in LC. There's no need to start a war with him. He also explains that Loopy's actions are idiotic and useless. He asks the gangsters why they want to do it anyways. ''He pays well.'' Loopy grabs out an wildy deagle and goes towards the window. I don't want them to be here, you understand? We own Liberty. Look outside, some motherf*cker selling handbags to tourists. Loopy starts shooting towards the familiar handbag seller, which drops his bags and runs away. Go to f*cking Florida, bitch!

Rami's job is to drive with the Lupisella convoy to a ''fake'' deal between the Petrovic's and the Lupisellas. There are two cars, we have to take one of the driver seats. Loopy gets the front seat and two other gangsters sit in the back. The deal is near a warehouse in Bohan. While driving, Rami tries to impress the gangsters by yet another story about his infamous hit where he beat up a man with his own severed leg but always gets interrupted by Loopy. Before we go, we get a silenced sniper rifle from Loopy. He tells us to climb the warehouse and watch over the dock. He also hands over a headset so they can communicate. Soon, a few black cars park up near the dock. We have to keep an eye on it. ''Rami, one of them is Igor, Kenny's cousin.'' The Russians soon catch up with the Italians. They have a small talk. Meanwhile, Rami recognizes a NOOSE team on a building nearby, ready to shoot. We have to take them down in silence. Suddenly, Igor recognizes Rami and the hell starts: the Russians, Italians and more NOOSE teams start a shootout. We have to save Loopy but also keep an eye on Igor. Rami tells Loopy that he and Petrovic used to be partners. Igor tries to shoot Rami but Rami saves him from being shot by a cop. He quickly runs towards the nearest car wondering why Rami saved him.

We have to go down and kill the remaining cops. Loopy got himself injured. ''Sorry Mark, but I f*ck myself up if I continue working with you.'', says Rami while driving Loopy back home.
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Posted 07 March 2011 - 10:31 PM

Im really liking the missions man, great job. icon14.gif I have a question: when does your story end in GTA IV?

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Posted 08 March 2011 - 10:49 AM

Nice mission smile.gif

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Posted 08 March 2011 - 04:14 PM

Nice mission man icon14.gif

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Posted 08 March 2011 - 04:19 PM

Thanks guys colgate.gif

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Posted 10 March 2011 - 01:40 AM

Your bbcode seems to be a bit messed up man.. Copy this code into your two posts on the first page and it should be working ok.

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[b]Rami Yalon[/b]
[u]LCPD Database information:[/u]
Surname: Yalon
First Name: Rami

Age: 46

Place of Birth: Israel

Affiliations: Linked to Russian Organized Crime

Criminal Record:

1985 - Murder
Notes:[LIST]
[*]Believed to be ex-Israeli Special Forces. Unclear if he was working for the government or private interests when first charged with murder on US soil.
[*]Reported to be a hitman used by Russian nationals in Liberty City such as Kenny Petrovic.
[*]Returned to Israel after carrying out contracts in order to take advantage of the absence of an extradition treaty with that state.
[*]Believed to have worked for the Italian-American mafia until his fees became too high for them to afford.
[*]Known to use a number of different weapons in his hits.
[*]Reported to have beaten a man to death with his own severed leg.
[/LIST]Rami Yalon is the protagonist of Life's Price. Born in Israel, he didn't know his father and his mother died as he was 8 years old. He joined the special forces underage, he used a fake ID to work there. He was caught during an operation in the US and went to prison, since then he stayed in America. He didn't try hard to get a normal live, after going out of prison he got involved with crime quickly. The powerful mob bosses and government agents are impressed of his skill. He found an woman in America and has a son with her but she break up the relationship because of Rami's dangerous appeal. He got himself into the assassination work too deeply, his quit would be too critical for him and his family. He made too much enemies. During his work in LC he will learn a lot about himself and life.

[b][u]Aaron Yalon[/u][/b]
LCPD Database information:

Surname: Yalon
First name: Aaron
Age: 24

Affiliations: None.

Criminal Record:

2004: Insurance Fraud
Notes:[LIST]
[*]Rami Yalon's son, his father is believed to be a hitman.
[*]Could be responsible for the internet downfall in 2006 since he is a professional hacker.
[*]Rumored to help his father on a few jobs.
[/LIST]Aaron is Rami's son, he was studying to become a computer scientist but had to break it up because of his financial standings.
He and a few of his school friends became hackers, but they also own a small computer shop uptown. Aaron dislikes his father, he mostly blames him if something goes wrong. He and his mother are often in trouble because of Rami's actions.

[b][u]Samaria Harel Yalon[/u][/b]
LCPD Database Record:

Surname: Harel Yalon
First name: Samaria
Age: 42

Affiliations: Linked to Russian organized crime.

Criminal Record:

1995: Grand Theft Auto
2003: Use of Crystal Meth designer drug.
Notes:[LIST]
[*]Rami Yalon's ex-wife. She possibly left him because of his rumored work.
[*]She and her son were kidnapped in 2005 by unknown men but they managed to escape. It's rumored that Rami freed them.
[*]Forgetting about her age, she still comes to many clubs. She is often seen with Russian gangsters for unknown reasons, rumor is she sells drugs for them.
[*]Has a criminal past.
[/LIST]Samaria is Rami's ex-wife, she moved to Alderney to a safe place to avoid him. They still have some contact though, mostly if there are problems. Samaria still loves Rami, but is scared to come back to him. For some reason, she thinks it's her fault Rami doesn't want to leave his job. She works at an Italian restaurant in Alderney.

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Rocco is introduced to Rami by Moe Schwartz. There are a few boys he doesn't like. And Rami has to take care of them. Rocco is an arrogant, racist guido and thinks that only because he's made, he can stomp on anyone he wants.  

[b][u]Vincent Lupisella[/u][/b]
LCPD Database information:

Surname: Lupisella
First Name: Vincent

Age: 79

Affiliations: Lupisella Crime Syndicate

Criminal Record:

1948 - Hijacking
1950 - Manslaughter
1952 - Armed Robbery
1956 - Extortion
1970 - Conspiracy
1989 - Racketeering
2001 - Racketeering
2005 - Obstruction Of Justice
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[*]Suspected to be the head of the Lupisella Crime Syndicate despite his son, Mark "Loopy" Lupisella, being officially in charge.
[*]Believed to have killed his twin brother in a struggle for leadership of the family.
[*]Claims to suffer from Alzheimer's Disease though his lawyers have blocked any State sponsored tests to verify this.
[*]The Lupisella organization is believed to control many major Liberty City rackets.
[/LIST]Vincent is the official head of the Lupisella Crime Syndicate, one of the most powerful families of Liberty City. He is a paranoid and ruthless man, maybe its because of his age. He hires Rami to take care of shopkeepers that don't pay the loan sharks but his rewards are just not enough. His son Mark, also known as 'Loopy', tries to run the family himself because of Vincent's bad choices. But Vincent refuses to handle over the lead. He knows Mark would ruin the family. He knows many people are after him and he may dies soon so he starts thinking who gets the official lead. Vincent is an old friend of the Don of the Gambetti Family, although he only waits till Jon dies so he can take over his rackets.

[u]Mark Lupisella[/u]
LCPD Database information:
Surname: Lupisella
First Name: Mark "Loopy"

Age: 50

Affiliations: Lupisella Crime Syndicate

Criminal Record:

1975 - Assault
1978 - Manslaughter
1985 - Manslaughter
2001 - Racketeering
Notes:[LIST]
[*]Son of Vincent Lupisella.
[*]Allegedly the boss of the Lupisella Crime Syndicate though many believe his father is still in charge.
[*]Rumored that his street name, "Loopy", was gained because of his notoriously low IQ and propensity for violence.
[*]Attempted to get a reality TV show about his life commissioned by the CNT network but plans were canceled when he attacked an executive producer.[/LIST]
Mark Lupisella, also known as Loopy, is a hypocrite violent idiot trying to take over his fathers place. Unlucky for him, his father has different plans. He is jealous because Vincent threats Moe like his own son. Where Mark goes, there is trouble: CNT network sent a lawyer army after him, he always seeks trouble with other gangs along with many other situations embarrass him and his family.  

[b][u]Sonny Honorato[/u][/b]
LCPD Database Information:
Surname: Honorato
First Name: Sonny

Age: 65


Affiliations: Lupisella Crime Syndicate

Criminal Record:

1958 - Assault
1959 - Manslaughter
1963 - Murder
1978 - Cemetary Desecration
1985 - Possession Controlled Substance: Tranquilizers
1989 - Manslaughter
2001 - Racketeering
Notes:
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[*]Sexual deviant. Paid for his favorite stripper from the Triangle Club to have nursing training so she could look after him in the hospital.
[*]Still believed to be the principle hitman for the Lupisella Crime Syndicate, despite his age.
[*]Suffered a massive heart attack in 2003 back on the job 10 days later - whacking a cardiologist with gambling debts.
[*]Believed to be the hitman behind a number of bodies that recently found floating in the West River with plucked eyebrows.
[*]Reckless driver. Drives a blue Sultan.
[/LIST]Sonny is a long time loyal assassin for the Lupisella family, although his age might become a problem. Overall, he has a wealthy life. A Playboy, paying a stripper to be his nurse both day and nighttime. He spends some days at the hospital because of his heart attacks but his friends and bosses believe he goes there only for the opium. Being an amateur at young age, making his first hits at the age of 15, Sonny became a true weapon master and a professional hitman. People don't understand him at some situations. I mean, why does he laugh while everyone else is worrying about landing in prison or being shot by cops? Nobody really knows, some believe its because of the morphine. His mind being fully corrupted by his job, sex and drugs makes him a true psychopath.

[b][u]Moe Schwartz[/u][/b]

Surname: Schwartz
First Name: Moe

Age: 69

Affiliations: Lupisella Crime Syndicate

Criminal Record:

1970 - Speeding Violation
2001 - Racketeering
Notes:[LIST]
[*]Believed to be accountant to the Lupisella Crime Syndicate.
[*]Rumored that his half-Jewish ancestry prevents him from being fully inducted into the family.
[*]His accounting work for the Lupisellas has meant that they are the only Liberty City Crime syndicate that the Federal Government has been unable to charge with tax irregularities.
[*]Spent 349 days in 2002 only communicating through spreadsheets because he was concerned about surveillance devices.
[*]Detectives were unable to export the correct macros and no evidence could be gathered during this period.
[/LIST]Moe Schwartz is an associate from the Lupisella's, some people think he is a right-hand man for both Vincent and Mark. Maybe he's what makes the family the 4th best LC Crime Family. It could have been first... if he was fully Italian. Moe own a car mechanic ring over on Charge Island. He has small jobs for Rami at times.

[b][u]Dani Lupisella[/u][/b]
Dani is not one of these guido b*tches like Gracie Ancelotti, although he hates if a boyfriend brakes up. She isn't connected to the Crime of the family at all. She studies and experiences all that college life. She is a true party lion, hangs out with her friends like Sharon Morton or Alex. And wouldn't mind to date an older man...

[b][u]Kenny Petrovic[/u][/b]
Surname: Petrovic
First Name: Kenny

Age: 48


Affiliations: Linked to Russian Organized Crime Syndicates throughout Liberty City.

Criminal Record:

1990 - Manslaughter
1994 - Racketeering
Notes:
[*]Believed to be the kingpin of Russian Organized Crime in Liberty City, if not the whole United States.
[*]Arrived in the US in the 1980s on an Israeli passport though, this was confiscated when evidence came to light that he did not, as previously claimed, have a Jewish grandmother.
[*]Involved in all types of criminal activity.
The Kingpin of Russian organized crime, Kenny Petrovic later becomes one of the main mission givers in the name. He wants everyone that works for him be loyal. He knows Rami since the 80s, they had both a business but also a personal good relationship. Rami helped him to make a fake ID so he comes to the US. Since then, they never saw each other again. That's one of the reasons why they start working together again. Kenny has many family members in the US: his wife Dasha, his daughter Agata, his cousin Igor, his son Lenny and his nephew Alexei.  

[b][u]Giovanni Ancelotti[/u][/b]
Surname: Ancelotti
First Name: Giovanni

Age: 78

Place of Birth: Naples, Italy

Affiliations: Ancelotti Crime Syndicate

Criminal Record:

1951 - Possession Stolen Property
1952 - Extortion
1955 - Loansharking
1960 - Manslaughter
2003 - Racketeering
Notes:
[*]Believed to have been in charge of the blackmarket rackets selling contraband to US troops in Naples at the close of WWII - he was 15.
[*]Immigrated to the US in 1950 and worked in the Alderney Fruit Market which he now owns.
[*]Ran a loan sharking, fencing and extortion operation from the market.
[*]Believed to have taken control of the crime family since the death of his uncle in 1978
[*]Links to nightclub owner Tony Prince.
[*]Father of Gracie Ancelotti
[*]Street name - Old Man Ancelotti
Old man Ancelotti is one of the mission givers. He requests a few hits on the rival families of the Commission. The only reason Rami works for him, is that Loopy uses him as an undercover spy.

[b][u]Ray Boccino[/u][/b]
Surname: Boccino
First Name: Ray

Age: 35

Place of Birth: Westdyke, Alderney

Affiliations: Pegorino Crime Syndicate

Criminal Record:

1990 - Posession of stolen property
1991 - Grand larceny
1995 - Hijacking
1999 - Burglary
Ray Boccino is a good earning senior capo from the Alderney Pegorino family. Since the Lupisella have a small debt to them, Rami has to do a few jobs for him. Ray runs a waste management business to don't gain too much heat. He is known to have an explosive temper so Rami and him get well along.

[b][u]Kurt Heinrich[/u][/b]
Kurt Heinrich is a German gunsmith and a long time friend of Rami. His father designed Rami's signature gun and was also unfortunately killed with it by his own hand. Kurt can mod Rami's weapons by a small payment if he visits him over in South Bohan.

[b][u]Brian Schwartz[/u][/b]
Brian Schwartz is an associate of the Lupisella family and can't rank up just like his father. They have a special father-son relationship: They are a mix of friends and criminals. Rami was caring a lot about Brian while his father was in trouble. Brian got into criminal life because of his father and Rami.


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[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ip3_189ToWQ]Gerhald Naholz: Bossa Cubana[/URL]
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LC66Rjke4ZA]Club Dogo: La Stanza Dei Fantasmi[/URL](Italian)
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-ZA9GchZFw]Shi 360: Kmo Hayot[/URL](Israeli)
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jsyBBPXoUEQ]Massar Egbaria, Ana Haweet[/URL](Egyptian)
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqn_ufUXwOk]Solnyshko: Demo[/URL](Russian)
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vcPXVPXAA-8]Lasercraft 3D: Nein man[/URL](German)
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8JOrGw16sqo]CHR: Made in Chile[/URL](Chilean)
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yVBlApeBg5o]Shakira: La Tortua[/URL](Coulmbian)
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1EXUNEsQ1Rk]Mezo: Kocham[/URL](Polish)
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=24R43FQR4e]Guus Meeuwis: Het is een nacht[/URL](Dutch)
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1lLm0HYVrlg&feature=player_embedded]Eik Shaneesh: Das Racist[/URL]

[b][SIZE=4]Triple Clef FM[/b][/SIZE]

[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=asZxVRQxW6w]Kevin McLeod- Darkness is coming[/URL]
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eo7AFEffnj4]Ave Maria[/URL]
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RZCZ1tbLw6s]Pavarotti- Nessun Dorma[/URL]
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=awR485a-hT4]Offenbach- Infernal Galop[/URL]
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9adW5No9IM]Orff- O Fortuna[/URL]
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ipzR9bhei_o]Bach- Tocatta and Furgue[/URL]
[URL=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BQvc7Ne5mok]The City Of Prague Philharmonic - The Godfather - The Godfather Waltz[/URL]


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[th]Add-Ons[/th]
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[tr]
[td][center][b][SIZE=2]Katana[/SIZE][/b]
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[td]N/A[/td]
[/tr]
[tr]
[td][center][b][SIZE=2]Customized Pistol[/SIZE][/b]

[IMG]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/3596/custompistol.png[/IMG][/center][/td]
[td][b][*] Explosive bullets= Increased car/body damage 10% $40/bullet
[*] Advanced bullets= Increased body damage 20% Decreased range 30% $100/bullet
[*] Golden bullets= Increased body damage 30% Decreased range 40% $200/bullet
[*] Silencer= Ability to stealth, helps to kill a target without alerting others. $1000
[*] Basic scope= Gives the ability to zoom in. $500
[*] Laser scope= Gives the ability to zoom in, helps killing targets. $1000
[*] Automag= Makes the pistol an automatic pistol $6000
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[/tr]
[tr]
[td][center][b][SIZE=2]Automatic Pistol[/SIZE][/b]
[IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/3128i6w.png[/IMG][/center][/td]
[td]N/A[/td]
[/tr]
[tr]
[td][center][b][SIZE=2]Wildey Magnum[/SIZE][/b]
[IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/mw76og.png[/IMG][/center][/td]
[td]N/A[/td]
[/tr]
[tr]
[td][center][b][SIZE=2]Israeli SMG[/SIZE][/b]

[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/6zui4w.png[/IMG][/center][/td]
[td]N/A[/td]
[/tr]
[tr]
[td][center][b][SIZE=2]Bullpup Shotgun[/SIZE][/b]

[IMG]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7687/mos500bp.png[/IMG][/center][/td]
[td]N/A[/td]
[/tr]
[tr]
[td][center][b][SIZE=2]Isreali Assault Rifle[/SIZE][/b]

[IMG]http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9009/galil.png[/IMG][/center][/td]
[td]N/A[/td]
[/tr]
[tr]
[td][center][b][SIZE=2]Silenced Sniper[/SIZE][/b]

[IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2q21t06.png[/IMG][/center][/td]
[td]N/A[/td]
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#348

Posted 10 March 2011 - 06:01 AM

Israeli SMG
Looks great man, only need a little fixing and its perfect. Thanks for your help smile.gif

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#349

Posted 11 March 2011 - 04:19 PM

JNR
Lee Scratch Perry- Rainy Night Club
Sam The Sham & the Pharaos- Wolly Bully
Adam Strange- Traveller
Fat Freddys Drop- Midnight Marauders
Bon Iver- For Emma
Cut Chemist- What's the altidute
Zoot woman- It's automatic

I give JNR a more oldie/lounge/dubstep feeling this time. I'm open for more suggestions.

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#350

Posted 11 March 2011 - 08:54 PM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Mar 11 2011, 16:19)
JNR
Lee Scratch Perry- Rainy Night Club
Sam The Sham & the Pharaos- Wolly Bully
Adam Strange- Traveller
Fat Freddys Drop- Midnight Marauders
Bon Iver- For Emma
Cut Chemist- What's the altidute
Zoot woman- It's automatic

I give JNR a more oldie/lounge/dubstep feeling this time. I'm open for more suggestions.

Why change JNR? It means Jazz Nation Radio, so why change it to dubstep or something alike?

But that's damn good music. icon14.gif

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#351

Posted 11 March 2011 - 08:57 PM

QUOTE (The Lolwut Pear @ Mar 11 2011, 20:54)
QUOTE (mati1501 @ Mar 11 2011, 16:19)
JNR
Lee Scratch Perry- Rainy Night Club
Sam The Sham & the Pharaos- Wolly Bully
Adam Strange- Traveller
Fat Freddys Drop- Midnight Marauders
Bon Iver- For Emma
Cut Chemist- What's the altidute
Zoot woman- It's automatic

I give JNR a more oldie/lounge/dubstep feeling this time. I'm open for more suggestions.

Why change JNR? It means Jazz Nation Radio, so why change it to dubstep or something alike?

But that's damn good music. icon14.gif

Why is Vladivostok FM changed to some dance radio station? tounge.gif

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#352

Posted 11 March 2011 - 08:58 PM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Mar 11 2011, 20:57)
QUOTE (The Lolwut Pear @ Mar 11 2011, 20:54)
QUOTE (mati1501 @ Mar 11 2011, 16:19)
JNR
Lee Scratch Perry- Rainy Night Club
Sam The Sham & the Pharaos- Wolly Bully
Adam Strange- Traveller
Fat Freddys Drop- Midnight Marauders
Bon Iver- For Emma
Cut Chemist- What's the altidute
Zoot woman- It's automatic

I give JNR a more oldie/lounge/dubstep feeling this time. I'm open for more suggestions.

Why change JNR? It means Jazz Nation Radio, so why change it to dubstep or something alike?

But that's damn good music. icon14.gif

Why is Vladivostok FM changed to some dance radio station? tounge.gif

Because TBoGT sucked. wink.gif

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#353

Posted 11 March 2011 - 10:28 PM

No Menergy (Giovanni Ancelotti)
After completing both ''Trying is the first step towards failure'' and ''Menace To Society'', Rami receives a phone call from an Italian mob boss which introduces himself as one of the most dangerous people in Liberty City, Giovanni Ancelotti. He tells us about his connections to the Lupisella mob and promises him some serious tasks instead of the sh*t Rami did for Mark. Giovanni waits for us over at his daughter's house. Rami steps trough the door and walks into the living room where three girls and one man are partying in the hot tub. One of them is Dani, which immediately points her gorgeous eyes at Rami. The man is having a French kiss with a black haired girl. ''Haha, Sharon and Rocco. I never thought THIS would happen.'' Says the third blonde-haired girl with a bitchy voice. Rocco steps out of the tub. ''Jeeewy! Today's not Sabbath, you have sh*t to do. Old Man is upstairs.'' Rami goes upstairs without saying a single word.

The Old Man sits in a heavily guarded room full of weapons. He grabs an AK47 and throws it towards Kurt, the well known weapon dealer and customizer. He attaches a scope and a silencer. Rami comes inside and the Old Man tells him about a job to prove himself. He plans a hit on a group of homosexuals which try to destroy the rep of the Old Man. The crazy gays try to destroy the reputation of various persons in the city. The targets have all plucked eyebrows. ''Why you asked? Cause they're fags.'' Suddenly Sonny Honorato holding an Israeli SMG. ''Rami, I'm getting paid as well so let's get over this quick.'' Rami sighs down the floor. The Ancelottis are not much different than the Lupisellas.

Before we kill anyone, Sonny tells us to drive to his apartment first. He has even more gifts. Despite Sonny's age, his apartment looks modern. Rami finds a bunch of coke on the table. Bras and tongs are all over the floor. He throws us over some clothes. The sexy suit is now available at the wardrobe anytime. ''Just in case you're in need of a boyfriend.'' Rami laughs with a sarcastic view and walks towards the elevator.

There are two targets in Alderney. The nearest one is a banker just north of the Tudor docks. We drop Sonny off just near the window elevator. Rami has to lure the target out of the bank to make Sonny have a clear shot. Entering the bank makes some women look towards Rami but it mostly attaches a male person. He drops his coffee and documents and walks to Rami. We can respond positively and negatively just like in San Andreas.

''Hello Handsome. How are you?''
(positive reply) ''Oh, hi. I'm OK. So, you're a busy man huh? What a shame.''
''Yeah... but now I have a break. Can I show you my office?''
(negative reply) ''Actually, I rather go for a walk. Wanna come along?''

When we lure him to the correct spot, Rami is suddenly splashed by the target's blood. His skull was pierced by Sonny's bullet. The second target is over at the docks. This time we have to drop Sonny near a ladder to the roof of a warehouse. The target is making a phone call. ''Yes Dimitri, my darling. See you soon!'' We have to lure him too:

''Uh-oh! What do we have here? I always liked older men!''
(negative reply) ''Oh come on, I'm not that old...''
''I know how I can help you with that problem. Come on! Follow me!''
(negative reply) ''No, you follow me. Prepare to be punished hard.''

Similar to the previous target, we have to lure him to a satisfying spot so Sonny has a clear shot. We grabbed no police attention at all. Sonny tells us he has to drop the bodies at a nearby river. He also recommends us to go to Honkers with Kurt before Rami turns gay.
Mission passed!
*$4000
*Kurt as friend
*Sexy outfit


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#354

Posted 11 March 2011 - 10:33 PM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Mar 11 2011, 22:28)
''Jeeewy! Today's not Sabbath, you have sh*t to do. Old Man is upstairs.''

That actually sounds like something Rocco would say. Well done. icon14.gif

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#355

Posted 11 March 2011 - 10:36 PM

Hehe. I loved how that mission hinted Dimitri Rascalov's homosexuality.

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#356

Posted 11 March 2011 - 11:10 PM

Interesting...but I think the whole plucked eyebrows was a thing that Sonny did to make his victims' bodies harder to identify? Either way, good job. icon14.gif

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#357

Posted 12 March 2011 - 01:27 AM Edited by Money Over Bullshit, 12 March 2011 - 01:33 AM.

You're really capturing everybody well.... except your protagonist!! Rami is a 45 year old cold hearted killer, if Rocco spoke to him like that he would hold his head under water for sure... Luis was a 25 year old naive kid compared to him and that's why he took Rocco's sh*t with a pinch. I think you should think as much about how Rami would logically react in situations like those as you do about capturing other characters personalities and then this story will really hit home. Otherwise good mission man icon14.gif

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#358

Posted 12 March 2011 - 01:50 AM

QUOTE (Money Over Bullsh*t @ Mar 12 2011, 01:27)
You're really capturing everybody well.... except your protagonist!! Rami is a 45 year old cold hearted killer, if Rocco spoke to him like that he would hold his head under water for sure... Luis was a 25 year old naive kid compared to him and that's why he took Rocco's sh*t with a pinch. I think you should think as much about how Rami would logically react in situations like those as you do about capturing other characters personalities and then this story will really hit home. Otherwise good mission man icon14.gif

I'm afraid i have to agree with this. I overlooked this because i thought Mati was trying to show Rami as something other then a "cold hearted killer" but if it were me writing it, i would have Rami more "professional hitman-like"

Thats not to say i don't like this though, and i've found trying to write someone as a "cold hearted contract killer" CAN make them seem uninteresting.

Its up to you really here mati, you can either take this on board and try to show Rami as more what we think he'd be like, OR you can stick to your guns and continue with your interpretation.
Dont take this as a negative btw, cos i am loving this all the same!

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#359

Posted 12 March 2011 - 01:59 AM Edited by LuisBellic, 12 March 2011 - 02:02 AM.

QUOTE (The Lolwut Pear @ Mar 11 2011, 20:54)
QUOTE (mati1501 @ Mar 11 2011, 16:19)
JNR
Lee Scratch Perry- Rainy Night Club
Sam The Sham & the Pharaos- Wolly Bully
Adam Strange- Traveller
Fat Freddys Drop- Midnight Marauders
Bon Iver- For Emma
Cut Chemist- What's the altidute
Zoot woman- It's automatic

I give JNR a more oldie/lounge/dubstep feeling this time. I'm open for more suggestions.

Why change JNR? It means Jazz Nation Radio, so why change it to dubstep or something alike?

But that's damn good music. icon14.gif

I agree, JNR is usually some old jazz from the 30's 40's 50's. I have a song idea for JNR. I used it in Family Values before I dropped it.

Clarence Williams - You Rascal You

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#360

Posted 12 March 2011 - 02:05 AM

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Mar 12 2011, 01:50)
QUOTE (Money Over Bullsh*t @ Mar 12 2011, 01:27)
You're really capturing everybody well.... except your protagonist!! Rami is a 45 year old cold hearted killer, if Rocco spoke to him like that he would hold his head under water for sure... Luis was a 25 year old naive kid compared to him and that's why he took Rocco's sh*t with a pinch. I think you should think as much about how Rami would logically react in situations like those as you do about capturing other characters personalities and then this story will really hit home. Otherwise good mission man  icon14.gif

I'm afraid i have to agree with this. I overlooked this because i thought Mati was trying to show Rami as something other then a "cold hearted killer" but if it were me writing it, i would have Rami more "professional hitman-like"

Thats not to say i don't like this though, and i've found trying to write someone as a "cold hearted contract killer" CAN make them seem uninteresting.

Its up to you really here mati, you can either take this on board and try to show Rami as more what we think he'd be like, OR you can stick to your guns and continue with your interpretation.
Dont take this as a negative btw, cos i am loving this all the same!

The fact that he is a protagonist means that he has to be somewhat humanistic and relatable but I just think that he can still show his dominance in situations where he is faced with a young upstart like Rocco and come accross as a badass with being the strong silent type that we usually tag as the personality of a contract killer.




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