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Posted 01 January 2011 - 05:17 PM Edited by leoncj, 22 January 2011 - 12:07 PM.

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1997 years, San Andreas.
It was a bad year... for me... It's the year when me and my friend had to kill Las Venturas president. I was standing near him, watching how he was aiming at the President and I was thinking... What will happen next?
After the president's death, we ran away. I ran behind my friend and suddenly he stopped. Turned around and said these words: "I'm sorry, pal, it's business." And he aimed at me and shot me... And I can't forget those words...
2 months later, after my recovery of that shot.
The police of Las Venturas came for me that day. I had to go to prison... When I remembered that it was a set up and for that I had to die, I escaped the prison. I knew the police won't look for me in other town, so I ran to San Fierro. I had friends there, real friends that could help me out...


Chapters:

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Chapter 1 - The Beginning of New Life (COMPLETED)
Chapter 2 - Memories of The Army (COMPLETED)

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Posted 01 January 2011 - 05:18 PM Edited by leoncj, 05 January 2011 - 03:42 PM.

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Adam Brown (1997|1990) - Adam is 35 years old. He started working as a hitman in 1994 years when he was still 32 years old until 1997 (now). His partner in business and friend in outside betrayed him and set him up. His partner shot him so he could stop him and the police could get Adam.
After some months of recovery, he was transported into Las Venturas Prison. Some days later, Adam finds out that he'll be executed, so he manages to escape the prison and running away to San Fierro to his real friends.
In 1990 years, Adam was a soldier of San Andreas while he was still 25 years old.
Friendship: This character is playable character...
Status: Alive


Harry Jones (1997|1990) - Harry is 34 years old. He started working as a hitman in 1992 years when he was still 29 years old. He betrayed his partner Adam under orders of
Order of Hit business and also he hates Adam. When he found out that Adam escaped the prison, he started to hunt him down by sending some of his goons. Harry also wants to take control of the Order of Hit.
In 1990 years, Harry was the captain of San Andreas Army and their objective was to retake Bayside Marina while he was still 27 years old.
Friendship: Enemy Harry betrayed Adam.
Status: Alive


Diego Trudez (1997) - Diego is 31 years old. He's an old friend of Adam and Harry. Diego is the one that can help out Adam, Diego started to run the Rifa gang along with his friend Gerard in 1993 years when he was still 27 years old. They split the gang into North Rifa and South Rifa, Diego controls the North Rifa. But they're still allies and still good friends that can help Adam in San Fierro.
Friendship: Friend
Status: Alive


Gerard "G" Dibutzi (1997|1990) - Gerard is 30 years old. He's an old friend of Diego and Adam. Gerard started the Rifa gang along with Diego in 1993 years when he was still 26 years old. Gerard was the one who gave the idea to split the Rifa into North and South Rifa. The North Rifa (Diego) deals weapons and the South Rifa (Gerard) deals drugs.
In 1990 years, Gerard was a soldier and a partner of Adam while he was still 23 years old.
Friendship: Enemy Betrayed Diego and Adam under orders of Harry. (Previous: Friend )
Status: Alive


Michelle (1997) - Michelle is 25 years old. She started to work as a mechanic in 1996 years while she was still 24 years old. She's also a good friend of Gerard and the South Rifa respects her.
Friendship: Enemy Betrayed Gerard under orders of Lisa. (Previous: Normal )
Status: Dead Killed under orders of Gerard. (Previous: Alive )


Chuck (1997) - Chuck is 52 years old. He started working as a gun dealer when he was still 20 years old. Until now he still deals guns and sells them to South and North Rifa. Also he's a good friend of Adam.
Friendship: Friend
Status: Alive


Lisa Wu Wing (1997) - Lisa is 26 years old. She started the Vietnam Co Gang in 1990 years while she was still 19 years old. Her father died and gave her the control of Vietnam Co. She is very powerful when she has her favorite weapon. She helps her brother Sa Xi while he is her bodyguard.
Friendship: Enemy
Status: Alive


Sa Xi Wu Wing (1997) - Sa Xi is 21 years old. He's a brother of Lisa and also a bodyguard of her. She started working as her bodyguard in 1995 years while he was still 19 years old. Sa Xi fighting is not that good as Lisa's, but he's a good sniper.
Friendship: Enemy
Status: Alive


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Posted 01 January 2011 - 05:19 PM Edited by leoncj, 02 January 2011 - 08:49 PM.

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user posted image - North Rifa.
The North Rifa are the most dealers in San Fierro. They have allies with South Rifa. North Rifa leader is Diego Trudez.
Gang: Friends
Difficulty: Normal
Alliance: South Rifa


user posted image - South Rifa.
The South Rifa are drug dealing gang in San Fierro. They drive vans from base A to base B. South Rifa leader is Gerard "G" Dibutzi.
Gang: Friends
Difficulty: Weak
Alliance: North Rifa


user posted image - Vietnam Co Org.
The Vietnam Co Gang is the most powerful gang in San Fierro, they even control half of the town. Vietnam Co Org. leader is Lisa Wu Wing.
Gang: Enemy
Difficulty: Strong
Allies: None


user posted image - County Mexicans.
The County Mexicans are everywhere, Red County, Flint County and Bone County. They are robbers, driving around all County and robbing people. County Mexicans leader is (unknown).
Gang: Enemy
Difficulty: Normal
Allies: None


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Posted 01 January 2011 - 05:59 PM

Story is a little similar to GTA3.But it looks fun.

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Posted 01 January 2011 - 06:49 PM

Sounds promising.

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Posted 01 January 2011 - 07:31 PM

Thank you for the comments guys.
Going to start working on Chapter 1.

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Posted 01 January 2011 - 07:33 PM

The concept is nice but, the gang that you put as the North Rifa is the Varrios Los Aztecas. tounge2.gif

Just thought it was worth to mention.

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Posted 01 January 2011 - 08:44 PM

QUOTE (Secronom President @ Jan 1 2011, 19:33)
The concept is nice but, the gang that you put as the North Rifa is the Varrios Los Aztecas. tounge2.gif

Just thought it was worth to mention.

Dude, I know all that Aztecas, Vagos, Front Yard Ballas and other. They're from original San Andreas, but in this story they're North Rifa tounge.gif

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Posted 01 January 2011 - 08:51 PM

Hmm... I should wait and see what kind of missions will be...

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Posted 02 January 2011 - 01:00 AM

Looks like you got another good one coming up here wink.gif .

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Posted 02 January 2011 - 09:08 AM

A new mission pack of yours... I can't wait to play it. biggrin.gif

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Posted 02 January 2011 - 09:49 AM

Hey,Leon,how did you do the pictures of characters?

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Posted 02 January 2011 - 10:07 AM

I am sure this will be a great mission pack icon14.gif

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Posted 02 January 2011 - 01:39 PM

Thank you for the comments! tounge.gif The Chapter 1 will be out soon.

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Hey,Leon,how did you do the pictures of characters?


With PhotoScape.

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 12:58 AM Edited by leoncj, 03 January 2011 - 01:30 AM.

CHAPTER 1 COMPLETED!!!

Give me a feedback about it.
Going to start working on Chapter 2...


EDIT: (TRY DOWNLOADING NOW HAD 2 BUGS TO FIX. 1. A bug with Mission trigger 2. with the uploaded file)

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 08:53 AM

Gonna try it out soon after I finish my 6-mission pack.

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 09:58 AM

Hmm... not bad... not. bad.

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 01:16 PM

Ok i liked it its good not bad keep up icon14.gif

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 08:50 PM

I loved those mission, as always icon14.gif Great story and gameplay, no crashes... This is my 3rd favorite mission pack yet (being Johnny Nixon Chronicles first, San Andreas Stories by leoncj second)

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:01 AM

Thank you for the comments!

Anyway, Chapter 2 - Memories of the Army RELEASED! Play it and give me a feedback about it!

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 05:56 AM

Nice

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 06:45 AM

Like always LCJ! Your Mission packs never disappoint me !

Ive only done few of the missions, but they are already going good. I loved the opening and how the opening is the same text on what you wrote on the thread tounge.gif

My only complaint, and its not your fault, is if I die on one of the missions in SF.. I spawn at LS hospital.. so i have to drive back! lol or i can use rocketman and fly back.. but still.

I found that out when I killed myself by jumping out my car and my car crushed me to death sad.gif .


Keep up the great work man.

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 06:55 AM

Yes i like 1 chapter intro its so amazing best design

Best regards from TonyCJ keep up good work

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 05:54 PM Edited by leoncj, 06 January 2011 - 04:40 PM.

Chapter 2 is fixed. You can play it now, there was a bug in Bloody Sand mission that makes a crash, but it's OK now.

BUGS|CRASHES FOUND AND FIXED:
1. A crash in Bloody Sand mission of Chapter 2. (Objective Adjust Timelimit deleted)
2. A bug in Soldier in the Air of Chapter 2. (The Sea Sparrow is no longer on water, now it's on ground.)
3. A crash in Pilot Time of Chapter 2. (Objective No Peds/Cars deleted)


Going to start working on Chapter 3

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 06:44 PM

The first chapter was nice.Enjoyed it biggrin.gif .Keep up for the coming chapters smile.gif

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Posted 08 January 2011 - 07:44 PM

Heey dudeeeee when u are going to make chapter 3 plz dont cancel this missionpack

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Posted 08 January 2011 - 08:43 PM

QUOTE (TonyCJ @ Jan 8 2011, 19:44)
Heey dudeeeee when u are going to make chapter 3 plz dont cancel this missionpack

He NEVER cancels missionpacks dude.

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Posted 08 January 2011 - 09:04 PM Edited by leoncj, 22 January 2011 - 12:06 PM.

QUOTE (pauliux2 @ Jan 8 2011, 20:43)
QUOTE (TonyCJ @ Jan 8 2011, 19:44)
Heey dudeeeee when u are going to make chapter 3 plz dont cancel this missionpack

He NEVER cancels missionpacks dude.

Hell no I won't cancel it... I'm just thinking what kind of missions to make. It's hard to think and design when all of my good ideas went to Episodes From Las Venturas and GANGSTER and Proud of it story-lines...

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Posted 08 January 2011 - 09:09 PM

yes AND episodes of las venturas was long and hard missionpacl:D

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Posted 22 January 2011 - 12:06 PM

I am sorry to say, but... I'm canceling this story-line. It's a failure, I can't get any more ideas, I played other people missions, but still nothing. I need to come up something new, not always EFLV style story-lines, so:

The Right Man in a Wrong Place IS CANCELED.




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