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Posted 18 November 2010 - 11:16 PM Edited by Prasdana, 24 December 2010 - 12:51 PM.

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Overview:
you play as 23 year old Mickey Hennigan. After spending 5 years in Liberty City he wanted to become a boxer but he failed. He decided to go to Los Santos to visit his brother Joe Hennigan but Mickey's temper will lead him to big troubles, can he survive?

Characters:

Name: Mickey Hennigan
Age: 23
Born: Flint Country, San Andreas
Size Body: 6 ft 0 and 190 pounds
Group: None
Bio: Mickey was a good child and he said he wanted to be a Police just like his Father but after his Father dead when he was only 8 years old he became a lonely and quiet child even did Animal Cruelty to save his friends. Mickey just wanted to save his friend but after all no one wanted to be his friend again and at the age of 17 when he finished his school his Mother dead because of hearts attack and Mickey along with Malc ( he is in GTA Lost and Damned) stole various cars in both Los Santos and Flint County but then both got arrested when they did that. Both can escaped from prison and went to Liberty City. Malc joined a local biker gang and Mickey spend most his time in Gym to become a boxer but failed due to kill his opponent during a match and decided to visit his brother Joe in Los Santos

Games: GTA Family Values ( LuisBellic's topic)
GTA The Luck Of A Hitman ( Protagonist)
GTA Fire In The Hole
GTA My Journey

San Andreas Police Department Record

Surname: Hennigan

First Name: Mickey

Age: 23

Place Of Birth: Flint County

Criminal Records:

1995 - Animal Cruelty ( Age 9)

2006 - Grand Theft Auto ( Age 18)

Notes:

*The Brother of Joe Hennigan

*Escape from Prison just 2 Hours after Police send him to the jail in 2006

Name: Joe Hennigan
Age: 30
Born: Flint Country, San Andreas
Size Body: 5 ft 10 and 175 pounds
Group: None
Bio: Both him and Mickey are criminals but Joe can handle his emotion unlike his brother. He isn't really psychopath and wants to make a normal life unlike his brother who only work for money but Joe is a hypocrite. He warns Mickey and say " money isn't everything" but behind Mickey's back he always talk about money and money. You can see his " Tax Evasion" in his criminal record. You can call Joe for friend's activity

Games: GTA The Luck Of A Hitman

San Andreas Police Department Record

Surname: Hennigan

First Name: Joe

Age: 30

Place Of Birth: Flint County

Criminal Records:

2005 - Murder ( Age 25)

2007 - Tax Evasion ( Age 27)

Notes:

* The Brother of Mickey Hennigan

* Working as a Mechanic in Joe's Garage located on Mulholland Drive

Name: Michelle Wilson
Age: 22
Born: Los Santos, San Andreas
Size Body 5ft 4 and 118 pounds
Group: Verona Beach Skinheads
Bio: Joe's friend. A Woman with a full of spirit and begins a relationships with Mickey. She has drug problems and Mickey tries to find a lot of money for her to send her to rehabs and both Mickey and Michelle are planning to live in England

Games: GTA The Luck Of A Hitman
GTA My Journey

San Andreas Police Department Record

Surname: Wilson

First Name: Michelle

Age: 22

Place Of Birth: Los Santos

Criminal Records:

2009 - Driving While Intoxicated ( Age 21)

Notes:

* Verona Beach Skinheads' member

Name: Trevor Jackson
Age :33
Born: Los Santos, San Andreas
Size Body: 6 ft 0 and 210 pounds
Group: Holy Hood Ganton Bloods (Boss)
Bio: A notorious man but doesn't want to involve with drugs and will kick his members who's involve with drugs except his brother but it makes Trevor hates Dwayne.

Games: GTA The Luck Of A Hitman

San Andreas Police Department Record

Surname: Jackson

First Name: Trevor

Age: 33

Place Of Birth: Los Santos

Affiliations: Holly Hood Ganton Bloods' founder

Criminal Records:

1999 - Burglary: Illegal Entry with Criminal Intent ( Age 23)

2000 - Assault ( Age 24)

2002 - Parole Violation ( Age 26)

2003- Armed Robbery ( Age 27)

Notes:
* The Leader of Holly Hood Ganton Bloods

* Always fighting with Glen Orton while both in Prison in 2000

Name: Dwayne Jackson
Age :28
Born: Los Santos, San Andreas
Size Body: 6 ft 1 and 185 pounds
Group: Holy Hood Ganton Bloods
Bio: Trevor's brother. He shares similiarities between him and his brother but because of marijuana he loses Trevor's respect and several of member of his gang. You can call Dwayne for friend's activity
Gaems: GTA The Luck Of A Hitman

San Andreas Police Department Record

Surname: Jackson

First Name: Dwayne

Age: 28

Place Of Birth: Los Santos

Affiliations: Holly Hood Ganton Bloods' member

Criminal Records:

2000 - Assault ( Age 18)

2003- Armed Robbery ( Age 21)

2004 - Possession Controlled Substance: Marijuana ( Age 22)

Notes:
* The brother of Holly Hood Ganton Bloods' leader Trevor Jackson

Name: Nova Wijayanto
Age :48
Born: Indonesia
Nationality: Indonesia
Size Body: 5 ft 10 and 165 pounds
Group: none
Bio: He is only cares about money and proud of himself because he made an American dream. Mickey always get piss of whenever iIckey wants money Nova always forced him to do ridicoulus jobs and he always comparing Mickey to his nephew.

Games: GTA The Luck Of A Hitman
GTA Fire In The Hole
GTA My Journey


San Andreas Police Department Record

Surname: Wijayanto

First Name: Nova

Age: 48

Place Of Birth: Indonesia

Affiliations : Known associate of Verona Beach Skinheads

Criminal Records:

2006 - Possession Stolen Property ( Age 44)

Notes:

* The Owner of Nova Wijayanto's Indonesian Food located on VeronaBeach

* The Uncle of Doni Wijayanto

Names: Jason Matthews
Age: 25
Born: Carcer City
Size Body: 5ft 11 and 190 pounds
Group: Matthews Drug Gang( Boss)
Bio: Jason only needs 1 year to make his gang powerful in Los Santos because of his criminal activity in Liberty City 2 years ago ( for more information check out LuisBellic's topic). You can call Jason for Friend's activity

Games: GTA King Of City ( Protagonist and LuisBellic's topic)
GTA The Luck Of A Hitman

Names: Marko Czachor
Age: 30
Born:Yugoslavia
Nationality: Yugoslavia
Size Body: 6ft 3 and 205 Pounds
Group: none
Bio: A new mechanic in Joe's garage. He came to Los Santos to forget an accident.( for more information check out mati1501's topic). You can call Marko for friend's activity

Games: GTA The Ghost ( Protagonist and mati1501's topic)
GTA The Luck Of A Hitman
GTA Fire In The Hole


Name: Gary Toreno
Age: 37
Born: Red County
Size Body: 6 ft 0 and 185 pounds
Group: C.R.A.S.H. ( Leader)
Bio: C.R.AS.H. leader and only works for money and making relationships with gangs including his brother Jimmy Toreno behind SAPD's backs.

Games: GTA The Luck Of A Hitman
GTA Fire In The Hole
GTA My Journey

Name: Randy Edwards
Age: 32
Born: Los Santos
Size Body: 6 ft 1 and 225 Pounds
Group: C.R.A.S.H.
Bio: Gary's sidekick and has an ambition to become the leader of C.R.A.S.H.. You can call Randy for friend's activity

Games: GTA The Luck Of A Hitman
GTA Fire In The Hole
GTA My Journey

Name: Glen Orton
Age: 30
Born: Los Santos
Size Body: 6 ft 4 and 220 Pounds
Group: Verona Beach SKinheads ( Boss)
Bio: Just back from hospital and quickly trust Mickey. Mickey does some favour for him
Games: GTA The Luck Of A Hitman
GTA My Journey

San Andreas Police Department Record

Surname: Orton

First Name: Glen

Age: 30

Place Of Birth: Los Santos

Criminal Records:

1998 - Grand Theft Auto ( Age 18)

2000- Assault ( Age 20)

2003 - Possession Controlled Substance: Cocaine ( Age 23)

2004 - Armed Robbery ( Age 24)

Notes:

* Verona Beach Skinheads' Leader

* Always fighting with Trevor Jackson while both in Prison in 2000

Name: Doni Wijayanto
Age: 19
Born: Indonesia
Size body: 5 ft 9 and 180 Pounds
Group: Verona Beach Skinheads ( rumour)
Bio: Nova's nephew and just come to Los Santos to study in University. Doni come to Los Santos when Mickey wants to go to Red County along with Michelle and both seems don't like eachothers. Later Mickey meet him again
Games: GTA The Luck Of A Hitman
GTA Fire In The Hole
GTA My Journey

San Andreas Police Department Record

Surname: Wijayanto

First Name: Doni

Age: 19

Place Of Birth: Indonesia

Criminal Records:

2010 - Grand Theft Auto ( Age 19)

Notes:

* The nephew of Nova Wijayanto's food, Nova Wijayanto

* Possibility Verona Beach Skinhead's member

Side Missions:
Police Man
Fire Fighters
Paramedic
Taxi Cab Driver
Street Fighting
Boxing Match
Arm Wrestling
Mechanic
Arson

Gangs:
Gang War returns from GTA San Andreas, just go to enemie's teritory and kill 3 gang members and your enemies will attack you. to get the teritories you must survive from first wave, second wave, and third wave,

Gangs you are using in Los Santos:

Holly Hood Ganton Bloods

Matthews Drug Gang

Gangs you are using in San Fierro:

Tiny Rascals Gang

Angles Of The Death

Gangs you are using in Las Venturas:

Gambetti Family

Fisichella Family

Gangs you are using in 3 Countys:

Angles Of The Death

1 of The Cowboy Gang

Los Santos Gangs:

Holly Hood Ganton Bloods
Leader: Trevor Jackson
Type: African-American Street Gang
Enemies: Jefferson Park Cribs
Mexican Gang Banger
Verona Beach Skinheads
Affiliations: Joe Hennigan
Mickey Hennigan
C.R.A.S.H.
Clothes: Green Hoodies, bandannas, vests and t-Shirts


Jefferson Park Cribs
Leader: Unknown
Type: African-American Street Gang
Enemies: Holly Hood Ganton Bloods
Matthews Drug Gang
Verona Beach Skinheads
Mickey Hennigan
Affiliations: C.R.AS.H.
Mexican Gang Banger
Clothes: Purple Hoodies, bandannas and T-shirts


Matthews Drug Gang
Leader: Jason Matthews
Type: Hispanic Street Gang
Enemies: Jefferson Park Cribs
Mexican Gang Banger
Affiliations: Marko Czachor
Mickey Hennigan
Clothes: Yellow and white cholo clothes


Mexican Gang Banger
Leader: Unknown
Type: Mexican Street Gang
Enemies: Matthews Drug Gang
Holly Hood Ganton Bloods
Mickey Hennigan
Affiliations: C.R.A.SH.
Jefferson Park Cribs
Clothes: Turquoise and grey cholo clothing


Verona Beach Skinheads
Leader: Glen Orton
Type: Street Gang
Enemies: Holly Hood Ganton Bloods
Jefferson Park Cribs
Matthews Drug Gang
Mexican Gang Banger
Affiliations: Mickey Hennigan
Nova Wijayanto
Clothes: Black jackets and jeans, sometimes wear red.


San Fierro Gangs:

True Blue Gangster

Tiny Rascals Gang

San Fierro Triads

Yakuza

Angles Of The Death

Las Venturas Gangs:

Las Venturas Triads

Yakuza

Gambetti Family

Fisichella Family

Minardi Family

Shnaider Family

Red County, Flint County, Bone County Gangs:

Rolling Rambos

The Lost Brotherhoods

Angles Of The Death

2 Cowboys Gangs (still find the names)

Weapons:[/SIZE]

Melee:
Fist
Knife
Baseball Bat
pool Clue

Handguns:
Pistol 44
Desert Eagle

Shotguns:
Combat Shotgun
Sawn-Off Shotgun
Assault Shotgun

Sub-Machine Guns:
Gold SMG
Assault SMG
Micro-SMG (Micro Uzi)
SMG (SW MP-10)

Assault Rifles:
AK-47
M4

Sniper Rifles:
Remington 700
Combat Sniper (H&K PSG-1)

Heavy Weapons:
RPG (RPG-7)
Grenade Launcher (Heckler and Koch HK69A1)

Bomb/Grenades:
Molotov Cocktail
Grenades (M26A1)


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Map:
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Vehicles:

all of IV's vehincles except Roman's Taxi but the Taxi will be called Minardi's Taxi

Activities and Friend Activities:
Eating
Drinking
Playing Cards
Pools
Going to Cinema
Going to a Consert
Gambling ( only in Las Venturas' Casino)


Internet:
Face Note (parody of Facebook)
My Room
Eyefind.info
Mail.eyefind.info
SanAndreasPoliceDepartement


Restaurant

Burger Shoot

Cluckin Bell

Minardi's Pizza

Nova Wijayanto's Indonesian food



Radio Stations:

Old Santos FM
2 Pac- Changes
Dr.Dre- Under pressure
Snoop Dogg- Who am I?
The west coast rap all stars: Were all in the same gang.
Ice Cube- Friday
Ice Cube feat. Dr. Dre- Natural born killaz
2pac feat. Snoop Dogg: Two of Americas most wanted.
Ice Cube feat Snoop dogg- go to church
Eazy-E feat. 2pac- Real Thugs


Special thanks to:

Money Over Bullsh*t ( for inspiring me to make this topic and for fixing my English)

LuisBellic ( for giving me a lot of ideas and for allowing me to use Jason Matthews)

Narcis_Speed6 ( for making the logo)

Vertical Limit ( for gang names and for weapons icons)

San Andreas State ( for allowing me to use gang warfare and for some side missions)

Tyla ( for suggesting me to use Arson as side missions)

Akavari 112 ( for telling me to change the colour)

mati1501 ( for giving me a list of old Santos FM songs and for allowing me to use Marko Czaghor)

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Posted 18 November 2010 - 11:32 PM

nice

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Posted 18 November 2010 - 11:35 PM

sounds good cool.gif
my advice is to request matching headers for EVERYTHING you may want to add now and later on in the future.
also get some boxart.
and also like mine and sammis you should color the text to say lightblue or something else that matches the logo.
anything you for now on art related try to make it match the logo icon14.gif icon14.gif .
cookie.gif cookie.gif cookie.gif for the start, cant wait to see where ths goes!

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Posted 18 November 2010 - 11:54 PM

Not another hitman storyline......

OT, It needs more info. And the name Mickey....... That's a mouse's name.

Basically, the content is good, but it needs some revision, and you need to get some better translating for that English. Might want to consider pm'ing another member to have them clean that up for you.

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Posted 18 November 2010 - 11:54 PM

What's The Lost and The Angels of Death doing in Los Santos?
I understand The Lost is in San Fierro, but not in Santos...

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 01:08 AM

Like Kwan said, good content, but needs revision, I do like Hitman stories, like Niko's in IV, but don't you think it's a bit early for another one since that technically was the last game.

Its good, but needs some additions, and some more content. Good start though. icon14.gif

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 02:50 AM

I dont mean to be a troll or anything but I have not been into these part of these forums in a long time.

Why is everyone suddenly doing a IV add-on concept?

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 03:00 AM

QUOTE (mrpain @ Nov 19 2010, 02:50)
I dont mean to be a troll or anything but I have not been into these part of these forums in a long time.

Why is everyone suddenly doing a IV add-on concept?

Why are you asking on this topic? because this one doesn't even look like a IV add-on.

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 04:12 AM

I'm pretty sure i'm the only person not doing one, although I have an idea...

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 05:02 AM

QUOTE (mrpain @ Nov 19 2010, 03:50)
I dont mean to be a troll or anything but I have not been into these part of these forums in a long time.

Why is everyone suddenly doing a IV add-on concept?

It's set in the IV era, it's not an 'add-on' or a DLC. The only connections I can see to Liberty City are a few of the gangs and that the protagonist lived there for five years.

Prasdana, good start. I hope you stick with this and add more to the concept. My only suggestion is that you give the biker gangs some more attention.

It's strongly hinted that The Lost have some sort of connection to Venturas; Johnny has a 'I Rode Mine Venturas '04' patch on the back of his jacket. The AOD were also established in San Fierro so you could include them there too.

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 05:59 AM

QUOTE (Tyla @ Nov 19 2010, 13:02)
QUOTE (mrpain @ Nov 19 2010, 03:50)
I dont mean to be a troll or anything but I have not been into these part of these forums in a long time.

Why is everyone suddenly doing a IV add-on concept?

It's set in the IV era, it's not an 'add-on' or a DLC. The only connections I can see to Liberty City are a few of the gangs and that the protagonist lived there for five years.

Whoops my bad, still GTA V is filled with IV add-ons at this moment.

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 07:50 AM

thanks for the comments I'll add more updates soon but I need help for Radio Stations and songs

@ The Lolwut Pear: The Lost Brotherhood and Angles Of Death are operating in Red, Flint, and Bone Country not in Los Santos

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 09:20 AM

I love it! Looks cool, especially about boxer background. I hope fighting is something like GTA4 not like SA, because close combat in SA was ridicilous, one guy could take out hundreds.

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 09:56 AM

This good keep It up but I think you need titles. Request for them smile.gif

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 12:09 PM

Looks good, although I would like to see a new gang war system.

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 02:24 PM

Looks ok, but you made one big mistake - you left out a Bloods and Crips-style gangs in Los Santos. Los Santos needs at least TWO African-American gangs based on the Los Angeles Bloods and Crips. Without that, I cant take your idea seriously, I'm quite big on realism when it comes to the gang side of things.

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 06:58 PM

With names like Mickey and Joe Hennigan i expected them to be from Ireland, their names make me think of ireland.

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 10:27 PM Edited by Prasdana, 19 November 2010 - 10:49 PM.

QUOTE (Official General @ Nov 19 2010, 14:24)
Looks ok, but you made one big mistake - you left out a Bloods and Crips-style gangs in Los Santos. Los Santos needs at least TWO African-American gangs based on the Los Angeles Bloods and Crips. Without that, I cant take your idea seriously, I'm quite big on realism when it comes to the gang side of things.


Catela Norte is an African American Gang but if you don't like that name you can suggest me a name for them and maybe suggest me 2 names because I only make 1 gang for African American sad.gif

EDIT: I got 2 names for African American Gang Names from my online friend in another web biggrin.gif

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 10:40 PM

QUOTE (mrpain @ Nov 19 2010, 05:59)
QUOTE (Tyla @ Nov 19 2010, 13:02)
QUOTE (mrpain @ Nov 19 2010, 03:50)
I dont mean to be a troll or anything but I have not been into these part of these forums in a long time.

Why is everyone suddenly doing a IV add-on concept?

It's set in the IV era, it's not an 'add-on' or a DLC. The only connections I can see to Liberty City are a few of the gangs and that the protagonist lived there for five years.

Whoops my bad, still GTA V is filled with IV add-ons at this moment.

I know im not going to be doing anymore IV add-on concepts since there's alot of them in here. I think they alot of the people who made the concepts were inspried by Money Over Bullsh*t's The Code Of The Streets and akavari112's Blood And A Four Leaf Clover. I only made the DLC concepts cause I felt like making a story I also thought about what happened to this character or something like that. So im doing that in my story.

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 10:58 PM

QUOTE (LuisBellic @ Nov 19 2010, 22:40)
QUOTE (mrpain @ Nov 19 2010, 05:59)
QUOTE (Tyla @ Nov 19 2010, 13:02)
QUOTE (mrpain @ Nov 19 2010, 03:50)
I dont mean to be a troll or anything but I have not been into these part of these forums in a long time.

Why is everyone suddenly doing a IV add-on concept?

It's set in the IV era, it's not an 'add-on' or a DLC. The only connections I can see to Liberty City are a few of the gangs and that the protagonist lived there for five years.

Whoops my bad, still GTA V is filled with IV add-ons at this moment.

I know im not going to be doing anymore IV add-on concepts since there's alot of them in here. I think they alot of the people who made the concepts were inspried by Money Over Bullsh*t's The Code Of The Streets and akavari112's Blood And A Four Leaf Clover. I only made the DLC concepts cause I felt like making a story I also thought about what happened to this character or something like that. So im doing that in my story.

that's true and Sammy Bottino is great protagonist and you made Jason as a great character that's why I'm using him

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 11:48 PM

Looks like it needs quite a lot more work; all I can see is a list of lists.

Add in some more story. Bloke wants to be boxer, goes to Los Santos, meets brother... becomes a celebrity chef? More please.

Vehicles: Everything from TLAD except the taxi. Mmm hmm. Perhaps throw in some more vehicles of your own fancy, remember that TLAD's vehicle selection would probably seem out of place in Red County.

Characters. Name, age, race, gang, bra size, I'm finding it hard to imagine these as people. A mini character bio would be nice, something like "Marcus grew up in the slums of Mexico City, he moved to Los Santos with his cousin for a better life, becomes vice-lietenant of the East Side Crips, gets a crack addiction, double crosses the gang to the Feds, hires the protagonist via his cell phone to spy on his fellow gang members, gets taken out on orders of gang leader towards end of story, yadda yadda yadda god knows".

This beast needs some flesh on its bones.

Also, try to present it a little better. Different coloured headings for each section? Something.

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 11:56 PM Edited by finn4life, 19 November 2010 - 11:59 PM.

Ok i am not saying to just you but to everyone who makes concept threads, think them through really well, don't just put a story line and a list of weapons and gangs.
You should have a description of the characters
You should have a map
You should have a description of all the gangs
You should have features you want added into gameplay drugs, clothes fighting, shooting, car modifications, food, safehouses, cops or any other little things you want include or have differently in the game, bear in mind a concept thread is what many should agree with for it to be good, so if you post "i want everyone to have kids, a nine till 5 job and have pets and neighbours and have to mow the lawn" then its unlikely you will have many people who like the concept.

i admit making a concept would be hard and time consuming, but if you want people to see it and give a damn then take the time to make something good, set it apart from the other 100 dodgy concept threads that are all pretty well the same.

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Posted 20 November 2010 - 12:08 AM

QUOTE (finn4life @ Nov 19 2010, 23:56)
i admit making a concept would be hard and time consuming, but if you want people to see it and give a damn then take the time to make something good, set it apart from the other 100 dodgy concept threads that are all pretty well the same.

Yeah, took me 3 months to make FRWM.

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Posted 20 November 2010 - 01:12 AM

Horrible plot, otherwise it looks nice.

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Posted 21 November 2010 - 09:49 PM

QUOTE (pyramid head @ Nov 19 2010, 18:58)
With names like Mickey and Joe Hennigan i expected them to be from Ireland, their names make me think of ireland.

don't worry, I make a character from Ireland

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Posted 23 November 2010 - 10:59 PM

That seems good.

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Posted 24 November 2010 - 05:00 PM

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Posted 24 November 2010 - 05:29 PM

QUOTE (vertical limit @ Nov 24 2010, 17:00)
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Those are from GTA IV, how did you make them... bored.gif

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Posted 24 November 2010 - 06:21 PM

QUOTE (akavari112 @ Nov 24 2010, 17:29)
QUOTE (vertical limit @ Nov 24 2010, 17:00)
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Those are from GTA IV, how did you make them... bored.gif

not the weapon icons
but the effort of searching them on the internet and putting them in a picture

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Posted 24 November 2010 - 09:20 PM

I think that picture would be better off saying "Compiled by Vertical Limit", since he's not fooling anyone saying he made them.




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