Thanks a lot for your comments guys, much appreciated @C4C:
Hopefully it doesn't seem like I just stuck in the character images to prove my point to you, because that certainly wasn't my intention
I did try to be more descriptive in my writing this time around and move a bit away from the scripted format of previous chapters.. glad to hear it worked.@orbitalraindrops:
It would've been really difficult to find in game models for all of the characters and when I think of what the characters look like the ones I have used are pretty much the faces I see. If you're planning on reading through the entire story I'd wait until I've posted the plot summary (which is coming after the current chapter is over) because to be totally honest with you the lenght of some of the chapters will probably put you off reading them in their entirety.@Tyla:
Nice to see you've come back from your two month hiatus to leave me a comment
The similarity between the shootout at the end of the mission and the one at the end of Pratice swing was somewhat intentional.. kind of an eye for an eye sort of thing. Chronologically the shootout at the dump would come before the retaliation attack at the golf course so it kind of gives a bit of meaning to the number of Messinas in Practice Swing aswell as demonstrating how angry the Ancelottis are at the Messina's audacity in muscling in on their racket (demonstrated by how many men they're willing to throw at it).
To answer your question, there will be 19 chapters overall so there's 7 more chapters (a total of 21 missions/parts) to go. This may seem like a lot but I've kind of being taking my time with this topic. It will probably be nearly it's third year in production before it's finally finished but there are quite a few more important things going on in my life.. otherwise I probably could have knocked it out in just two