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GTA_Israel
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Posted 08 September 2010 - 04:04 PM Edited by GTA_Israel, 11 September 2010 - 01:14 PM.

GTA:Estoan City


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a huge crdit to Drift-Kingz the man!

Hi everyone this is my first post,and im from Israel,so sorry about my English.



<!--SF--> What is Eastoan City?
Estoan City is a luxury city,with limousines,famous people and luxury life.
But,the crime in the city just going bigger and bigger,as all the criminals coming out of there holles,to do some myhem.
Estoan City is my invention,a fiction city.


<!--SS--> Areas in Estoan City:


Area one:
The luxury neighborhoods.
This area is fully protected by Estoan police.
all the famous people are living in this area,which has a lot of hotels,a beach,and the mega-mall.

Area two:
The central park.
The central park is a big area,and the crime controls some of i'ts parts.

Area three:
The prison.
All the bad guys,beware!
Estoan prison is not a nice place...

Area four:
East Morhgan.
An regular area in the game,regular people,regular work.

Area five:
West morhgan.
Almost the same as West morhgan,but with a slight difference:crime.
All the crime in the city is being send from there, by crime families,gangs,and crazy Sucioptes.

Area six:The Slums.
A poor area, thet is Characterized by crazy bums,crimes,and desperation.

area seven:The industrial area.
3 words:pollution kills population.


Estoan City map:
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The Protagonist <!--EF-->
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Josh Clifford ,an american guy that tries to brake in the crime world in Estoan City.
At first,Josh came to the city to find work,but after the bad side of the city shows his face to Josh,he gave up the effort to find a decent work place,and sucked in to the world of crime.
When Josh came to the city,he Thought he came to heaven on earth,but very fast, "heaven" became hell,as the biggest crime Corporations in the city tries to take Josh to there side.
A story about war between gangs,crime Families,and crazy Criminals, that will take Josh to an Adventure thet Josh never Expected to see.
Take Josh to a Journey,of becoming nobody to somebody,from the slums life to the luxury life.

characters:

Name:Josh Clifford
Age:24
Protagonist

Name:Phil Willsore
Age:56

Name:Adriana Hoarze
Age:27

Name:Lee Hosroz
Age:44

Name:Brian sellcon
Age:23

These are not all of the characters,these are the main one.

Shoping in Estoan City


Clothing:

54hand shop-very old clothes,used clothes,and etc.

Thets cool-casual clothes,not too expensive.

shoes-only shoes.

Luxury clothing-very expensive clothes,designer clothes.

Food:

soup kitchen-can be found at the slumes area,free soup.

shosi!-best asain food you can find in the market.

food in da hood!-fast food restaurant .

I paid for this cr*p?-gorma restaurant .

ammunition:

Ammunation-best ammu in the market.

Go shot yourself-ammu for your saftey.

There is illegal gun shopes around the city too.

bars:

i'm drunk-beer,girles and football,anything else?

Activities

There is a lot of thing to do in Estoan City.


Drinking:
Go and get yourself drunk in "i'm drunk"!

Drugs dealing:
you can now sell drugs to earn some cash,plus use the drugs you are selling.

car races:
get a car,and drive like maniac in the streets of Estoan city.

be an assassins:
meet your guy,and go kill some unlucky basterds.

destroying other gangs:
if you already have been choosen your side in the city,you can destroy other gangs by killing there people,burning down there places and take there cars to there last ride.

Taxi:
hoop in the yellow car and drive people to there destinations for cash.

Strip club:
go with your friends to have fun with Estoan City finest womens...


weapons
poor weapons:
Knife
sticklite
Pistol
Shotgun
Micro SMG
Molotovs

Advanced weapons:
Baseball Bat
Combat Pistol
Combat Shotgun
RPG
Grenades

special weapons:
Time bomb
taser gun
Katana
flamethrower

Game achievements:
  • Broke the chain-complete 100% of game
  • Deal with it-complete drug dealling activity
  • Took out the trash-complete Assassin activity
  • Loanly basterd-destroyded all other gangs in game






soon more updets.



Missions

Mission 1:Welcome to Estoan City
The mission begins with a cut scene:
Josh is entreing to his friend house,mailes,to invite him to drink beer.
mailes is saying:"sure,man lets hit the road!"
Josh and mailes entring to the car.
the control is been giving to the player,and the player need to drive to the bar.
as the player and mailes entring to the bar,a cut scene is begins.
in the cut scene,Josh and mailes are sitting and drinking beer,and suddenly the door of the bar is opened and a bum with a gun comes in.
the bum is drunk,and he is saying:"give me all your damn money ar all kill ya!"
nobody cares from the bum and people Continue to drink beer and talk.
"Aaargh!" the bum shouts and shot someone in the back.
people are screaming,and starting to run away from the bum.
the bum Continue to shot people and Josh and mailes are hiding Behind the bar Counter.
"ok man" saying Mailes to Josh.
"Take my knife, and Stab that sh*t in his head!"
"why me?" ask Josh.
"C'mon man,do it for me,i have a wife and 3 Childrens!" mailes Answering.
"ok..." says Josh.
the control is been giving to player.
The player need to kill the bum with a knife,and in the same time,avoied his shooting.
after the player kills the bum,a cut scene begins.
Mailes is jumping over the bar Counter.
"allright,man!" mailes is saying.
"you can keep the knife for yourself,Estoan hero!" mailes is Laughing and saying "bye,man"
Josh is saying "bye".
enter free roam.
mission Achievements:
Knife.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________

Mission 2:My guy
the mission begins with a cut scene:
Josh is smoking a cigert,and his phone rings.
mailes is speaking.
"hi man,i need you to come to my place,there is someone i want you to meet.
the control is been giving to the player.
he needs to drive to mailes house.
after he arrives to his house,a cut scene begin.
in the cut scene mailes and an other guy sitting on the couch and drinking beer.
Josh is entring the room.
mailes is standing up and greet Josh.
"hi man,whats up?" he says.
"it's all good" answers Josh.
"i called you here becuse i want you to meet bob" says mailes.
"hi bob" Josh is saying and sitting next to them.
"hello" bob ansewrs.
"bob is an Assassin" says mailes.
"oh,well thets..nice" says Josh.
"yes,and i need your help" says bob.
"in what?" asks Josh.
"in getting a hot ride.." Answers bob.
"can't you do thet yourself?" ask mailes.
"im an Assassin,not a car Burglar"
"hmm,what i'll get from it?" ask Josh.
"A work and a gun" answers bob.
"ok" says Josh.
"Take my gun if there will be any Problems.
the control is giving to the player.
he need to go to a alley near the soup kitchen in slums and steal a black Presidente.
after that he need to get back to bob and give him his car.
while he drive,a red Uranus is Following him.
after a short while someone from the car is starting to shot at Josh.
the player needs to kill the follower and get the car to bob.
after the player bruoght the car to bob,a cut scene begins.
"Thanks man!" bob says.
"no problam" says Josh.
"you had any problmes in the way?" ask bob.
"not to much" ansewrs Josh.
"ok,thanks you can keep my gun and take some money!
if you are interested in the job,talk to mailes".
"ok" says Josh.
entering freeroam.
mission Achievements:
Pistol
300 $
assassins Activitie.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Mission 3:
Will be updated

plz well me how is that so far.

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 04:29 PM

Well its all right for now. But I dont like the logo. You can make a logo request Here
Those guys make great logos.
Good luck with your topic!

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 04:33 PM

Tnx man ill take your advice i hope someone agree to make me a logo..

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 04:46 PM

good start, but 2 things...

You need to close the code, it looks nasty. Here's how:

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Same goes for the font and size. Hit the preview button to see it you have it right before posting.

Also you'll need to re-size the map, it causes a page stretch.



otherwise nice icon14.gif

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 06:02 PM

Thats sh*t mate

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 06:06 PM

tnx evetyone and copidstunt what?

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 06:19 PM

QUOTE (cupidstunt @ Sep 8 2010, 18:02)
Thats sh*t mate

Thats a bit out of order, if your going o criticize at least be constructie and not a ass.

The concept isn't bad but I'm not to keen on the script to be honest, but good effort though icon14.gif

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 06:27 PM

tnx i will will upload more missions and stuff tomorow.
by the way happy new year to all its a holyday in israel smile.gif

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 06:34 PM Edited by mati1501, 08 September 2010 - 06:37 PM.

You can tell more details about activities too. Like you can sell drugs. But how is it in-game? Chinatown wars or Vice city stories style? Or something new? And I would change the Fast- food restaurant name. There are some bigger people at this forum (not me) so they dont really like the name confused.gif

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 06:56 PM

ok ill change the name i just wanted somthing funny in the game smile.gif
tnx:)

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 07:05 PM

That's really sh*t mate.

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 07:21 PM

QUOTE (Sckarface @ Sep 8 2010, 19:05)
That's really sh*t mate.

Are you leaving bad comments on every concept thread now?

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 07:30 PM

QUOTE (Sckarface @ Sep 8 2010, 15:05)
That's really sh*t mate.

I know your a muslim brother so I don't wanna go towards you in such a negative way.. But seriously, why would you leave comments like that?

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 07:43 PM

i hope he did not leave such a comment beacuse im isralian..anyway tnx to everyone for the tips more things tomorow smile.gif

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 07:55 PM

QUOTE (GTA_Israel @ Sep 8 2010, 19:43)
i hope he did not leave such a comment beacuse im isralian..anyway tnx to everyone for the tips more things tomorow smile.gif

I hope that too. Racism is the last thing we need on this forum. But he also posted a bad comment on Luisbellicīs so I dont think so.

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 11:23 PM

Isralian? Surely, an Isralian would know that they are actually Israelite...

The thread is.... okay.

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Posted 09 September 2010 - 12:42 AM

niceee

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Posted 09 September 2010 - 12:46 AM

My name is Josh, therefore, I approve! icon14.gif

Otherwise, I can't get passed the language barrier, however..

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Posted 09 September 2010 - 07:31 PM

QUOTE (A White CJ @ Sep 8 2010, 23:23)
Isralian? Surely, an Isralian would know that they are actually Israelite...

The thread is.... okay.

Oh come on this guy is not from a english speaking country.

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Posted 09 September 2010 - 07:40 PM

Yeah Its not bad I suppose. But you need to sort out your titles (CODES)

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Posted 10 September 2010 - 10:17 PM

Good Concept.

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Posted 10 September 2010 - 11:10 PM

keep up the good work icon14.gif icon14.gif cookie.gif smile.gif




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