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[Mission Pack] The Big Debt

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Beto_kafra
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Posted 04 August 2010 - 07:38 PM Edited by Beto_kafra, 15 September 2010 - 01:14 AM.

Story

After getting a big debt to the Mafia in Vice City, Robert Hilenbrid only had one option: Escape to Los Santos, a city where her sister lives today with his husband. However, problems begin early with a japanese gang known as "Hitokiri Boys" than has caused troubles in Idlewood and this makes everthing in the Robert's new life more complicated. And to further worsen, Robert discovers that Wayne (his brother-in-law) are involved with Cohuila Cartel, a mexican gang that is rival of Hitokiri Boys, as a form of protection.

Robert tries to have a quiet life, but ends up drowning in the criminal underworld due to confusion with the gangs and his attempt to one day pay the debt and returns to his hometown.


Missions

Chapter One - Getaway to Los Santos

1. Hostile Reception - Robert has an unpleasant reception in Los Santos.
2. Shooting on the Morning - The problems begin at the hour of breakfast.
3. Search and Destroy - Destroy the Drug Vans of Hitokiri Boys!
4. The Notebook - Miguel needs a notebook with a valuable information.
5. Deal Mayhem - It's time to end a Gun Deal!
6. Frying a Big Fish - Robert is forced to work for Hitokiri Boys!
7. Life After Death - Robert must save an Takeshi's ally in a way unusual.
8. Chasing Traitors - Takeshi orders Robert to kill a traitor of Hitokiri Boys!
9. Fap Fap Supplies - The last job for Takeshi.
10. The Last Bar - Wayne is in a big trouble.
11. How Borns the Poor - It's time to revange!

Chapter Two - News from a Private War

12. Bahamas Fool - Robert and Miguel goes meet Jack Locker.
13. Bikes 'n' Bullets - Robert and all the Cohuila Cartel needs a new alliance.
14. Tour in Criminal World - (In Production)
15. Dirty Cop - (In Production)
16. Brothel Room Service - (In Production)
17. Dangerous Easy Money - (In Production)
18. Hot Guns - (In Production)


MORE SOON!

Characters


Robert Hilenbrid
The protagonist and playable character. Robert was born in Vice City and was the owner of Front Page Cafe, took out a loan with the Mafia to try to pay the high costs of your business, the size of your debt, put him at risk of death several times and so he had to escape. He still dreams of return to Vice City, so it always catches up with all the money intended to pay the large debt.

Introduced in: Hostile Reception

Wayne Walker
Robert's Brother-in-law, Wayne is a man fighting to protect their neighborhood and so joined the Cohuila Cartel to try to stop the Hitokiri Boys. Have a good friendship with Robert and once in a while will help with the work of the Cartel.

Introduced in: Hostile Reception

Melanie Hilenbrid Walker
Robert's sister and Wayne's wife, Melanie is not involved in the activities of Cohuila Cartel, however, is to become an easy target of Hitokiri Boys.

Introduced in: Hostile Reception

Miguel Romasanta
Miguel is the leader of the Cohuila Cartel, responsible for ending the activities of Hitokiri Boys, does everything to destroy any benefit of the gang. He controls the actions of the gang in the restaurant Lolita's Market in East Los Santos.

Introduced in: Search and Destroy

Takeshi Akiwara
The Hitokiri Boys Leader, Takeshi is a sadistic man than loves to force his enemies to work for him, he is the owner of Kimono Hotel in Verdant Blufs and has numerous relations with the Mafia Families in San Andreas. He is addicted to pornographic stuff and has a huge collection of magazines hidden in the hotel.

Introduced in: Deal Mayhem

Jack Locker
Jack Locker is the leader of the West Plague Family, he is Bahamian and lives in Jefferson on the Bahamas Apartaments, a condominium of your father. Jack is a pretty angry and spares no efforts to blast his enemies.

Introduced in: Bahamas Fool

Joe Harver
Joe is the leader of The Bloody Angels, He leads the group in a bar in El Corona and see in his murders your most fun. His insane actions always cause to him problems with the FBI and other law enforcement agencies.

Introduced in: Bikes 'n' Bullets.

MORE SOON!

Gangs and Mafias

Hitokiri Boys
Type: Japanese Criminal Organization.
Leader: Takeshi Akiwara
Relation: Enemy
First Apparence: Hostile Reception
Bussiness: Drug Dealing, Extortion, Protection Racket.
Description: Criminal organization that causes many problems in Los Santos, disturbing public order and creating vandalism.

Cohuila Cartel
Type: Mexican Street Gang.
Leader: Miguel Romasanta
Relation: Ally
First Apparence: Deal Mayhem
Bussiness: Prostitution, Robbery, Gun Running.
Description: Street Gang, Rival of Hitokiri Boys due to dispute of territorys.

Lornietto Family
Type: Italian Mafia Family.
Leader: Giovanni Lornietto.
Relation: Enemy
First Apparence: Deal Mayhem
Bussiness: Gun Smuggling, Human trafficking, Loan Shark.
Description: Mafia family in San Andreas, sells guns to the Hitokiri Boys.

West Plague Family
Type: Street Gang.
Leader: Jack Locker.
Relation: Enemy
First Apparence: Frying a Big Fish
Bussiness: Drug Dealing, Robbery, Murder for Money.
Description: The largest street gang in Los Santos.

Wild Dogs
Type: Street Gang.
Leader: Marcus "The Fat" Powell
Relation: Enemy
First Apparence: Fap Fap Supplies
Bussiness: Forgery of Money, Murder for Money, Loan Shark.
Description: Gang of Countryside, occasionally working in Los Santos, rivals of the Lizards.

The Bloody Angels
Type: Biker Street Gang.
Leader: Joe Harver
Relation: Ally
First Apparence: Bikes 'n' Bullets
Bussiness: Smuggling, Drug Dealing, Protection Racket.
Description: Bikers Gang in Los Santos and Countryside.

Lizards
Type: Street Gang.
Leader: Isabella Calvert
Relation: Ally
First Apparence: (To be decided)
Bussiness: Robbery, Extortion, Protection Racket.
Description: Dangerous Gang in Countryside, rivals of Wild Dogs.

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P.S.: If there is any mistake in my English, let me know. English is not my native language. biggrin.gif

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Posted 05 August 2010 - 09:32 AM

Great Missions and good effort dude.

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Posted 08 August 2010 - 07:43 PM

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Great Missions and good effort dude.


Thanks man, I hope you enjoy the new missions that will come. icon14.gif

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Posted 08 August 2010 - 09:01 PM Edited by BDR, 08 August 2010 - 09:07 PM.

I liked your missions. But in the Frying A Big Fish, when I arrive the Kimono Hotel after I bombed the territories, nothing happens when I take the checkpoint.

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Posted 08 August 2010 - 09:46 PM Edited by Beto_kafra, 08 August 2010 - 09:49 PM.

QUOTE (BDR @ Aug 8 2010, 21:01)
I liked your missions. But in the Frying A Big Fish, when I arrive the Kimono Hotel after I bombed the territories, nothing happens when I take the checkpoint.

Yeah, I noticed the bug at the very end of the mission.
Well, the bug is fixed, just download the mission on the link of topic again or from this one.

The mission can be completed now, I had to upload another one because I lost the link to edit the original, I hope don't have problem with it.

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Posted 09 August 2010 - 09:28 AM

Very nice dude. I knew that the missions were great the minute I saw an introduction and presentation of the gangs and everything. I'm just working on my missions and I hope that they will be at least half as good as yours. smile.gif

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Posted 14 August 2010 - 06:45 PM

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Very nice dude. I knew that the missions were great the minute I saw an introduction and presentation of the gangs and everything. I'm just working on my missions and I hope that they will be at least half as good as yours. smile.gif


Thanks for the compliment, man! icon14.gif
I don't even think I'm so good with the DYOM learned to use a little time, and yes, I believe that you can also create good missions. smile.gif

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Posted 16 August 2010 - 12:34 PM

Good missions. Keep making them.

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Posted 25 August 2010 - 07:36 PM

QUOTE (BDR @ Aug 16 2010, 12:34)
Good missions. Keep making them.

BDR Hi, good to see that it has enjoyed of my missions. I had some problems with the "bureaucratic" here and so I have difficulty to make the missions. I made some new missions but did not think were as good as the others, so I'll quickly remake and I intend to post them yet this week if possible.

Thanks for the attention o/

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Posted 29 August 2010 - 08:02 PM Edited by Beto_kafra, 29 August 2010 - 11:32 PM.

UPDATED! Two new missions added!

Note: I wanted to release three missions but somethings irritated me so much and took so long. I will continue with the missions when I calm down ...

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Posted 30 August 2010 - 11:18 AM Edited by BDR, 14 September 2010 - 08:35 PM.

Good missions. But in the Fap Fap Supplies, game crashes after I took third car to the garage. It may be happening because of the mods I have installed but you should check that mission.

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Posted 12 September 2010 - 08:28 PM

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Good missions. But in the Fap Fap Supplies, game crashes after took third car to the garage. It may be happening because of the mods I have installed but you should check that mission.


Well, this mission goes crashing the game constantly and I intend to remake or fix somehow. But the only relevance of this mission in the storyline is:

Robert discovers that the supplies were porn magazines and revolts against Takeshi, saying it would no longer work for him no matter what he does. Reason of Wayne is attacked on the next mission: "The Last Bar".


Well, I don't post just for this ...

Three New Missions released! Characters list updated, Chapter One complete.

More soon...

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Posted 14 September 2010 - 08:33 PM

I had the chance to try your new missions today. Your missions have a good storyline. The missions are exciting. I saw a few dialog problems but they're not ruining the missions. One last thing, set max. wanted level as 0 stars because it can be difficult dealing with cops while doing the missions.

Nice work. icon14.gif




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