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Evanthebassist
  • Evanthebassist

    Evan

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#1

Posted 14 July 2010 - 06:24 PM Edited by Evanthebassist, 28 July 2010 - 10:38 PM.

Story
Amir Tahallan used to have everything, a family, friends, and a life until one unfortunate day in Iraq...

Missions
Intro
Intro Cutscenes DOWNLOAD
Intro Cutscenes P.2 DOWNLOAD
Amir Missions
1. Tom and Rob DOWNLOAD
2. Cargo Hold DOWNLOAD
3. Bomb Field DOWNLOAD
4. O.K. [Officer Kent] DOWNLOAD
Maherk Missions
1. Lee and Courtney DOWNLOAD
2. Deadly Delivery DOWNLOAD
3. Addition to the Team DOWNLOAD
4. China Town DOWNLOAD

Characters
(Amir Tahallan)
Tommy Vensburg: Robber that has kidnapped Amir and is using him to get what he wants.
Rob Queiro: Another robber that has kidnapped Amir and is using him to get what he wants.
(Maherk Eci) [Half Brother of Amir]
Courtney Fillian: Saves Maherk from the streets.
Lee Zhou: Some Asian man that is friends with Courtney.
Jack Lamb: Guy that seems to get into trouble a lot, friends with Courtney.

Notes
To get the story better,
please watch the two part cutscene intro,
then do Amir mission 1,
then Maherk mission 1. ETC.
Then after all of them,
do the last pack.
This is going to be a 3 part series.
One part with stories of Maherk.
One part with stories of Amir.
One part (not open to public yet)
And yes, Maherk Eci, Is the pronounciation of Ice Cream backwards. LOL.
More to come!

UNRATED69
  • UNRATED69

    suck my hammer

  • Leone Family Mafia
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#2

Posted 16 July 2010 - 01:51 PM

Wow... That guy's life sucks. mercie_blink.gif
Can't wait to see what happens to him! biggrin.gif

Evanthebassist
  • Evanthebassist

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#3

Posted 23 July 2010 - 07:42 PM

Bounce.

Levindski
  • Levindski

    Azure

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#4

Posted 24 July 2010 - 02:24 AM

QUOTE (Evanthebassist @ Jul 23 2010, 19:42)
Bounce.

Lame.

Doublepulse
  • Doublepulse

    I will turn your life upside down!

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#5

Posted 24 July 2010 - 04:44 AM

So far i played your first mission and did the Intro scenes and i think there pretty good.

To make it better, you can use colored text to help idenify some of the characters.. but its up to u.

Also try to make the cut scenes and objectives closely. Like you should make the people who get shot in the robberies actually get shot.

You can do that by adding a friend actor as the shooter and the enemy actor getting shot.

But I like the story. Keep up the good work man.


Also check out my series and give me your opinion man.

Evanthebassist
  • Evanthebassist

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#6

Posted 25 July 2010 - 04:29 PM

Thanks, doublepulse. New missions up.

Evanthebassist
  • Evanthebassist

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#7

Posted 31 July 2010 - 11:53 PM

more missions up.




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