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#1501

Posted 15 March 2014 - 02:25 PM Edited by DragonWarrior (DnW), 15 March 2014 - 02:25 PM.

I will update this post once I finish my review of "Left Alone" by DragonWarrior.

Played and rated the first three missions of "Left Alone".

Again, this review contains spoilers.

 

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Writing [X]

Decent

Amazing writing at the first mission, but in the preceding missions grammar went downfall. A lot of mistakes in the next two missions. I hope this would improve.

Presentation [/]

Excellent

Amazing story and cutscenes. The MP name implies it as being apocalyptic, but it is entirely something else. Good work by the designer here. Also, the cutscenes and animations were very well timed.

Length [/]

Decent

Mission time is around 4 to 5 minutes, depending on your skill. The boat race and the shooting contributes to the time.

Difficulty [/]

Hard

This MP is easy in the first mission, but became instantly hard in the preceding ones. You need to be fast, as the next missions involve shooting and stealth.

Variety [/]

Very Good

This is a good concept. Revenge is overused though, but still a good use of actors, vehicles and animations.

 

Thanks for the review dude, :beerhat:  I'll improve these in the future missions. 

And BTW, I don't think the missions are that hard.  :/

Here's a  :cookie:


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#1502

Posted 15 March 2014 - 11:56 PM

HI Chips can you Review My Mission Pack Zombies Outbreak

 

http://gtaforums.com...k-mission-pack/

 

Hope you :^:


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#1503

Posted 17 March 2014 - 02:10 AM

Yeah!,this review topic is cool.
Chip hats off to you.
and your rating system is short, sweet and cool.
I dont think any body wants more than that.

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#1504

Posted 17 March 2014 - 05:14 AM

I need more reviewers in this topic.


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#1505

Posted 17 March 2014 - 08:56 AM

Hi chips thats my new mission Madd Dog Robbery I hope you will review this http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30899

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#1506

Posted 17 March 2014 - 09:26 AM

Sorry guys. I'm very busy right now, Martin_GDF can do the reviews for you.


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#1507

Posted 17 March 2014 - 10:41 AM

Ok!


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#1508

Posted 18 March 2014 - 02:42 AM Edited by Martin_GDF, 19 March 2014 - 03:22 AM.

Hi, I was out for a bit so I couldn't review or nothing. Now I must review tukang's MP "Zombie Outbreak" I will edit this post once I finish playing :)

And huzaifa, you're the next :)

 

Review "Zombie Outbreak" by "tukang kerupuk":

 

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Writing

 

Decent

Well, it has its grammar mistakes, but apart from that you can understand what he meant to say in some of the parts.

 

 

Presentation

 

Very Good

The cutscenes are very well made, also I like how the story introduces, but some kind of scenes are very large or have a few bugs that make it look really annoying, also the most of the missions are 70% cutscenes and 30% gameplay. I don't like the part where the zombies "talk". The environement also is really well made, you have that awesome zombie apocalypse feeling when you go thorugh the streets with cars bumped and zombies eating other people!

 

 

Lenght

 

Decent - Short

If we speak about the whole mission, it's really good cause its duration is between 6 and 8 minutes, but the most are purely cutscenes and kind of redundant, so if we reduce that, the mission would be about 3-4 minutes

 

 

Difficulty

 

Hard

In some missions you have to kill zombies that maybe have lots of health or your ammo is very limited; so that makes it impossible, also the most of the zombies have heavy weapons sometimes and makes the mission even harder :p

 

 

Variety

 

Could be Better

The story is the particular thing of the MP, I love that it's made while the story of GTA SA. But then, zombies is a really used genre in missions and the way that characters make the way through, the environments are kind of seen in the most of the zombies MP's

 

 

5/10

The mission pack can have a bit of work, I only played chapter 1 but maybe chapter 2 is more improved than the first one. I know that the designer is maybe a newbie or beginner but I have to admit that for newbies this is an amazing mission pack, you should fix some things that are kind of dissapointing and quit off zombie dialogues xD But apart from that the missions are cool and the story is really amazing!


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#1509

Posted 18 March 2014 - 11:19 AM

hey can you review the second mission of Crime Life, sure after finishing Huzaifa's mission.


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#1510

Posted 18 March 2014 - 04:43 PM

 Crime Life: Bang Bang by gammoudicj

 

Writing

Good

There are way too much gang slangs used in the dialogue, and there are some grammar mistakes too.

 

Presentation

Decent

It's decent. We get introduced to our inventory and our bike. Then we get an objective and the mission starts. Thats for the introduction.

 

Length

Decent

The time will depend on the skills of shooting. It takes about 10 to 15 minutes to complete for a casual player.

 

Difficulty

Medium

It's not such a hard mission. As I said, it will depend on the skills. Then only thing I though it was wierd, how did the construction workers have weapons ?

 

Variety

Decent

The enemies had some variation. The objects were nicely placed

 

Overall it's a nice mission, only it would need less gang slangs and more variety. The presentation wasn't too good too. Shouldn't we've been introduced to this basic stuff in the first mission ?

 

7/10


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#1511

Posted 19 March 2014 - 03:24 AM

I already made zombie outbreak review, now for huzaifas mission pack


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#1512

Posted 19 March 2014 - 01:39 PM

I may be a reviewer when i take free time for two weeks.


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#1513

Posted 19 March 2014 - 03:02 PM Edited by DragonWarrior (DnW), 20 March 2014 - 04:14 PM.

Hello fellas'. I'm a new Reviewer around here, and now I'm gonna Introduce my rating sytem. It's not much different from Chips's, with some minor changes.
I'm gonna use 'Stars' to indicate the overall rating of the missions, like Chips did.
 
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The red star indicates the Overall work of the missions is Bad, Orange for Decent, Yellow for Good, Blue for Very Good, Green for Excellent.
 
Writing
Focused on the mission dialogues/instructions.
Bad>Decent>Good>Very Good>Excellent
 
Presentation
Focused on the mission mission quality. Use of stunts, explosives, and other stuff.
Bad>Decent>Good>Very Good>Excellent
 
Length
Focused on the time the player spends on the mission.
Long>Decent>Excellent<Decent<Short
 
Difficulty
Focused on the difficulty of the mission.
Too hard>Hard>Medium<Easy<Too easy
 
Gameplay
Focused on the Missions playing boundries, what player gets to do.
Bad>Decent>Good>Very Good>Excellent
 
It takes a lot of work to impress me!
 
And a small summary at the end. The ratings will be given to whole the missions played, without giving ratings for each and every mission seperatly. So it's better finish atleast One Chapter  and ask for a review. ;)
Hopefuly, I think you'll like my Rating system although it's not much diiferent from Chips. Anyway stay cool! 
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#1514

Posted 20 March 2014 - 01:35 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 20 March 2014 - 01:37 AM.

Dragon warrior it looks awesome rating system :)

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#1515

Posted 20 March 2014 - 08:44 AM

Dragon warrior it looks awesome rating system :)

 

Actually, it's nothing much different from Chips's.


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#1516

Posted 20 March 2014 - 07:06 PM

Idk. I thought we are all using the same system.


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#1517

Posted 21 March 2014 - 08:42 AM

Idk. I thought we are all using the same system.

 

We can use a existing system or create your own system.


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#1518

Posted 21 March 2014 - 06:46 PM

Been working more than a year on this one, and i think it deserves some feedback. Would be grateful if you guys review it.


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#1519

Posted 22 March 2014 - 04:03 AM Edited by Chips237, 22 March 2014 - 04:03 AM.

Been working more than a year on this one, and i think it deserves some feedback. Would be grateful if you guys review it.

I'll take it, since I already played some missions in it.


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#1520

Posted 25 March 2014 - 12:07 PM Edited by Chips237, 25 March 2014 - 12:08 PM.

Sorry for double posting.

Anyways, this is my review for "Different Paths" by AnDReJ98.

 

 

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Writing [X]

Could be Better

Multiple grammatical mistakes in the entire MP. Some of them aren't even too clear to be readable.

 

Presentation [X]

Could be Better

Then again, there were multiple errors (mostly actors failing to drive, follow etc.). The instructions weren't very clear as well, and I got lost in most of the missions. This really needs work among all the criteria.

 

Length [/]

Excellent

The missions are not too long, but in some they are quite long. Gameplay of the whole MP is about an hour and 18 minutes, depending on your skill.

 

Difficulty [/]

Hard

I found most of the missions hard, especially the shooting ones. The unclear instructions made the missions extra hard as well, but they aren't really that hard.

 

Variety [/]

Very Good

Good use of actors, vehicles and objects. Guns were definitely varied.


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#1521

Posted 25 March 2014 - 04:12 PM

May i be a reviewer Chips? i am getting bit interested in this now.


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#1522

Posted 25 March 2014 - 07:17 PM

Hi, can any one review my new MP: Zombielandd?

http://gtaforums.com...entry1065045723


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#1523

Posted 27 March 2014 - 02:16 AM

ATTENTION EVERYONE!

 

I just wanted to make some rule changes about this topic, in order to avoid any confusions.

 

Since that I'm rarely active at GTAF and some people are still requesting on PM to be a reviewer at this topic, here's what I'm going to say:

You don't have to request my permissions to be a reviewer anymore. Everyone can post reviews at this topic freely.

 

Also, I accept people to send me a PM to review their mission series. But the reviews I make would most likely be made as a video instead a written one.

 

That's all I have to say. For the future reviewers, I wish you the best of your reviews. :)


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#1524

Posted 09 April 2014 - 12:55 PM

Hi, can any one review my new MP: Zombielandd?

http://gtaforums.com...entry1065045723

 

This is gonna be my first review, I'll take it!


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#1525

Posted 10 April 2014 - 05:48 AM Edited by DragonWarrior (DnW), 10 April 2014 - 05:53 AM.

Hey everyone. This is my first review, and I'm gonna review the MissionPack 'ZombieLand' by gammoudicj. 

Alert! This contain Spoilers.

 

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Writing
The writings were in Simple English, with some minor grammar and spelling mistakes.
Good
 
Presentation
There was no special Presentations in the mission, there was a lot of use of Slow Motion cutscence.
Decent
 
Length
Overall the it took about 5-7 minutes to complete a mission. Depending on your skills.
Very Good
 
Difficulty
The missions were really difficult because all the Zombies had around 500 health with headshots off, the player was only given a Pistol or a Sub-machine gun. Depending on your skills.
Too Hard
 
Gameplay
The gameplay was really annoying, only thing included in the missions were shooting. The player had to face about 20 enemies at a time with about 500 health only with a pistol or a Sub-machine gun!
Decent
 
 
Summary: Many missions the animations were not perfectly timed, the actors spawns randomly. Some actors were forgotten to hide. The Zombies were really annoying with about 500 health, headshots off. The player was given only a Pistol or a Sub-Machine gun.
Overall I could give a 4/10. 

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#1526

Posted 10 April 2014 - 11:36 AM

Should we merge this topic with AznKei's?


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#1527

Posted 10 April 2014 - 03:40 PM

Don't know really. There aren't that many requests here anyways.


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#1528

Posted 10 April 2014 - 05:36 PM

Don't know really. There aren't that many requests here anyways.

 

That's because the DYOM's activities are dropping.


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#1529

Posted 10 April 2014 - 06:09 PM

 

Don't know really. There aren't that many requests here anyways.

 

That's because the DYOM's activities are dropping.

 

Being negative doesn't help..

 

merge it.


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#1530

Posted 12 April 2014 - 06:37 AM

I'll PM Doublepulse.





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