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#1141

Posted 07 April 2012 - 01:42 PM Edited by xGhostx, 08 April 2012 - 08:12 AM.

Hello guys!Please review these missions for me,so I can improve my mission better biggrin.gif
Here's the link:

http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18260

http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18299

http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18333

http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18272

I would be honor if I have a pro to review it!
Thank you! wink.gif

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#1142

Posted 07 April 2012 - 03:19 PM

I'll review your missions xGhostx, but later.

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#1143

Posted 13 April 2012 - 09:55 PM

Hello everyone my name is ToniForelli and i will do another DYOM mission review, ok so lets start reviewing xGhostx's mission called MW3:Soap's War Operation Kingfish now time to review

" Writing: Good
There were several mistakes i've found.
" Presentation: Excellent
God it felt like i was watching a movie or something so i give it Excellent

" Length Excellent
I'm not used to walk in area 69 and it took me somewhere like 11 minutes.

" Difficulty Medium
Enemy actors have a high ammount of health and medium accuracy. It's best that you get to cover and kill them, simple as that.

" Variety Could be better
Didn't saw many people on this mission nor many cars.

Overall 8.5/10
Mission was exciting, it felt like a movie. However, i didn't like when there was an explosion(urgh... almost died).

Ok i reviewed the mission now lets start with MW3:The Captain I

" Writing: Good
There were several mistakes i've found again.
" Presentation: Very good
It was very good, but not excellent

" Length Decent
Just shoot the dummies, walk through obstacles and volia 4 minutes.

" Difficulty Very easy
It's a training course, everything is very easy.

" Variety Excellent
It must've took you ages to build that training course. I hope you had a drawing and you rebuilt it.

Overall 8/10
It would have been 5/10, but seeing that training course made me raise my rating up.

Next mission is MW3:The Captain III

" Writing: Very Good
I didn't saw that many mistakes anymore.
" Presentation: Very good
It was very good. Don't know what to say anything else.

" Length Good
Many cutscenes, enemies and that's it. It made it longer.

" Difficulty Easy
They got high health, but not accuracy so it shouldn't be a problem.

" Variety Could be better
Army guys, SWAT, Rojas, Task Force leader and 1 actor would be in this mission, it would be Decent.

Overall 9/10
It was more fun. I like those missions when you attack someone in the mansion and i liked pretty much almost everything.

And the last one MW3:Ghost Warrior Final

" Writing: Very good
2 mistakes i've found.
" Presentation: Excellent
The rating suggests it.

" Length Excellent
Damn those checkpoints of yours while in casino really mess me up. I had to snipe, search, shoot and knife.

" Difficulty Easy
Mostly you rely on stealth at first. Then you engage after you've made it to the roof. Good thing they have low accuracy.

" Variety Decent
Army guy, objects, cars, Makarov's guys, Makarov himself.

Overall 9/10
The mission was great. Stealth, sniping and attacking was a perfect combo.
So my response to this is :

Ke ep U p

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#1144

Posted 14 April 2012 - 02:38 AM

Can someone do a mission review on the first mission of Crisis of 2016 : Rage of Task Force 141?

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#1145

Posted 14 April 2012 - 04:44 AM

QUOTE (ToniForelli @ Friday, Apr 13 2012, 21:55)
Hello everyone my name is ToniForelli and i will do another DYOM mission review, ok so lets start reviewing xGhostx's mission called MW3:Soap's War Operation Kingfish now time to review

" Writing: Good
There were several mistakes i've found.
" Presentation: Excellent
God it felt like i was watching a movie or something so i give it Excellent

" Length Excellent
I'm not used to walk in area 69 and it took me somewhere like 11 minutes.

" Difficulty Medium
Enemy actors have a high ammount of health and medium accuracy. It's best that you get to cover and kill them, simple as that.

" Variety Could be better
Didn't saw many people on this mission nor many cars.

Overall 8.5/10
Mission was exciting, it felt like a movie. However, i didn't like when there was an explosion(urgh... almost died).

Ok i reviewed the mission now lets start with MW3:The Captain I

" Writing: Good
There were several mistakes i've found again.
" Presentation: Very good
It was very good, but not excellent

" Length Decent
Just shoot the dummies, walk through obstacles and volia 4 minutes.

" Difficulty Very easy
It's a training course, everything is very easy.

" Variety Excellent
It must've took you ages to build that training course. I hope you had a drawing and you rebuilt it.

Overall 8/10
It would have been 5/10, but seeing that training course made me raise my rating up.

Next mission is MW3:The Captain III

" Writing: Very Good
I didn't saw that many mistakes anymore.
" Presentation: Very good
It was very good. Don't know what to say anything else.

" Length Good
Many cutscenes, enemies and that's it. It made it longer.

" Difficulty Easy
They got high health, but not accuracy so it shouldn't be a problem.

" Variety Could be better
Army guys, SWAT, Rojas, Task Force leader and 1 actor would be in this mission, it would be Decent.

Overall 9/10
It was more fun. I like those missions when you attack someone in the mansion and i liked pretty much almost everything.

And the last one MW3:Ghost Warrior Final

" Writing: Very good
2 mistakes i've found.
" Presentation: Excellent
The rating suggests it.

" Length Excellent
Damn those checkpoints of yours while in casino really mess me up. I had to snipe, search, shoot and knife.

" Difficulty Easy
Mostly you rely on stealth at first. Then you engage after you've made it to the roof. Good thing they have low accuracy.

" Variety Decent
Army guy, objects, cars, Makarov's guys, Makarov himself.

Overall 9/10
The mission was great. Stealth, sniping and attacking was a perfect combo.
So my response to this is :

Ke ep U p

Thank you for reviewing my missions ToniForelli ! I will try to improve the variety, the difficulty and my writing, too! colgate.gif

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#1146

Posted 14 April 2012 - 07:56 AM

QUOTE (lee_atsugai @ Saturday, Apr 14 2012, 02:38)
Can someone do a mission review on the first mission of Crisis of 2016 : Rage of Task Force 141?

No problem Lee.

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#1147

Posted 15 April 2012 - 10:12 AM

Hello !, please review 2 of my missions :
The Professional Assassins
Unsmoothly Assassination

Yeah, i would like to make a good storyline...

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#1148

Posted 15 April 2012 - 05:21 PM

I'll review yours too after i'm finished with lee atsugai's.

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#1149

Posted 15 April 2012 - 10:58 PM

I request the first 2 missions of 'Lee Fang Chronicles'.

Please, make it professional, and NO smilies. Cheers.

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#1150

Posted 18 April 2012 - 05:54 PM Edited by ToniForelli, 13 May 2012 - 01:06 PM.

That's it i'm making a list and i'll take Karzy's review:
2012 DYOM review requests

lee_atsugai - Night of Doom
Reviewed
Yezz007 - The Professional Assassins
Unsmoothly Assassination
Reviewed
KaRzY6 - Welcome To The Drug Business
Building The Team
Reviewed
IXMJXI - His whole chapter 1
Cancelled

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#1151

Posted 18 April 2012 - 06:25 PM

Hello everyone my name is ToniForelli and i will do another DYOM mission review, ok so lets start reviewing lee_atsugai's mission called Night of Doom from his mission pack called Crisis of 2016:Rage of Task Force 141 now time to review

" Writing: Very Good
I know that Nikolai is russian and two words i can't remember were bad and i'll make an exception.
" Presentation: Excellent
Awesome presentation. Enemies, cutscene angle, couple surprises make it excellent

" Length Good
Enemies with high health take your time and took me 5 minutes and 34 seconds.

" Difficulty Medium
It can be sometimes difficult when you're in a building and they have high health with medium accuracy and also surrounded.

" Variety Good
Well, there were many drug dealing actors and some objects. It's strange when an old man is a drug dealer biggrin.gif .

Overall 9/10
Mission was exciting. It had its moments and there were many enemies. Various guns and actors and when i got in into that building i felt relaxed until i got attacked.

Ke ep U p

I'll do Yezz007's review soon or maybe tomorrow.

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#1152

Posted 19 April 2012 - 09:45 AM

QUOTE (ToniForelli @ Thursday, Apr 19 2012, 04:54)
i'll take Karzy's review

Thanks man, appreciate it smile.gif

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#1153

Posted 19 April 2012 - 11:26 PM

Good day guys, can anyone review my Mission-pack? Thanks in advance. icon14.gif icon14.gif

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 03:45 PM

Hello everyone my name is ToniForelli and i will do another DYOM mission review, ok so lets start reviewing Yezz007's mission called The Professional Assassins from his mission pack called The Professional Assassin now time to review

" Writing: Decent
I've seen a pile of mistakes in this mission. Your writing reminds me of my friend, maybe you are him.
" Presentation: Good
50% good 50% bad. There were parts i didn't like though, but there were few fun parts of the mission. I believe your mission was like quantity over quality.

" Length Good
Long mission. I had to drive, shoot enemies and nothing else.

" Difficulty Medium
While there are lots of enemies headshotable, in the LSPD building you can get killed when you don't act fast.

" Variety Good
I saw few different actors and few different cars.

Overall 7/10
Mostly the mission was long, but it lacked good storyline quality. I think you're less talking more action type of the guy.

Now lets review another mission and it's called Unsmoothly Assassination

" Writing: Good
In this mission you improved your grammar i see, but you got to learn naming punctuation.
" Presentation: Very good
I liked this mission even more. Good story quality and quantity are merged into one.

" Length Decent
Not very long cause i just had to kill enemies.

" Difficulty Hard
You got to be on the look out. There are a couple enemies that can kill you if you are off guard.

" Variety Good
Different actors and nothing else.

Overall 9/10
I liked this mission more than your previous. It was hard and that is why i gave you a high rating.

Ke ep U p

IXMJXI i'll take your review too since there's nobody want to review your mission pack.

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 01:50 AM

Yeah, thanks for the review , i'll put it in my topic and......
QUOTE (ToniForelli @ Friday @ Apr 20 2012, 22:45)
Your writing reminds me of my friend, maybe you are him.

No , i never have a friend from Italy, maybe 'will' .

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#1156

Posted 23 April 2012 - 03:04 PM

Hello everyone my name is ToniForelli and i will do another DYOM mission review, ok so lets start reviewing KaRzY6's mission called Welcome To The Drug Business from his mission pack called Lee Fang Chronicles now time to review

" Writing: Very good
Found a couple mistakes nothing else.
" Presentation: Excellent
Liked the storyline and especially when Lee worked for Rockstar and was in making of GTA V, you surely deserve an excellent achievement.

" Length Short
It's an intro mission so it's short. You had to drive from your home and to (forgot his name) place and home again.

" Difficulty Very Easy
It's an intro mission. No enemies so it's very easy.

" Variety Could be better
One car and 3 actors. Well it's an intro mission so i(like everybody else) don't expect many objects, cars or actors.

Overall 8.5/10
What's there to review. It's an intro mission and i don't like to review such short missions.

Now lets review another mission and it's called Building The Team

" Writing: Excellent
I didn't saw any mistakes so there is nothing else to say.
" Presentation: Excellent
Like the way cutscenes are positioned and the storyline, good job.

" Length Decent
You just drive and drive and drive until you've reached Tierra Robada and fight some enemies.

" Difficulty Easy
Your allies will help you in combat, but be careful the car is not bulletproof.

" Variety Decent
2 cars, few actors so what's there to say?

Overall 9/10
So the mission was great. It had action this time(and when i mean by action is that people fight or shoot). Picked up Lee's friends and just drove to the Tierra Robada until we've fought our enemies also they were following us.

Ke ep U p

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#1157

Posted 25 April 2012 - 05:23 AM Edited by xGhostx, 27 April 2012 - 08:10 AM.

Hello guys, I would like to request a review of my missions, here's the link:
http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=18697
Thanks in advance. biggrin.gif

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#1158

Posted 26 April 2012 - 07:01 AM

Could anyone review the 2nd, 3rd and 4th mission of my MP Denise's Stories? Click the userbar on my signature and you're in.

I really wish Nitesh will do this one...

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#1159

Posted 26 April 2012 - 08:17 AM

@NothingSpecial
I will do it, but you will have to wait for a while because I also have IXMJXI's request.

I will try to do both reviews by the end of this week.

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#1160

Posted 26 April 2012 - 09:35 AM

@Toni

Thanks man. smile.gif

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#1161

Posted 26 April 2012 - 05:58 PM

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Thursday, Apr 26 2012, 08:17)
@NothingSpecial
I will do it, but you will have to wait for a while because I also have IXMJXI's request.

I will try to do both reviews by the end of this week.

I actually got his review.

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#1162

Posted 26 April 2012 - 06:15 PM

Can you do chapter 1 of The Godfather then, Nitesh?

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#1163

Posted 26 April 2012 - 06:25 PM

@ToniForelli
Ok. Didn't notice that you have already taken it.

@ThaBoy
I will take it.

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#1164

Posted 26 April 2012 - 10:29 PM

@ToniForelli
Hope you won't get any crashes.

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#1165

Posted 27 April 2012 - 12:17 PM

QUOTE (NothingSpecial @ Thursday, Apr 26 2012, 22:29)
@ToniForelli
Hope you won't get any crashes.

Let me guess, it has mods. I'll review his MP one i'll release my dyom mission in my The San Andreas Chapters MP.

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#1166

Posted 27 April 2012 - 04:05 PM

Requesting this mission pack (Crisis of 2016 : Rage of Task Force 141) to be reviewed. Whole Chapter 1 (No need to review the first mission, ToniForelli has did that)

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Posted 28 April 2012 - 02:58 AM

Hellou..,I request My mission pack to get reviewed ( only the ACT 2 )...,and the Link:
-Mission 1
-Mission 2
-Mission 3

Sorry , no 'compressed' file.
Although the compressed file is exist,but i messed it up (some error, and not good to be reviewed)
Oh yea...,thanks for your respond.

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#1168

Posted 28 April 2012 - 03:18 AM

I'll take lee's request.

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Posted 28 April 2012 - 03:39 AM

@Nitesh: Is it okay to have reviews from both of you? If no, I'll take yours.

@ToniForelli: If it's not okay to get two reviews from you guys, I'll take Nitesh's. Thanks again though.

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#1170

Posted 28 April 2012 - 06:45 AM Edited by Arejai, 28 April 2012 - 07:05 AM.

Greeting everyone. Today, I'm going to review a mission pack called Crisis of 2016:Rage of Task Force 141 by lee_atsugai . He requested the chapter 1 to be reviewed starting from the 2nd mission.

Here's the link to the topic: http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=506827


Let's get going to the review:

Writing (Above Very Good) Although I found some spelling mistakes, the writing and dialogues are very good; the words are pretty much same as army's conversations.

Presentation (Good) Some of the cutscenes are good and some of them could be better. About presentation, I loved the big explosions at the Gant Bridge.


Alive In Darkness

Length (Very Good) It took me 7 minutes to complete this mission. In the beginning of this mission, we'll play as Shephard. We need to figh our way to escape the place. After that, we'll play as the protagonist, Sgt Calvin and we must defend the base that is being attacked by the Shadow Company.

Difficulty (Medium) There are a lot of enemies we need to kill. They've a medium health and accuracy and using a weapon like M4 and Ak47.

Variety (Good) There are plenty used of actors and weapons. I loved how you used the SWAT skin as Shadow Company army.


Ghost Warrior

Length (Very Good) It can be done in 8 minutes. In this mission, we need to eliminate the enemies which is the Shadow Company army in San Fierro. We'll fight with other 3 members.

Difficulty (Medium) Same as above mission, a lot of enemies with medium accuracy and health.

Variety (Good) There are just little types of actors and vehicle, plenty used of weapons and objects. You can see some of the enemies use small gun like micro uzi.


Battle For San Fierro

Length (Good) It can be done in 5 - 7 minutes. We need to defend the tunnel in Calton Heights from the incoming enemies. After that, we'll have a little ride to the place where a pilot was attacked by them.

Difficulty (Medium) I say, medium because we'll fight with other soldiers in defending the tunnel. We'll given a minigun to kill the enemies coming by bikes and some of our allies are using RPGs.

Variety (Very Good) There are just 3 types of actors in this mission, but I really like how the creator placed all those objects inside the tunnel. It looks nice and great for a defence point.


Last Stand

Length (Good) I finished it exaclty 6 minutes. This time, we must defend the Gant Bridge from the Shadow Company.

Difficulty (Medium) Medium again because the enemies has a medium health with low accuracy. We'll get an RPG rocket launcher from the dead soldier.

Variety (Good) Just 2 types of actors, but a lot of objects and vehicles used in this mission especially barracks; too many on the bridge.


Chasing Shepherd

Length (Very Good) It can be done in 7 minutes. We'll role as Calvin's friend, Sgt Lukas in this mission. We'll raid the Easter Bay Airport, San Fierro which is the base of Shadow Company.

Difficulty (Hard) Some of the enemies has a pretty high accuracy. But don't worry, we'll be followed by other 3 Task Force's members.

Variety (Above Very Good) Wow, I liked the base. The objects, the vehicles such as chopper & tank were placed very good.


In The Pits Of Hell

Length (Very Good) 7+ minutes for me to finished this which is the last mission of chapter 1. The protagonist woke up near Gant Bridge. We'll fight our way to Shepherd's hideout/base.

Difficulty (Hard) Even though we use a minigun, almost all those enemies has a high accuracy that I think it's set to 75. Just need to take a little cover and spray all of 'em with the minigun.

Variety (Very Good) The tunnel is full of objects and I loved it. It looks like a real army tunnel; almost of them are boxes. Really nice.


Overall, this chapter is very fun to play. It's full of actions and enjoyment. I love to fight in a group. The good things is, it don't have a long drive. About the story, it's a fight between Task Force and Shadow Company which is led by Shepherd. Yes, he's still alive and it's our task to catch him. Good twist in the last mission, but I'm not telling it here. So, good missions, keep it up, and don't give up. biggrin.gif

Rating
Actions : 9.3/10
Cutscenes : 8.5/10
Writing : 9/10
Overall : 8.9/10



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