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Revolver1
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#1831

Posted 24 June 2016 - 02:29 PM Edited by Revolver1, 02 July 2016 - 12:57 PM.

Okay lads. Let's stop the argument with a brand new review.

Today I am reviewing FTA: It Can't Be Seen made by GHozT

Let's not delay any further.

 

-Writing: Very good. There are grammar mistakes here and then, but they don't really affect the quality of the dialogue much. The use of slang is very good, I haven't played any MP so far that has such good use of slang.

-Presentation: Good. The camera angles are fine, but there are some unnecessary use of slow-mo.

 

A Beautiful Day...

-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5 minutes. It's mostly cutscene, but it's the starting mission of the MP, so it contributes much to plot development.

-Difficulty: Very easy. Cutscene only, so it's quite simple. Just sit back and enjoy the show. Though it's kinda boring comparing to other MPs' starting mission.

-Variety: Good. There are some objects (maybe?), as well as many skins and vehicles were used.

 

My brother...

-Length: Good. Same as the last mission, this one lasts for around 5-6 minutes. 

-Difficulty: Easy. Mostly drive and a small fight. 

-Variety: Good. I like the way how the brawling site was made. It looked good.

 

Unseen

-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5 minutes.

-Difficulty: Easy. Mostly cutscene and some driving.

-Variety: Decent. A few skins were used, nothing else out of the ordinary.]

 

The mysterious man

-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5 minutes. There are quite a few plot holes that don't connect here. It affects greatly to the plot.

-Difficulty: Easy. Again, mostly cutscene and some driving.

-Variety: Decent. A burned house is supposed to look more... burned, but it looks pretty intact to me. Nevertherless, good use of objects. Objects are good, but the mission still lacks other things, so I cannot give a high rating.

 

(Color will be added later)

(To be continued once the first chapter is finished)

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#1832

Posted 28 June 2016 - 07:15 PM

Seems there's a few reviewer here atm, i think  i'll try my best to be, so if anyore need a review PM me or just informe me to do here ;)*

Greeting...

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#1833

Posted 16 July 2016 - 12:03 PM

Hello. AznKei1,I'll be very thankful if you reviewed my first Act of Military Sniper Series (Act 1)when you've the time, Thanks =) Link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41682 , Skins(optional) : http://www.megafileu...ab5/Desktop.rar

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#1834

Posted 16 July 2016 - 12:06 PM

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/43198


This is small,But can someone review this?

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#1835

Posted 24 July 2016 - 07:35 AM

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/43198


This is small,But can someone review this?

The f*ck is this mission? Just shooting without any moral story and these enemies suddenly appeared in the front of me. They're a ninja? Lel. 

0.69/10

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#1836

Posted 18 December 2016 - 04:56 AM

Hello, dear Aznkei :D I'm watching your reviews for a few years already. I started designing DYOM missions at 2010, but some time ago I decided to show to the DYOM community. Can I ask you to make a review of my complete storyline called Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas Prequel? I received 5 stars rating, but I wanna know what the professional like you thinks about this. Here's the link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/44793


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#1837

Posted 18 December 2016 - 05:36 AM

^ Since AznKei1 rarely active, would you like me to make written reviews for you?
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#1838

Posted 18 December 2016 - 06:43 AM

Oh my, where was this topic before?
Can you review my missions.
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/44996
And this
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/44586
Anyone can review and guide me with my mistakes in these missions.

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#1839

Posted 19 December 2016 - 01:19 AM Edited by Rockstar Team, 19 December 2016 - 01:19 AM.

Light Side Riandy - OK, that's a good idea :)


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#1840

Posted 19 December 2016 - 11:37 PM Edited by Light Syde Riandy, 19 December 2016 - 11:41 PM.

Alam the Fighter

Writting: - Found some mistakes like "Radio got the news that some fighter planes are heading towards the country."
            Should be; "We've got news from the radio that some fighter aircrafts are heading towards our country."  

Difficulty: Medium

Pros:

- Decent English and decent presentations.

Cons:

- Sometimes, the enemy plane doesn't fly at all.
- From the writting section, it can be found yet another mistake that Aftab should have spawned Hydras instead of Hunters.

Rating: 4.5/10 (Could be better).

Good luck for your new missions Aftab!

 

I can't review "Talking Heads" since the mission crashes at the part somewhere when I drove a bike.

 

Next up, "GTA: San Andreas Prequel".

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#1841

Posted 12 January 2017 - 02:31 AM

Due to my laptop being too old to play San Andreas, I've decided to stop reviewing missions and designing until I can buy a new one.

May someone keeps this topic alive...

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#1842

Posted 12 January 2017 - 12:34 PM

Syde, don't be a bad boi and review my MP.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/45839

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#1843

Posted 12 January 2017 - 12:49 PM

Did you even pay attention that my laptop cannot run sa smoothly just as it used to be?

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#1844

Posted 12 January 2017 - 01:12 PM

Did you even pay attention that my laptop cannot run sa smoothly just as it used to be?

Well, did it run smooth before or?


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#1845

Posted 12 January 2017 - 01:22 PM

Now it doesn't.

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#1846

Posted 12 January 2017 - 01:31 PM

Now it doesn't.

It does not work well only with San Andreas? If yes, reinstall it. If with all games, reinstall windows.


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#1847

Posted 12 January 2017 - 01:58 PM

No, I've reinstalled the os and the game for more than once and still runs slow. It's just that my laptop is too old.

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#1848

Posted 12 January 2017 - 02:24 PM

Try to clear the dust inside it. It just wont simple make the game slow for no reason.


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#1849

Posted 30 January 2017 - 02:51 PM

Here are some missions of Resident Evil: Biohazard

 

Part 1: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/45507

Part 2: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/45508

Part 3; COming Soon

 

Please review them! :)


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#1850

Posted 31 January 2017 - 12:40 AM

Hi there, Leon :D I've played those 2 missions you sent and I gotta say they were pretty interesting. Especially since I'm the biggest fan of Resident Evil :D

 

OK, so now it's time for the details:

 

The idea - Amazing (it's good to see some rare mission pack at last)

 

Mission length - Average (but don't worry, the beginning missions shouldn't be long, so good job)

 

Difficulty - Very easy (but as I said before - these are the beginning missions, so don't worry)

 

The grammar - Good (could be some improvements, but it's still understandable)

 

Overall rating: 4/5! Keep up the good work :D Just try to improvise the english a little bit :)

 

Good luck in your missions, Leon :) Can't wait to play part 3!

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#1851

Posted 31 January 2017 - 04:58 AM Edited by Leon_Scott Kennedy, 31 January 2017 - 04:59 AM.

@Rockstar Team - Thanks for the Review my friend :D. Well i'm also one of the biggest fan of Resident Evil. My favorite is it's Part 4 and 7 (which is released right now). the good thing is that i bought RE7 in first day when it released and complete the same game in the next day and 33 times i finished the RE4 :).

 

Well anyway, coming to the point that i already uploaded the Third Mission. You can go in the topic name: Resident Evil: Biohazard. It's pinned right now. Here is the link: http://gtaforums.com...evil-biohazard/. I'll try to improve my grammar more.

 

Once again Thanks for playing it. Stay tuned for complete version.  :^:


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#1852

Posted 31 January 2017 - 12:10 PM

OK, I will check it out, Leon :D


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#1853

Posted 04 March 2017 - 06:15 PM

Can somebody check out my MP? I'm in desperate need of help for it to survive: http://gtaforums.com...ies-of-anthony/





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